Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTY1K21167D059XQYM57EVV

Run Details

Duration:
25.1s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Arcee AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Raven's Nest was busier than usual for a Tuesday night. Rory pushed through the crowd, her delivery bag bumping against people as she made her way to the bar. She caught Silas' eye and he nodded, already pouring her usual. "Busy tonight," she said, setting the bag on the bar. Silas slid a glass of red wine toward her. "Big game at the arena. Draws the crowds." Rory took a sip, scanning the room. Her gaze snagged on a man sitting alone in a corner booth, his back to the wall. Something about the set of his shoulders, the way he held his glass, sent a jolt through her. She knew him. The realization hit like a physical blow. Brendan. Her Brendan. The one who'd gotten away. Seven years. Seven years since she'd last seen that face, heard that voice. He'd been her everything back then, before life and distance and bad decisions had pulled them apart. Rory's hands trembled slightly as she set down her glass. She shouldn't. She knew she shouldn't. But the pull was too strong to resist. She made her way across the bar, heart pounding. As she approached the booth, Brendan looked up. His eyes widened in recognition. "Aurora?" His voice was rough, hesitant. She slid into the seat across from him. "Hi, Brendan." He studied her face, searching for the girl he'd known. "You look... different." "Do I?" She touched her hair self-consciously. It was shorter now, sleeker. More sophisticated. "You've changed." He shook his head. "But not really. You're still the same Aurora underneath." She wanted to laugh. If only he knew. If only he could see the secrets she carried, the darkness that lurked beneath her carefully crafted exterior. "What are you doing here, Brendan?" she asked softly. "Business trip. I'm in town for a few days." He leaned forward, elbows on the table. "I heard about your father. I'm sorry." Rory nodded, swallowing the lump in her throat. Her father's death last year had been sudden, unexpected. A heart attack in the middle of the night. She'd flown back to Cardiff for the funeral, but it hadn't been the same. Too much time had passed, too many bridges burned. "How's your mother?" Brendan asked. "She's good. Teaching part-time at the university." Rory fiddled with her wine glass. "And you? Married? Kids?" He shook his head. "No. Never found the right person, I guess." He smiled wryly. "You?" "No." The word came out sharper than she intended. "No, I didn't." An awkward silence fell between them. Rory studied Brendan's face, noting the lines around his eyes, the touch of grey at his temples. He was older, more serious. But still undeniably him. "What happened to us, Aurora?" he asked quietly. She looked away, unable to meet his gaze. "Life happened. We grew up." "Is that all it was? Growing up?" His voice was tinged with bitterness. "I waited for you, you know. I waited for years, hoping you'd come back." "I couldn't." The words tasted like ash in her mouth. "There were complications. Things I couldn't control." "Like what?" He reached across the table, catching her hand. "Tell me. Maybe I can help." Rory pulled away, heart racing. She couldn't tell him. Couldn't risk dragging him into her world of shadows and secrets. "It doesn't matter now. It's in the past." Brendan sighed, leaning back in his seat. "I never stopped loving you, you know. Even after all these years." The confession hung in the air between them, heavy with unspoken longing. Rory's throat tightened. "Brendan, I..." "Don't." He held up a hand. "Don't say it if you don't mean it. I've had enough of that to last a lifetime." She wanted to reach for him, to bridge the gap that seven years had created. But she couldn't. Not without risking everything she'd worked so hard to build. "I should go," she said, standing abruptly. "It was good to see you, Brendan. Take care of yourself." She turned and walked away, not daring to look back. She could feel his gaze on her, a physical weight pressing down on her shoulders. As she pushed through the crowd toward the door, she heard him call her name. But she didn't stop. Couldn't stop. Outside, the night air hit her like a slap. She leaned against the brick wall, trying to catch her breath. Her heart felt like it was trying to beat its way out of her chest. She'd changed. They'd both changed. But some things, it seemed, never did. The past had a way of sneaking up on you when you least expected it. And now, Rory knew, she'd have to face it head on. Whatever the cost.
created_at"2026-02-19T12:29:52.583Z" 2/19/2026, 12:29:52 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"she asked softly [softly]"
1"He smiled wryly [wryly]"
2"he asked quietly [quietly]"
3"The words tasted like [like]"
dialogueSentences33
tagDensity0.455
leniency0.909
rawRatio0.267
effectiveRatio0.242
74.65% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount789
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"carefully"
count1
3
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"really"
2"carefully"
3"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
42.97% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount789
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"scanning"
count1
1
word"trembled"
count1
2
word"pounding"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"tinged"
count1
5
word"racing"
count1
6
word"unspoken"
count1
7
word"could feel"
count1
8
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"scanning"
1"trembled"
2"pounding"
3"silence"
4"tinged"
5"racing"
6"unspoken"
7"could feel"
8"weight"
33.33% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
2
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
1"hung in the air"
2"sent a jolt through"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences79
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences79
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences96
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen19
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords787
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
74.75% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount598
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.51
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Tuesday1
Silas1
Brendan6
Rory9
Cardiff1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Silas"
2"Brendan"
3"Rory"
places
0"Cardiff"
globalScore0.747
windowScore0.833
38.89% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences45
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"tasted like ash in her mouth"
1"felt like it was trying to beat its way"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount787
matches(empty)
97.22% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences96
matches
0"seen that face, heard that voice"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs40
mean19.68
std10.48
cv0.533
sampleLengths
041
110
217
342
43
515
630
724
822
96
1010
1113
1214
1315
1426
159
1623
1749
185
1917
2016
2112
2232
238
2413
2527
2617
2716
2828
2919
3017
3123
3228
3318
3425
3521
3635
3712
3826
393
96.38% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences79
matches
0"been sudden"
1"was tinged"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs121
matches
0"was trying"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences96
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount151
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount2
adverbRatio0.013245033112582781
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.006622516556291391
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences96
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences96
mean8.2
std4.56
cv0.556
sampleLengths
011
119
211
310
49
58
67
717
818
93
107
111
122
135
142
1511
1617
1710
182
194
208
219
228
235
246
258
262
2710
283
297
305
312
326
339
344
354
3618
379
3816
397
408
419
429
4314
449
455
4613
474
484
4911
63.89% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.4270833333333333
totalSentences96
uniqueOpeners41
47.62% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences70
matches
0"Too much time had passed,"
ratio0.014
25.71% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount34
totalSentences70
matches
0"she said, setting the bag"
1"Her gaze snagged on a"
2"She knew him."
3"He'd been her everything back"
4"She knew she shouldn't."
5"She made her way across"
6"His eyes widened in recognition."
7"His voice was rough, hesitant"
8"She slid into the seat"
9"He studied her face, searching"
10"She touched her hair self-consciously"
11"It was shorter now, sleeker."
12"He shook his head"
13"She wanted to laugh."
14"she asked softly"
15"He leaned forward, elbows on"
16"Her father's death last year"
17"She'd flown back to Cardiff"
18"He shook his head."
19"He smiled wryly"
ratio0.486
67.14% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount55
totalSentences70
matches
0"The Raven's Nest was busier"
1"Rory pushed through the crowd,"
2"she said, setting the bag"
3"Silas slid a glass of"
4"Rory took a sip, scanning"
5"Her gaze snagged on a"
6"Something about the set of"
7"She knew him."
8"The realization hit like a"
9"The one who'd gotten away."
10"He'd been her everything back"
11"Rory's hands trembled slightly as"
12"She knew she shouldn't."
13"She made her way across"
14"His eyes widened in recognition."
15"His voice was rough, hesitant"
16"She slid into the seat"
17"He studied her face, searching"
18"She touched her hair self-consciously"
19"It was shorter now, sleeker."
ratio0.786
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences70
matches
0"If only he knew."
1"If only he could see"
ratio0.029
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences22
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences33
tagDensity0.152
leniency0.303
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.0852%