Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTY0D4N9XRTN9F64CCS8W7B

Run Details

Duration:
55.5s
Cost:
$0.051696
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain lashed against the blackened windowpane of The Raven’s Nest, turning the green neon signage outside into a sickly, distorted blur. Inside, the air hung heavy with the scent of furniture wax and staleness, a specific perfume of quiet desperation that Soho wore like a second skin. Aurora Carter traced the rim of her glass, the condensation cool against her fingertips. She sat on her usual stool, the leather cracked and molded to her shape over months of nightly vigils. Behind the bar, Silas moved with his rhythmic, asymmetrical gait, favoring his left leg as he returned a polished tumbler to the shelf. The clink of glass on wood was the only sound in the room, a metronome marking time in a place that usually felt exempt from it. The heavy oak door groaned open, admitting a gust of wet wind and the roar of a passing taxi. Silas didn't look up, but his hand drifted instinctively toward the counter, hovering near where he kept more than just bottle openers. Aurora swiveled. A man stood in the threshold, shaking off a dripping umbrella. He wore a charcoal wool coat that cost more than her rent, caught at the waist, tailored to within an inch of its life. He looked at the floorboards, then the peeling maps on the walls, and finally, his gaze landed on her. The recognition hit him like a physical blow. He stiffened, the umbrella dripping a puddle onto the worn floorboards. "Aurora?" The name sounded foreign, a artifact dredged up from a submerged city. She hadn't been Aurora in two years. Not really. She didn't stand. Instead, she took a slow sip of her drink, the cheap whiskey burning a familiar path down her throat. "Julian." He moved into the light, and the years fell into place. His face, once soft with the easy arrogance of youth, had sharpened. Dark circles bruised the skin beneath his eyes, and his hair, damp from the storm, was cut severely short. He looked like every other junior associate grinding themselves into dust for the promise of a corner office in a decade. He approached the bar cautiously, as if the floor might give way. He pulled out the stool next to her, inspecting the seat before settling his weight. "I didn't think I'd find you here." His voice was lower, clipped. The Cardiff lilt was gone, scrubbed away by elocution lessons and London courtrooms. "You weren't supposed to be looking." "I wasn't." Julian placed his hands on the counter. They were manicured, soft. "Client dinner around the corner. I saw the sign. Thought I’d dodge the last round of port." Silas loomed in front of him, a silent monolith in a crisp white shirt. He placed a coaster down with a precise snap. "Macallan. Eighteen, if you have it," Julian ordered, not meeting the bartender's hazel eyes. "We have whiskey," Silas rumbled. He poured a measure of the house blend, the amber liquid splashing aggressively into a glass. He slid it across the wood. It stopped exactly an inch from Julian’s cuff. Julian stared at the glass, then at Aurora. He took in the black hair falling straight to her shoulders, the denim jacket frayed at the cuffs, the utter lack of the pearls her mother used to insist she wear. "God, Rory. You look..." "Tired? Poor?" She swirled her ice. "Alive?" "Different." He picked up the drink, swallowed a grimace at the taste, and set it down. "Your father thinks you’re in Scotland." "Brendan thinks a lot of things. Most of them involve me being a disappointment, so I try not to interrupt his narrative." "He’s worried. We all were." Julian turned his body toward her, the wool of his coat brushing against her arm. She flinched, pulling away, her left hand knocking against the wood. The sleeve of her jacket rode up, exposing the crescent-shaped scar on her wrist. Julian’s eyes tracked the movement. He reached out, his fingers hovering over the mark without touching it. "I remember when you got that. Sliding down the bannister at the Ellis house. You were seven." "I was clumsy." "You were fearless," he corrected. "You used to talk about the law like it was a weapon you couldn't wait to pick up. Top of the class in Cardiff. Professors tripping over themselves to recommend you for pupilage." He gestured vaguely at the dim room, the walls plastered with black-and-white photos of people long dead. "And now you're... here." "I work for a restaurant." "You deliver noodles, Aurora." "I pay my bills. I have a flat upstairs." She drained her glass. "And I don't have to defend landlords evicting pensioners, so I sleep just fine." Julian winced, a flicker of genuine hurt cracking his polished veneer. He finally took a proper drink, the alcohol stripping away the initial layer of shock. "It’s not just the job," he murmured. "It’s everything. You just vanished. One day you were in lectures, the next the flat was empty. Evan was..." The air in the room temperature dropped ten degrees. Silas stopped wiping a glass. Aurora turned fully toward him. Her blue eyes, usually bright with a quick wit, went flat and cold. "Don't." "He came looking for you, you know." Julian’s fingers tightened around his glass. "For weeks. Banging on doors. Calling every friend we had in common. He made it sound like you’d had a breakdown." "Is that what you think?" "I don't know what to think. I see my brilliant friend, the one who could dismantle a contract better than a partner, hiding in a spy-novel bar in Soho, wearing clothes from a charity shop." Aurora laughed, a dry, sharp sound. "This jacket is vintage, thanks. And I didn't have a breakdown, Julian. I had a breakthrough. I realized that if I stayed in that house, in that city, with that man, I wasn't going to make it to twenty-five." Julian stared at her. The silence stretched, filled only by the hum of the refrigerator and the rain battering the street. He looked at her, really looked at her, past the aesthetic changes. He saw the tension in her shoulders, the way she scanned the room even now, the hard set of her jaw that hadn't been there when they were twenty-one. "He hurt you." It wasn't a question. "He broke three of my ribs a week before I left," she said, her voice devoid of inflection. "Eva drove the car. I didn't tell you because you liked him. You played squash on Thursdays. You drank pints with him after tutorials. You would have told me I was overreacting, or that he was under stress." Julian opened his mouth, then closed it. A flush crept up his neck, staining the collar of his shirt. He looked down at his expensive hands. "I wouldn't have..." He trailed off. The weight of the probability settled on his shoulders. He would have. He knew it. He would have tried to mediate. He would have suggested counseling. He would have been reasonable in the face of a monster, because that was what the law taught them to be. "I’m sorry," he whispered. "I know." She signaled Silas for another. "But sorry is a verdict, Julian. It doesn't undo the crime." He rubbed his face, the gesture making him look suddenly boyish and exhausted. The successful barrister melted away, leaving a tired young man in a room that smelled of old secrets. "I hate it," he confessed, the words tumbling out before he could check them. "The firm. The hours. I haven't seen the sun in three weeks. I draft clauses for mergers between companies that destroy ecosystems, and I tell myself it’s prestige." He looked at her, a desperate envy in his eyes. "You got out." "I ran away. There's a difference." "Is there?" "You have a career. I have a shift starting at eleven tomorrow morning." "You have your life," he countered. He reached into his coat pocket and pulled out a sleek leather wallet. He extracted a crisp business card, cream stock, embossed lettering. He slid it across the bar. Aurora looked at it. *Julian P. Davies, Associate.* "If you ever need... if you want to get back in. Or just coffee. Or legal counsel that isn't Evan." She picked up the card. The edges were sharp. It represented a world of mahogany desks, high ceilings, and the crushing weight of expectation she had shed like a winter coat. "I'm not coming back, Julian. Cardiff is a ghost story to me now." "You can't hide in Soho forever, Aurora." "Watch me." He finished his drink in one swallow. He stood up, buttoning the charcoal coat, re-assembling the armor of his station. He grabbed the umbrella, which had left a dark pool near his Italian leather shoes. "It was good to see you," he lied. "You too," she lied back. He hesitated, looking at her one last time, trying to reconcile the memory of the girl in the lecture hall with the woman pressing a cold glass to her temple. He wanted to save her. He wanted to swap places with her. He didn't know which feeling was stronger. "Take care of yourself, Rory," he said, tasting the new name. It felt rough on his tongue. "Goodbye, Julian." He turned and walked out, the bell above the door chiming a cheerful farewell that clashed with the gloom. The wind snatched the door from his grip, slamming it shut behind him. Aurora sat in silence. She stared at the business card for a long moment. Then, with a flick of her wrist, she spun it into the small puddle of condensation left by his drink. The cream paper darkened, soaking up the moisture, the ink blurring until the name was illegible. Silas moved from the shadows. He picked up Julian’s empty glass and wiped the counter down, sweeping the soggy card into his hand in one fluid motion. He dropped it into the bin below the bar without a word. "Friend of yours?" Silas asked, his voice gravel over velvet. Aurora looked at the empty stool. The leather was slowly rising back to its original shape, erasing the evidence that anyone had sat there at all. "I don't know," she said, turning back to her drink. "I don't think we’re from the same planet anymore." Silas poured himself a splash of water. "Planets collide. Usually leaves a mess." "Yeah." She rubbed the crescent scar on her wrist, the old skin white and tough against the surrounding flesh. "But the dust settles eventually."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags24
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"He gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
1"Julian’s fingers tightened around [around]"
2"she lied back [back]"
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.1
85.89% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1772
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"really"
count2
1
adverb"cautiously"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"cautiously"
2"suddenly"
3"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
57.67% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1772
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"traced"
count1
1
word"rhythmic"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"weight"
count3
4
word"lilt"
count1
5
word"loomed"
count1
6
word"flicker"
count1
7
word"silence"
count2
8
word"tension"
count1
9
word"scanned"
count1
10
word"gloom"
count1
11
word"velvet"
count1
highlights
0"traced"
1"rhythmic"
2"familiar"
3"weight"
4"lilt"
5"loomed"
6"flicker"
7"silence"
8"tension"
9"scanned"
10"gloom"
11"velvet"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences115
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences115
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences149
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen52
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords4
totalWords1766
ratio0.002
matches
0"Julian P. Davies, Associate."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions37
wordCount1245
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.96
worstName"Julian"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Julian"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Soho1
Carter1
Silas9
Aurora9
Cardiff1
London1
Julian12
Italian1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Carter"
3"Silas"
4"Aurora"
5"Julian"
places
0"Soho"
1"Cardiff"
2"London"
globalScore1
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences83
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like every other junior associate"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1766
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences149
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs72
mean24.53
std18.93
cv0.772
sampleLengths
047
182
219
322
475
51
621
722
81
963
1027
1125
126
1330
1423
1514
1635
1739
184
197
2022
2122
2245
2317
2417
253
2659
275
284
2927
3026
3126
3214
3318
341
3534
365
3735
3845
3962
407
4156
4226
4353
444
4518
4631
4755
486
492
99.16% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences115
matches
0"was gone"
1"were manicured"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs214
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences149
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1249
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount38
adverbRatio0.03042433947157726
lyAdverbCount19
lyAdverbRatio0.01521216973578863
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences149
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences149
mean11.85
std8.59
cv0.724
sampleLengths
021
126
214
319
423
526
619
722
82
911
1024
1119
128
1311
141
1512
167
172
183
1919
201
2111
2212
2319
2421
2512
2615
2712
2813
296
309
314
3217
3314
349
3514
365
3716
386
398
408
4131
424
436
441
4516
466
4722
4820
4911
32.55% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats26
diversityRatio0.2953020134228188
totalSentences149
uniqueOpeners44
63.49% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences105
matches
0"Instead, she took a slow"
1"Then, with a flick of"
ratio0.019
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount62
totalSentences105
matches
0"She sat on her usual"
1"He wore a charcoal wool"
2"He looked at the floorboards,"
3"He stiffened, the umbrella dripping"
4"She hadn't been Aurora in"
5"She didn't stand."
6"He moved into the light,"
7"His face, once soft with"
8"He looked like every other"
9"He approached the bar cautiously,"
10"He pulled out the stool"
11"His voice was lower, clipped"
12"They were manicured, soft."
13"He placed a coaster down"
14"He poured a measure of"
15"He slid it across the"
16"It stopped exactly an inch"
17"He took in the black"
18"She swirled her ice"
19"He picked up the drink,"
ratio0.59
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount100
totalSentences105
matches
0"Rain lashed against the blackened"
1"Aurora Carter traced the rim"
2"She sat on her usual"
3"The clink of glass on"
4"The heavy oak door groaned"
5"Silas didn't look up, but"
6"A man stood in the"
7"He wore a charcoal wool"
8"He looked at the floorboards,"
9"The recognition hit him like"
10"He stiffened, the umbrella dripping"
11"The name sounded foreign, a"
12"She hadn't been Aurora in"
13"She didn't stand."
14"He moved into the light,"
15"His face, once soft with"
16"He looked like every other"
17"He approached the bar cautiously,"
18"He pulled out the stool"
19"His voice was lower, clipped"
ratio0.952
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences105
matches(empty)
ratio0
86.83% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences51
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"He reached out, his fingers hovering over the mark without touching it."
1"He saw the tension in her shoulders, the way she scanned the room even now, the hard set of her jaw that hadn't been there when they were twenty-one."
2"The successful barrister melted away, leaving a tired young man in a room that smelled of old secrets."
3"He grabbed the umbrella, which had left a dark pool near his Italian leather shoes."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags24
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"Julian ordered, not meeting the bartender's hazel eyes"
1"Julian turned, the wool of his coat brushing against her arm"
2"she said, her voice devoid of inflection"
3"he confessed, the words tumbling out before he could check them"
4"Silas asked, his voice gravel over velvet"
5"She rubbed, the old skin white and tough against the surrounding flesh"
33.33% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount7
fancyTags
0"Julian ordered (order)"
1"he corrected (correct)"
2"he murmured (murmur)"
3"he whispered (whisper)"
4"he confessed (confess)"
5"he lied (lie)"
6"she lied back (lie)"
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.183
leniency0.367
rawRatio0.636
effectiveRatio0.233
77.5202%