Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTY1KAP32K0BWJNJEZNZ5D5

Run Details

Duration:
51.9s
Cost:
$0.126240

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora's breath misted in the October air as she slipped through the gap in Richmond Park's fence. The metal scraped against her jacket, louder than it should have been in the pre-dawn silence. She'd done this before—plenty of times—but tonight the familiar path felt different. Wrong. The Heartstone pendant hung cold against her chest. It had been pulsing erratically for the past three days, growing stronger each night. She'd tried ignoring it, tried convincing herself it meant nothing, but the pull had become impossible to resist. Now here she was, creeping through Richmond Park at four in the morning like some kind of criminal. Her trainers squelched in the damp grass. The usual sounds of the park—distant traffic, the occasional fox cry—seemed muffled, as if she were walking through cotton wool. Even her own footsteps sounded strange, each step echoing a fraction of a second too late. She knew the way to the Grove by heart. Past the old oak with the lightning scar, around the cluster of hawthorn bushes, through the narrow deer track that most walkers missed entirely. But tonight, the landmarks looked unfamiliar in the darkness. The oak loomed larger than she remembered, its branches reaching down like grasping fingers. The hawthorns rustled without any wind to move them. Aurora paused, straining her ears. Nothing. Just her own breathing and the too-loud thump of her heartbeat. She touched the pendant through her shirt, hoping for some sign, some indication she was going the right way. The stone remained cold and still. The deer track appeared where it should, barely visible between two ancient yews. She hesitated at its entrance. In daylight, with the sun filtering through the canopy and birds singing overhead, this path felt magical. Now it gaped like a throat waiting to swallow her whole. "Get a grip, Rory," she muttered, her voice cracking the silence like a whip. She plunged into the darkness between the trees. The path wound deeper into the park than seemed possible. Richmond wasn't that big, she knew the dimensions, had walked every inch of it over the years. But the track kept going, twisting and turning until she lost all sense of direction. The trees pressed closer, their bark rough and unfamiliar when she reached out to steady herself. A branch snapped somewhere behind her. Aurora froze, one hand against a tree trunk that felt too warm, too much like skin. She held her breath, listening. Another crack, closer this time. Then silence again, but a different kind of silence—expectant, watching. She forced herself to move forward. Whatever had drawn her here, whatever the pendant wanted her to find, had to be in the Grove. She'd deal with everything else after. The standing stones appeared without warning. One moment she was pushing through undergrowth that caught at her clothes with thorny fingers, the next she stumbled into the clearing. The ancient oaks that formed the Grove's boundary stood in their eternal circle, but they looked wrong in the darkness. Taller. Older. Their trunks twisted in patterns that hurt to follow with her eyes. The pendant flared hot against her skin. Aurora yanked it out from under her shirt, hissing as the chain burned her fingers. The crimson stone blazed with inner light, casting strange shadows that danced and writhed across the standing stones. The light revealed things she wished it hadn't—symbols carved deep into the oak bark, symbols that seemed to move and reshape themselves as she watched. The wildflowers that always bloomed here were still present, but their petals looked black in the pendant's red glow. They swayed without any breeze, all bending toward her as if drawn by invisible strings. Something rustled in the undergrowth beyond the stones. Aurora spun toward the sound, the pendant's light swinging wild arcs through the darkness. Nothing there. But the rustling came again from her left. Then behind her. Then from all directions at once, a dry whisper of movement that raised every hair on her arms. The flowers were moving. Not swaying now but crawling, their roots pulling free from the earth with wet, sucking sounds. They crept toward her on pale tendrils that looked too much like fingers, too much like— A hand clamped down on her shoulder. Aurora bit back a scream, whirling around with her fist raised. Nobody there. But the pressure remained, five distinct points digging into her flesh through her jacket. She twisted away, stumbling toward the center of the Grove. The pendant's light flickered. In the moments of darkness between each pulse, she caught glimpses of things that shouldn't exist. Shapes between the trees, tall and wrong and watching. Eyes that reflected the red light in ways human eyes never could. A figure standing just outside the stone circle, patient as death, familiar in a way that made her stomach clench with dread. Time felt thick here, syrupy. She tried to run but her legs moved as if through water. The clearing seemed to stretch, the standing stones receding even as she struggled toward them. The flowers had given up all pretense now, slithering across the ground in a tide of black petals and pale roots. The pendant burned hotter. Its light pulsed faster, like a frightened heartbeat. Each flash revealed more—the symbols on the stones writhing with purpose, the spaces between the trees filled with watchers, the very air rippling with something vast and hungry pressing against the boundaries of the world. Aurora reached the edge of the stone circle. Her hand touched the nearest oak, and pain lanced up her arm. The bark was ice-cold and burning hot at once, and beneath it she felt something pulse in rhythm with the pendant. Behind her, footsteps. Slow. Deliberate. Getting closer. She didn't turn around. Couldn't turn around. The pendant's light was failing now, each pulse weaker than the last. In the growing darkness, the Grove transformed. The wildflowers rose like a wave, the watching figures stepped forward from between the trees, and whatever walked behind her drew close enough that she could feel its breath—cold and damp and smelling of earth—on the back of her neck. The heartstone gave one final, brilliant flash. In that moment of perfect clarity, Aurora saw the Grove for what it truly was. Saw what waited just beyond the veil. Saw why the pendant had brought her here, to this place between worlds where the boundaries grew thin. The light died. Darkness rushed in like water through a broken dam. And in that darkness, something smiled.
total_cost0.12624

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences1
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
90.90% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1099
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
9.01% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1099
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"silence"
count4
1
word"familiar"
count2
2
word"footsteps"
count2
3
word"echoing"
count1
4
word"loomed"
count1
5
word"sense of"
count1
6
word"whisper"
count1
7
word"flickered"
count1
8
word"pulse"
count3
9
word"stomach"
count1
10
word"pulsed"
count1
11
word"could feel"
count1
12
word"perfect"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"familiar"
2"footsteps"
3"echoing"
4"loomed"
5"sense of"
6"whisper"
7"flickered"
8"pulse"
9"stomach"
10"pulsed"
11"could feel"
12"perfect"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences96
matches
0"h with dread"
98.21% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences96
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences96
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen42
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1088
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions21
wordCount1084
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity0.74
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
October1
Richmond3
Park2
Heartstone1
Grove6
Aurora8
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Aurora"
places
0"October"
1"Richmond"
2"Park"
3"Grove"
globalScore1
windowScore1
48.65% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences74
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"seemed muffled as if she were walking through cotton wool"
1"seemed possible"
2"symbols that seemed to move and reshape themselves as she watched"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.919
wordCount1088
matches
0"Not swaying now but crawling, their roots pulling free from the earth with wet"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences96
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs31
mean35.1
std21.04
cv0.6
sampleLengths
046
158
243
365
442
546
614
78
858
96
1036
1130
1262
137
1458
1534
168
1745
1836
197
2037
2163
2253
2347
2441
257
2666
2747
283
299
306
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences96
matches(empty)
11.68% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs177
matches
0"was, creeping"
1"were walking"
2"was going"
3"was pushing"
4"was failing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences96
ratio0.073
matches
0"She'd done this before—plenty of times—but tonight the familiar path felt different."
1"The usual sounds of the park—distant traffic, the occasional fox cry—seemed muffled, as if she were walking through cotton wool."
2"Then silence again, but a different kind of silence—expectant, watching."
3"The light revealed things she wished it hadn't—symbols carved deep into the oak bark, symbols that seemed to move and reshape themselves as she watched."
4"They crept toward her on pale tendrils that looked too much like fingers, too much like—"
5"Each flash revealed more—the symbols on the stones writhing with purpose, the spaces between the trees filled with watchers, the very air rippling with something vast and hungry pressing against the boundaries of the world."
6"The wildflowers rose like a wave, the watching figures stepped forward from between the trees, and whatever walked behind her drew close enough that she could feel its breath—cold and damp and smelling of earth—on the back of her neck."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1095
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.031050228310502283
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.0036529680365296802
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences96
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences96
mean11.33
std7.23
cv0.638
sampleLengths
017
116
212
31
48
514
618
718
87
920
1016
119
1224
139
1414
159
165
171
1811
1919
206
2113
225
2317
2411
2514
268
2710
2817
2915
3016
316
3216
335
345
3510
366
3718
386
396
4022
4120
421
431
4412
457
4615
4718
4825
4919
60.07% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.4166666666666667
totalSentences96
uniqueOpeners40
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences87
matches
0"Even her own footsteps sounded"
1"Just her own breathing and"
2"Then silence again, but a"
3"Then behind her."
4"Then from all directions at"
ratio0.057
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences87
matches
0"She'd done this before—plenty of"
1"It had been pulsing erratically"
2"She'd tried ignoring it, tried"
3"Her trainers squelched in the"
4"She knew the way to"
5"She touched the pendant through"
6"She hesitated at its entrance."
7"she muttered, her voice cracking"
8"She plunged into the darkness"
9"She held her breath, listening."
10"She forced herself to move"
11"She'd deal with everything else"
12"Their trunks twisted in patterns"
13"They swayed without any breeze,"
14"They crept toward her on"
15"She twisted away, stumbling toward"
16"She tried to run but"
17"Its light pulsed faster, like"
18"Her hand touched the nearest"
19"She didn't turn around."
ratio0.23
92.18% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount64
totalSentences87
matches
0"Aurora's breath misted in the"
1"The metal scraped against her"
2"She'd done this before—plenty of"
3"The Heartstone pendant hung cold"
4"It had been pulsing erratically"
5"She'd tried ignoring it, tried"
6"Her trainers squelched in the"
7"The usual sounds of the"
8"She knew the way to"
9"The oak loomed larger than"
10"The hawthorns rustled without any"
11"Aurora paused, straining her ears."
12"She touched the pendant through"
13"The stone remained cold and"
14"The deer track appeared where"
15"She hesitated at its entrance."
16"she muttered, her voice cracking"
17"She plunged into the darkness"
18"The path wound deeper into"
19"Richmond wasn't that big, she"
ratio0.736
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences87
matches
0"Now here she was, creeping"
1"Now it gaped like a"
ratio0.023
57.14% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences50
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"The usual sounds of the park—distant traffic, the occasional fox cry—seemed muffled, as if she were walking through cotton wool."
1"The oak loomed larger than she remembered, its branches reaching down like grasping fingers."
2"She touched the pendant through her shirt, hoping for some sign, some indication she was going the right way."
3"Not swaying now but crawling, their roots pulling free from the earth with wet, sucking sounds."
4"In the moments of darkness between each pulse, she caught glimpses of things that shouldn't exist."
5"A figure standing just outside the stone circle, patient as death, familiar in a way that made her stomach clench with dread."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she muttered, her voice cracking the silence like a whip"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences1
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio1
78.9281%