Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTY05BY3N4XZ6MD8Q5XK7T2

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Duration:
24.4s
Cost:
$0.002624
Provider:
SiliconFlow

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain came down in sheets, turning the streets of Camden into a river of reflected neon. Detective Harlow Quinn ran, her boots splashing through puddles that reached her ankles, her breath coming in ragged bursts that burned her lungs. Eighteen years on the force had taught her to pace herself, but tonight patience had abandoned her. Three blocks ahead, the suspect vaulted over a rusted gate and disappeared into the mouth of an alley. Quinn pushed harder, her hand grazing the holster at her hip. She wouldn't need it. Not yet. She needed answers more than she needed a conviction, and the man running from her held secrets she had spent three years trying to uncover. The alley stank of wet concrete and rotting food. Quinn's flashlight cut through the darkness, catching the suspect's fleeing form as he knocked over a stack of crates. Wooden containers exploded across the cobblestones, and she stumbled, catching herself against a brick wall. The suspect gained ground, his footsteps echoing off the narrow walls. "Stop! Metropolitan Police!" Her voice rang out, bouncing between buildings. The man didn't slow. He reached the end of the alley and veered left toward a set of iron steps descending into darkness. A maintenance entrance to the old Camden Town station. Quinn had walked past it a hundred times during her investigation, had wondered what lay beneath the rusted gate and the faded signage. Her source—the former paramedic who called himself Tomás Herrera—had warned her about places like this. Underground. Hidden. Where the rules of the surface world didn't apply. The suspect hammered down the steps two at a time. Quinn followed, her hand finally closing around her revolver. The air changed as she descended, growing colder, thick with the smell of damp earth and something else—something chemical and sweet, like burnt sugar. At the bottom of the steps, the world transformed. The abandoned station platform had been transformed into something from a fever dream. String lights hung from the vaulted ceiling, casting everything in shades of amber and violet. Stalls lined the walls, their canopies embroidered with symbols Quinn didn't recognize. Vendors sat behind tables covered in jars of luminescent liquid, bundles of dried herbs, and objects that seemed to shift when she looked at them directly. The air buzzed with whispered conversations in languages she couldn't identify. The Veil Market. Quinn had heard the name mentioned in intercepted communications, in the testimonies of witnesses who later recanted, in the death reports that never quite added up. She had dismissed it as urban legend, a幽灵 story that criminals told each other to explain away their failures. But here it was, spread out before her like a wound in the fabric of the city. The suspect disappeared into the crowd. Quinn moved forward, her eyes scanning the sea of faces. The shoppers and vendors watched her pass with expressions that ranged from curiosity to hostility. A woman with silver hair and eyes like polished onyx stepped into her path, blocking her way. "No weapons here, detective." The woman's accent was impossible to place. "Those are the terms." Quinn's grip tightened on her revolver. "I'm not here to shop." "Then you're a fool." The woman smiled, revealing teeth that were slightly too sharp. "This place is not for your kind. Turn back now, before you find things you cannot unsee." "Where did he go? The man who came through here—" "Many men come through here. They come and go. That is the nature of the market." The woman gestured at the stalls around them. "Unless you have business, I must ask you to leave. Our patrons value their privacy." Quinn's jaw tightened. Three years. Three years since DS Morris had died in this city, his body found in an alley with no explanation, no witnesses, no justice. Three years of whispers and dead ends and colleagues who looked at her differently because she couldn't let it go. Because she knew something had happened to him that didn't fit the neat boxes the department wanted to create. Now she stood in the place where those boxes didn't exist. The place where the impossible became commerce. "I have a bone token," Quinn said. The words came from somewhere unexpected—perhaps from a conversation with Herrera, weeks ago, when he'd patched up a wound she'd earned investigating his so-called clients. He'd pressed something into her palm then, small and smooth and faintly warm. *In case you ever need to go where you're not invited*, he'd said. *It's not a pass to everything. But it's a start.* She'd carried it ever since, tucked in her pocket next to her badge. A talisman against a world she hadn't believed in until now. The silver-haired woman's eyes flickered to the small bone token Quinn held between two fingers. Something changed in her expression—recognition, perhaps, or calculation. "Where did you get this?" "Does it matter?" "It might." The woman stepped aside. "But you are on borrowed time, detective. Whatever you think you're looking for, this place will show you something else. Something you cannot walk away from unchanged." Quinn moved past her, deeper into the market. Stalls selling bottled shadows and preserved hearts. A table of books with covers made of skin. A man selling memories in glass vials, each one labeled with a date and a price. She saw things that made no sense, that fought against her understanding of reality, that made her grip her revolver until her knuckles ached. And then, at the far end of the platform, she saw the suspect. He was speaking to another figure, one whose face remained in shadow. A transaction of some kind. Handing over something small and wrapped in cloth. He was getting away. Quinn moved toward them, her heart pounding in her ears. The two figures turned. The shadowed one seemed to dissolve into the darkness between the stalls, leaving only the suspect frozen in place, staring at her with an expression she recognized. Fear. The same fear she had seen in DS Morris's eyes, three years ago, in the last photograph taken of him alive. "You shouldn't be here," the suspect said. His voice cracked. "None of this is for people like you." "Where is he?" Quinn demanded, closing the distance between them. "Where's the man you're working for? The one who runs this network?" The suspect laughed, a brittle sound that echoed off the vaulted ceiling. "You don't understand anything. You think this is about crime. About drugs or money or whatever story you tell yourself. But this is old, detective. Older than your city. Older than your laws." "Tell me about Morris." The name hung in the air. The suspect's face went pale. "He asked too many questions," the suspect said. "Just like you. And now you're standing in the place where questions don't have answers. Where the only thing that matters is what you're willing to sacrifice." Quinn raised her revolver, pointing it at the center of the suspect's chest. "You're coming with me. Back to the surface. You're going to tell me everything." "You think you have a choice?" The suspect gestured around them, at the market, at the impossible things she had seen. "You think you can walk out of here with what you know and go back to your normal life? You can't. No one can. That's not how this works." "Watch me." But even as she said it, Quinn felt the weight of the moment pressing down on her. The market stretched out around her in all its terrible, impossible glory. The stairs that led back to the surface felt very far away. And somewhere in the shadows, the figure the suspect had been meeting with was watching, waiting, perhaps preparing to run again. She had followed the suspect this far. She had found the place that wasn't supposed to exist, seen the things that weren't supposed to be real. The next step would take her deeper into territory she didn't understand, populated by people who played by rules she had never learned. Or she could turn back. File her report. Try to make sense of what she had seen in the language the department would accept. But DS Morris had tried that. And DS Morris was dead. The suspect waited, watching her with those frightened eyes. The market hummed around them, alive with its own terrible momentum. Quinn made her decision.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"The woman stepped aside [aside]"
dialogueSentences26
tagDensity0.269
leniency0.538
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.077
92.91% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1411
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
71.65% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1411
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"footsteps"
count1
1
word"echoing"
count1
2
word"scanning"
count1
3
word"flickered"
count1
4
word"pounding"
count1
5
word"echoed"
count1
6
word"weight"
count1
7
word"sense of"
count1
highlights
0"footsteps"
1"echoing"
2"scanning"
3"flickered"
4"pounding"
5"echoed"
6"weight"
7"sense of"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"the weight of the moment"
1"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences99
matches(empty)
85.14% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences99
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"happened to"
2"try to"
97.45% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences115
gibberishSentences1
adjustedGibberishSentences1
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0.009
matches
0"She had dismissed it as urban legend, a幽灵 story that criminals told each other to explain away their failures."
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords21
totalWords1404
ratio0.015
matches
0"In case you ever need to go where you're not invited"
1"It's not a pass to everything. But it's a start."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
70.84% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions35
wordCount1137
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.58
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Camden2
Harlow1
Quinn18
Town1
Tomás1
Herrera2
Veil1
Market1
Morris4
Three4
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Tomás"
3"Herrera"
4"Morris"
places
0"Camden"
1"Town"
globalScore0.708
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences76
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1404
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences115
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs43
mean32.65
std22.27
cv0.682
sampleLengths
057
160
254
314
477
543
69
777
83
962
1048
1115
1211
1331
1410
1539
1667
1718
1868
1924
2023
215
223
2333
2464
2538
264
2741
2822
2918
3022
3145
324
3311
3435
3527
3650
372
3862
3949
4024
4111
4224
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences99
matches
0"been transformed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs208
matches
0"was speaking"
1"was watching"
43.48% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences115
ratio0.035
matches
0"Her source—the former paramedic who called himself Tomás Herrera—had warned her about places like this."
1"The air changed as she descended, growing colder, thick with the smell of damp earth and something else—something chemical and sweet, like burnt sugar."
2"The words came from somewhere unexpected—perhaps from a conversation with Herrera, weeks ago, when he'd patched up a wound she'd earned investigating his so-called clients."
3"Something changed in her expression—recognition, perhaps, or calculation."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1144
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.025349650349650348
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.006118881118881119
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences115
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences115
mean12.21
std7.39
cv0.605
sampleLengths
017
123
217
318
411
54
62
725
89
919
1015
1111
1210
134
1419
159
1623
1715
181
191
209
2110
229
2324
249
2513
2615
2712
2826
2911
303
3126
3219
3317
346
3510
3615
3717
3811
394
406
415
4214
4317
4410
4524
4615
473
482
4923
54.78% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.391304347826087
totalSentences115
uniqueOpeners45
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences93
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences93
matches
0"She wouldn't need it."
1"She needed answers more than"
2"Her voice rang out, bouncing"
3"He reached the end of"
4"Her source—the former paramedic who"
5"She had dismissed it as"
6"He'd pressed something into her"
7"*It's not a pass to"
8"She'd carried it ever since,"
9"She saw things that made"
10"He was speaking to another"
11"He was getting away."
12"His voice cracked."
13"She had followed the suspect"
14"She had found the place"
ratio0.161
72.90% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount72
totalSentences93
matches
0"The rain came down in"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn ran, her"
2"Quinn pushed harder, her hand"
3"She wouldn't need it."
4"She needed answers more than"
5"The alley stank of wet"
6"Quinn's flashlight cut through the"
7"The suspect gained ground, his"
8"Her voice rang out, bouncing"
9"The man didn't slow."
10"He reached the end of"
11"A maintenance entrance to the"
12"Quinn had walked past it"
13"Her source—the former paramedic who"
14"The suspect hammered down the"
15"Quinn followed, her hand finally"
16"The air changed as she"
17"The abandoned station platform had"
18"String lights hung from the"
19"Stalls lined the walls, their"
ratio0.774
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences93
matches
0"Because she knew something had"
1"Now she stood in the"
2"*In case you ever need"
ratio0.032
74.18% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences52
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn ran, her boots splashing through puddles that reached her ankles, her breath coming in ragged bursts that burned her lungs."
1"She had dismissed it as urban legend, a幽灵 story that criminals told each other to explain away their failures."
2"The shoppers and vendors watched her pass with expressions that ranged from curiosity to hostility."
3"She saw things that made no sense, that fought against her understanding of reality, that made her grip her revolver until her knuckles ached."
4"The next step would take her deeper into territory she didn't understand, populated by people who played by rules she had never learned."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Quinn demanded (demand)"
dialogueSentences26
tagDensity0.077
leniency0.154
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.077
87.6668%