| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said aloud [aloud]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 7 | | tagDensity | 0.429 | | leniency | 0.857 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.286 | |
| 85.70% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1399 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "carefully" | | 1 | "perfectly" | | 2 | "sharply" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 35.67% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1399 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "throb" | | 3 | "rhythmic" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "intensity" | | 6 | "sense of" | | 7 | "quickened" | | 8 | "structure" | | 9 | "looming" | | 10 | "intricate" | | 11 | "could feel" | | 12 | "absolutely" | | 13 | "stomach" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 152 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 152 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 156 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 27 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 3 | | markdownWords | 3 | | totalWords | 1393 | | ratio | 0.002 | | matches | | 0 | "suggestion" | | 1 | "space" | | 2 | "through" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 28 | | wordCount | 1364 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 0.81 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 11 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Fae | 4 | | Grove | 6 | | Yu-Fei | 1 | | Eva | 1 | | Like | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Yu-Fei" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Like" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 101 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like stepping into something's mou" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 2.154 | | wordCount | 1393 | | matches | | 0 | "Not language, but the *suggestion* of language" | | 1 | "Not the starlight from above, but something older" | | 2 | "not in the whispering, but clear" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 156 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 46 | | mean | 30.28 | | std | 25.86 | | cv | 0.854 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 43 | | 1 | 28 | | 2 | 65 | | 3 | 11 | | 4 | 69 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 52 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 74 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 66 | | 12 | 39 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 47 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 54 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 71 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 49 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 77 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 69 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 29 | | 28 | 65 | | 29 | 66 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 68 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 41 | | 34 | 54 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 24 | | 38 | 1 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 52 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 24 | | 44 | 18 | | 45 | 12 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 152 | | matches | | |
| 29.06% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 6 | | totalVerbs | 234 | | matches | | 0 | "were radiating" | | 1 | "was drawing" | | 2 | "was seeing" | | 3 | "was trying" | | 4 | "was vibrating" | | 5 | "was taking" |
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| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 156 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 92.18% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1369 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 67 | | adverbRatio | 0.04894083272461651 | | lyAdverbCount | 22 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.016070124178232285 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 156 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 156 | | mean | 8.93 | | std | 5.9 | | cv | 0.661 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 9 | | 3 | 9 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 2 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 1 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 26 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 19 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 23 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 16 | | 39 | 1 | | 40 | 1 | | 41 | 1 | | 42 | 1 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 1 | | 45 | 20 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 12 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 1 |
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| 52.56% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 13 | | diversityRatio | 0.36538461538461536 | | totalSentences | 156 | | uniqueOpeners | 57 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 8 | | totalSentences | 128 | | matches | | 0 | "Just a persistent throb, like" | | 1 | "Impossibly warm, as if they" | | 2 | "Somewhere between the eastern oaks," | | 3 | "Just darkness between the oak" | | 4 | "Once you noticed it, you" | | 5 | "Perhaps she was vibrating at" | | 6 | "Just different shapes on the" | | 7 | "Then it moved toward her" |
| | ratio | 0.063 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 26 | | totalSentences | 128 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd memorised the clearing's entrance" | | 1 | "She pulled her jacket tighter" | | 2 | "She'd ignored it for two" | | 3 | "She hadn't listened." | | 4 | "She stood and turned toward" | | 5 | "She stopped walking." | | 6 | "She forced herself to breathe" | | 7 | "she said aloud" | | 8 | "She counted to ten in" | | 9 | "She turned the other direction." | | 10 | "She moved forward again, faster" | | 11 | "She'd walked into the Grove" | | 12 | "She knew its geography." | | 13 | "You could cross it in" | | 14 | "She'd been walking for ten." | | 15 | "They just didn't experience existence" | | 16 | "They perceived time differently." | | 17 | "They perceived *space* differently." | | 18 | "She opened her eyes." | | 19 | "It burned against her skin" |
| | ratio | 0.203 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 86 | | totalSentences | 128 | | matches | | 0 | "The oak standing stones emerged" | | 1 | "She'd memorised the clearing's entrance" | | 2 | "The temperature dropped the moment" | | 3 | "She pulled her jacket tighter" | | 4 | "The pendant at her throat" | | 5 | "The reason she'd come was" | | 6 | "She'd ignored it for two" | | 7 | "Silas had warned her not" | | 8 | "She hadn't listened." | | 9 | "The wildflowers glowed faintly in" | | 10 | "That should have been her" | | 11 | "The flowers bloomed year-round in" | | 12 | "Aurora knelt beside a patch" | | 13 | "She stood and turned toward" | | 14 | "The Fae Grove was perhaps" | | 15 | "The grass was soft underfoot," | | 16 | "Tonight, it felt like stepping" | | 17 | "The pendant pulsed again." | | 18 | "Aurora moved deeper into the" | | 19 | "The stream crossed her path," |
| | ratio | 0.672 | |
| 78.13% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 128 | | matches | | 0 | "To a creature that could" | | 1 | "Just as her foot crossed" |
| | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 34.63% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 66 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "The pendant at her throat pulsed with a faint warmth that made her collarbone ache." | | 1 | "Impossibly warm, as if they were radiating body heat instead of botanical life." | | 2 | "The Fae Grove was perhaps three acres of carefully manicured wildflower meadow, ringed with ancient oaks and bisected by a stream that ran silver under starligh…" | | 3 | "There was also something that might have been wind through branches, except the leaves above her head hung perfectly still." | | 4 | "The flowers still glowed their unnatural glow, and the stars above burned with an intensity that made her eyes water." | | 5 | "Something was wrong with the light itself, as if she was seeing it from underwater." | | 6 | "The glowing flowers had multiplied, spreading across the grass in intricate spirals that formed almost-patterns." | | 7 | "The kind of shapes that would drive you mad if you stared at them too long, because your brain would keep finding new meanings in the chaos." | | 8 | "The particular kind of fear that came from needing money to escape and having none." | | 9 | "The proportions were off in ways that made her stomach twist." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 7 | | tagDensity | 0.429 | | leniency | 0.857 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |