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Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXZG37GP7DVN402WN86W65
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Model:
DeepSeek V3 (2025-03-24)
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
1m 4s
Cost:
$0.001506
Provider:
DeepInfra
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
94.74%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
81.88%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
63.77%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
100.00%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
0.00%
Name drop frequency
(details)
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
98.25%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
0.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
96.56%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
78.33%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
100.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
26.67%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Technical jargon density
(details)
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
84.6733%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
The deadbolt clicked open just
as Rory raised her fist to knock again.
The door swung inward to
reveal Eva’s sleep-mussed hair and a dressing gown hanging off one shoulder. "Christ, Rory. It's three in the morning." "Got a delivery."
Rory hefted the grease-stained paper
bag from Golden Empress.
The scent of sesame oil
and chilli clung to her jacket. Eva blinked at the bag, then at Rory’s knuckles—still red from where she’d rapped them against the door. "You don’t deliver here." "Special occasion."
Eva exhaled through her nose
and stepped aside.
The flat smelled of incense
and old paper, Ptolemy’s tail flicking against a stack of grimoires as he watched from the armchair.
Rory dumped the food on
the cluttered coffee table. "Char siu bao. Your favourite." "You remember."
Eva’s voice softened, just for
a second. "Hard to forget the way you moaned over pork buns at uni." A beat.
Then Eva snorted, reaching for
the bag. "Still a charmer."
Rory watched her fingers—careful, deliberate—undo
the knot in the bag.
The same fingers that had
traced
constellations on her ribs two years ago. "You’re staring."
Eva didn’t look up
. "Just wondering if you still bite your lip when you eat." Eva froze mid-motion. The bao steamed between them. "You left,"
she said finally
. "No note. No call. Just—gone." Rory flexed her left hand, the crescent scar catching the lamplight. "Had reasons." "Evan?" "Among others." Eva’s jaw tightened. She set the bao down, untouched. "You could’ve told me." "And say what? ‘Hey, Eva, my ex is hunting me through every pub in Cardiff, mind if I hide in your bed?’" "Yes."
The word hung there, simple
and devastating. Ptolemy leapt down, tail high, and wound between Rory’s ankles. Traitor. Eva stood abruptly. "Tea. I’m making tea." Rory followed her into the galley kitchen, leaning against the fridge as Eva filled the kettle with more force than necessary. "You kept the mug." Rory nodded to the chipped TARDIS mug on the counter. Eva’s shoulders stiffened. "Sentiment." "Liar." The kettle whistled. Eva slammed it down. "Why are you
really
here?" Rory reached past her, turning off the gas. Close enough to smell jasmine shampoo. Close enough to count the freckles on Eva’s collarbones. "Lucien’s missing." Eva went
very
still. "Since when?" "Three days. Last seen at The Obsidian." "That’s demon territory." "Hence the midnight visit." Rory pulled a folded note from her pocket. The wax seal had
been broken
—Lucien’s crest, split down the middle. "Found this in my bike helmet." Eva
scanned
the page, her breath hitching. "‘The debts come due’—what debts?" "The kind half-demons don’t talk about." Rory tapped the edge of the paper. "But he wrote your name. Twice." Eva’s fingers
trembled
. Just once.
Then she crumpled the note
in her fist. "You should go." "Not without answers." "Rory—" The front door exploded inward. Wood splintered. Ptolemy yowled. Rory had Eva shoved against the fridge before the second kick landed, her forearm braced across Eva’s chest. Three figures filled the doorway—tall, too tall, their shadows stretching across the scattered takeaway containers. "Ah," said the lead figure. His voice dripped like oil. "Both of you. How
efficient
." Eva’s fingers dug into Rory’s wrist. The scar burned. The demon smiled. "Let’s talk about Lucien."
created_at
"2026-02-19T12:28:44.014Z"
2/19/2026, 12:28:44 PM
model
"deepseek/deepseek-chat-v3-0324"
app_id
182717
external_user
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streamed
true
cancelled
false
latency
763
moderation_latency
(null)
generation_time
64301
tokens_prompt
4556
tokens_completion
952
native_tokens_prompt
4154
native_tokens_completion
882
native_tokens_completion_images
(null)
native_tokens_reasoning
0
native_tokens_cached
64
num_media_prompt
(null)
num_input_audio_prompt
(null)
num_media_completion
0
num_search_results
(null)
origin
"https://ncbench.com/"
is_byok
false
finish_reason
"stop"
native_finish_reason
"stop"
usage
0.00150578
router
(null)
provider_responses
0
endpoint_id
"820376cb-f110-4d56-ab52-5bd6ca269420"
id
"chatcmpl-RzVEjL3XkrDkulGuNMfRefW1"
is_byok
false
latency
86
model_permaslug
"deepseek/deepseek-chat-v3-0324"
provider_name
"DeepInfra"
status
200
api_type
"completions"
id
"gen-1771504124-LjP7I5mZTMBa4N3Dkdzm"
upstream_id
"chatcmpl-RzVEjL3XkrDkulGuNMfRefW1"
total_cost
0.00150578
cache_discount
0.00000416
upstream_inference_cost
0
provider_name
"DeepInfra"
Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
94.74%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
7
adverbTagCount
2
adverbTags
0
"Eva’s voice softened just [just]"
1
"she said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences
38
tagDensity
0.184
leniency
0.368
rawRatio
0.286
effectiveRatio
0.105
81.88%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
552
totalAiIsmAdverbs
2
found
0
adverb
"really"
count
1
1
adverb
"very"
count
1
highlights
0
"really"
1
"very"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
63.77%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
552
totalAiIsms
4
found
0
word
"traced"
count
1
1
word
"scanned"
count
1
2
word
"trembled"
count
1
3
word
"efficient"
count
1
highlights
0
"traced"
1
"scanned"
2
"trembled"
3
"efficient"
100.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
50
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
0
narrationSentences
50
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
(empty)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
80
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
22
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
542
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
6
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
0.00%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
39
wordCount
379
uniqueNames
6
maxNameDensity
5.01
worstName
"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity
6.5
worstWindowName
"Eva"
discoveredNames
Rory
14
Eva
19
Golden
1
Empress
1
Ptolemy
3
Lucien
1
persons
0
"Rory"
1
"Eva"
2
"Ptolemy"
3
"Lucien"
places
0
"Golden"
globalScore
0
windowScore
0
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
29
glossingSentenceCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
542
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
80
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
46
mean
11.78
std
8.27
cv
0.702
sampleLengths
0
30
1
7
2
23
3
22
4
2
5
30
6
14
7
9
8
12
9
12
10
23
11
6
12
11
13
8
14
10
15
13
16
1
17
2
18
13
19
22
20
1
21
18
22
7
23
21
24
14
25
4
26
1
27
12
28
23
29
2
30
6
31
7
32
3
33
29
34
12
35
19
36
13
37
3
38
3
39
1
40
5
41
22
42
15
43
15
44
9
45
7
98.25%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
1
totalSentences
50
matches
0
"been broken"
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
68
matches
(empty)
0.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
5
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
4
totalSentences
80
ratio
0.05
matches
0
"Eva blinked at the bag, then at Rory’s knuckles—still red from where she’d rapped them against the door."
1
"Rory watched her fingers—careful, deliberate—undo the knot in the bag."
2
"The wax seal had been broken—Lucien’s crest, split down the middle."
3
"Three figures filled the doorway—tall, too tall, their shadows stretching across the scattered takeaway containers."
96.56%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
387
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
17
adverbRatio
0.04392764857881137
lyAdverbCount
2
lyAdverbRatio
0.00516795865633075
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
80
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
80
mean
6.78
std
5.14
cv
0.758
sampleLengths
0
13
1
17
2
7
3
12
4
11
5
18
6
4
7
2
8
8
9
22
10
9
11
5
12
9
13
12
14
2
15
7
16
3
17
10
18
13
19
6
20
11
21
3
22
5
23
5
24
5
25
11
26
2
27
1
28
2
29
3
30
6
31
4
32
22
33
1
34
7
35
10
36
1
37
3
38
4
39
21
40
14
41
3
42
1
43
1
44
3
45
4
46
5
47
8
48
6
49
9
78.33%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
4
diversityRatio
0.5
totalSentences
80
uniqueOpeners
40
100.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
2
totalSentences
45
matches
0
"Then Eva snorted, reaching for"
1
"Then she crumpled the note"
ratio
0.044
100.00%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
3
totalSentences
45
matches
0
"she said finally"
1
"She set the bao down,"
2
"His voice dripped like oil."
ratio
0.067
26.67%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
39
totalSentences
45
matches
0
"The deadbolt clicked open just"
1
"The door swung inward to"
2
"Rory hefted the grease-stained paper"
3
"The scent of sesame oil"
4
"Eva blinked at the bag,"
5
"Eva exhaled through her nose"
6
"The flat smelled of incense"
7
"Rory dumped the food on"
8
"Eva’s voice softened, just for"
9
"Rory watched her fingers—careful, deliberate—undo"
10
"The same fingers that had"
11
"Eva didn’t look up"
12
"Eva froze mid-motion."
13
"The bao steamed between them."
14
"she said finally"
15
"Rory flexed her left hand,"
16
"Eva’s jaw tightened."
17
"She set the bao down,"
18
"The word hung there, simple"
19
"Ptolemy leapt down, tail high,"
ratio
0.867
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
0
totalSentences
45
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
100.00%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
13
technicalSentenceCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
7
uselessAdditionCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
1
fancyCount
0
fancyTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
38
tagDensity
0.026
leniency
0.053
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
84.6733%