Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
143
glossingSentenceCount
9
matches
0
"quite align"
1
"as if listing options would force the truth out of the room"
2
"something between—an observer who had watched a"
3
"face that seemed to belong to a person Quinn had read about in the Market’s whispering lore—someone who had eluded the direct gaze of the police for years, someone who had found a way to live in the shadow of the law and profit"
4
"felt like a message left for someone wh"
5
"felt like cages"
6
"as if reading from a page that lay open in the night"
7
"felt like twin mouths of a secret she h"
8
"as if answering a question no one had dared to pose aloud, a figure rose from the deeper shadow beyond the crates, stepping into the pale blue glow with a slow, inexorable resolve"
"Boots battered the metal stairs; Quinn shoulder‑charged the Veil Market’s back door and slid into the shadowed concourse."
1
"The body wore a utilitarian coat, cuff links dull as coins, and a leather brassard bearing a police service number—proof he hadn't wandered in by accident."
2
"The ring around the ash was a boundary, not a warning; it was a breadcrumb trail leading toward something other than a straightforward homicide."
3
"A lamp swung and threw a gold circle of light across a row of stalls that had seen better days—and better buyers."
4
"“Quinn. You’ve got the usual suspects, but something’s off. The ash ring is pristine. No smudges, no smear of ash on the lip of the circle,” he said, eyes scanning the room with that trained habit of his—looking for what should be there and isn’t."
5
"Her eyes, brown and sharp, considered the crowd before them—the quiet operators, the jittery glass‑eyed buyers, the ones who moved with that careful indifference that marked people who knew how to pretend they belonged anywhere."
6
"Her left wrist wore a worn leather watch—an old piece that had seen too many stakeouts and too many hours of waiting."
7
"A faint sap of something resinous clung to the air; a scent like burnt almonds and old books teased at the back of her throat."
8
"She noted the small, deliberate arrangement of objects on a nearby stall—a stack of old books tied with a string, a dagger with a bone handle laid flat across one corner of the stack, a single coin of brass resting on the leather of a satchel."
9
"None of it screamed “kidnapping” or “burglary.” It whispered of someone testing a theory, showing a scene that said: here is what you think; look closer at what I’m not telling you."
10
"It wasn’t currency; it was a fragment of a sigil, roughly carved, the same shape repeated along a narrow line of a fringe along the crate’s base."
11
"The item did not belong to the vive or to the scene; it belonged to someone else’s show."
12
"The Veil Market’s hidden nature was not just a curiosity; it was a vulnerability."
13
"If she could map the path from the corridor into something else—an alternate route, a hidden door, a portal—she might see a way to catch whoever had betrayed him."
14
"Her gaze flicked toward a peculiar device resting on a table behind a stall—a Veil Compass, small brass, with a face etched with protective sigils."
15
"The needle wasn’t pointing toward a vessel or a weapon; it pointed toward the air, toward something nearly invisible—the nearest supernatural rift or portal, perhaps."
16
"The compass had a verdigris patina, as if decades of exposure to damp air, old secrets, and something else—something living—had worn it down and kept it alive."
17
"The device wasn’t just a curiosity left by a hoarder; it was a tool, perhaps the only one in that room that hinted at the exact location of something the market wanted to hide."
18
"The recorder in her head kept the events in order: the token; the circle; the sigil; the hidden corridor; the compass pointing somewhere beyond the obvious."
19
"Her fingertips brushed along the crates and crates of curiosities—the kind the market sold to those who believed that knowledge itself could be purchased, sometimes with something more expensive than money."
20
"A soft rustle—no, more like a careful slide of fabric."
21
"Someone—or something—moved beyond the door."
22
"Beyond lay a narrow flight of stairs, leading down into a chamber the market used for more illicit activities—the restricted zones where a few insiders met to exchange information in the language of the occult and the practical, cruel economy of the city."
23
"The figure’s head turned toward them; two eyes looked out from the shadow, and the eyes held something neither man nor woman but something between—an observer who had watched a long time and learned to be patient."
24
"The cloaked figure stepped closer, the blue glow bright enough to reveal a face that wasn’t entirely unfamiliar, a face that seemed to belong to a person Quinn had read about in the Market’s whispering lore—someone who had eluded the direct gaze of the police for years, someone who had found a way to live in the shadow of the law and profit."
25
"“We’ll never know until we stop looking through the wrong end of the telescope.” Her voice stayed even, but there was a fire underneath that calm—a fire she kept shackled to reason, to evidence, to the discipline of the job."
26
"It felt like a message left for someone who would understand—someone who knew there were authorities who could be misled by appearances."
27
"Not a weapon for a fight, but a symbol—an instrument of a long game in which the Market and its participants traded more than goods; they traded power, information, and the promise of escape from constraints that felt like cages."
28
"The cloaked figure lifted a hand, and from the sleeve the glow intensified—no weapon, but something sharper: a calm and patient invitation to step closer, to listen."
29
"“Chasing the obvious will only lead you into a trap. The evidence doesn’t add up because you’re not seeing the real network. The Veil Market isn’t just a market; it’s a map of what London chooses to forget.”"
30
"“Then start listening to what the public won’t tell you directly,” the cloaked figure replied, drawing back just enough to let a shadow slide across the floor—a controlled, deliberate movement, as if someone had practiced this sacrament of entry and exit many times before."
31
"The two artefacts—one a key to a doorway; the other a key to a rift—felt like twin mouths of a secret she had only begun to taste."
32
"The market’s hum rose again, but it carried a different timbre now—one that hinted that the place was listening, not just watching."
33
"The bone token lay cool in the pocket, a reminder that tonight the evidence did not merely point to one answer; it suggested the existence of a map—one drawn in ash, one etched in bone, and one that only the patient could read."
34
"The shell of this crime had begun to crack, and the secrets behind it—secrets that stretched into memory and a city’s oldest bargains—waited, patient, hungry, for the moment when someone finally asked the right question."
35
"The fan of fear rose, and with it, the threshold—into the unknown—and something happened that forced the city to listen, right now."
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
107
technicalSentenceCount
23
matches
0
"The air trembled with a quiet thrum, the market’s pulse thrumming beneath the concrete as if it hid a second heartbeat."
1
"It looked deliberate, precise, the edges clean as if drawn with a fine reed."
2
"A lamp swung and threw a gold circle of light across a row of stalls that had seen better days—and better buyers."
3
"DS Theo Simmonds, tall and lean, with a mop of dark hair and a voice that could cut through a room when he wanted attention, stepped closer to the corpse and co…"
4
"Her eyes, brown and sharp, considered the crowd before them—the quiet operators, the jittery glass‑eyed buyers, the ones who moved with that careful indifferenc…"
5
"Her salt‑and‑pepper hair lay close to her scalp, a practical crown that signalled discipline more than fashion."
6
"Her left wrist wore a worn leather watch—an old piece that had seen too many stakeouts and too many hours of waiting."
7
"The compass had a verdigris patina, as if decades of exposure to damp air, old secrets, and something else—something living—had worn it down and kept it alive."
8
"She stepped closer, her breath a quiet, measured exhale that fogged the edge of another world for a heartbeat."
9
"Quinn made a careful choice to follow the left-hand wall, keeping a few paces behind the stalls as if she were guiding a dance."
10
"The compass’s needle gave a quick, abrupt tilt toward the wall, then settled again as if the door was not yet ready to admit visitors."
11
"The compass hummed low in her grip, and the signal grew louder, more insistent, as if the device itself wanted her to step through."
12
"The room was lit by a pale blue glow that didn’t come from any lamp Quinn recognised, and the air there tasted metallic and cold, with a scent that suggested ol…"
13
"The figure’s head turned toward them; two eyes looked out from the shadow, and the eyes held something neither man nor woman but something between—an observer w…"
14
"The cloaked figure stepped closer, the blue glow bright enough to reveal a face that wasn’t entirely unfamiliar, a face that seemed to belong to a person Quinn …"
15
"Quinn inspected the circle again, her eyes following the ash’s precise line that formed a partial ellipse around the sigil at centre."
16
"The sigil’s shape was unfamiliar to her, yet she could feel its electric tension in the air, an energy that didn’t belong to any normal crime."
17
"Not a weapon for a fight, but a symbol—an instrument of a long game in which the Market and its participants traded more than goods; they traded power, informat…"
18
"The room’s blue glow faded to a pale, haunting glow that came from nowhere and everywhere at once, a sign that the market’s other side might be waking, might be…"
19
"The two detectives retreated to the platform, the hidden door closing softly behind them with a sigh that sounded almost like a breath exhaled from the city its…"
20
"Then a footstep sounded behind them, careful and precise, as if someone had learned how to walk in a place where footsteps could be listened to and remembered."
21
"The shell of this crime had begun to crack, and the secrets behind it—secrets that stretched into memory and a city’s oldest bargains—waited, patient, hungry, f…"
22
"Then, as if answering a question no one had dared to pose aloud, a figure rose from the deeper shadow beyond the crates, stepping into the pale blue glow with a…"