| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 13 | | tagDensity | 0.077 | | leniency | 0.154 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 85.10% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1007 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "really" | | 2 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 40.42% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1007 | | totalAiIsms | 12 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "throbbed" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "footsteps" | | 3 | "glistening" | | 4 | "whisper" | | 5 | "calculated" | | 6 | "rhythmic" | | 7 | "oppressive" | | 8 | "weight" | | 9 | "echoing" | | 10 | "warmth" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 107 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 107 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 119 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 21 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 1 | | totalWords | 997 | | ratio | 0.001 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 8 | | wordCount | 910 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 0.22 | | worstName | "Fae" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 0.5 | | worstWindowName | "Fae" | | discoveredNames | | London | 1 | | Doc | 1 | | Martens | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Silas | 1 | | Fae | 2 | | Figure | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Martens" | | 1 | "Silas" | | 2 | "Figure" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 71 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed impossibly loud in the absolute stillness" | | 1 | "smelled like rotting meat and stale sugar" | | 2 | "as if waiting to strike" | | 3 | "looked like grasping fingers" | | 4 | "looked like it was woven from mist and mo" |
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| 99.70% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 1.003 | | wordCount | 997 | | matches | | 0 | "Not a sprint, but a scramble, pushing through the brush" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 119 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 55 | | mean | 18.13 | | std | 14.12 | | cv | 0.779 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 37 | | 1 | 36 | | 2 | 4 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 66 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 39 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 47 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 20 | | 12 | 46 | | 13 | 25 | | 14 | 1 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 1 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 1 | | 20 | 29 | | 21 | 38 | | 22 | 18 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 28 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 30 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 23 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 37 | | 33 | 20 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 19 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 25 | | 41 | 30 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 39 | | 44 | 17 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 33 | | 49 | 21 |
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| 88.87% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 107 | | matches | | 0 | "was supposed" | | 1 | "was gone" | | 2 | "were ringed" | | 3 | "was woven" | | 4 | "was gone" |
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| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 8 | | totalVerbs | 164 | | matches | | 0 | "was starting" | | 1 | "was pulsing" | | 2 | "were breathing" | | 3 | "was beating" | | 4 | "were staring" | | 5 | "was closing" | | 6 | "were moving" | | 7 | "were skittering" |
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| 46.82% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 119 | | ratio | 0.034 | | matches | | 0 | "Yu-Fei’s delivery wasn't just a tip; it was leverage." | | 1 | "The path through the thick undergrowth—the path I’d walked ten minutes ago—was gone." | | 2 | "The cool, calculated lawyer personality I usually wore like a coat—expensive, tailored, and dismissive—was starting to feel threadbare." | | 3 | "Not real fire—orange flame that hung in the air without heat, casting long, stretching shadows that looked like grasping fingers." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 918 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 33 | | adverbRatio | 0.03594771241830065 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006535947712418301 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 119 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 119 | | mean | 8.38 | | std | 5.15 | | cv | 0.614 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 9 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 1 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 20 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 20 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 15 | | 40 | 1 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 1 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 1 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 45.10% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.31092436974789917 | | totalSentences | 119 | | uniqueOpeners | 37 | |
| 68.73% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "Suddenly, the path opened up" | | 1 | "Just smooth, hollow sockets where" |
| | ratio | 0.021 | |
| 55.05% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 40 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "My breath fogged the cold" | | 1 | "I squeezed my eyes shut," | | 2 | "I stood in a clearing" | | 3 | "I spat the words into" | | 4 | "I checked my watch." | | 5 | "I had to move." | | 6 | "I walked toward the ancient" | | 7 | "My footsteps faltered." | | 8 | "I froze, hand drifting toward" | | 9 | "It smelled like rotting meat" | | 10 | "I reached for my phone," | | 11 | "I shoved the phone back" | | 12 | "It was hot enough to" | | 13 | "I took another step." | | 14 | "They leaned in, their stems" | | 15 | "It was behind me." | | 16 | "I spun around, breath catching." | | 17 | "I called out again, a" | | 18 | "My voice shook." | | 19 | "They looked different now." |
| | ratio | 0.412 | |
| 16.70% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 86 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "My breath fogged the cold" | | 1 | "The pendant, heavy and warm" | | 2 | "I squeezed my eyes shut," | | 3 | "I stood in a clearing" | | 4 | "The ground beneath my Doc" | | 5 | "I spat the words into" | | 6 | "The silence swallowed them without" | | 7 | "I checked my watch." | | 8 | "The hands were frozen." | | 9 | "Fae magic was a tricky" | | 10 | "An hour inside could be" | | 11 | "I had to move." | | 12 | "The contact was supposed to" | | 13 | "Yu-Fei’s delivery wasn't just a" | | 14 | "The clearing felt watched." | | 15 | "I walked toward the ancient" | | 16 | "My footsteps faltered." | | 17 | "The path through the thick" | | 18 | "The bushes stretched impossibly high," | | 19 | "Something skittered to my left." |
| | ratio | 0.887 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "If the paperwork didn't match," | | 1 | "To my right, the faint" | | 2 | "Even when the wind howled" |
| | ratio | 0.031 | |
| 29.22% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 44 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "I stood in a clearing of wildflowers that were far too purple, far too bright for a London night." | | 1 | "The ground beneath my Doc Martens crunched, a sound that seemed impossibly loud in the absolute stillness." | | 2 | "They leaned in, their stems flexing like tense muscles, rustling as if waiting to strike." | | 3 | "It moved with a slow, rhythmic heaving, as if the stones themselves were breathing." | | 4 | "Not real fire—orange flame that hung in the air without heat, casting long, stretching shadows that looked like grasping fingers." | | 5 | "Glimmering, shifting masses of mist and bone that dragged limbs too long across the earth." | | 6 | "The trees were moving, their branches locking together to form a cage of wood and thorn." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "I shouted, my voice cracking" |
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| 73.08% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 13 | | tagDensity | 0.077 | | leniency | 0.154 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.154 | |