Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXZP19HHH0PK0J8ZK47CA8

Run Details

Duration:
10.6s
Cost:
$0.001233
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Literary Fiction genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The clatter of ice against glass was the first thing Aurora registered, a percussive rhythm behind the low hum of conversation. She’d been staring into the amber depths of her whisky, the scent of stale beer and something vaguely citrusy clinging to the air of The Raven’s Nest. It was a scent she’d come to associate with late nights, with the subtle scent of Silas’s pipe tobacco a comforting anchor in the otherwise unpredictable currents of her life. The familiar weight of her own crescent scar on her left wrist, a phantom itch, settled her as she took another sip. "Rory? Is that really you?" The voice, rougher, deeper than she remembered, cut through the pub’s ambient noise. Aurora’s head snapped up, her bright blue eyes scanning the dimly lit space. And then she saw him. Standing by the bar, a half-empty pint of stout in his hand, was Liam O'Connell. Older, yes, a shade more weathered around the edges, but undeniably Liam. The same unruly mop of dark hair, though now flecked with silver at the temples. The same easy grin, though it seemed to have lost some of its youthful exuberance, replaced by a kind of knowing weariness. She hadn’t seen him since that tearful goodbye at the train station years ago, when she’d fled Cardiff and the wreckage of her early twenties for the anonymity of London. He’d wanted to come, of course, but life, as it often did, had other plans. And so had she. "Liam!" The name felt foreign on her tongue, a relic from a past she’d meticulously catalogued and then, mostly, burned. She forced a smile, hoping it didn’t look as strained as it felt. "Bloody hell. What are you doing here?" He chuckled, the sound a low rumble. "What am I doing here? Same as you, I suppose. Drowning my sorrows, or celebrating them. Depending on the day." He gestured with his pint towards the stool beside her. "Mind if I join you for a bit?" Aurora nodded, a strange mix of nostalgia and apprehension churning in her gut. "Please. It's… it's good to see you." She found herself studying him, searching for the boy she’d known, the one who’d dreamt of opening a bookshop and writing terrible poetry. This man, though familiar, was a stranger. His eyes, once that clear, unburdened green of a summer meadow, now held a shadow, a flicker of something she couldn't quite place. Something she’d seen too often in the faces of those who lived too close to the edge. He slid onto the stool, his movements fluid, practiced, as if he belonged there, as if he’d occupied this very spot a thousand times before. "And you, Rory. You look… well. London agrees with you, then?" "London’s London," she said, her voice deliberately neutral. "It chews you up and spits you out if you’re not careful." She took another deliberate sip of her whisky, the burn a welcome distraction. "What brings you to this neck of the woods, anyway?" Liam shrugged, swirling the dark liquid in his glass. "Business. Passing through. You know how it is.” He paused, his gaze flicking to the dark wood panelling behind the bar, then back to her. "Still working for that Chinese place?" Aurora’s jaw tightened almost imperceptibly. Yu-Fei’s Golden Empress. Her not-so-glamorous daytime disguise. "Delivery. Part-time. Keeps me afloat." She steered clear of the details. The cramped flat above Silas’s bar, the odd jobs for the man himself, the tightrope walk of her current existence. "And you? Still chasing literary greatness?" Liam’s laugh was short, devoid of its former warmth. "Not exactly. Life takes its own turns, doesn't it? I’m in… acquisitions now. Security. For a firm." "Security?" Aurora’s brow furrowed. Liam, the sensitive poet, the aspiring bookseller, in security? It felt like a punchline to a joke she didn’t understand. "Yeah. Different kind of chasing, I suppose." He leaned forward, his voice dropping, that old spark she remembered momentarily flashing in his eyes. "You’ve changed, Rory. You’ve always been sharp, but this… there’s a certain edge about you now. Like you’ve seen things." She met his gaze, her own unblinking. "London does that. You learn to keep your wits about you." She didn't elaborate. She couldn’t. The ‘things’ she’d seen, the risks she’d taken, those were secrets carved into her bones, whispers in the dark corners of her mind. The kind of secrets that built walls, not bridges. A silence fell between them, thick with unspoken years and the ghosts of shared memories. The clatter of glasses and the murmur of voices seemed to recede, leaving them suspended in their own private eddy of time. She remembered sneaking out to watch the stars from his attic window, the scent of old paper and dust a constant companion. He’d read her his clumsy verses, his voice a shy melody in the quiet night. She’d laughed, of course, but she’d always seen the raw talent beneath the awkwardness. "You know," Liam began, his voice softer now, a thread of that old melancholy woven through it, "I never did open that bookshop." Aurora felt a pang, sharp and unexpected. "Oh. I'm sorry, Liam. I thought that was your dream." He gave a wry smile. "Dreams change. Or they get… repossessed. I got married. Kids. Mortgages. The usual." He looked down at his hands, tracing the condensation ring his glass had left on the polished wood. "She – my wife – always said I never grew up. Said I was still chasing after ghosts." "And were you?" Aurora asked, the question falling out before she could stop it. Liam’s eyes met hers again, and this time, the shadow was undeniable. A deep, settled sadness. "Maybe. Maybe I just stopped looking for the right kind of ghosts." He took a long drink. "You always were the one with the plans, Rory. The one who knew where she was going. Even when you were running from Cardiff, I knew you weren't just running from Evan. You were running *to* something." She didn't answer, focusing instead on the intricate patterns of the dark wood grain beneath her fingertips. He was right, of course. She was running towards something she couldn’t yet name, a place of safety, of control, a life where she wasn't a victim. And in doing so, she'd left behind a part of herself, a part that still ached for the simple poetry and the starlit dreams. “What kind of firm do you work for, anyway?” Aurora prompted, a subtle shift in her tone. She needed to steer this conversation away from the precipice of confession. Liam’s gaze sharpened, a more business-like glint replacing the melancholy. "Discreet. We handle… sensitive matters. Uncovering information. Ensuring certain objectives are met." He paused, a slow smile spreading across his face, a smile that didn't quite reach his eyes. "You know, Rory, with your knack for thinking outside the box, and my new… connections… we could probably do some real damage. Together." Aurora felt a cold dread seep into her bones. This wasn’t the Liam she remembered. This was someone else, someone who’d danced with the shadows for too long and had become them. His proposal, delivered with such casual confidence, hung in the air between them, a heavy, suffocating shroud. Her hand instinctively went to her left wrist, tracing the faint, crescent moon of her scar. It was a reminder of her own past darkness, a past she’d fought tooth and nail to escape. And here, in the dim, smoky confines of The Raven’s Nest, it seemed that darkness had found her again, wearing a familiar face. "I don't think so, Liam," she said, her voice quiet but firm, the sound of ice clinking against glass suddenly deafening. Her eyes met his, and the warmth that had once existed between them was replaced by a chasm. His smile faltered, then vanished, replaced by a hard, unreadable expression. "A shame," he said, the words clipped. He pushed himself up from the stool, his movements no longer fluid but sharp, decisive. "Still, London’s a big place. Our paths might cross again." He turned and walked towards the bar, his back a wall she couldn't breach. Aurora watched him go, a fresh wave of regret washing over her. He hadn't just changed; he'd been forged, reshaped by the very darkness she was so desperately trying to outrun. And as he disappeared into the gloom, she knew, with a chilling certainty, that their paths hadn't just crossed, they had collided.
created_at"2026-02-19T12:28:50.096Z" 2/19/2026, 12:28:50 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.594
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.43% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1423
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count2
2
adverb"deliberately"
count1
3
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"very"
2"deliberately"
3"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
12.16% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1423
totalAiIsms25
found
0
word"depths"
count1
1
word"comforting"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count3
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"scanning"
count1
5
word"apprehension"
count1
6
word"churning"
count1
7
word"flicker"
count1
8
word"warmth"
count2
9
word"furrowed"
count1
10
word"silence"
count1
11
word"unspoken"
count1
12
word"pang"
count1
13
word"tracing"
count2
14
word"intricate"
count1
15
word"glint"
count1
16
word"ensuring"
count1
17
word"reminder"
count1
18
word"unreadable"
count1
19
word"gloom"
count1
20
word"chilling"
count1
highlights
0"depths"
1"comforting"
2"familiar"
3"weight"
4"scanning"
5"apprehension"
6"churning"
7"flicker"
8"warmth"
9"furrowed"
10"silence"
11"unspoken"
12"pang"
13"tracing"
14"intricate"
15"glint"
16"ensuring"
17"reminder"
18"unreadable"
19"gloom"
20"chilling"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences80
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences80
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences93
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1420
ratio0.001
matches
0"to"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions29
wordCount1072
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.93
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora10
Raven2
Nest2
Silas2
Liam9
Cardiff1
London1
Golden1
Empress1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Raven"
2"Silas"
3"Liam"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
36.36% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences66
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"quite place"
1"felt like a punchline to a joke she did"
2"quite reach his eyes"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.704
wordCount1420
matches
0"no longer fluid but"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences93
matches
0"seemed that darkness"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs27
mean52.59
std28.87
cv0.549
sampleLengths
0100
15
295
349
440
545
690
736
843
940
1049
1126
1224
1343
1455
1588
1623
1717
1854
1914
2070
2168
2229
2362
24106
2539
26110
96.49% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences80
matches
0"was replaced"
1"been forged"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs164
matches
0"was running"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences93
ratio0.011
matches
0"He hadn't just changed; he'd been forged, reshaped by the very darkness she was so desperately trying to outrun."
92.60% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount681
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.048458149779735685
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.016152716593245228
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences93
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences93
mean15.27
std7.85
cv0.514
sampleLengths
021
127
230
322
45
513
613
75
815
912
1015
1122
1230
1315
144
1520
1613
177
187
1930
208
2113
2230
237
2423
2517
2625
2711
288
2925
3010
319
3225
336
345
353
364
3711
3820
396
409
4117
424
439
4411
4523
4620
477
4814
492
55.91% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.3548387096774194
totalSentences93
uniqueOpeners33
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences78
matches(empty)
ratio0
14.87% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount40
totalSentences78
matches
0"She’d been staring into the"
1"It was a scent she’d"
2"She hadn’t seen him since"
3"He’d wanted to come, of"
4"She forced a smile, hoping"
5"He chuckled, the sound a"
6"He gestured with his pint"
7"She found herself studying him,"
8"His eyes, once that clear,"
9"He slid onto the stool,"
10"she said, her voice deliberately"
11"She took another deliberate sip"
12"He paused, his gaze flicking"
13"Her not-so-glamorous daytime disguise."
14"She steered clear of the"
15"It felt like a punchline"
16"He leaned forward, his voice"
17"She met his gaze, her"
18"She didn't elaborate"
19"She remembered sneaking out to"
ratio0.513
4.87% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount71
totalSentences78
matches
0"The clatter of ice against"
1"She’d been staring into the"
2"It was a scent she’d"
3"The familiar weight of her"
4"The voice, rougher, deeper than"
5"Aurora’s head snapped up, her"
6"The same unruly mop of"
7"The same easy grin, though"
8"She hadn’t seen him since"
9"He’d wanted to come, of"
10"The name felt foreign on"
11"She forced a smile, hoping"
12"He chuckled, the sound a"
13"He gestured with his pint"
14"Aurora nodded, a strange mix"
15"She found herself studying him,"
16"This man, though familiar, was"
17"His eyes, once that clear,"
18"Something she’d seen too often"
19"He slid onto the stool,"
ratio0.91
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences78
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"she said, her voice deliberately neutral"
1"She took, the burn a welcome distraction"
2"Aurora asked, the question falling out before she could stop it"
3"he said, the words clipped"
4"He turned, his back a wall she couldn't breach"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.125
leniency0.25
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
76.5233%