Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTY16HJB0PQB1DB66TFRVMB

Run Details

Duration:
19.7s
Cost:
$0.007581
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon of the Raven's Nest sign hummed, a low-frequency vibration that rattled the marrow of anyone standing too close to the brickwork. Inside, the air tasted of floor wax and stale gin. Silas Blackwood stood behind the mahogany sanctuary of his bar, polishing a highball glass with the rhythmic, mechanical precision of a man who had spent decades cleaning up other people’s messes. His silver signet ring caught the amber glow of the overhead pendant lights. Aurora leaned against the edge of the bar, her fingers tracing the grain of the wood. She had just finished a shift at the Golden Empress, her lungs still carrying the ghost-scent of Szechuan peppercorns and exhaust fumes from the motorbike. The door creaked. A draft cut through the humid interior, smelling of impending rain and expensive leather. A man stepped into the light. He wore a charcoal wool coat that cost more than Rory’s monthly rent. His hair, once a chaotic bird's nest of chestnut curls, was now slicked back into a severe, professional chop. He didn't see her at first. He scanned the room with a practiced, predatory caution—a habit Rory remembered from a lifetime ago, though the context had shifted from avoiding school bullies to whatever corporate battlefield he now inhabited. "Stark." The name slipped out before Rory could stifle it. The man froze. He turned toward the sound, his gaze sweeping past Silas and locking onto Aurora. For a heartbeat, the mask of the successful city boy faltered. His eyes, once wide with a frantic sort of curiosity, looked heavy, hooded by the shadow of a dozen boardrooms. "Laila?" He used her middle name, the one only her family and the ghosts of Cardiff called her. He walked toward her, his gait missing the old bounce. Every step looked calculated, measured against the friction of the floor. "It’s Rory now, Evan. It’s been five years." He stopped a foot away. He smelled of sandalwood and scotch. He looked at her shoulder-length black hair, then down at the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. His mouth thinned into a line that wasn't quite a smile. "Five years and two months. You look… tired." "I'm working. Some of us still do that." Silas didn't look up from his glass, but the rag in his hand slowed. His hazel eyes darted toward Evan, cataloging the tuck of the shirt, the shine of the shoes, the way the man didn’t quite know what to do with his hands when they weren't holding a smartphone. "The Golden Empress." Evan read the fading logo on her windbreaker. "Still delivering for that place? I thought you’d be halfway through a pupillage by now. Your father had those Chambers in Bristol all lined up." "My father had a lot of things lined up. Most of them involved me becoming someone I didn't recognize. I prefer the bike. The wind doesn't ask for legal precedents." "It's a waste, Rory. You were the sharpest person in the lecture hall." "I was the loudest. There's a difference." She signaled to Silas. He slid a pint of dark ale toward her without a word. The condensation climbed her knuckles. Evan watched the glass as if it were a prehistoric artifact. "Order something or move along, son," Silas said. The Spymaster’s voice carried a gravelly weight that made Evan straighten his spine. "People come here to drink, not to audit the staff." Evan cleared his throat, adjusting his cufflinks. "A Macallan. Neat." Silas reached for a bottle on the back shelf, his left leg dragging slightly as he pivoted. Evan watched the limp, his brow furrowing. "Nice place you've got here. A bit… rustic." "It keeps the rain off the bottles," Silas replied, sliding the scotch across. "And the noise off the street." Evan turned back to Rory. He reached out as if to touch her arm, but she shifted her weight, pulling the crescent scar out of his reach. He let his hand drop, instead gripping his glass. "I saw your mother last Christmas," Evan said. "In the village. She said you stopped answering her letters." "The letters were just his voice transcribed in her handwriting. I didn't see the point in reading the same lecture twice." "He's worried. We all were." "Worried is a polite word for losing control, Evan. Let's not pretend we're in a Cathedral." The silence between them stretched, filled only by the muffled clinking of glasses from a booth in the back. Evan took a sip of the scotch, wincing slightly as the peat hit his throat. He looked at her again, really looked at her this time, searching for the girl who used to steal his law textbooks and hide them in the rafters of the university library. "You've changed your face," he whispered. "The way you hold your jaw. You used to laugh at everything. Now you look like you're waiting for a punch." "I learned that it's better to be ready for it than to be surprised when it lands. You've changed too. You look like a brochure for a life you don't actually enjoy." Evan let out a short, dry laugh. "I have a flat in Canary Wharf. I'm a junior partner. I don't have to worry about the cost of the heater in February." "And yet you're in a dive bar in Soho on a Tuesday night looking like you've seen a ghost. Are you happy, Evan? Or just well-funded?" He stared into his amber liquid. The neon green from the window bled across his cheek, making him look sickly, washed out. "I remember the night we left Cardiff," he said, his voice dropping an octave. "Rain was coming down so hard we couldn't see the hood of the car. You said we’d make it. You said London was big enough to hide both of us." "London is big enough to hide anything. The problem is when you start hiding from yourself." "I did what I had to do. I adapted." "No. You surrendered. You traded the chaotic person I liked for a suit that talks in bullet points." Rory drained her pint, the bitterness of the ale a sharp contrast to the cloying sincerity in Evan’s eyes. She felt Silas watching them, a silent sentinel who knew exactly how much damage a past could do when it caught up to the present. "I should go," Evan said, though he didn't move. "I have a briefing at seven." "Then go. The city doesn't wait for sequels." "Rory, wait." He reached into his coat and produced a small, embossed business card. He slid it across the damp wood of the bar. "If you ever… if the bike gets too cold. If you want to finish what you started." Rory looked at the card. The gold foil shimmered. She didn't pick it up. "I finished what I started the day I got on that train, Evan. I’m exactly where I’m supposed to be." Silas stepped forward, his silver ring clicking against the mahogany as he reclaimed Evan’s empty glass. "The lady said she’s fine," Silas murmured. The threat wasn't in his volume, but in the stillness of his posture. "And the Macallan is twenty pounds." Evan fumbled for his wallet, tossing a note onto the bar. He looked at Rory one last time, a flickering moment of the boy from the library appearing behind the tired eyes of the lawyer. He opened his mouth to say something—perhaps an apology, perhaps a plea—but the iron set of her shoulders stopped him. He turned and walked out. The green neon flickered as the door swung shut, momentarily bathing the sidewalk in a sickly light before he vanished into the London gloom. Silas picked up the business card. He turned it over, his thumb tracing the sharp edges. "He's got the look of a man who forgets where he parked his soul," Silas said, flicking the card into the bin under the bar. Rory stared at the spot where Evan had stood. The scent of sandalwood lingered, a dying ember in the cold room. "He didn't forget it, Silas. He sold it for the charcoal coat." "And you?" Rory looked at her wrist, the crescent scar white against her skin. She gripped her empty glass until her knuckles turned the color of bone. "I'm still holding onto mine. It’s just getting heavier." Silas nodded, reaching for a fresh glass. He poured a small measure of a clear, potent liquid and set it in front of her. "On the house. For the ghosts." The rain finally began to hit the window, a frantic tapping against the glass. Rory watched the droplets race each other down the pane, blurring the neon light into a jagged green smear. Outside, the city hummed, indifferent to the two people who had once known everything about each other and now knew nothing at all. " He’s taller than I remembered," she said, her voice barely a whisper. "Common trick of the light," Silas replied, his limp sounding louder in the quiet bar as he moved to the other end of the counter. "People always look bigger when they're leaving." Rory took the shot. It burned all the way down, cauterizing the urge to run after him, leaving nothing but the cold, steady realization that the past was a country she no longer had a passport for. She set the glass down with a sharp click. The Raven's Nest felt smaller now, the maps on the walls showing routes to places that didn't exist anymore. "I have a delivery in Camden," she said, pulling her keys from her pocket. "Watch the slick on the corners," Silas warned without looking up. "The rain is turning the oil into ice." "I'm used to the slide." She zipped her jacket to the chin, the Golden Empress logo crinkling. She walked toward the door, her boots echoing on the boards. As she reached for the handle, she stopped, looking back at the empty stool where Evan had sat. The ring of condensation from his glass was already evaporating, leaving a faint, ghost-like circle on the dark wood. She pushed through the door. The London air hit her, sharp and wet. She climbed onto the motorbike, the engine turning over with a guttural roar that drowned out the hum of the neon sign. She didn't look back at the bar, and she didn't look for the charcoal coat in the crowd. She kicked the stand up and leaned into the first turn, her eyes fixed on the blurring red lights of the traffic ahead, chasing the only thing she had left: the next mile.
created_at"2026-02-19T12:29:39.769Z" 2/19/2026, 12:29:39 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences51
tagDensity0.275
leniency0.549
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.60% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1785
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
38.38% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1785
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"sanctuary"
count1
1
word"rhythmic"
count1
2
word"mechanical"
count1
3
word"tracing"
count2
4
word"chaotic"
count2
5
word"scanned"
count1
6
word"stark"
count1
7
word"calculated"
count1
8
word"measured"
count1
9
word"weight"
count2
10
word"furrowing"
count1
11
word"silence"
count1
12
word"sentinel"
count1
13
word"shimmered"
count1
14
word"flickered"
count1
15
word"gloom"
count1
16
word"race"
count1
17
word"whisper"
count1
18
word"echoing"
count1
highlights
0"sanctuary"
1"rhythmic"
2"mechanical"
3"tracing"
4"chaotic"
5"scanned"
6"stark"
7"calculated"
8"measured"
9"weight"
10"furrowing"
11"silence"
12"sentinel"
13"shimmered"
14"flickered"
15"gloom"
16"race"
17"whisper"
18"echoing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences95
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences95
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences132
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1778
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions58
wordCount1236
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.29
worstName"Evan"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Evan"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Blackwood1
Golden2
Empress2
Szechuan1
Rory11
Silas15
Aurora2
Cardiff1
Evan16
Spymaster1
London2
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Blackwood"
3"Rory"
4"Silas"
5"Aurora"
6"Evan"
7"Spymaster"
places
0"Golden"
1"Cardiff"
2"London"
globalScore0.853
windowScore0.167
85.90% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences78
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"quite a smile"
1"quite know what to do with his hands when they weren't holding a smartphone"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1778
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences132
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs67
mean26.54
std18.95
cv0.714
sampleLengths
078
141
255
338
41
59
648
71
838
98
1040
118
128
1350
1436
1530
1613
177
1832
1931
2010
2124
228
2319
2436
2518
2621
275
2816
2966
3027
3132
3231
3326
3422
3544
3616
379
3818
3944
4015
418
4241
4314
4420
4516
4626
4755
4829
4916
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences95
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs211
matches
0"weren't holding"
99.57% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences132
ratio0.015
matches
0"He scanned the room with a practiced, predatory caution—a habit Rory remembered from a lifetime ago, though the context had shifted from avoiding school bullies to whatever corporate battlefield he now inhabited."
1"He opened his mouth to say something—perhaps an apology, perhaps a plea—but the iron set of her shoulders stopped him."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1243
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.028962188254223652
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.012067578439259855
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences132
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences132
mean13.47
std7.94
cv0.59
sampleLengths
024
110
231
313
416
525
63
714
86
913
1019
116
1232
131
149
153
1614
1711
1820
191
2017
2110
2211
238
245
256
2618
2711
288
298
3014
3136
3211
3325
3430
3513
367
374
3812
395
4011
418
4213
4310
447
453
4617
477
488
4913
38.64% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.2727272727272727
totalSentences132
uniqueOpeners36
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences91
matches(empty)
ratio0
35.38% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount42
totalSentences91
matches
0"His silver signet ring caught"
1"She had just finished a"
2"He wore a charcoal wool"
3"His hair, once a chaotic"
4"He didn't see her at"
5"He scanned the room with"
6"He turned toward the sound,"
7"His eyes, once wide with"
8"He used her middle name,"
9"He walked toward her, his"
10"He stopped a foot away."
11"He smelled of sandalwood and"
12"He looked at her shoulder-length"
13"His mouth thinned into a"
14"His hazel eyes darted toward"
15"She signaled to Silas."
16"He slid a pint of"
17"He reached out as if"
18"He let his hand drop,"
19"He looked at her again,"
ratio0.462
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount87
totalSentences91
matches
0"The green neon of the"
1"Silas Blackwood stood behind the"
2"His silver signet ring caught"
3"Aurora leaned against the edge"
4"She had just finished a"
5"The door creaked."
6"A draft cut through the"
7"A man stepped into the"
8"He wore a charcoal wool"
9"His hair, once a chaotic"
10"He didn't see her at"
11"He scanned the room with"
12"The name slipped out before"
13"The man froze."
14"He turned toward the sound,"
15"His eyes, once wide with"
16"He used her middle name,"
17"He walked toward her, his"
18"Every step looked calculated, measured"
19"He stopped a foot away."
ratio0.956
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences91
matches(empty)
ratio0
64.94% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences55
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"The green neon of the Raven's Nest sign hummed, a low-frequency vibration that rattled the marrow of anyone standing too close to the brickwork."
1"Silas Blackwood stood behind the mahogany sanctuary of his bar, polishing a highball glass with the rhythmic, mechanical precision of a man who had spent decade…"
2"He wore a charcoal wool coat that cost more than Rory’s monthly rent."
3"He looked at her again, really looked at her this time, searching for the girl who used to steal his law textbooks and hide them in the rafters of the universit…"
4"Outside, the city hummed, indifferent to the two people who had once known everything about each other and now knew nothing at all."
5"She climbed onto the motorbike, the engine turning over with a guttural roar that drowned out the hum of the neon sign."
53.57% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"he said, his voice dropping an octave"
1"she said, her voice barely a whisper"
91.18% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"he whispered (whisper)"
1"Silas murmured (murmur)"
2"Silas warned (warn)"
dialogueSentences51
tagDensity0.235
leniency0.471
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.118
76.9936%