| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 77.92% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 906 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "quickly" | | 1 | "utterly" | | 2 | "very" | | 3 | "completely" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 906 | | totalAiIsms | 27 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "oppressive" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "traced" | | 3 | "down her spine" | | 4 | "throb" | | 5 | "gloom" | | 6 | "racing" | | 7 | "whisper" | | 8 | "rhythmic" | | 9 | "profound" | | 10 | "flickered" | | 11 | "wavering" | | 12 | "loomed" | | 13 | "intricate" | | 14 | "familiar" | | 15 | "echoing" | | 16 | "fleeting" | | 17 | "stomach" | | 18 | "dancing" | | 19 | "chilling" | | 20 | "echoed" | | 21 | "warmth" | | 22 | "searing" | | 23 | "could feel" | | 24 | "beacon" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 76 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 11.28% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 7 | | narrationSentences | 76 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "began to" | | 2 | "seem to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 78 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 35 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 3 | | markdownWords | 3 | | totalWords | 903 | | ratio | 0.003 | | matches | | 0 | "incidents" | | 1 | "was" | | 2 | "hunted" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 1 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 16 | | wordCount | 873 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 0.69 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 6 | | Fae | 2 | | Grove | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Eva | 2 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Fae-touched | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Richmond" | | 3 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 61 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like woods, pressed in on all side" | | 1 | "trees that seemed to twist like tormented souls" | | 2 | "felt like wading through treacle" | | 3 | "patterns that seemed to writhe with a life of their own" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 6 | | per1kWords | 6.645 | | wordCount | 903 | | matches | | 0 | "Not the shadow, not the rustling, but what lay beneath the ancient oak" | | 1 | "not the rustling, but what lay beneath the ancient oak" | | 2 | "Not haphazard scratches, but deliberate, intricate patterns" | | 3 | "not of mirth, but of a chilling, ancient amusement" | | 4 | "Not one source, but dozens" | | 5 | "no longer a thread but" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | |
| 91.86% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 17 | | mean | 53.12 | | std | 25.05 | | cv | 0.472 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 89 | | 1 | 60 | | 2 | 67 | | 3 | 9 | | 4 | 75 | | 5 | 74 | | 6 | 80 | | 7 | 50 | | 8 | 55 | | 9 | 83 | | 10 | 65 | | 11 | 38 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 38 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 36 | | 16 | 62 |
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| 91.41% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "been told" | | 1 | "was hidden" | | 2 | "was linked" | | 3 | "being *hunted" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 151 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 78 | | ratio | 0.013 | | matches | | 0 | "The path, if it even *was* a path, had vanished moments after she’d stepped past what she assumed were the standing stones – massive, moss-covered oak trunks that had somehow felt…" |
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| 89.05% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 876 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "massive, moss-covered oak" |
| | adverbCount | 40 | | adverbRatio | 0.045662100456621 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.014840182648401826 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 78 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 78 | | mean | 11.58 | | std | 6.74 | | cv | 0.582 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 25 | | 3 | 35 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 1 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 1 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 20 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 1 | | 21 | 21 | | 22 | 29 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 17 | | 28 | 31 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 15 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 10 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 15 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 18 |
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| 56.41% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.38461538461538464 | | totalSentences | 78 | | uniqueOpeners | 30 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "Too late for what" | | 1 | "Too late for whom?" | | 2 | "Just the dense, impenetrable darkness" | | 3 | "well, near anything Fae-touched." | | 4 | "Then, from all around her," |
| | ratio | 0.071 | |
| 88.57% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 23 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "She’d been told the Fae" | | 1 | "Her boots crunched on something" | | 2 | "It was barely a tremor," | | 3 | "She’d come here for answers," | | 4 | "She swept the beam in" | | 5 | "It felt like wading through" | | 6 | "She took a tentative step" | | 7 | "She was in Richmond Park," | | 8 | "It wasn't the skittering of" | | 9 | "She held her breath, straining" | | 10 | "It didn't move like an" | | 11 | "It flowed, a fluid, inky" | | 12 | "It was a pathetic defence," | | 13 | "It made no sound now," | | 14 | "Her torch flickered, the beam" | | 15 | "She stumbled backwards, her heel" | | 16 | "She cried out, a strangled" | | 17 | "They were familiar, disturbingly so," | | 18 | "It was too soft to" | | 19 | "It was laughter, not of" |
| | ratio | 0.329 | |
| 74.29% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 54 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "The icy dampness clung to" | | 1 | "Each ragged breath plumed white" | | 2 | "The woods, or what felt" | | 3 | "She’d been told the Fae" | | 4 | "Her boots crunched on something" | | 5 | "A shiver, entirely unrelated to" | | 6 | "The Heartstone Pendant, nestled against" | | 7 | "It was barely a tremor," | | 8 | "She’d come here for answers," | | 9 | "Eva’s frantic late-night call had" | | 10 | "Eva’s voice had cracked." | | 11 | "A twig snapped, sharp and" | | 12 | "Rory spun, her heart leaping" | | 13 | "She swept the beam in" | | 14 | "The air grew heavier, thicker," | | 15 | "It felt like wading through" | | 16 | "She took a tentative step" | | 17 | "This was insane." | | 18 | "She was in Richmond Park," | | 19 | "The path, if it even" |
| | ratio | 0.771 | |
| 71.43% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, only the encroaching darkness" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 34.16% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 46 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Eva’s frantic late-night call had been vague, laced with an urgency that had bypassed Rory’s usual pragmatism." | | 1 | "Just the dense, impenetrable darkness that swallowed the light of her small torch almost as soon as it left the emitter." | | 2 | "She swept the beam in a frantic arc, the cone of light cutting through the gloom, illuminating nothing but gnarled, ancient trees that seemed to twist like torm…" | | 3 | "The path, if it even *was* a path, had vanished moments after she’d stepped past what she assumed were the standing stones – massive, moss-covered oak trunks th…" | | 4 | "Not haphazard scratches, but deliberate, intricate patterns that seemed to writhe with a life of their own." | | 5 | "They were familiar, disturbingly so, echoing the strange dreams she’d been having, the fleeting images that flashed behind her eyes when she was near…" | | 6 | "The light intensified, casting dancing shadows that made the surrounding trees seem to writhe and twist in agony." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "She’d, that it existed" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "She’d (would)" | | 1 | "the voice whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.8 | |