Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTY10X0C7678M2FMBNK5SG0

Run Details

Duration:
38.5s
Cost:
$0.039030
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The final dregs of the evening crowd had thinned, leaving behind the comforting ghosts of stale beer and rain-soaked jackets. Aurora Carter, known to everyone here only as Rory, ran a dry cloth over the polished mahogany of the bar top, her movements a familiar, soothing rhythm. The low hum of the coolers was a constant companion, broken only by the occasional clink of glass as Silas Blackwood stacked clean tumblers behind her. The green neon sign of The Raven’s Nest cast an emerald wash over the wet Soho pavement outside, bathing the room in a soft, aquatic light. This was her sanctuary. A quiet port in a storm she had long since navigated. The heavy oak door swung open, letting in a gust of damp night air and a man who did not belong. He paused on the threshold, his shoulders squared in a suit that cost more than her first month's rent. The charcoal wool was tailored to perfection, uncreased despite the London drizzle. He scanned the dimly lit room, his gaze sweeping over the old maps and faded photographs on the walls before it landed on the bar. Landed on her. Rory’s hand stilled, the cloth limp in her grip. Recognition was a slow, cold flood, seeping into the warmth of the quiet bar. The face was older, the boyish roundness of his cheeks planed away into sharp angles, but the eyes were the same. A shade of blue so pale it was almost grey. He took a hesitant step forward, his expensive shoes silent on the worn floorboards. “Aurora?” The name felt like a costume she had shed years ago. It hung in the air between them, alien and ill-fitting. Her knuckles whitened around the polishing cloth. Silas, sensing the shift in the atmosphere, paused his work, his hazel eyes watchful from the far end of the bar. The man closed the distance, his expression a tangled knot of disbelief and uncertainty. “Aurora Carter. It is you. My God, I thought I was seeing things.” “Hello, Liam.” Her voice was steady, betraying none of the sudden lurch in her stomach. He slid onto the stool opposite her, placing a leather briefcase on the floor. He looked her over, from the faded band t-shirt to the simple silver stud in her ear. A flicker of confusion crossed his face. “What are you doing here? I mean—in London, working in a bar?” “I live here. Above the bar, actually.” She gestured vaguely towards the ceiling. “And it’s just Rory now.” “Rory.” He tried the name out, as if tasting a foreign word. “Right. Rory.” A silence stretched, thin and taut. He drummed his fingers on the bar top, a nervous, staccato rhythm. “So. Can I get a drink?” She nodded, her movements stiff as she reached for a glass. “What can I get you?” “Whisky. Macallan, if you have it. Neat.” Of course. The same drink he used to order at the student union pub, pretending to be more sophisticated than the rest of them with their pints of lager. She retrieved the bottle, the amber liquid catching the low light. Her hand was perfectly still as she poured, the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist a faint white line against her skin. She slid the glass across the bar. His fingers brushed hers as he took it. The contact was electric, a jolt of a life she had buried. He took a slow sip, his eyes never leaving her face. “Last I heard, you were top of your class. Pre-Law scholarship. Everyone at Cardiff said you were going to be a QC before you were forty.” Rory offered a small, empty smile and went back to polishing a different section of the bar. “Plans change.” “That’s one way of putting it.” He swirled the whisky in his glass, the ice-pale blue of his eyes troubled. “You just… vanished. One day you were there, the next, your flat was empty. Eva wouldn’t say a word.” She looked up from her work, meeting his gaze directly for the first time. The bright blue of her own eyes was cool, unreadable. “There wasn’t much to say.” “Wasn’t there?” The question was quiet, but it landed with the weight of an accusation. “Aurora—Rory. We were worried. I was worried.” “You had a funny way of showing it.” The words were out before she could stop them, sharper than she intended. Liam flinched. He looked down into his glass, at the distorted reflection of the man he had become. “I know. I should have… done more. We all should have.” He cleared his throat, the sound loud in the near-silent room. “Heard you broke it off with Evan.” There it was. The name that was a key to a locked room she never intended to visit again. She neither confirmed nor denied it, simply picked up another glass and began to wipe it down with methodical precision. He took her silence as his answer. “Good. He was a piece of work. None of us liked him.” “You were his friend.” The statement was flat, devoid of emotion. “We were on the same rugby team. That’s not the same thing.” Liam’s voice was suddenly defensive. “Look, I heard he got rough at the end. I should have called. I was going to, a dozen times, but I didn’t know what to say.” “What would you have said, Liam?” She set the glass down with a soft, definitive click. The question was not a challenge, but a genuine inquiry. It made him pause, his mouth half-open. He had no answer. He just shook his head, staring at the bar as if it held the right words. “I don’t know. I’m sorry.” The apology was five years too late and a world away. It felt hollow, a coin dropped into a well so deep you never hear it hit the water. “I’m in the city for a merger,” he said, changing the subject with a clumsy haste. “Junior partner at a firm in Cardiff. The one my dad wanted me to join.” He gave a small, self-deprecating laugh that didn’t reach his eyes. “Living the dream, right?” “Congratulations.” Rory’s tone was neutral, polite. She felt a profound disconnect, as if she were watching a film about two strangers. The ambitious, driven girl he remembered was a ghost. She could barely recall what it felt like to be her. That person’s dreams felt like they belonged to someone else entirely. “It’s not… you’re different.” He finally said it, the observation he’d been circling since he walked in. “You were always so… fiery. So certain about everything. Now…” He trailed off, gesturing vaguely at her, at the quiet bar, at the life he couldn’t comprehend for her. “I got tired of being certain.” She stacked the glass she’d been cleaning with the others, the simple, physical task a welcome anchor. “Certainty gets you into trouble.” From the end of the bar, Silas began quietly clearing the last of the empty tables, his slight limp more pronounced as the night wore on. He moved with a silent economy, a grey-streaked guardian in the periphery. Liam drained his glass, the sound of it hitting the wood a sharp crack in the quiet. He reached for his wallet, but Rory shook her head. “It’s on the house. For old times’ sake.” The phrase felt absurd. There was nothing left of the old times but this awkward, painful space between them. He hesitated, then pulled his hand back, leaving the wallet on the bar. “I’m at The Savoy, just for a couple of nights.” He pushed a business card across the bar. The embossing was crisp and formal. “We could get dinner. Catch up properly.” Rory looked at the card, at the neat, black lettering spelling out a life she had actively run from. Liam Davies, Esq. She made no move to pick it up. “I don’t think we have that much to catch up on.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
97.44% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"She gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
1"He finally said it [finally]"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.359
leniency0.718
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.103
92.57% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1345
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
40.52% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1345
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"comforting"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"sanctuary"
count1
3
word"navigated"
count1
4
word"scanned"
count1
5
word"warmth"
count1
6
word"lurch"
count1
7
word"stomach"
count1
8
word"flicker"
count1
9
word"silence"
count2
10
word"electric"
count1
11
word"unreadable"
count1
12
word"weight"
count1
13
word"methodical"
count1
14
word"profound"
count1
highlights
0"comforting"
1"familiar"
2"sanctuary"
3"navigated"
4"scanned"
5"warmth"
6"lurch"
7"stomach"
8"flicker"
9"silence"
10"electric"
11"unreadable"
12"weight"
13"methodical"
14"profound"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences82
matches
0"A flicker of confusion"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences82
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tended to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences102
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1336
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions21
wordCount1028
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.58
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Rory6
Silas3
Blackwood1
Raven1
Nest1
Soho1
London1
Liam4
Davies1
Esq1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Rory"
2"Silas"
3"Blackwood"
4"Raven"
5"Nest"
6"Liam"
7"Davies"
8"Esq"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
11.11% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences72
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"felt like a costume she had shed years"
1"as if tasting a foreign word"
2"felt like to be her"
3"felt like they belonged to someone else"
50.30% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.497
wordCount1336
matches
0"neither confirmed nor"
1"not a challenge, but a genuine inquiry"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences102
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean36.11
std23.22
cv0.643
sampleLengths
0114
180
268
31
449
527
615
750
818
938
1016
117
1290
1337
1419
1539
1629
1722
1821
1947
2039
2119
2211
2344
2433
2554
2646
2752
2846
2928
3038
3127
328
3332
3431
3530
3611
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences82
matches
0"was tailored"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs153
matches
0"were watching"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences102
ratio0
matches(empty)
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1036
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
1"small, self-deprecating laugh"
adverbCount40
adverbRatio0.03861003861003861
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.013513513513513514
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences102
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences102
mean13.1
std6.94
cv0.53
sampleLengths
020
127
226
326
44
511
621
719
812
925
103
119
1214
1321
1410
1514
161
1711
1810
197
2021
2114
2213
2315
2414
2517
267
2712
2813
295
3012
318
3212
336
3411
355
367
372
3827
3911
4023
417
428
4312
4411
4526
4617
472
4820
4919
57.52% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.3627450980392157
totalSentences102
uniqueOpeners37
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences80
matches(empty)
ratio0
20.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount40
totalSentences80
matches
0"He paused on the threshold,"
1"He scanned the dimly lit"
2"He took a hesitant step"
3"It hung in the air"
4"Her knuckles whitened around the"
5"Her voice was steady, betraying"
6"He slid onto the stool"
7"He looked her over, from"
8"She gestured vaguely towards the"
9"He tried the name out,"
10"He drummed his fingers on"
11"She nodded, her movements stiff"
12"She retrieved the bottle, the"
13"Her hand was perfectly still"
14"She slid the glass across"
15"His fingers brushed hers as"
16"He took a slow sip,"
17"He swirled the whisky in"
18"She looked up from her"
19"He looked down into his"
ratio0.5
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount76
totalSentences80
matches
0"The final dregs of the"
1"Aurora Carter, known to everyone"
2"The low hum of the"
3"The green neon sign of"
4"This was her sanctuary."
5"A quiet port in a"
6"The heavy oak door swung"
7"He paused on the threshold,"
8"The charcoal wool was tailored"
9"He scanned the dimly lit"
10"Rory’s hand stilled, the cloth"
11"Recognition was a slow, cold"
12"The face was older, the"
13"A shade of blue so"
14"He took a hesitant step"
15"The name felt like a"
16"It hung in the air"
17"Her knuckles whitened around the"
18"Silas, sensing the shift in"
19"The man closed the distance,"
ratio0.95
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences80
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences45
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"He paused on the threshold, his shoulders squared in a suit that cost more than her first month's rent."
1"She felt a profound disconnect, as if she were watching a film about two strangers."
89.29% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"He tried, as if tasting a foreign word"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.051
leniency0.103
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
78.2245%