| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 77.76% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1124 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "really" | | 1 | "suddenly" | | 2 | "slowly" | | 3 | "inexorably" | | 4 | "perfectly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 68.86% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1124 | | totalAiIsms | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "could feel" | | 2 | "footsteps" | | 3 | "comforting" | | 4 | "pounding" | | 5 | "pulsed" | | 6 | "absolutely" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 128 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 128 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 131 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 35 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1116 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 94.90% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 30 | | wordCount | 1089 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.1 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Chapter | 1 | | One | 2 | | Grove | 1 | | Midnight | 1 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 1 | | Eva | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Warm | 3 | | December | 2 | | London | 1 | | Aurora | 12 |
| | persons | | 0 | "One" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Heartstone" | | 3 | "Pendant" | | 4 | "Eva" | | 5 | "Warm" | | 6 | "Aurora" |
| | places | | 0 | "Midnight" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "December" | | 4 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.949 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 70 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed wrong" | | 1 | "tasted like copper and old honey" | | 2 | "seemed reasonable at three in the morning when she'd woken with her heart pounding, the Heartstone burning so hot she'd expected to find blisters" | | 3 | "blooms that seemed to glow in the darkness" | | 4 | "seemed so vast when Aurora entered compressed in increments" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 2.688 | | wordCount | 1116 | | matches | | 0 | "Not a sound exactly, but the absence of one" | | 1 | "neither her heartbeat nor" | | 2 | "not as a mask but as truth" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 131 | | matches | | 0 | "knew that the" | | 1 | "was that it" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 37 | | mean | 30.16 | | std | 21.66 | | cv | 0.718 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 7 | | 1 | 66 | | 2 | 62 | | 3 | 6 | | 4 | 37 | | 5 | 47 | | 6 | 55 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 22 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 48 | | 11 | 59 | | 12 | 46 | | 13 | 27 | | 14 | 1 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 54 | | 17 | 44 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 50 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 26 | | 23 | 61 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 68 | | 27 | 41 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 58 | | 30 | 32 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 53 | | 35 | 19 | | 36 | 13 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 128 | | matches | | |
| 87.64% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 178 | | matches | | 0 | "was defending" | | 1 | "was burning" | | 2 | "was holding" |
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| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 131 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 127 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 4 | | adverbRatio | 0.031496062992125984 | | lyAdverbCount | 1 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007874015748031496 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 131 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 131 | | mean | 8.52 | | std | 6.97 | | cv | 0.818 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 33 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 1 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 25 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 23 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 28 | | 49 | 17 |
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| 43.26% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 15 | | diversityRatio | 0.3282442748091603 | | totalSentences | 131 | | uniqueOpeners | 43 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 107 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the soft rasp of" | | 1 | "More a disturbance in the" | | 2 | "Almost like someone she'd met." | | 3 | "Then the light swallowed everything," |
| | ratio | 0.037 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 18 | | totalSentences | 107 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd entered through the northern" | | 1 | "She pulled out her mobile." | | 2 | "she said to the darkness" | | 3 | "Her voice came out steadier" | | 4 | "She didn't even know what" | | 5 | "Her feet moved forward anyway." | | 6 | "She'd come for answers." | | 7 | "It was more that they" | | 8 | "She stood abruptly." | | 9 | "She kept walking, deeper" | | 10 | "Her breath came faster." | | 11 | "She wasn't frightened." | | 12 | "She was something else entirely." | | 13 | "It simply waited, patient as" | | 14 | "She lifted her shirt and" | | 15 | "It had her face." | | 16 | "It burned so hot now" | | 17 | "Her own expression rendered alien" |
| | ratio | 0.168 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 74 | | totalSentences | 107 | | matches | | 0 | "# Chapter One: The Grove" | | 1 | "Aurora knew that the moment" | | 2 | "The oaks just were." | | 3 | "She'd entered through the northern" | | 4 | "The pendant had been warm" | | 5 | "The crescent scar on her" | | 6 | "Something wants me to be" | | 7 | "The standing stones weren't visible" | | 8 | "The wildflowers were the strangest" | | 9 | "Violet clustered against frost-white grass." | | 10 | "Winter jasmine that shouldn't flower" | | 11 | "The flowers exhaled something that" | | 12 | "Aurora pushed deeper into the" | | 13 | "A sound stopped her dead." | | 14 | "The park had gone quiet" | | 15 | "She pulled out her mobile." | | 16 | "she said to the darkness" | | 17 | "Her voice came out steadier" | | 18 | "The oaks didn't answer." | | 19 | "The wildflowers held their breath." |
| | ratio | 0.692 | |
| 93.46% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 107 | | matches | | 0 | "Even in December, they bloomed." | | 1 | "Even in the darkness, she" |
| | ratio | 0.019 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 43 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "The theory that had seemed reasonable at three in the morning when she'd woken with her heart pounding, the Heartstone burning so hot she'd expected to find bli…" | | 1 | "The wildflowers grew thicker ahead, a carpet of impossible blooms that seemed to glow in the darkness." | | 2 | "The darkness between the oaks was absolute, a solid thing that swallowed even the faint non-light cast by the flowers." | | 3 | "A shape that dissolved the moment her eyes focused on it." | | 4 | "Even in the darkness, she could see the Heartstone glowing crimson, pulsing with a rhythm that matched neither her heartbeat nor the figure's stillness." | | 5 | "As something that had always been waiting for her to arrive at this precise moment, in this impossible place, where time moved differently and wildflowers bloom…" | | 6 | "But a subtle shifting, as if the entire grove was holding its breath and slowly, inexorably, breathing in." | | 7 | "The wildflowers opened all at once, petals unfurling in a motion that shouldn't have been possible, and from their centres emerged light." | | 8 | "Her own expression rendered alien on a face that was perfectly, impossibly her own." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.167 | | leniency | 0.333 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |