Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXZM899J373XJMM7SHQBFV

Run Details

Duration:
1m 12s
Cost:
$0.079688
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain lashed the pavement, bouncing off the asphalt in a rhythmic hiss that drowned out the distant hum of London traffic. Harlow Quinn ignored the freezing water soaking through her trench coat. Her focus narrowed to the single figure sprinting fifty yards ahead. Tomás Herrera. He moved with a desperate, frantic energy, sliding around the corner of a brick tenement. His boots scrabbled for traction on the slick cobblestones. Quinn adjusted her pace. Controlled. Measured. Military precision hammered into her gait over eighteen years of service. She didn't need to outsprint him. She just needed to outlast him. Her breath plumed in the cold air, white ghosts snatching at the dark. "Police! Stop!" The command tore from her throat, raw and authoritative. Herrera didn't slow. He threw a glance over his shoulder. Under the sodium glare of a streetlamp, his olive skin looked jaundiced. The warm brown eyes, usually calm in the surveillance photos she’d studied, were wide with terror. He clutched his chest, hand bundled tight around something beneath his jacket. Quinn pushed harder. Her leather watch felt heavy against her wrist, a cold anchor. She vaulted a discarded crate of rotting vegetables, the stench of decay mixing with the metallic tang of ozone in the air. Herrera took a sharp left, darting into the mouth of an alley that shouldn't have been there. It was a jagged scar between two high-rises, unlit and foreboding. Quinn skidded around the corner, water splashing up to her shins. Her hand drifted to her belt, unclipping the retention strap on her holster. Not drawing yet. Just preparing. The alley narrowed. Shadows stretched and warped, playing tricks on the eyes. Herrera stumbled, his hand slapping against the wet brick to steady himself. A glint of silver flashed at his neck—a Saint Christopher medallion swinging wildly outside his shirt. "Nowhere to go, Tomás," Quinn shouted. Her voice echoed, bouncing off the damp walls. "Give it up." "You don't understand!" He didn't stop. He pushed off the wall, launching himself toward a boarded-up facade at the alley's dead end. It was the shell of an old Tube station access point, long forgotten by the council and erased from modern maps. 'South Kentish Town' was barely visible in tiled mosaic behind layers of graffiti and grime. Quinn closed the gap. Thirty yards. Twenty. "I said stop!" Herrera reached the rusted iron grate barring the entrance. He didn't rattle it. He didn't try to climb. Instead, he fumbled in his pocket with his left hand, the one bearing the distinct scar running along the forearm. He produced a small, jagged object. A bone. He jammed the bone token into a gap in the masonry, a space that looked like nothing more than a crack in the foundation. The air pressure in the alley dropped. It wasn't a subtle shift. Quinn’s ears popped. The sound of the rain vanished, replaced by a low, throbbing hum that vibrated in her molars. The iron grate shivered, the rust flaking off like dry skin, and swung inward with a groan that sounded suspiciously like a human voice. Herrera slipped through the opening. Quinn slammed into the grate a second later, her momentum carrying her forward. She grabbed the cold bars. They felt oily, slick with a substance that definitely wasn't rainwater. "Herrera!" He paused on the other side, looking back from the top of a spiral staircase that descended into suffocating blackness. "Go home, Detective," he yelled, his chest heaving. "This isn't your beat." "I'm making it my beat." "You get down here, the badge doesn't mean anything. Rules are different." "I'm aware of your 'unauthorized treatments,' Tomás. I know about the license. You're just a struck-off paramedic playing doctor in a basement." Herrera shook his head. The fear in his eyes shifted to something resembling pity. "It's not a basement. It's the Market. And you don't have a token." He turned and sprinted down the stairs. The darkness swallowed him whole. Quinn stood at the threshold. The rain had started again behind her, cold and insistent, but the air flowing up from the stairwell was dry. It smelled of sulfur, dried sage, and something coppery that reminded her of the crime scene where she’d found DS Morris three years ago. That smell. It triggered a spike of adrenaline that had nothing to do with the run. Her jaw tightened, muscles bunching. She pulled her flashlight, clicking the beam on. The light cut through the gloom, illuminating crumbling tile work and ancient posters advertising products that ceased existing in the forties. But underneath the decay, there were signs of heavy foot traffic. The dust on the stairs was disturbed. She holstered the flashlight and drew her sidearm. Standard procedure dictated she call for backup. She tapped her earpiece. "Dispatch, this is DI Quinn. Suspect entering abandoned structure off Camden High Street. Requesting perimeter." Static hissed in her ear. Not the normal radio static, but a multi-tonal screeching, like a choir of birds dying at once. She winced and ripped the earpiece out, shoving it into her pocket. Interference. Or something else. She looked at the gap in the masonry where Herrera had placed the bone. The object was gone, consumed by the stone. The grate began to creak, inching closed. She had seconds. Quinn didn't think about procedure. She thought about Morris. She thought about the emptiness of the desk next to hers and the report that said 'exploded gas main' when she knew damn well gas mains didn't leave scorch marks shaped like hands. She jammed her boot between the gate and the frame. The iron groaned in protest. With a grunt of exertion, she shoved the metal barrier back. It fought her, heavy and resistant, as if the station itself denied her entry. She put her shoulder into it, driving with her legs. The gate gave way. Quinn stepped onto the landing. The grate slammed shut behind her with the finality of a coffin lid. Silence returned, heavy and thick. The hum she’d felt earlier intensified, vibrating through the soles of her boots. She aimed her weapon down the spiral. "Police!" she announced, though the word felt small here. "Coming down." She descended. The stairs were narrow metal slats, rusted through in places. Every step rang out, metallic pings fading into the depths. The air grew warmer as she went lower. The smell of ozone overpowered the musty decay. Check corners. Clear. Move. Ten feet down. Twenty. The spiral seemed endless. Then, sound began to bleed up from below. Not silence anymore. A murmur. Thousands of whispers layered over one another. The clink of glass. The rattle of chains. Quinn reached the bottom landing. A heavy blackout curtain, made of velvet so old it looked like moss, blocked the way forward. Light bled from the edges—shifting hues of purple and sickly green. She reached out with her free hand and swept the curtain aside. The sensory assault nearly knocked her back. She wasn't in a Tube station anymore. The vaulted ceiling soared upward, far higher than Victorian engineering allowed, disappearing into a smoky haze. The platform had been transformed into a sprawling bazaar. Stalls constructed from bones, driftwood, and beaten copper lined the tracks. Lanterns burned with flames that cast no shadows. Entities moved through the crowd. Some looked human. Others wore the faces of men but moved with the disjointed, fluid grace of predators. Quinn scanned the crowd. Her eyes watered from the acrid smoke. There. A flash of a curly dark head moving toward a stall draped in red silk. Herrera. He was speaking to a vendor—a hunched figure whose arms were too long for its torso. Herrera pointed back toward the entrance, toward her. Quinn holstered her weapon. A gun prompted panic; panic caused riots. She needed to navigate this shark tank without bleeding. She adjusted her coat, buttoning it to hide the badge on her belt. She smoothed her salt-and-pepper hair, assuming the mask of indifference she wore during interrogations. She stepped off the landing and into the Veil Market. The ground beneath her feet was packed earth, not concrete. As she walked, heads turned. Not observing her with curiosity, but with hunger. She kept her gaze forward, locked on Herrera. A figure stepped into her path. It was tall, draped in rags that smelled of wet dog and funeral flowers. "Token," the figure rasped. It held out a hand with six fingers. Quinn didn't break stride. She channeled the cold fury that had lived in her chest for three years. She marched straight at the figure. "Move." The command was low, dangerous. The figure hesitated. It sensed the violence coiled inside her, the predator's intent that had nothing to do with supernatural abilities and everything to do with a woman who had nothing left to lose. The figure stepped aside. Quinn brushed past, her shoulder checking the creature. She stepped into the main thoroughfare, the green neon glow of a stall reflecting in her eyes. Herrera was fifty feet away. He saw her. He stopped running. He watched her approach, his hand clutching the Saint Christopher medal. He didn't look like a suspect anymore. He looked like a man watching a ghost walk through a wall. Quinn stopped three feet from him. The noise of the market swirled around them—haggling in tongues she didn't recognize, the screech of metal, the roar of flame—but she pitched her voice so only he could hear. "End of the line, Tomás." "You shouldn't be here," he whispered, his eyes darting to the shadows gathering at the periphery of the market stalls. "You don't know what you've walked into." "Assume I'm a quick learner." She grabbed his arm, her grip iron-hard on the scar tissue beneath his jacket. "We're going back up." "We can't," he said, and for the first time, Quinn heard genuine terror in his voice, stripping away the bravado. "The exit moves. The station is gone, Detective. We're in the shift now." Quinn looked back at the stairs. The velvet curtain was there, but the spiral staircase behind it... the geometry was wrong. The metal slats were twisting, elongating, stretching away into a void that didn't lead to Camden. "Then we find another way out," she said. "After you tell me everything you know about Morris." Herrera froze. The noise of the market seemed to drop away. "Morris? The DS?" "Start talking. Move and I break the arm." "Detective, look around you." Herrera gestured to the chaotic sprawl of the bazaar. "This is where he died. This is where he bought the thing that killed him." Quinn stared at him. The ambient noise rushed back in—a deafening roar. She tightened her grip on his arm, anchoring herself in the madness. "Show me," she said. Herrera nodded slowly. "Follow me. And for God's sake, don't touch anything." He turned deeper into the crowd. Quinn didn't let go. She stepped forward, leaving the memory of the rain-soaked street far behind.
created_at"2026-02-19T12:28:48.277Z" 2/19/2026, 12:28:48 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.344
leniency0.688
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
97.29% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1846
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
37.70% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1846
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"rhythmic"
count1
1
word"measured"
count1
2
word"foreboding"
count1
3
word"glint"
count1
4
word"echoed"
count1
5
word"facade"
count1
6
word"mosaic"
count1
7
word"vibrated"
count1
8
word"gloom"
count1
9
word"standard"
count1
10
word"structure"
count1
11
word"silence"
count2
12
word"depths"
count1
13
word"velvet"
count2
14
word"constructed"
count1
15
word"scanned"
count1
16
word"silk"
count1
17
word"navigate"
count1
18
word"mask of indifference"
count1
19
word"predator"
count1
20
word"chaotic"
count1
highlights
0"rhythmic"
1"measured"
2"foreboding"
3"glint"
4"echoed"
5"facade"
6"mosaic"
7"vibrated"
8"gloom"
9"standard"
10"structure"
11"silence"
12"depths"
13"velvet"
14"constructed"
15"scanned"
16"silk"
17"navigate"
18"mask of indifference"
19"predator"
20"chaotic"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences186
matches
0"e with terror"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences186
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"try to"
1"began to"
2"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences209
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1833
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions49
wordCount1610
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.3
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
London1
Quinn21
Herrera15
Saint2
Christopher2
Tube2
Morris2
Victorian1
Veil1
Market1
Camden1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Herrera"
2"Saint"
3"Christopher"
4"Morris"
5"Market"
places
0"London"
1"Tube"
2"Veil"
3"Camden"
globalScore0.848
windowScore0.833
84.21% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences114
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"looked like nothing more than a crack in"
1"looked like moss, blocked the way forward"
2"looked like a man watching a ghost walk t"
90.89% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.091
wordCount1833
matches
0"Not the normal radio static, but a multi-tonal screeching, like a choir of birds dying at onc"
1"Not observing her with curiosity, but with hunger"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences209
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs85
mean21.56
std15.19
cv0.705
sampleLengths
044
12
253
313
42
59
650
736
828
929
1040
1117
123
1355
147
153
1644
172
1824
1956
205
2129
221
2320
2412
255
2612
2722
2827
2912
3049
3121
3247
3319
3415
3534
364
3729
383
3942
4015
4139
425
4313
4425
4511
4638
474
488
4928
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences186
matches
0"was gone"
1"been transformed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs293
matches
0"was speaking"
60.83% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences209
ratio0.029
matches
0"A glint of silver flashed at his neck—a Saint Christopher medallion swinging wildly outside his shirt."
1"Light bled from the edges—shifting hues of purple and sickly green."
2"He was speaking to a vendor—a hunched figure whose arms were too long for its torso."
3"A gun prompted panic; panic caused riots."
4"The noise of the market swirled around them—haggling in tongues she didn't recognize, the screech of metal, the roar of flame—but she pitched her voice so only he could hear."
5"The ambient noise rushed back in—a deafening roar."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount700
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount10
adverbRatio0.014285714285714285
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.002857142857142857
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences209
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences209
mean8.77
std6.12
cv0.698
sampleLengths
022
111
211
32
415
59
64
71
81
911
106
116
1213
132
149
153
167
1712
1816
1912
203
2111
2222
2317
2411
2511
2613
273
282
293
309
3112
3216
336
348
353
363
373
3816
3921
4015
414
422
431
443
459
464
475
4820
496
40.83% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats23
diversityRatio0.31100478468899523
totalSentences209
uniqueOpeners65
40.40% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences165
matches
0"Instead, he fumbled in his"
1"Then, sound began to bleed"
ratio0.012
55.15% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount68
totalSentences165
matches
0"Her focus narrowed to the"
1"He moved with a desperate,"
2"His boots scrabbled for traction"
3"She didn't need to outsprint"
4"She just needed to outlast"
5"Her breath plumed in the"
6"He threw a glance over"
7"He clutched his chest, hand"
8"Her leather watch felt heavy"
9"She vaulted a discarded crate"
10"It was a jagged scar"
11"Her hand drifted to her"
12"Her voice echoed, bouncing off"
13"He didn't stop."
14"He pushed off the wall,"
15"It was the shell of"
16"He didn't rattle it."
17"He didn't try to climb."
18"He produced a small, jagged"
19"He jammed the bone token"
ratio0.412
2.42% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount151
totalSentences165
matches
0"The rain lashed the pavement,"
1"Harlow Quinn ignored the freezing"
2"Her focus narrowed to the"
3"He moved with a desperate,"
4"His boots scrabbled for traction"
5"Quinn adjusted her pace."
6"Military precision hammered into her"
7"She didn't need to outsprint"
8"She just needed to outlast"
9"Her breath plumed in the"
10"The command tore from her"
11"Herrera didn't slow."
12"He threw a glance over"
13"The warm brown eyes, usually"
14"He clutched his chest, hand"
15"Quinn pushed harder."
16"Her leather watch felt heavy"
17"She vaulted a discarded crate"
18"Herrera took a sharp left,"
19"It was a jagged scar"
ratio0.915
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences165
matches(empty)
ratio0
77.92% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences66
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"He paused on the other side, looking back from the top of a spiral staircase that descended into suffocating blackness."
1"It smelled of sulfur, dried sage, and something coppery that reminded her of the crime scene where she’d found DS Morris three years ago."
2"The light cut through the gloom, illuminating crumbling tile work and ancient posters advertising products that ceased existing in the forties."
3"It fought her, heavy and resistant, as if the station itself denied her entry."
4"It sensed the violence coiled inside her, the predator's intent that had nothing to do with supernatural abilities and everything to do with a woman who had not…"
5"The metal slats were twisting, elongating, stretching away into a void that didn't lead to Camden."
34.09% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"he yelled, his chest heaving"
1"she announced, though the word felt small here"
25.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Quinn shouted (shout)"
1"he yelled (yell)"
2"she announced (announce)"
3"he whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.219
leniency0.438
rawRatio0.571
effectiveRatio0.25
77.6695%