Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXZAE0T70MP7GQN78VEREF

Run Details

Model:
GPT-5.1
Duration:
1m 37s
Cost:
$0.050836
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Mystery genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
"Tell me how he walked through a locked wall." Harlow stepped past the SOCO kneeling with his kit, the yellow tape brushing her shoulder, her boot soles gritting on scattered glass. The body lay crumpled half on, half off the bottom flight of concrete steps that led to a bricked archway, eyes open, mouth set in a slack, crooked shape that never counted as peaceful. "Morning to you too." The detective sergeant beside her shifted his weight, hands buried in his pockets. "He did not walk through the wall. He fell down the stairs. We live in a simple world, Quinn. Let it comfort you." She ignored him. The wall had her attention. Old brick, soot-stained, mortar crumbling in places. Someone had painted over the arch in thick white years before, then graffiti artists had claimed it, layer over layer of tags and cartoon teeth. No cracks, no loose bricks. No door. She crouched beside the dead man. Tall, late thirties, hair clipped short in an expensive cut that still held its shape, suit creased now but good wool, shoes polished enough to pick up the stark strip lights above. His head lay at a sharp angle against the step. Neck broken, or close to it. Blood had seeped from his right ear and pooled beneath, a sticky halo on the concrete. Harlow studied the pool. Tight circumference. No splatter up the risers. No cast off. "Slip and tumble." The sergeant leaned on the rail, metal groaning under his weight. "No sign of struggle, no drag marks. CCTV caught him heading down alone. Station staff locked up the minute he finished his shift, came back at six, found him like this. Clean enough for a Monday." "His name." "Michael Rutherford. Operations supervisor for the line. Lived alone in Kentish Town. Union rep, according to the badge on his lanyard." The sergeant watched her fingers. "You going to prod him or can I call the coroner before lunch?" Harlow pressed two fingers into the cloth of the shirt, just under the sternum. Still faint warmth. He had not lain long before someone found him. A few hours at most. She moved to his hands. No defensive wounds, no torn nails, a faint smear of black grease on his left thumb. Grease that did not match the clean concrete around them. "Pathologist can confirm," the sergeant said. "He took a bad step. Head met concrete. End of story." "Concrete on his scalp, yes," she murmured. "Concrete dust on his back, shoulders, both arms." She traced the ghost of dust with her gloved thumb. "He rolled, at least twice. You roll if you lose balance and momentum carries you down. Yet his tie still sits under the knot of his collar." "Some people fall neat." She glanced up. "Run me through it, Malik." He sighed, but straightened a little, professional instinct winning over sarcasm. "Right. Closed spur off Camden Town. They stopped trains using this platform years ago when they modernised. They use it for staff access and storage now. Rutherford had authority to be here. Station CCTV shows him leaving the control room at about half one, heading for a restricted door with a keycard. Camera outside the door catches him going through. No one else enters or exits between then and when staff find him around five." "No cameras down here." "Budget cuts. Plus ghosts." Malik grinned without humour. "Platform supervisor says no one likes this bit. Old London, old stories, all that." Harlow stood. Old London. The words sat under her tongue like iron. She looked up the stairs. Twelve steps, shallow rise, steel rail on either side. At the top, a grey door with flaking paint stood propped open by a yellow evidence cone. Light bled from the station corridor beyond, the hum of announcements muffled by the angle. A crime scene photographer hovered there, waiting. Harlow climbed halfway, then stopped and turned, surveying. Steps clean, apart from SOCO's powder and a few scuffs. No broad smear of blood like a body had bounced end over end. No pattern of heels striking, no chips out of the concrete. She walked back down, slow, heel to toe, copied his route. Her boots found each edge with mechanical precision. She leaned as if her shoulder had clipped the rail. Solid, cold, no give. To fall, he would have had to misjudge the first step, pitch forward and fail to catch anything. "Station staff say he knew this place like second nature," she said. "They also say the air down here whispers in Polish." Malik snorted. "Union rep, long hours, stress, maybe a hip flask in his locker. He trips, no one sees because no one comes here. Occam's razor." "In my experience, Occam never dealt with Network Rail." She crouched again at Rutherford's head. The right side of his skull had taken the impact. Fracture line visible where hair met skin, a pale gleam under the gore. His right shoulder looked lower than his left, suit pulling tight across the back in an odd way, like something had yanked down hard. She peeled the jacket open. "Careful with the pockets," Malik said. "Always." Inner lining. Wallet. Oyster card. A small brass weight that dropped into her palm with an unexpected heaviness. Not a weight. A compass. She turned it over. Palm-sized, casing dulled to a greenish bloom, etched along the edge with tiny sigils that caught the light like scratches. The glass face felt warm against her glove. The needle inside did not rest on north. It jittered, then snapped to point not down the corridor, not towards the tracks, but sideways. Directly at the walled arch at the bottom of the stairs. "Souvenir from a market stall," Malik said. "Rutherford liked bric-a-brac. His flat's full of it, apparently." "You have been." "Uniform cleared it. I read the notes." He peered at the compass. "Cheap tat. See, the needle sticks." The needle held steady now, though Harlow twisted her wrist, angling the case. It fought to keep aim at the same fixed spot. She closed her fingers around it. For an instant, the skin along her arm prickled as if she had reached into a freezer. "This was in his inner pocket," she said. "Left side, close to the heart. You tuck cheap tat into that pocket?" "He was on shift. He tucked whatever he wanted where he wanted. He also had a novelty keyring shaped like a duck in his trouser pocket, if you feel that helps build character." Harlow rose and crossed to the wall. Up close, the graffiti turned untidy. Swirls and tags stuttered over older paint. Someone had traced a line of symbols along the base, near the floor, in black marker. Shapes of letters, almost, then slanted away into angles that refused the Roman alphabet. Harlow saw them and the breath in her lungs went sharp. Three years vanished. Rain on warehouse glass resurfaced, the stink of damp rope, her partner's hand on her forearm as they both stepped into a chalk circle. Morris had joked about hipster witches. He had laughed. The symbols on that floor had glowed once, a thin dull red under the harsh inspection lamps. The marks on this wall echoed them. Cruder, uneven, but close. "Someone has doodled," Malik said, gaze following hers. "Kids with time on their hands." She traced the first symbol through the latex glove, not quite touching, expecting heat. She felt brick, cold and rough. The marker bled at the edges in thin spiderwebs. The compass warmed in her other hand. "Path team swept this?" she asked. "Top to bottom. No footprints they did not expect. Our victim, plus staff who found him, plus first responders. Nothing else." "No prints on the rail consistent with clutching. No scuff at the edge consistent with a slip." "He could have caught himself and still gone over." She exhaled, slow. "Rutherford walked down these stairs," she said. "Head level. Confident. He reaches this landing. Then his neck breaks, his body lands across the last three steps, he bleeds precisely there, and your answer is 'he slipped'." "You are doing your thing." "What thing." "The thing where you smell ghosts." Malik's mouth twitched. "Look, Quinn, I know Morris died bad. But this scene does not want a haunting, it wants an incident report." She stared at him. He dropped his eyes first. "This scene wants the truth," she said. He rubbed his jaw. "Fine. Impress me. What do you see that the rest of us fools have missed?" She turned away from him, back to the body. The tie. Still knotted. Slightly askew but not yanked loose. Shirt buttons intact, no tear where a hand grabbed. Yet the bruise on Rutherford's right upper arm that bloomed under the white cotton, a deep patch of discoloured skin, looked like a grip mark. She tugged the sleeve up, exposing the bruise in full. Four oval impressions along the bicep, one on the underside. "He met someone," she said. "They stood close enough to grasp him. They held tight enough to bruise. But your cameras show no one." "No one went through that door after him. Unless they used a cloak of invisibility." "Or unless the cameras did not see the entrance they used." She looked again at the arch. The compass needle quivered, steadying, insistently aimed. "If you tell me there is a secret door," Malik said, "I will put in for a transfer to Traffic before the end of the shift." "You read cartoons as a child. With the hero who pulls a book and the shelf moves." "I read law textbooks. You surprise me every day." She stepped close, so the stained brick filled her vision. The mortar line at chest height looked thicker in places, a careless smear as if someone had rushed the job. The lower row of bricks carried more dust than the ones above, despite less reach from idle hands. The concrete floor in front of the arch showed a faint semi-circle of wear, a difference in tone that spoke of something opening and closing across it. Not often, but enough. She knelt and touched the floor. Grime met her glove in a thin film. A tiny shard of white, caught in the line where floor met wall, gleamed. She picked it out. Bone, no bigger than a fingernail clipping, carved along one edge. The surface held a faint pattern of lines. Malik peered. "Chicken takeaway." "Your appetite disturbs me." She tucked the fragment into an evidence bag one of the SOCOs handed over without comment. "Did uniform search for access points to old tunnels?" "They walked the lot. No breaches." Malik hesitated. "Though one of the PCs flagged a door on the service map that they could not find in person. Probably a drafting error." "Show me." He dug his phone out, opened a photo from his email. A PDF of station schematics, yellowed in the scan. He held it where she could see. A rectangle marked 'Staff Access 12B' sat directly where she stood. "And in reality?" she said. "In reality, we have concrete and a corpse." She straightened. "Pathologist will tell us cause and time of death," she said. "Computer unit can pull full logs from card access doors. I want Rutherford's phone records, bank statements, any complaints made about him in the last six months, any he made." Malik raised both eyebrows. "You think someone killed a Tube supervisor over a timetable." "No one falls this clean." "People fall down stairs all the time." "Then they should make more mess of it." He opened his mouth, closed it, looked past her towards the tracks. A low rumble drifted through the tunnel, a ghost of a train long gone. This line did not see service, yet the air vibrated as if something heavy ran under their feet. "You hear that?" he said. "Old city settling." "So we agree this place is cursed." The rumble faded. Harlow rolled the compass between her fingers. "There is a market," she said, more to herself than to him. "Unlicensed, off-book. Moves around. People whisper. They say you reach it through places that do not exist on maps." Malik stared. "Please tell me you are not crowd-sourcing crime scene theory from urban legends." "Uniform did not find Access 12B because they looked for a door. Perhaps they needed a key." She lifted the bone fragment in its plastic. "A chicken bone key," Malik said. "Of course." "And a compass that points nowhere on any normal axis." "It points at a wall." "It points at an entrance." She stepped so close the brick almost brushed her nose. Up close, the marker sigils blurred, but one stood clear. A spiral, split with a straight line, flanked by two dots. She had seen that one drawn on warehouse concrete, in chalk that smelled like old coins. Her fingers, even through the glove, felt the faintest indentation. She touched the symbol with the hand that still held the compass. Heat flared against her palm, sharp and sudden. Her vision tightened at the edges. Behind her, someone swore. The mortar line under her hand pulsed. Not a trick of light, not fatigue. The brick face throbbed once, like a slow heartbeat. "Harlow," Malik said. "Step away from the wall." The compass needle spun in a tight frantic circle, then snapped forward so hard the glass face chimed. A hairline crack lanced across the brick, vertical, starting at the symbol. Dust hissed from the split and pattered onto her boots. The air that leaked through smelled of incense and cold iron, and something else beneath, sharp and coppery. Harlow yanked her hand back. The crack widened in front of her like a mouth beginning to open.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags28
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences82
tagDensity0.341
leniency0.683
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.67% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2308
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"precisely"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"precisely"
1"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
63.17% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2308
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"weight"
count4
1
word"stark"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count1
3
word"traced"
count3
4
word"mechanical"
count1
5
word"etched"
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word"echoed"
count1
7
word"quivered"
count1
8
word"vibrated"
count1
9
word"whisper"
count1
10
word"pulsed"
count1
11
word"throbbed"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"stark"
2"warmth"
3"traced"
4"mechanical"
5"etched"
6"echoed"
7"quivered"
8"vibrated"
9"whisper"
10"pulsed"
11"throbbed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences166
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences166
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences221
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen75
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2301
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions27
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount1413
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity0.92
worstName"Malik"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Malik"
discoveredNames
Harlow10
London1
Malik13
Rutherford2
Inner1
Roman1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Malik"
2"Rutherford"
3"Inner"
4"Roman"
places
0"London"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
75.74% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences101
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"not quite touching, expecting heat"
1"looked like a grip mark"
2"smelled like old coins"
69.62% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords1.304
wordCount2301
matches
0"not down the corridor, not towards the tracks, but sideways"
1"not towards the tracks, but sideways"
2"Not often, but enough"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences221
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs122
mean18.86
std17.31
cv0.918
sampleLengths
09
156
240
347
46
564
614
750
82
939
1031
1131
1217
1352
144
153
165
1711
1875
194
2022
212
2210
2353
248
2534
2651
2712
2836
299
3053
315
326
331
3418
355
3656
3711
3816
393
4018
4123
4223
4321
4433
457
4643
4711
4853
4911
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences166
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs242
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences221
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1279
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.023455824863174355
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0023455824863174357
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences221
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences221
mean10.41
std8.21
cv0.789
sampleLengths
09
122
234
317
423
53
65
77
825
95
102
116
1232
1310
146
1516
164
172
185
193
2014
2136
222
2326
2413
2514
263
279
285
295
3016
3110
326
3311
347
3518
3627
374
383
395
4011
4175
424
438
4414
452
462
478
485
499
68.17% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.43891402714932126
totalSentences221
uniqueOpeners97
73.53% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences136
matches
0"Still faint warmth."
1"Directly at the walled arch"
2"Slightly askew but not yanked"
ratio0.022
90.59% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount44
totalSentences136
matches
0"She ignored him."
1"She crouched beside the dead"
2"His head lay at a"
3"He had not lain long"
4"She moved to his hands."
5"She traced the ghost of"
6"She glanced up."
7"He sighed, but straightened a"
8"She looked up the stairs."
9"She walked back down, slow,"
10"Her boots found each edge"
11"She leaned as if her"
12"She crouched again at Rutherford's"
13"His right shoulder looked lower"
14"She peeled the jacket open."
15"She turned it over."
16"It jittered, then snapped to"
17"He peered at the compass"
18"It fought to keep aim"
19"She closed her fingers around"
ratio0.324
66.62% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount107
totalSentences136
matches
0"Harlow stepped past the SOCO"
1"The body lay crumpled half"
2"The detective sergeant beside her"
3"She ignored him."
4"The wall had her attention."
5"Someone had painted over the"
6"She crouched beside the dead"
7"His head lay at a"
8"Neck broken, or close to"
9"Blood had seeped from his"
10"Harlow studied the pool."
11"The sergeant leaned on the"
12"The sergeant watched her fingers"
13"Harlow pressed two fingers into"
14"He had not lain long"
15"She moved to his hands."
16"Grease that did not match"
17"the sergeant said"
18"She traced the ghost of"
19"She glanced up."
ratio0.787
36.76% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences136
matches
0"To fall, he would have"
ratio0.007
82.32% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences59
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"A small brass weight that dropped into her palm with an unexpected heaviness."
1"Palm-sized, casing dulled to a greenish bloom, etched along the edge with tiny sigils that caught the light like scratches."
2"Yet the bruise on Rutherford's right upper arm that bloomed under the white cotton, a deep patch of discoloured skin, looked like a grip mark."
3"The concrete floor in front of the arch showed a faint semi-circle of wear, a difference in tone that spoke of something opening and closing across it."
4"The air that leaked through smelled of incense and cold iron, and something else beneath, sharp and coppery."
71.43% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags28
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"The sergeant leaned, metal groaning under his weight"
1"Malik said, gaze following hers"
2"she said, more to herself than to him"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags18
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences82
tagDensity0.22
leniency0.439
rawRatio0.056
effectiveRatio0.024
89.2322%