Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTY256ERHY8A9Z973CSP2P7

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Duration:
17.8s
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$0.009315
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain hammered the pavement in sheets that caught the orange glow of the streetlights. Detective Harlow Quinn's worn leather watch read 11:47 PM as she cut through the intersection at Tottenham Court Road, her trained eyes tracking the figure who'd bolted from the alley behind The Raven's Nest twenty seconds ago. She'd been nursing a bitter coffee in that dim bar when the suspect—a lanky man with a scarred neck and nervous hands—had spotted her and run. Her legs burned as she pushed harder. The military precision that had defined her entire career kept her breathing controlled, methodical, even as rage curled in her chest. Eighteen years on the force meant her reflexes hadn't dulled, but the city had changed. It had grown teeth. Things moved through London's streets now that didn't register in any crime database, and Quinn knew better than most that the official reports didn't even skim the surface of what happened in the dark. The suspect vaulted over a low wall separating a parking lot from the pedestrian walkway. Quinn took it in stride, her boots hitting the wet tarmac with precision. He was heading northeast, toward Camden. Away from the main roads. Away from witnesses. Away from help. She couldn't let him disappear into the warren of backstreets and abandoned buildings. Not tonight. Not when the lead on Morris's case had finally cracked open. Her dead partner's name was tattooed on the inside of her left wrist, hidden beneath the worn leather of her watch. Three years of closed cases that solved nothing. Three years of watching the official investigation stall while everyone on the force moved on to fresh bodies and open files. The rain soaked through her coat as she pursued him down a narrow alley that cut between a shuttered electronics shop and a residential building with dark windows. His breathing came hard now. He was slowing. Quinn pushed herself faster. The alley opened onto Camden High Street, but the suspect didn't cross it. Instead, he twisted left toward the abandoned railway bridge that spanned the old Tube depot. Quinn knew this area. She'd walked these streets during her first year as a detective, back when the Underground maintenance access points were properly sealed. Back when the city made sense. He disappeared under the bridge's shadow. Quinn followed without hesitation, her hand instinctively moving to the baton at her belt. The concrete beneath the bridge was slick with moss and something darker that smelled like rust. Water dripped from the corroded girders above, creating a percussion of small splashes that echoed off the stone. The suspect's footsteps had stopped. She slowed her pace, breathing through her nose. The tactical part of her mind—the part trained at Hendon all those years ago—kicked into place. He was either cornered or waiting to ambush. "Move and I'll charge you with resisting arrest," Quinn called out, her voice steady despite the adrenaline spike. A figure emerged from behind a crumbling pillar thirty feet ahead. The scarred-neck man held his hands up, but his eyes weren't on Quinn. They were fixed on something below them. On the ground. Quinn's eyes adjusted to the deeper darkness beneath the bridge. Her breath caught. The stone floor had changed. Where cracked tarmac should have been, a metal grating existed instead—the kind that covered old ventilation shafts. But this one was exposed and, more importantly, it was open. Wide open. A ladder descended into absolute darkness, and from the gap came a faint luminescence. Not electric. Older. The kind of light that came from sources that shouldn't exist. "I can't help you," the suspect said, his voice cracking like a boy's. "If you go down there, you won't come back the same." "Get on your knees. Hands behind your head," Quinn commanded, but her eyes remained fixed on that opening. She'd heard whispers. In the bars where off-duty officers drank too much. In Morris's notes that she'd found hidden beneath his floorboards after his death. In the way certain crime scenes didn't add up, where evidence disappeared and witnesses retracted statements that should have been airtight. The suspect knelt, but he didn't comply with the hands. Instead, he looked at her directly, and Quinn saw something in his expression that made her jaw tighten. It wasn't fear. It was pity. "There's a market down there," he said quietly. "The kind that doesn't exist on any map. Moves every month. The people who run it, they're not like us, Detective. They never were. Your partner found that out." Morris. Quinn's fingers twitched. She should arrest this man. Should haul him back to the station and book him through proper channels. Should let the system work the way it was supposed to work, the way she'd devoted her entire life to making work. But the system had failed Morris. The system had filed his case as a closed accidental death and moved on. "How do you know my partner?" Quinn stepped closer, her body automatically maintaining the distance required for tactical safety, though her mind was fragmenting under the weight of possibility. "Everyone knows about Morris," the suspect replied. "He tried to expose them. Tried to bring back evidence. They didn't like that. The things down there, they protect their own. They have ways of making people stop asking questions." Beneath the bridge, the luminescence pulsed like a slow heartbeat. Quinn's tactical training screamed at her to secure the suspect, call for backup, follow protocol. But protocol had kept her from finding Morris's real killer for three years. Protocol had kept her partnered with bureaucrats who'd rather file falsified reports than acknowledge that something fundamental had shifted in their city. She pulled out her phone. No signal. The rain had intensified, hammering the bridge above them with rhythmic fury. "Stand up," Quinn said. "You're coming with me." "Where?" The suspect stood, confusion crossing his scarred features. "If you mean up, back to the street, I'll be dead before you get me to the station. If you mean down, you'll learn things that'll destroy everything you know about how the world works. There's no winning play here, Detective." Quinn moved closer, close enough to see his pupils were dilated. Close enough to smell the chemical residue on his clothes—something acrid and sulfurous that didn't match any standard narcotics in her database. Close enough to see that his hands were shaking so badly he couldn't keep them steady. She'd spent eighteen years building a career on hard evidence and procedural certainty. But somewhere in those three years following Morris's death, she'd also built something else: a tolerance for the impossible. "Tell me," Quinn said, her voice cutting through the rain's percussion. "What's down there?" The suspect's laugh was hollow, mirthless. "You really want to know? Or do you want to stay up here where everything still makes sense?" Below them, through the opened grating, that strange light continued its patient pulse. Quinn could hear something now—the faint murmur of voices, the rustle of movement. A market. A hidden one. The kind of place where men like her partner went and never came back the same. If they came back at all. She descended the ladder before she could change her mind.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
75.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences16
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.125
95.89% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1216
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
54.77% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1216
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"methodical"
count1
1
word"database"
count2
2
word"echoed"
count1
3
word"footsteps"
count1
4
word"electric"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"pulsed"
count1
7
word"rhythmic"
count1
8
word"standard"
count1
9
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"methodical"
1"database"
2"echoed"
3"footsteps"
4"electric"
5"weight"
6"pulsed"
7"rhythmic"
8"standard"
9"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences95
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences95
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences102
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1207
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
62.62% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions38
wordCount1030
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity1.75
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn18
Tottenham1
Court1
Road1
Raven1
Nest1
London1
Camden2
Morris6
High1
Street1
Tube1
Underground1
Hendon1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Raven"
3"Morris"
places
0"Tottenham"
1"Court"
2"Road"
3"London"
4"Camden"
5"High"
6"Street"
7"Hendon"
globalScore0.626
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences66
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"smelled like rust"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1207
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences102
matches
0"acknowledge that something"
1"see that his"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs36
mean33.53
std21.83
cv0.651
sampleLengths
078
181
242
33
476
536
64
759
86
953
1032
1118
1234
1313
1463
1524
1618
1746
1834
1937
201
2143
2220
2329
2438
2560
2619
278
2850
2949
3032
3114
3224
3347
346
3510
90.49% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences95
matches
0"was tattooed"
1"were fixed"
2"was supposed"
3"were dilated"
42.21% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs169
matches
0"was heading"
1"was slowing"
2"was fragmenting"
3"were shaking"
2.80% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences102
ratio0.049
matches
0"She'd been nursing a bitter coffee in that dim bar when the suspect—a lanky man with a scarred neck and nervous hands—had spotted her and run."
1"The tactical part of her mind—the part trained at Hendon all those years ago—kicked into place."
2"Where cracked tarmac should have been, a metal grating existed instead—the kind that covered old ventilation shafts."
3"Close enough to smell the chemical residue on his clothes—something acrid and sulfurous that didn't match any standard narcotics in her database."
4"Quinn could hear something now—the faint murmur of voices, the rustle of movement."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1039
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.026948989412897015
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.008662175168431183
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences102
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences102
mean11.83
std8.33
cv0.704
sampleLengths
015
137
226
37
421
515
64
734
815
913
106
115
123
133
1413
152
1611
1721
188
1921
2028
215
223
234
2413
2515
264
2721
286
296
3014
3116
3218
335
348
3516
368
3718
3811
3913
407
413
4210
433
445
4517
4611
472
4814
492
58.82% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.4117647058823529
totalSentences102
uniqueOpeners42
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences87
matches
0"Away from the main roads."
1"Away from witnesses."
2"Away from help."
3"Instead, he twisted left toward"
4"Instead, he looked at her"
ratio0.057
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences87
matches
0"She'd been nursing a bitter"
1"Her legs burned as she"
2"It had grown teeth."
3"He was heading northeast, toward"
4"She couldn't let him disappear"
5"Her dead partner's name was"
6"His breathing came hard now."
7"He was slowing."
8"She'd walked these streets during"
9"He disappeared under the bridge's"
10"She slowed her pace, breathing"
11"He was either cornered or"
12"They were fixed on something"
13"Her breath caught."
14"She'd heard whispers."
15"It wasn't fear."
16"It was pity."
17"he said quietly"
18"She should arrest this man."
19"She pulled out her phone."
ratio0.253
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount62
totalSentences87
matches
0"The rain hammered the pavement"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn's worn leather"
2"She'd been nursing a bitter"
3"Her legs burned as she"
4"The military precision that had"
5"It had grown teeth."
6"Things moved through London's streets"
7"The suspect vaulted over a"
8"Quinn took it in stride,"
9"He was heading northeast, toward"
10"She couldn't let him disappear"
11"Her dead partner's name was"
12"The rain soaked through her"
13"His breathing came hard now."
14"He was slowing."
15"Quinn pushed herself faster."
16"The alley opened onto Camden"
17"Quinn knew this area."
18"She'd walked these streets during"
19"Back when the city made"
ratio0.713
57.47% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences87
matches
0"If they came back at"
ratio0.011
55.39% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences49
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn's worn leather watch read 11:47 PM as she cut through the intersection at Tottenham Court Road, her trained eyes tracking the figure who'…"
1"The military precision that had defined her entire career kept her breathing controlled, methodical, even as rage curled in her chest."
2"Instead, he twisted left toward the abandoned railway bridge that spanned the old Tube depot."
3"In the way certain crime scenes didn't add up, where evidence disappeared and witnesses retracted statements that should have been airtight."
4"Instead, he looked at her directly, and Quinn saw something in his expression that made her jaw tighten."
5"Protocol had kept her partnered with bureaucrats who'd rather file falsified reports than acknowledge that something fundamental had shifted in their city."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Quinn called out, her voice steady despite the adrenaline spike"
1"the suspect said, his voice cracking like a boy's"
2"Quinn commanded, but her eyes remained fixed on that opening"
3"Quinn said, her voice cutting through the rain's percussion"
87.50% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Quinn called out (call out)"
dialogueSentences16
tagDensity0.313
leniency0.625
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.125
82.7656%