Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXZFXV9YXMDVWH086PBD2Q

Run Details

Duration:
37.1s
Cost:
$0.024381

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The three deadbolts clicked open one by one, each metallic snap echoing through the narrow hallway above the curry house. Rory's breath caught in her throat as the door swung wide, revealing a figure she'd tried so hard to forget. Lucien Moreau stood framed in the doorway, his platinum hair perfectly slicked despite the October drizzle that clung to his charcoal coat. The amber eye fixed on her while the black one seemed to drink in shadows from the dimly lit corridor behind him. His ivory-handled cane rested against his thigh, fingers wrapped around it with the same careful precision she remembered from months ago. "Bonjour, Aurora." His voice carried that familiar French lilt that once made her stomach flutter. Now it twisted something sharp and painful beneath her ribs. "What are you doing here?" The words came out harsher than she intended, but she didn't soften them. Her hand remained on the door handle, knuckles white. "May I come in? We need to discuss—" "No." She started to push the door closed, but his hand shot out, pressing against the wood with gentle but immovable force. Not threatening, never threatening with Lucien, but absolute in its certainty. "Please. Five minutes of your time." The curry house below them released another wave of turmeric and garlic into the cramped stairwell. Ptolemy appeared at her ankles, the tabby cat weaving between her legs and purring as if Lucien's presence delighted rather than complicated everything. "Traitor," she muttered to the cat, then stepped back reluctantly. "Five minutes." Lucien entered with that fluid grace she remembered, his mismatched eyes taking in the chaos that was Eva's flat. Books towered in precarious stacks against every wall. Scrolls unfurled across the coffee table, weighed down by chipped mugs and takeaway containers. Research notes papered the windows like makeshift curtains. "Eva's redecorating, I see." "She's not here." Rory crossed her arms over her chest, suddenly conscious of her delivery uniform—the Golden Empress logo stretched across her t-shirt, sauce stains on her jeans. Next to Lucien's immaculate suit, she felt rumpled and small. "I know. She's in Prague, consulting with the Astronomical Clock keepers about temporal distortions." He turned from his inspection of the flat, those heterochromatic eyes finding hers. "I came to see you." "Why?" "Because we left things—" "We left things exactly where they needed to be left." Her voice cracked despite her best efforts. The crescent scar on her left wrist seemed to burn where she'd unconsciously begun rubbing it. "You made your choice, Lucien. Both of us did." He took a step closer, the tap of his cane against the wooden floor sharp in the cluttered space. "You mean when you disappeared without a word? When I woke to find your side of the bed cold and your things gone?" "Don't." The warning came out as barely a whisper. "Don't pretend you didn't know why I left." "Enlighten me." Heat flashed through her chest. "You told Vincent about the Blackwood job. You sold me out to curry favour with the council, and we both know it." "Mon dieu." His laugh held no humour, bitter as burnt coffee. "Is that what you think happened?" "I know what happened. Vincent knew details only you could have given him. About the warehouse, about the wards I'd disabled, about—" She stopped herself, jaw clenched tight. Lucien's knuckles went white around his cane handle. "About us." The word hung between them like smoke from Eva's incense burners, thick and suffocating. Ptolemy had abandoned them both for his food bowl, leaving them alone with the weight of everything unsaid. "You were protecting your reputation," she continued, each word a small violence. "The great Lucien Moreau couldn't be seen consorting with some amateur thief from Cardiff. Bad for business." "You think so little of me?" "I think I know exactly what you are." His amber eye blazed while the black one seemed to swallow light entirely. When he spoke, his accent thickened with emotion barely held in check. "What I am is half-demon, Aurora. What I am is someone the supernatural community tolerates because I am useful, not because they trust me. What I am is expendable the moment I stop providing value." She'd never heard him speak of his heritage with such raw honesty. Usually he wore his otherness like another tailored suit—perfectly fitted, impeccably presented, never allowing the seams to show. "Vincent didn't learn about Blackwood from me," he continued, taking another step forward. "He learned about it because the council had you under surveillance from the moment you arrived in London. They know about your friend Eva's research, about your little flat above Silas' pub, about every delivery run you make for the Golden Empress." Ice spread through her veins. "You're lying." "I wish I were. They tasked me with getting close to you, yes. To learn what Eva had discovered about the temporal fractures. But what happened between us..." His free hand rose as if to touch her face, then fell back to his side. "What happened between us was real." "Then why didn't you tell me?" "Because I was trying to protect you from exactly this conversation. From knowing that every moment we shared was built on a foundation of deception, even if the deception was not mine by choice." The flat's cramped quarters suddenly felt impossibly small. Books seemed to lean inward from their stacks, and the research notes on the windows rustled though no wind stirred them. Rory's pulse hammered against her throat. "So what now?" Her voice came out smaller than she'd intended. "You've delivered your confession. Absolution granted. Five minutes are up." Lucien's mismatched gaze searched her face with desperate intensity. "Now I tell you why I really came." "Which is?" "The council is moving against Eva. Tonight."
total_cost0.024381

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.317
leniency0.634
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
69.10% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount971
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count2
1
adverb"reluctantly"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count2
3
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"reluctantly"
2"suddenly"
3"really"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Blackwood"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
53.66% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount971
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"echoing"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"lilt"
count1
3
word"stomach"
count1
4
word"whisper"
count1
5
word"jaw clenched"
count1
6
word"weight"
count1
7
word"pulse"
count1
8
word"intensity"
count1
highlights
0"echoing"
1"familiar"
2"lilt"
3"stomach"
4"whisper"
5"jaw clenched"
6"weight"
7"pulse"
8"intensity"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"knuckles turned white"
count1
1
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"knuckles went white"
1"jaw clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences44
matches(empty)
0.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences44
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"started to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences71
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen44
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords967
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
89.45% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount578
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.21
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
October1
French1
Lucien7
Eva2
Golden1
Empress1
Next1
Heat1
Ice1
Rory3
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Lucien"
2"Eva"
3"Heat"
4"Rory"
places(empty)
globalScore0.894
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences42
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
96.59% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.034
wordCount967
matches
0"Not threatening, never threatening with Lucien, but absolute in its certainty"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs39
mean24.79
std17.48
cv0.705
sampleLengths
040
165
225
327
48
533
66
739
812
949
104
1138
1232
131
144
1542
1642
1717
182
1927
2017
2128
2210
2332
2429
256
268
2760
2830
2955
307
3150
326
3334
3435
3521
3617
372
387
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences44
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs100
matches(empty)
62.37% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences71
ratio0.028
matches
0"\"She's not here.\" Rory crossed her arms over her chest, suddenly conscious of her delivery uniform—the Golden Empress logo stretched across her t-shirt, sauce stains on her jeans."
1"Usually he wore his otherness like another tailored suit—perfectly fitted, impeccably presented, never allowing the seams to show."
98.02% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount581
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.0378657487091222
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.022375215146299483
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences71
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences71
mean13.62
std9.23
cv0.678
sampleLengths
020
120
222
322
421
515
610
718
89
98
1022
1111
126
1316
1423
1510
162
1719
188
1914
208
214
2228
2310
2427
255
261
274
2817
2916
309
3119
3223
339
348
352
365
3722
3811
396
4028
418
422
4314
4418
4512
4617
476
488
4913
91.08% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.5633802816901409
totalSentences71
uniqueOpeners40
75.76% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences44
matches
0"Usually he wore his otherness"
ratio0.023
74.55% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount16
totalSentences44
matches
0"His ivory-handled cane rested against"
1"His voice carried that familiar"
2"Her hand remained on the"
3"She started to push the"
4"she muttered to the cat,"
5"He turned from his inspection"
6"Her voice cracked despite her"
7"He took a step closer,"
8"His laugh held no humour,"
9"She stopped herself, jaw clenched"
10"she continued, each word a"
11"His amber eye blazed while"
12"She'd never heard him speak"
13"he continued, taking another step"
14"His free hand rose as"
15"Her voice came out smaller"
ratio0.364
28.18% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount38
totalSentences44
matches
0"The three deadbolts clicked open"
1"Rory's breath caught in her"
2"Lucien Moreau stood framed in"
3"The amber eye fixed on"
4"His ivory-handled cane rested against"
5"His voice carried that familiar"
6"The words came out harsher"
7"Her hand remained on the"
8"She started to push the"
9"The curry house below them"
10"Ptolemy appeared at her ankles,"
11"she muttered to the cat,"
12"Lucien entered with that fluid"
13"Books towered in precarious stacks"
14"Scrolls unfurled across the coffee"
15"Rory crossed her arms over"
16"He turned from his inspection"
17"Her voice cracked despite her"
18"The crescent scar on her"
19"He took a step closer,"
ratio0.864
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences44
matches
0"Now it twisted something sharp"
ratio0.023
74.83% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences21
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Lucien Moreau stood framed in the doorway, his platinum hair perfectly slicked despite the October drizzle that clung to his charcoal coat."
1"Ptolemy appeared at her ankles, the tabby cat weaving between her legs and purring as if Lucien's presence delighted rather than complicated everything."
48.08% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"She started, but his hand shot out, pressing against the wood with gentle but immovable force"
1"She stopped, jaw clenched tight"
76.83% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"she continued (continue)"
2"he continued (continue)"
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.073
leniency0.146
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.146
82.8385%