Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTY185FKG2P00BJ6YYDW02E

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Duration:
23.9s
Cost:
$0.014175
Provider:
Anthropic

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System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Horror genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The oak standing stones emerged from the darkness like broken teeth, their ancient bark rough beneath Aurora's fingertips. She'd memorised the clearing's entrance during daylight, but night transformed Richmond Park into something altogether different. The temperature dropped the moment she crossed the boundary. She pulled her jacket tighter and checked her phone. No signal, as expected. The pendant at her throat pulsed with a faint warmth that made her collarbone ache. The reason she'd come was simple enough. Three days ago, the pendant had begun reacting to something in The Fae Grove. Not violently. Not frightening. Just a persistent throb, like a second heartbeat calling to her from across the city. She'd ignored it for two days, delivered parcels for Yu-Fei, pretended everything was normal. But normal stopped existing the moment she'd put the pendant on. Silas had warned her not to come alone. She hadn't listened. The wildflowers glowed faintly in the darkness, their petals luminous without any visible light source. That should have been her first hint that something was different tonight. The flowers bloomed year-round in the Grove, but they'd never glowed like bioluminescent fungi. Aurora knelt beside a patch of them and brushed her fingers across the blooms. Warm. Impossibly warm, as if they were radiating body heat instead of botanical life. She stood and turned toward the clearing's centre. The Fae Grove was perhaps three acres of carefully manicured wildflower meadow, ringed with ancient oaks and bisected by a stream that ran silver under starlight. The grass was soft underfoot, almost unnaturally lush. On previous visits, she'd found the place unsettling but manageable. Tonight, it felt like stepping into something's mouth. The pendant pulsed again. Warmer now. Aurora moved deeper into the clearing, following the sensation the way a compass needle follows north. Somewhere between the eastern oaks, something was drawing her forward. The stream crossed her path, and she jumped it without thinking, her trainers landing silently on the other bank. No splash. The water didn't ripple. When she glanced back, the stream looked more like a line someone had drawn with pencil on dark paper than actual flowing water. That wasn't right. She stopped walking. The clearing wasn't silent, she realised. There were sounds, but they existed just below the threshold of conscious hearing. The kind of noises you only notice once you've noticed them, when they immediately become unbearable. Whispering? No. Scratching? Almost. Like fingernails on wood, but softer. Rhythmic. There was also something that might have been wind through branches, except the leaves above her head hung perfectly still. Aurora's breath came shallow. She forced herself to breathe deeper, the way Eva had taught her. In through the nose. Hold. Out through the mouth. The pendant warmed against her collarbone again, and she pressed her palm against it. "I'm here," she said aloud. The whispering stopped immediately. She counted to ten in the silence that followed. Counted to twenty. The flowers still glowed their unnatural glow, and the stars above burned with an intensity that made her eyes water. Something was wrong with the light itself, as if she was seeing it from underwater. Movement, at the edge of her vision. Aurora turned her head sharply, but there was nothing there. Just darkness between the oak trees. She turned the other direction. More darkness. Same movement. When she forced her eyes to stay forward, she could see it anyway, that sense of something shifting at the periphery. Once you noticed it, you couldn't un-notice it. The pendant pulsed three times in quick succession. She moved forward again, faster now. Not running. Running was desperate. Running was how prey moved. But her pace quickened nonetheless, following the pendant's insistent warmth. The clearing didn't seem to be getting any closer to its edges, and that thought sparked something cold in her chest. She'd walked into the Grove a dozen times before. She knew its geography. You could cross it in five minutes at a normal pace. She'd been walking for ten. The whispering resumed, but it had changed. There was almost structure to it now. Not language, but the *suggestion* of language. Like someone was trying to speak through a wall of cotton wool. The sounds came from multiple directions at once, which shouldn't have been possible. Shouldn't have been. Aurora stopped walking again and closed her eyes. This was the thing they never taught you about the Fae. The thing that books and folklore danced around without quite saying it. When the boundary between worlds got thin, things from the other side didn't necessarily mean you harm. They just didn't experience existence the way humans did. They perceived time differently. They perceived *space* differently. To a creature that could be in multiple places at once, the concept of honesty or mercy became almost incomprehensible. She opened her eyes. The clearing had shifted. Or perhaps she had shifted, and the clearing had stayed still. The trees were closer now, looming over her from all sides. The glowing flowers had multiplied, spreading across the grass in intricate spirals that formed almost-patterns. Nearly-words. The kind of shapes that would drive you mad if you stared at them too long, because your brain would keep finding new meanings in the chaos. Something moved *through* the tree to her left. Not around it. Through it. A ripple in the bark, the way water ripples when something massive passes beneath. The tree's leaves shuddered violently for a moment, then stilled. Aurora's hand went to the pendant. It burned against her skin now, hot enough to leave a mark. She could feel the rhythm of its pulsing matching the rhythm of her own heartbeat, the two becoming indistinguishable. The pendant had been trying to warn her, she realised. The warmth intensifying as the night wore on. A counter to whatever was in the Grove with her. There was something else now. A sound that wasn't the whispering. Deeper. Resonant. Like someone had struck a massive bell in a cathedral and the tone was only now reaching her ears. The ground beneath her feet hummed in response. Or perhaps it was the other way around. Perhaps she was vibrating at the same frequency and the ground was simply expressing what she already contained. She forced herself to move toward the sound. This was the moment where people made mistakes. Where they ran. Where they panicked and did something stupid and ended up stories whispered in pubs. But Aurora had spent her whole life surrounded by the mundane world's small horrors. Divorce papers. Legal briefs. The particular kind of fear that came from needing money to escape and having none. The Fae Grove's wrongness was strange, but it wasn't new. Just different shapes on the same terrifying stage. The bell-tone grew louder, and she walked toward it. The trees parted as she approached, the space opening up like a mouth. In the centre of the clearing, where there had only been grass and flowers before, something was taking shape. It looked almost like a door. Or perhaps a window. The edges bled into the darkness in ways that made her eyes hurt, but the centre was solid. Real. Within it, she could see starlight. Not the starlight from above, but something older. Something that had watched the world before light had a colour. The pendant burned against her chest, and Aurora stepped forward. Just as her foot crossed the threshold, she heard it. A voice, not in the whispering, but clear and human and absolutely wrong. It came from behind her, from the direction she'd walked in. "Stop." She turned. In the glowing darkness between the oak trees, a figure stood perfectly still. It wore the shape of a woman, had the general arrangement of a human face, but nothing about it fit correctly. The proportions were off in ways that made her stomach twist. Its eyes caught the starlight like mirrors. "You're not invited tonight," it said. "He's still sleeping." Aurora's hand remained on the pendant. "Who's still sleeping?" The thing tilted its head. When it smiled, there were too many teeth, and they were arranged in concentric circles like a lamprey's mouth. "The Hel-walker," it said. "The one who calls you. The one who wore that pendant before you did." Then it moved toward her with nothing resembling walking, and Aurora ran.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said aloud [aloud]"
dialogueSentences7
tagDensity0.429
leniency0.857
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.286
85.70% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1399
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"perfectly"
count2
2
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"perfectly"
2"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
35.67% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1399
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"pulsed"
count3
1
word"warmth"
count3
2
word"throb"
count1
3
word"rhythmic"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"intensity"
count1
6
word"sense of"
count1
7
word"quickened"
count1
8
word"structure"
count1
9
word"looming"
count1
10
word"intricate"
count1
11
word"could feel"
count1
12
word"absolutely"
count1
13
word"stomach"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"warmth"
2"throb"
3"rhythmic"
4"silence"
5"intensity"
6"sense of"
7"quickened"
8"structure"
9"looming"
10"intricate"
11"could feel"
12"absolutely"
13"stomach"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences152
matches
0"was desperate"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences152
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seem to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences156
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords3
totalWords1393
ratio0.002
matches
0"suggestion"
1"space"
2"through"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount1364
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.81
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora11
Richmond1
Park1
Fae4
Grove6
Yu-Fei1
Eva1
Like3
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Yu-Fei"
2"Eva"
3"Like"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Fae"
3"Grove"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences101
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like stepping into something's mou"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords2.154
wordCount1393
matches
0"Not language, but the *suggestion* of language"
1"Not the starlight from above, but something older"
2"not in the whispering, but clear"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences156
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean30.28
std25.86
cv0.854
sampleLengths
043
128
265
311
469
58
652
76
874
93
103
1166
1239
135
144
1547
167
1754
188
1971
205
2149
228
2377
244
2569
268
2729
2865
2966
308
3168
328
3341
3454
3510
3610
3724
381
392
4052
419
429
4324
4418
4512
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences152
matches
0"were arranged"
29.06% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount6
totalVerbs234
matches
0"were radiating"
1"was drawing"
2"was seeing"
3"was trying"
4"was vibrating"
5"was taking"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences156
ratio0
matches(empty)
92.18% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1369
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount67
adverbRatio0.04894083272461651
lyAdverbCount22
lyAdverbRatio0.016070124178232285
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences156
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences156
mean8.93
std5.9
cv0.661
sampleLengths
018
116
29
39
44
515
67
714
82
92
1015
1114
1211
138
143
1515
1612
1714
1814
191
2013
218
2226
238
2410
258
264
272
2816
2910
3019
312
324
3323
343
353
366
3713
3816
391
401
411
421
436
441
4520
464
4712
484
491
52.56% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.36538461538461536
totalSentences156
uniqueOpeners57
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount8
totalSentences128
matches
0"Just a persistent throb, like"
1"Impossibly warm, as if they"
2"Somewhere between the eastern oaks,"
3"Just darkness between the oak"
4"Once you noticed it, you"
5"Perhaps she was vibrating at"
6"Just different shapes on the"
7"Then it moved toward her"
ratio0.063
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences128
matches
0"She'd memorised the clearing's entrance"
1"She pulled her jacket tighter"
2"She'd ignored it for two"
3"She hadn't listened."
4"She stood and turned toward"
5"She stopped walking."
6"She forced herself to breathe"
7"she said aloud"
8"She counted to ten in"
9"She turned the other direction."
10"She moved forward again, faster"
11"She'd walked into the Grove"
12"She knew its geography."
13"You could cross it in"
14"She'd been walking for ten."
15"They just didn't experience existence"
16"They perceived time differently."
17"They perceived *space* differently."
18"She opened her eyes."
19"It burned against her skin"
ratio0.203
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount86
totalSentences128
matches
0"The oak standing stones emerged"
1"She'd memorised the clearing's entrance"
2"The temperature dropped the moment"
3"She pulled her jacket tighter"
4"The pendant at her throat"
5"The reason she'd come was"
6"She'd ignored it for two"
7"Silas had warned her not"
8"She hadn't listened."
9"The wildflowers glowed faintly in"
10"That should have been her"
11"The flowers bloomed year-round in"
12"Aurora knelt beside a patch"
13"She stood and turned toward"
14"The Fae Grove was perhaps"
15"The grass was soft underfoot,"
16"Tonight, it felt like stepping"
17"The pendant pulsed again."
18"Aurora moved deeper into the"
19"The stream crossed her path,"
ratio0.672
78.13% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences128
matches
0"To a creature that could"
1"Just as her foot crossed"
ratio0.016
34.63% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences66
technicalSentenceCount10
matches
0"The pendant at her throat pulsed with a faint warmth that made her collarbone ache."
1"Impossibly warm, as if they were radiating body heat instead of botanical life."
2"The Fae Grove was perhaps three acres of carefully manicured wildflower meadow, ringed with ancient oaks and bisected by a stream that ran silver under starligh…"
3"There was also something that might have been wind through branches, except the leaves above her head hung perfectly still."
4"The flowers still glowed their unnatural glow, and the stars above burned with an intensity that made her eyes water."
5"Something was wrong with the light itself, as if she was seeing it from underwater."
6"The glowing flowers had multiplied, spreading across the grass in intricate spirals that formed almost-patterns."
7"The kind of shapes that would drive you mad if you stared at them too long, because your brain would keep finding new meanings in the chaos."
8"The particular kind of fear that came from needing money to escape and having none."
9"The proportions were off in ways that made her stomach twist."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences7
tagDensity0.429
leniency0.857
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
83.5977%