Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTY0YX02BEFKVYYP2GPV9AG

Run Details

Duration:
32.1s
Cost:
$0.005419
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The ancient oaks stood like sentinels around the clearing, their bark blackened by a night that refused to settle. Aurora Carter stepped past the boundary stones, her boots sinking into moss that felt too soft, too yielding, as if the ground breathed beneath her soles. The air inside The Fae Grove tasted of copper and wet earth, thick enough to coat the back of her throat. She pulled her jacket tighter, though the chill had nothing to do with the temperature. She came for the silence. Or so she told herself. The city noise of London usually followed her into her dreams, a constant hum of traffic and distant sirens that kept sleep at bay. Eva had spoken of this place in hushed tones, a pocket of stillness hidden within Richmond Park where time forgot to tick. Rory needed that forgetfulness. She needed an hour where Evan's voice didn't echo in her skull, where the memory of his hands didn't ghost across her skin. The wildflowers bloomed around her ankles, vibrant splashes of violet and gold that defied the season. They should have wilted in the frost that glazed the world outside the grove. Instead, they trembled, though no wind touched them. Rory stopped. Her bright blue eyes scanned the tree line. The shadows between the trunks seemed deeper than natural darkness allowed, pooling like spilled ink that refused to dry. She reached for the Heartstone pendant resting against her collarbone. The silver chain felt cold, but the crimson gemstone pulsed with a faint, rhythmic warmth. It beat against her sternum, a second heart syncing with her own panic. Something crunched behind her. She spun around, fists clenched at her sides. The clearing remained empty. The standing stones loomed, silent and unmoving. Yet the sound lingered in her ears, the distinct snap of a twig under a heavy boot. Not an animal. Animals moved with fluid grace; this sounded deliberate, clumsy, human. "Who's there?" Her voice cracked, swallowed instantly by the dense air. No echo returned. The silence rushed back in, heavier than before, pressing against her eardrums until they popped. She forced her feet to move toward the center of the grove. The plan was simple: sit on the central stone, breathe, wait for the calm to wash over her. Then leave. But the path she had taken moments ago seemed longer now. The distance between the boundary oaks and the center stretched, the perspective warping as if viewed through distorted glass. A whisper drifted from her left. It wasn't words. It was the sound of fabric rustling, like a dress dragging through dry leaves. Rory froze. She knew every sound the city made, every creak of her flat above Silas' bar, every groan of the delivery scooter. This sound belonged nowhere. It came from the direction of the solid oak trunk, a place where nothing could pass without breaking branches. She took a step back. Her heel caught on a root that hadn't been there a second ago. She stumbled, catching herself on a low-hanging branch. The bark felt warm, pulsing with the same rhythm as the pendant. She yanked her hand away, wiping her palm on her jeans. A smear of dark sap clung to her skin, smelling of old blood. The flowers stopped trembling. Absolute stillness claimed the grove. Even the air ceased to circulate. Rory's breath hitched in her chest, each inhale a laborious struggle against the stagnant atmosphere. She stared at the wildflowers. They were not just still; they were fixed. Petals halted mid-sway, stems rigid as iron. The world had paused, but she remained in motion. A shadow detached itself from the tree line. It didn't walk. It flowed, a distortion in the darkness that mimicked the shape of a person but lacked any defining features. No face, no limbs, just a suggestion of height and width that shifted when she blinked. Rory backed away, her heel clicking against the central stone. The thing glided closer, ignoring the uneven ground, hovering inches above the moss. The Heartstone burned hot against her skin. The crimson glow intensified, casting jagged red light across the clearing. In that bloody illumination, the shadow stopped. It tilted, as if studying her. Rory's mind raced. She thought of Evan, of the way he would stand in doorways, blocking exits, watching her with that same hollow intensity. But this was different. Evan wanted control. This thing wanted something else entirely. It wanted presence. It wanted to be acknowledged. She opened her mouth to scream, but no sound came out. Her throat locked, muscles seizing as if an invisible hand gripped her windpipe. The realization hit her with the force of a physical blow: she was not alone. She had never been alone. The sensation of eyes on her back since she crossed the boundary stones hadn't been paranoia. It had been anticipation. The shadow extended a tendril of darkness. It reached for her wrist, aiming for the small crescent-shaped scar on her left arm. The air around the appendage grew frigid, frosting the hairs on her skin. Rory slapped her hand away, stumbling backward until her spine hit the rough surface of a standing stone. Pain flared between her shoulder blades, sharp and grounding. The shadow recoiled, not in fear, but in curiosity. It rippled, changing shape. For a heartbeat, it looked like a man in a suit, then a woman in a tattered dress, then nothing but a swirling void. The forms flickered faster, a strobe light of stolen identities. Rory fumbled for the pendant, gripping the crimson stone until her knuckles turned white. The heat seared her palm, blistering the skin, but she held on. The light flared, pushing back the immediate darkness. The shadow hissed, a sound like steam escaping a pressurized valve. It didn't retreat. It split. Two shapes now. Then four. They emerged from the bases of the oaks, sliding up the trunks like oil spills running uphill. They circled her, closing the gap between the trees and the center stone. The wildflowers beneath their passing turned grey, crumbling into ash that drifted upward instead of falling down. Time behaved strangely here. An hour inside could be minutes outside. Or days. Or years. How long had she been standing there? Had she just arrived, or had she been trapped for centuries while the world outside rotted away? The thought clawed at her sanity, a jagged edge of terror she couldn't smooth over with logic or quick thinking. One of the shadows lunged. Rory ducked, the cold appendage grazing her hair. Strands of black hair froze and snapped off, falling to the ground like brittle twigs. She scrambled around the central stone, her boots slipping on the ash-covered moss. The shadows moved in unison now, a coordinated hunt. They didn't rush; they knew she couldn't escape. The boundary stones seemed to have moved closer, shrinking the clearing, boxing her in. She pressed her back against the stone, chest heaving. The pendant throbbed violently, the light flickering as if struggling against a dying battery. The shadows sensed the weakness. They surged forward, a wall of encroaching night. Rory stared into the faceless void of the nearest entity. In the depths of that darkness, she saw reflections. Not her own face, but glimpses of other moments. Evan shouting. Her father turning away. Her mother crying. Every fear, every regret, pulled from her mind and displayed in the swirling blackness. The creature fed on it. She felt the drain, a sapping of energy that left her knees weak and her vision blurring. It wasn't going to kill her. It was going to unmake her. She forced her legs to straighten. Cool-headed. Intelligent. Out-of-the-box thinking. Those were the traits friends praised her for. They meant nothing here. There was no box to think outside of. There was only the grove, the shadows, and the crushing weight of the wrongness that permeated every particle of air. The shadows converged. The cold radiated from them, freezing the sweat on her brow. The Heartstone gave one final, desperate pulse of crimson light, then dimmed to a dull ember. The lead shadow raised a hand, or what passed for a hand, and reached for her face. Rory closed her eyes, bracing for the touch that would turn her to ash or steal her name. The whisper returned, louder this time, forming words that slithered into her ear canals. "Stay." The command vibrated in her bones. It wasn't a request. It was the law of the grove. The wildflowers were gone, replaced by grey dust. The oaks leaned inward, their branches knitting together to block out the sky. The night had become absolute. Rory opened her eyes. The shadow's hand hovered inches from her cheek. She could see the texture of the darkness now, a million tiny voids swirling within the mass. It waited. It wanted her to accept it. To stop fighting the stillness. To become part of the grove's eternal, frozen bloom. Her breath fogged in the air, the only movement left in the world. She looked at her left wrist, at the crescent scar. It looked pale, almost translucent in the failing light. The pendant hung limp against her chest, its warmth extinguished. The shadow touched her cheek. The cold didn't burn. It numbness spread instantly, racing through her nerves, silencing the frantic hammering of her heart. Her muscles locked. Her lungs refused to draw the next breath. She stood transfixed, a statue in a garden of ash, her bright blue eyes wide and unblinking, staring into the heart of the darkness that had been waiting for her all along.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences2
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1613
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
19.40% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1613
totalAiIsms26
found
0
word"sentinels"
count1
1
word"chill"
count1
2
word"silence"
count2
3
word"echo"
count2
4
word"trembled"
count1
5
word"scanned"
count1
6
word"pulsed"
count1
7
word"rhythmic"
count1
8
word"warmth"
count2
9
word"loomed"
count1
10
word"whisper"
count2
11
word"raced"
count1
12
word"intensity"
count1
13
word"anticipation"
count1
14
word"flickered"
count1
15
word"throbbed"
count1
16
word"depths"
count1
17
word"weight"
count1
18
word"pulse"
count1
19
word"vibrated"
count1
20
word"racing"
count1
21
word"transfixed"
count1
highlights
0"sentinels"
1"chill"
2"silence"
3"echo"
4"trembled"
5"scanned"
6"pulsed"
7"rhythmic"
8"warmth"
9"loomed"
10"whisper"
11"raced"
12"intensity"
13"anticipation"
14"flickered"
15"throbbed"
16"depths"
17"weight"
18"pulse"
19"vibrated"
20"racing"
21"transfixed"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"knuckles turned white"
count1
1
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"knuckles turned white"
1"fists clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences164
matches
0"t in fear"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences164
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences166
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1608
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions25
wordCount1597
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.75
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Fae1
Grove1
London1
Richmond1
Park1
Evan4
Heartstone3
Rory12
persons
0"Carter"
1"Evan"
2"Heartstone"
3"Rory"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"London"
3"Richmond"
4"Park"
globalScore1
windowScore1
39.38% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences113
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"seemed deeper than natural darkness allowed, pooling like spilled ink that refused to dry"
1"seemed longer now"
2"as if studying her"
3"looked like a man in a suit, then a woman"
4"as if struggling against a dying battery"
75.62% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.244
wordCount1608
matches
0"not in fear, but in curiosity"
1"Not her own face, but glimpses of other moments"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences166
matches
0"needed that forgetfulness"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs40
mean40.2
std24.48
cv0.609
sampleLengths
081
183
238
367
44
549
62
727
862
96
1063
1162
124
1355
148
1561
1631
1745
1864
1962
2047
2145
225
2352
2459
255
2667
2736
2873
2912
3050
3130
3235
3314
341
3543
3651
3742
385
3962
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences164
matches
0"been trapped"
1"were gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs284
matches(empty)
91.22% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences166
ratio0.018
matches
0"Animals moved with fluid grace; this sounded deliberate, clumsy, human."
1"They were not just still; they were fixed."
2"They didn't rush; they knew she couldn't escape."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount449
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount14
adverbRatio0.031180400890868598
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.004454342984409799
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences166
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences166
mean9.69
std6.08
cv0.628
sampleLengths
019
126
221
315
45
55
624
722
84
923
1016
1114
128
132
148
1519
1610
1715
1813
194
208
214
227
2317
243
2510
262
279
283
2915
3012
3118
322
3311
3419
356
363
3714
382
3921
404
4119
425
4313
448
4512
4611
4713
484
495
33.73% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats27
diversityRatio0.25301204819277107
totalSentences166
uniqueOpeners42
43.86% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences152
matches
0"Instead, they trembled, though no"
1"Even the air ceased to"
ratio0.013
70.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount57
totalSentences152
matches
0"She pulled her jacket tighter,"
1"She came for the silence."
2"She needed an hour where"
3"They should have wilted in"
4"Her bright blue eyes scanned"
5"She reached for the Heartstone"
6"It beat against her sternum,"
7"She spun around, fists clenched"
8"Her voice cracked, swallowed instantly"
9"She forced her feet to"
10"It wasn't words."
11"It was the sound of"
12"She knew every sound the"
13"It came from the direction"
14"She took a step back."
15"Her heel caught on a"
16"She stumbled, catching herself on"
17"She yanked her hand away,"
18"She stared at the wildflowers."
19"They were not just still;"
ratio0.375
32.37% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount130
totalSentences152
matches
0"The ancient oaks stood like"
1"Aurora Carter stepped past the"
2"The air inside The Fae"
3"She pulled her jacket tighter,"
4"She came for the silence."
5"The city noise of London"
6"Eva had spoken of this"
7"Rory needed that forgetfulness."
8"She needed an hour where"
9"The wildflowers bloomed around her"
10"They should have wilted in"
11"Her bright blue eyes scanned"
12"The shadows between the trunks"
13"She reached for the Heartstone"
14"The silver chain felt cold,"
15"It beat against her sternum,"
16"Something crunched behind her."
17"She spun around, fists clenched"
18"The clearing remained empty."
19"The standing stones loomed, silent"
ratio0.855
65.79% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences152
matches
0"To stop fighting the stillness."
1"To become part of the"
ratio0.013
40.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences70
technicalSentenceCount10
matches
0"Aurora Carter stepped past the boundary stones, her boots sinking into moss that felt too soft, too yielding, as if the ground breathed beneath her soles."
1"The distance between the boundary oaks and the center stretched, the perspective warping as if viewed through distorted glass."
2"Her throat locked, muscles seizing as if an invisible hand gripped her windpipe."
3"The wildflowers beneath their passing turned grey, crumbling into ash that drifted upward instead of falling down."
4"The pendant throbbed violently, the light flickering as if struggling against a dying battery."
5"She felt the drain, a sapping of energy that left her knees weak and her vision blurring."
6"Rory closed her eyes, bracing for the touch that would turn her to ash or steal her name."
7"The whisper returned, louder this time, forming words that slithered into her ear canals."
8"It numbness spread instantly, racing through her nerves, silencing the frantic hammering of her heart."
9"She stood transfixed, a statue in a garden of ash, her bright blue eyes wide and unblinking, staring into the heart of the darkness that had been waiting for he…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
82.6288%