| 97.44% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 14 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "She gestured vaguely [vaguely]" | | 1 | "He finally said it [finally]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 39 | | tagDensity | 0.359 | | leniency | 0.718 | | rawRatio | 0.143 | | effectiveRatio | 0.103 | |
| 92.57% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1345 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 40.52% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1345 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "comforting" | | 1 | "familiar" | | 2 | "sanctuary" | | 3 | "navigated" | | 4 | "scanned" | | 5 | "warmth" | | 6 | "lurch" | | 7 | "stomach" | | 8 | "flicker" | | 9 | "silence" | | 10 | "electric" | | 11 | "unreadable" | | 12 | "weight" | | 13 | "methodical" | | 14 | "profound" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "A flicker of confusion" |
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| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 82 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 102 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 29 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1336 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 21 | | wordCount | 1028 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 0.58 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Rory | 6 | | Silas | 3 | | Blackwood | 1 | | Raven | 1 | | Nest | 1 | | Soho | 1 | | London | 1 | | Liam | 4 | | Davies | 1 | | Esq | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Silas" | | 3 | "Blackwood" | | 4 | "Raven" | | 5 | "Nest" | | 6 | "Liam" | | 7 | "Davies" | | 8 | "Esq" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 11.11% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 72 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like a costume she had shed years" | | 1 | "as if tasting a foreign word" | | 2 | "felt like to be her" | | 3 | "felt like they belonged to someone else" |
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| 50.30% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.497 | | wordCount | 1336 | | matches | | 0 | "neither confirmed nor" | | 1 | "not a challenge, but a genuine inquiry" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 102 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 37 | | mean | 36.11 | | std | 23.22 | | cv | 0.643 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 114 | | 1 | 80 | | 2 | 68 | | 3 | 1 | | 4 | 49 | | 5 | 27 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 50 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 38 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 90 | | 13 | 37 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 39 | | 16 | 29 | | 17 | 22 | | 18 | 21 | | 19 | 47 | | 20 | 39 | | 21 | 19 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 44 | | 24 | 33 | | 25 | 54 | | 26 | 46 | | 27 | 52 | | 28 | 46 | | 29 | 28 | | 30 | 38 | | 31 | 27 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 32 | | 34 | 31 | | 35 | 30 | | 36 | 11 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 153 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 102 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1036 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" | | 1 | "small, self-deprecating laugh" |
| | adverbCount | 40 | | adverbRatio | 0.03861003861003861 | | lyAdverbCount | 14 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.013513513513513514 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 102 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 102 | | mean | 13.1 | | std | 6.94 | | cv | 0.53 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 27 | | 2 | 26 | | 3 | 26 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 21 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 25 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 21 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 1 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 21 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 27 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 23 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 26 | | 46 | 17 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 20 | | 49 | 19 |
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| 57.52% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.3627450980392157 | | totalSentences | 102 | | uniqueOpeners | 37 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 20.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 40 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "He paused on the threshold," | | 1 | "He scanned the dimly lit" | | 2 | "He took a hesitant step" | | 3 | "It hung in the air" | | 4 | "Her knuckles whitened around the" | | 5 | "Her voice was steady, betraying" | | 6 | "He slid onto the stool" | | 7 | "He looked her over, from" | | 8 | "She gestured vaguely towards the" | | 9 | "He tried the name out," | | 10 | "He drummed his fingers on" | | 11 | "She nodded, her movements stiff" | | 12 | "She retrieved the bottle, the" | | 13 | "Her hand was perfectly still" | | 14 | "She slid the glass across" | | 15 | "His fingers brushed hers as" | | 16 | "He took a slow sip," | | 17 | "He swirled the whisky in" | | 18 | "She looked up from her" | | 19 | "He looked down into his" |
| | ratio | 0.5 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 76 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "The final dregs of the" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter, known to everyone" | | 2 | "The low hum of the" | | 3 | "The green neon sign of" | | 4 | "This was her sanctuary." | | 5 | "A quiet port in a" | | 6 | "The heavy oak door swung" | | 7 | "He paused on the threshold," | | 8 | "The charcoal wool was tailored" | | 9 | "He scanned the dimly lit" | | 10 | "Rory’s hand stilled, the cloth" | | 11 | "Recognition was a slow, cold" | | 12 | "The face was older, the" | | 13 | "A shade of blue so" | | 14 | "He took a hesitant step" | | 15 | "The name felt like a" | | 16 | "It hung in the air" | | 17 | "Her knuckles whitened around the" | | 18 | "Silas, sensing the shift in" | | 19 | "The man closed the distance," |
| | ratio | 0.95 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 45 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "He paused on the threshold, his shoulders squared in a suit that cost more than her first month's rent." | | 1 | "She felt a profound disconnect, as if she were watching a film about two strangers." |
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| 89.29% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 14 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "He tried, as if tasting a foreign word" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 39 | | tagDensity | 0.051 | | leniency | 0.103 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |