Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXZK3GAAFQ4QBPHTX5369H

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Duration:
20.1s
Cost:
$0.012475
Provider:
Anthropic

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System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Horror genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
# Chapter One: The Grove at Midnight The oak trees seemed wrong. Aurora knew that the moment her trainers crunched on the frost-brittle grass, the Heartstone Pendant thrumming against her sternum like a second heartbeat. Not wrong in any way she could articulate to the police, or to Eva, or to anyone else who would inevitably ask why she'd ventured into Richmond Park at half past midnight alone. The oaks just were. Wrong. She'd entered through the northern gate, keys threaded between her knuckles despite their futility. The pendant had been warm all evening, a gentle pulse that built to something almost urgent as she'd locked up the flat above Silas' bar. Warm became hot became burning by the time she reached the park boundary. The crescent scar on her left wrist tingled in sympathy. Something wants me to be here. The standing stones weren't visible yet, but she could feel them the way one feels a stare at the back of one's neck. Ancient oak, the research had said. Older than thought. Marking the boundary between worlds. The wildflowers were the strangest part. Even in December, they bloomed. Violet clustered against frost-white grass. Winter jasmine that shouldn't flower for another month. The flowers exhaled something that tasted like copper and old honey. Aurora pushed deeper into the darkness, her breath fogging between the trees. A sound stopped her dead. Not a sound exactly, but the absence of one. The park had gone quiet in a way that London never did. No distant traffic hum. No sirens. No drunken laughter from the pubs beyond the tree line. Just the soft rasp of her breathing and the crunch of her footsteps. She pulled out her mobile. No signal. Expected, really, given everything. Expected was different from comforting. "I know you're here," she said to the darkness. Her voice came out steadier than she felt. "The pendant wouldn't burn otherwise." The oaks didn't answer. The wildflowers held their breath. A branch cracked somewhere to her left, maybe twenty metres off. Not a small crack. Not a squirrel or a fox. Something large. Aurora's fingers tightened around her keys, which suddenly felt laughably inadequate. A defence against what, exactly? She didn't even know what she was defending against. Her feet moved forward anyway. The logic of it sat somewhere between compulsion and inevitability. She'd come for answers. The pendant wouldn't lead her astray. That was the theory, at least. The theory that had seemed reasonable at three in the morning when she'd woken with her heart pounding, the Heartstone burning so hot she'd expected to find blisters. The wildflowers grew thicker ahead, a carpet of impossible blooms that seemed to glow in the darkness. Not with light exactly. It was more that they repelled the dark somehow, creating pockets of nearly-visible space. Aurora knelt, brushing her fingertips across a cluster of violet petals. Warm. The flowers were warm. Warmer than the frosted earth, warmer than the December air, warmer than anything had a right to be in this frozen night. "Christ." She stood abruptly. The sound had come from behind her this time. Closer. Deliberate. Aurora spun, keys ready. The darkness between the oaks was absolute, a solid thing that swallowed even the faint non-light cast by the flowers. Something moved in it. Not movement she could pin down exactly. More a disturbance in the quality of shadow. A shape that dissolved the moment her eyes focused on it. "Right then." She kept walking, deeper. The trees grew closer together here, their trunks wider, their branches forming a canopy that blocked out even the stars. Her breath came faster. She wasn't frightened. The distinction felt important. She was something else entirely. Attuned. Aware. The pendant pulsed against her ribs. Warm. Insistent. A figure stood in the wildflowers ahead. Aurora stopped. The thing didn't move, just stood there with its arms at its sides, and the worst part was that it wore a shape she almost recognised. Almost human. Almost like someone she'd met. The face was turned away, shoulders hunched in a way that suggested exhaustion or defeat. "Hello?" The word felt trapped in her throat. The figure didn't turn. It simply waited, patient as a fence post, as if it had been waiting in this exact spot for hours. Years. Centuries. Aurora forced her legs to move. One step. Then another. The pendant was burning now, a sensation like holding her hand in near-boiling water. Not quite unbearable. Not quite survivable. She lifted her shirt and looked down. Even in the darkness, she could see the Heartstone glowing crimson, pulsing with a rhythm that matched neither her heartbeat nor the figure's stillness. When she looked up again, the figure had turned its head. It had her face. Aurora's knees went slack, but she didn't run. The logic of it was simple and horrifying and absolutely clear. That thing wore her face not as a mask but as truth. As inevitability. As something that had always been waiting for her to arrive at this precise moment, in this impossible place, where time moved differently and wildflowers bloomed in frost and ancient oaks marked boundaries between everything. The thing that wore her face opened its mouth. No sound came out, but Aurora felt it anyway. Felt it in the pendant burning against her sternum. Felt it in the way the wildflowers bent toward her, their warm-blooming petals reaching. The trees began to close in. Not movement. Not the sudden crashing of branches. But a subtle shifting, as if the entire grove was holding its breath and slowly, inexorably, breathing in. The distance that had seemed so vast when Aurora entered compressed in increments. The other-her didn't move, just watched with her own bright blue eyes and waited for the circle to tighten. Aurora's hand flew to the pendant, her fingers scrabbling at the silver chain. It burned so hot now that the skin beneath it had to be blistering. She pulled. The chain held. The figure took a step forward. "No. No, that's not—I came here to understand. I came here to—" The trees creaked. A sound like old bones settling. Like something ancient waking. The wildflowers opened all at once, petals unfurling in a motion that shouldn't have been possible, and from their centres emerged light. Not natural light. Not the light of stars or moon or any earthly source. This light was thick and golden and it moved like honey, like something with purpose and hunger. The copy smiled. Aurora's smile. Her own expression rendered alien on a face that was perfectly, impossibly her own. Then the light swallowed everything, and the grove contracted like a closing fist.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences6
tagDensity0.667
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
77.76% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1124
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"inexorably"
count1
4
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"suddenly"
2"slowly"
3"inexorably"
4"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
68.86% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1124
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"pulse"
count1
1
word"could feel"
count1
2
word"footsteps"
count1
3
word"comforting"
count1
4
word"pounding"
count1
5
word"pulsed"
count1
6
word"absolutely"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"could feel"
2"footsteps"
3"comforting"
4"pounding"
5"pulsed"
6"absolutely"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences128
matches
0"d in sympathy"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences128
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences131
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1116
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
94.90% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions30
wordCount1089
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.1
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
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One2
Grove1
Midnight1
Heartstone3
Pendant1
Eva1
Richmond1
Park1
Warm3
December2
London1
Aurora12
persons
0"One"
1"Grove"
2"Heartstone"
3"Pendant"
4"Eva"
5"Warm"
6"Aurora"
places
0"Midnight"
1"Richmond"
2"Park"
3"December"
4"London"
globalScore0.949
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences70
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"seemed wrong"
1"tasted like copper and old honey"
2"seemed reasonable at three in the morning when she'd woken with her heart pounding, the Heartstone burning so hot she'd expected to find blisters"
3"blooms that seemed to glow in the darkness"
4"seemed so vast when Aurora entered compressed in increments"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords2.688
wordCount1116
matches
0"Not a sound exactly, but the absence of one"
1"neither her heartbeat nor"
2"not as a mask but as truth"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences131
matches
0"knew that the"
1"was that it"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
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mean30.16
std21.66
cv0.718
sampleLengths
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262
36
437
547
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716
822
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1514
1654
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218
2226
2361
2411
254
2668
2741
286
2958
3032
316
3212
3313
3453
3519
3613
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences128
matches
0"was turned"
87.64% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs178
matches
0"was defending"
1"was burning"
2"was holding"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences131
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount127
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount4
adverbRatio0.031496062992125984
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.007874015748031496
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences131
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences131
mean8.52
std6.97
cv0.818
sampleLengths
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123
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625
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810
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466
476
4828
4917
43.26% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.3282442748091603
totalSentences131
uniqueOpeners43
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences107
matches
0"Just the soft rasp of"
1"More a disturbance in the"
2"Almost like someone she'd met."
3"Then the light swallowed everything,"
ratio0.037
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences107
matches
0"She'd entered through the northern"
1"She pulled out her mobile."
2"she said to the darkness"
3"Her voice came out steadier"
4"She didn't even know what"
5"Her feet moved forward anyway."
6"She'd come for answers."
7"It was more that they"
8"She stood abruptly."
9"She kept walking, deeper"
10"Her breath came faster."
11"She wasn't frightened."
12"She was something else entirely."
13"It simply waited, patient as"
14"She lifted her shirt and"
15"It had her face."
16"It burned so hot now"
17"Her own expression rendered alien"
ratio0.168
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount74
totalSentences107
matches
0"# Chapter One: The Grove"
1"Aurora knew that the moment"
2"The oaks just were."
3"She'd entered through the northern"
4"The pendant had been warm"
5"The crescent scar on her"
6"Something wants me to be"
7"The standing stones weren't visible"
8"The wildflowers were the strangest"
9"Violet clustered against frost-white grass."
10"Winter jasmine that shouldn't flower"
11"The flowers exhaled something that"
12"Aurora pushed deeper into the"
13"A sound stopped her dead."
14"The park had gone quiet"
15"She pulled out her mobile."
16"she said to the darkness"
17"Her voice came out steadier"
18"The oaks didn't answer."
19"The wildflowers held their breath."
ratio0.692
93.46% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences107
matches
0"Even in December, they bloomed."
1"Even in the darkness, she"
ratio0.019
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences43
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"The theory that had seemed reasonable at three in the morning when she'd woken with her heart pounding, the Heartstone burning so hot she'd expected to find bli…"
1"The wildflowers grew thicker ahead, a carpet of impossible blooms that seemed to glow in the darkness."
2"The darkness between the oaks was absolute, a solid thing that swallowed even the faint non-light cast by the flowers."
3"A shape that dissolved the moment her eyes focused on it."
4"Even in the darkness, she could see the Heartstone glowing crimson, pulsing with a rhythm that matched neither her heartbeat nor the figure's stillness."
5"As something that had always been waiting for her to arrive at this precise moment, in this impossible place, where time moved differently and wildflowers bloom…"
6"But a subtle shifting, as if the entire grove was holding its breath and slowly, inexorably, breathing in."
7"The wildflowers opened all at once, petals unfurling in a motion that shouldn't have been possible, and from their centres emerged light."
8"Her own expression rendered alien on a face that was perfectly, impossibly her own."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"She kept, deeper"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences6
tagDensity0.167
leniency0.333
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.1959%