Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXZ5GEP7GJ6G0VYRMH0RXZ

Run Details

Duration:
8.3s
Cost:
$0.000882
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air thinned, growing heavy and sweet like overripe fruit. Aurora Carter, Rory to those who knew her well, took a tentative step forward. The scent clung to her, a cloying perfume that promised decay beneath its sugary facade. Beside her, Nyx’s shadow-form shifted, a ripple of deeper darkness against the fading light of the portal they’d just traversed. Even in their solid state, their presence was a chilling absence of warmth. “This… place,” Rory breathed, her voice hushed. The words felt inadequate, flimsy against the overwhelming strangeness of their surroundings. Towering structures of what looked like spun sugar crystals, impossibly delicate and impossibly large, spiralled towards a sky the color of warm amber. Sunlight, or whatever passed for it here, dappled through the translucent formations, casting shifting patterns of honeyed light onto the ground. The ground itself wasn’t ground at all. It yielded under Rory’s worn boots, a springy moss the color of emeralds that released a sigh of cool, damp air with each step. Nyx moved beside her, their violet eyes fixed on the crystalline towers. “Dymas,” they whispered, the sound like dry leaves skittering across stone. “The realm of Gluttony. Prince Belphegor’s domain.” Rory’s hand instinctively went to the Heartstone Pendant nestled against her collarbone. It was a dull ache, a faint pulse against her skin, but it was there. A constant reminder of the infernal pathways that laced their own world. The pendant, a tiny speck of deep crimson light on its silver chain, was her only tether to something she understood. A low hum, resonant and deep, vibrated through the very air. It wasn’t a sound so much as a feeling, a pressure against their eardrums, a tremor in their teeth. It grew, swelling and receding in a languid rhythm. From the base of one of the sugar-spun towers, a river of what appeared to be molten gold flowed, not hot and destructive, but shimmering and slow, like thick syrup. Gnarled vines, heavy with fruit that pulsed with an inner, bioluminescent light, snaked around the crystalline spires. The fruits were unlike anything Rory had ever seen – some resembled orbs of contained starlight, others were deep indigo spheres studded with what looked like tiny, winking eyes. “It’s… beautiful,” Rory admitted, a reluctant awe seeping into her. She’d seen the grim efficiency of Hel’s outer rims, the utilitarian grimness of the wardens’ outposts, but this was something else. This was decadence made manifest. “Beauty is a trap here,” Nyx said, their form solidifying slightly, the edges of their shadowy silhouette sharpening. “It seduces the senses, dulls the mind. This realm feeds on desire.” Rory nodded, though her eyes were still drawn to the river of gold. She imagined dipping a finger in, feeling its impossible warmth. A pang of hunger, sudden and sharp, surprised her. It wasn't the usual grumble of an empty stomach after a long day delivering take-out. This was a deeper, more primal craving. She suppressed it, tamping down the unfamiliar urge. They continued deeper into the alien landscape. The moss underfoot gave way to patches of what looked like polished obsidian, reflecting the amber sky above like a dark mirror. Strange flora dotted the landscape – trees with leaves of hammered copper that chimed softly in an unfelt breeze, enormous fungi that pulsed with a soft, internal light, casting eerie violet shadows. The air grew thicker, richer, the cloying sweetness intensifying. Rory could taste it, a phantom sweetness on her tongue. “There,” Nyx pointed with a long, tapering finger. Ahead, nestled amongst a grove of trees with branches like intertwined serpents, was a structure. It wasn't crystalline like the towers, but appeared to be carved from a single, enormous block of ivory. Or perhaps bone. Its surface was inlaid with intricate patterns of what looked like solidified moonlight. A single, Arch was carved into its facade, leading into a darkness that seemed to swallow the honeyed light of Dymas. “A feast hall,” Nyx’s voice was barely a whisper. “Or a larder. The distinction is blurred in this realm.” As they approached the ivory structure, the hum intensified, joined by a cacophony of delightful sounds: the clinking of unseen glasses, muffled laughter, the rich strains of music that seemed to weave itself into the very air. And a new scent, overpowering the sweetness – the rich aroma of roasting meat, of exotic spices, of wines aged for centuries. Rory’s hunger flared, a wildfire consuming her. Her stomach gave a violent lurch. “Don’t,” Nyx warned, their gaze sharp, piercing. “It will take root. It will consume.” Rory gripped the Heartstone Pendant, the faint warmth a steadying presence. She forced herself to focus on the mundane: the worn seams of her jeans, the scuff marks on her boots, the familiar ache in her shoulders from carrying heavy boxes. The mundane. “Who… built this?” Rory asked, her voice strained. “Souls, bound to service,” Nyx replied. “Chefs, entertainers, servers. Their contracts are a lifetime, and then some. Prince Belphegor prides himself on the quality of his 'ingredients'.” The words sent a chill down Rory’s spine, far colder than Nyx’s perpetual chill. She looked at the fruits on the vines, at the river of gold. What were they truly made of? She swallowed, forcing down the image of her own small scar, a crescent moon on her left wrist, a token of a childhood fall. A life that felt a galaxy away from this place of overwhelming excess. Suddenly, a discordant note shattered the illusion of decadent harmony. A shriek, thin and reedy, tore through the air, followed by a heavy thud. The music stuttered, the laughter faltered. Then, silence. A profound, heavy silence that felt more terrifying than the previous revelry. Nyx shifted, their form dissolving into pure shadow for a split second before reasserting itself. “The revelry always ends,” they said, their whisper carrying a hint of something other than warning. There was almost… weariness in their voice. Rory peered into the darkness of the ivory archway. A faint light flickered within, beckoning. The air wafting from it was cool, carrying a different scent, one of damp earth and ancient stone. It was the scent of escape. “We need to keep moving,” Rory said, her voice regaining some of its usual steadiness. She adjusted the strap of her messenger bag. This place, for all its alien wonder, felt like a trap. A gilded cage. Nyx nodded, their violet eyes scanning the perimeter of the grove. “The Veil is thin here, at the fringes of Hel. Yet even here, shadows have eyes.” Rory tightened her grip on the pendant. She felt its pulse, a steady, reassuring rhythm against her skin. It was a beacon, a guide. But then her fingers brushed against something else, tucked deep within her bag. The smooth, cool weight of the Fae-Forged Blade. Isolde Varga’s gift. A weapon made of moonsilver, always cold to the touch, capable of slicing through magical wards. It felt strangely reassuring, a tangible counterpoint to the suffocating allure of Dymas. “Which way, then?” she asked, looking at Nyx, then back at the ivory archway. The allure of the unknown, of the escape, was a siren call. But so was the warning in Nyx’s ever-present shadow. Nyx’s shadowy form seemed to stretch and contort, as if tasting the air. “There,” they finally pointed, not towards the archway, but towards a narrow gap between two of the copper-leaved trees, barely wide enough for a single person to pass. “A less… scented path. And the heart of this realm, if you truly wish to understand it, lies not in the feasting, but in the appetite itself.” They paused, their gaze fixed on Rory. "And perhaps, something that has been lost to the gorging."
created_at"2026-02-19T12:28:33.175Z" 2/19/2026, 12:28:33 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences21
tagDensity0.619
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
72.97% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1295
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"very"
count2
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
3
adverb"truly"
count2
4
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"slightly"
2"softly"
3"truly"
4"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1295
totalAiIsms38
found
0
word"facade"
count2
1
word"chilling"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count3
3
word"crystalline"
count3
4
word"pulse"
count2
5
word"reminder"
count1
6
word"vibrated"
count1
7
word"pulsed"
count2
8
word"desire"
count1
9
word"pang"
count1
10
word"stomach"
count2
11
word"structure"
count2
12
word"intricate"
count1
13
word"whisper"
count2
14
word"cacophony"
count1
15
word"lurch"
count1
16
word"familiar"
count1
17
word"chill"
count2
18
word"shattered"
count1
19
word"silence"
count2
20
word"profound"
count1
21
word"flickered"
count1
22
word"scanning"
count1
23
word"beacon"
count1
24
word"weight"
count1
25
word"tangible"
count1
highlights
0"facade"
1"chilling"
2"warmth"
3"crystalline"
4"pulse"
5"reminder"
6"vibrated"
7"pulsed"
8"desire"
9"pang"
10"stomach"
11"structure"
12"intricate"
13"whisper"
14"cacophony"
15"lurch"
16"familiar"
17"chill"
18"shattered"
19"silence"
20"profound"
21"flickered"
22"scanning"
23"beacon"
24"weight"
25"tangible"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"sent a chill down"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences92
matches(empty)
49.69% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences92
filterMatches
0"wonder"
hedgeMatches
0"appeared to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences99
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1292
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
79.82% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions42
wordCount1140
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.4
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Rory16
Nyx13
Heartstone2
Pendant2
Hel1
Ahead1
Arch1
Dymas2
Fae-Forged1
Blade1
Varga1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Rory"
2"Nyx"
3"Pendant"
4"Hel"
5"Ahead"
6"Varga"
places
0"Heartstone"
globalScore0.798
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences81
glossingSentenceCount8
matches
0"looked like spun sugar crystals, impossib"
1"looked like tiny, winking eyes"
2"looked like polished obsidian, reflecting"
3"looked like solidified moonlight"
4"darkness that seemed to swallow the honeyed light of Dymas"
5"music that seemed to weave itself into the very air"
6"felt like a trap"
7"as if tasting the air"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords2.322
wordCount1292
matches
0"not hot and destructive, but shimmering"
1"not towards the archway, but towards a narrow gap between two of the copper-leaved trees"
2"not in the feasting, but in the appetite itself"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences99
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs25
mean51.68
std26.95
cv0.522
sampleLengths
072
194
230
360
4115
536
630
762
880
978
1019
1172
1214
1343
148
1527
1670
1744
1838
1939
2037
2127
2277
2335
2485
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences92
matches
0"was carved"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs179
matches(empty)
56.28% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences99
ratio0.03
matches
0"The fruits were unlike anything Rory had ever seen – some resembled orbs of contained starlight, others were deep indigo spheres studded with what looked like tiny, winking eyes."
1"Strange flora dotted the landscape – trees with leaves of hammered copper that chimed softly in an unfelt breeze, enormous fungi that pulsed with a soft, internal light, casting eerie violet shadows."
2"And a new scent, overpowering the sweetness – the rich aroma of roasting meat, of exotic spices, of wines aged for centuries."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount486
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.03292181069958848
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.0102880658436214
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences99
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences99
mean13.05
std7.29
cv0.559
sampleLengths
010
114
215
320
413
57
612
723
821
97
1024
1112
1211
137
1412
1515
1612
1721
1811
1919
209
2130
2217
2329
2410
2521
265
2718
2812
2913
3010
319
3215
337
348
357
3622
3732
389
3910
408
4115
4218
433
4413
4521
469
4710
4837
4922
60.27% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.37373737373737376
totalSentences99
uniqueOpeners37
37.45% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences89
matches
0"Suddenly, a discordant note shattered"
ratio0.011
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences89
matches
0"It yielded under Rory’s worn"
1"they whispered, the sound like"
2"It was a dull ache,"
3"It wasn’t a sound so"
4"It grew, swelling and receding"
5"She’d seen the grim efficiency"
6"She imagined dipping a finger"
7"It wasn't the usual grumble"
8"She suppressed it, tamping down"
9"They continued deeper into the"
10"It wasn't crystalline like the"
11"Its surface was inlaid with"
12"Her stomach gave a violent"
13"She forced herself to focus"
14"She looked at the fruits"
15"She swallowed, forcing down the"
16"they said, their whisper carrying"
17"It was the scent of"
18"She adjusted the strap of"
19"She felt its pulse, a"
ratio0.281
44.27% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount74
totalSentences89
matches
0"The air thinned, growing heavy"
1"Aurora Carter, Rory to those"
2"The scent clung to her,"
3"Rory breathed, her voice hushed"
4"The words felt inadequate, flimsy"
5"Sunlight, or whatever passed for"
6"The ground itself wasn’t ground"
7"It yielded under Rory’s worn"
8"Nyx moved beside her, their"
9"they whispered, the sound like"
10"Rory’s hand instinctively went to"
11"It was a dull ache,"
12"A constant reminder of the"
13"The pendant, a tiny speck"
14"A low hum, resonant and"
15"It wasn’t a sound so"
16"It grew, swelling and receding"
17"The fruits were unlike anything"
18"Rory admitted, a reluctant awe"
19"She’d seen the grim efficiency"
ratio0.831
56.18% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences89
matches
0"Even in their solid state,"
ratio0.011
86.83% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences51
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Strange flora dotted the landscape – trees with leaves of hammered copper that chimed softly in an unfelt breeze, enormous fungi that pulsed with a soft, intern…"
1"As they approached the ivory structure, the hum intensified, joined by a cacophony of delightful sounds: the clinking of unseen glasses, muffled laughter, the r…"
2"A profound, heavy silence that felt more terrifying than the previous revelry."
3"Nyx shifted, their form dissolving into pure shadow for a split second before reasserting itself."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"Rory breathed, her voice hushed"
1"they whispered, the sound like dry leaves skittering across stone"
2"Rory admitted, a reluctant awe seeping into her"
3"Nyx warned, their gaze sharp, piercing"
4"Rory asked, her voice strained"
5"they said, their whisper carrying a hint of something other than warning"
6"Rory said, her voice regaining some of its usual steadiness"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Rory breathed (breathe)"
1"they whispered (whisper)"
2"Rory admitted (admit)"
3"Nyx warned (warn)"
dialogueSentences21
tagDensity0.476
leniency0.952
rawRatio0.4
effectiveRatio0.381
71.4590%