Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTY2G336WSWJN3W9TJWZ523

Run Details

Duration:
1m 37s
Cost:
$0.001528
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air in Richmond Park had turned cold and sharp, the kind that bit at any exposed skin. Rory zipped her leather jacket higher, the silver chain of the Heartstone pendant cold against her throat. The pendant itself, a deep crimson stone the size of her thumbnail, rested under her shirt, a familiar, inert weight. She’d come here because of a feeling, a persistent, nagging pull that had started hours ago, a faint warmth from the stone that had grown into a persistent thrum against her chest. She’d followed it on her delivery bike, long after her shift at the Golden Empress had ended, weaving through the darkening streets of London until the urban sprawl gave way to the vast, shadowed expanse of the park. Now, on foot, she pushed through a thicket of hawthorn, its branches scratching at her arms. The map on her phone had flickered and died ten minutes ago, the signal dropping to nothing. And then she saw them. The standing stones. They weren’t on any map. Three ancient oaks, twisted and gnarled, formed a rough triangle around a small clearing. They were too perfectly placed to be natural. This was it. The Fae Grove. Silas had muttered about it once, late one night after closing, a story she’d dismissed as drunken rambling. A place where time went funny. She stepped between two of the massive trees, and the world shifted. The sounds of the park—the distant hum of the A-road, the rustle of a fox in the undergrowth—vanished. It was replaced by a profound, ringing silence, the kind that felt heavy and expectant. The air lost its chill, becoming unnervingly temperate, like a perfect spring evening. And the smells… the damp earth and decaying leaves were gone, replaced by the overwhelming perfume of night-blooming flowers. Wildflowers, she realized, looking down. Dozens of varieties carpeted the clearing, all in full, impossible bloom under a sky where no moon shone, yet the grove was lit by a soft, sourceless twilight. This was wrong. All of it was wrong. The pull from the pendant was stronger here, a steady, warm pulse against her sternum, a silent drumbeat guiding her deeper in. She wrapped her fingers around the stone through her shirt, its warmth a small comfort in the overwhelming strangeness. She took another step, her boots making no sound on the velvety moss. The silence was beginning to press in on her ears. It was too complete. No wind sighed through the branches of the guardian oaks. No insects chirped. Nothing. Then, a sound. A faint, dry rustle, like old parchment being slowly unfolded. It came from her left, somewhere deep in the ring of trees that bordered the clearing. She froze, her head snapping toward the noise. Her heart hammered against her ribs, a frantic counter-rhythm to the pendant’s calm pulse. Nothing moved. The shadows between the trees were deep and solid. She forced a slow breath out, the air catching in her throat. Her mind, usually so quick to offer solutions, provided nothing but static. Out-of-box thinking required a box, and this place had none. Another rustle. Closer this time. It wasn’t a natural sound. It wasn’t an animal moving through undergrowth. It was sharper, more deliberate. A scraping. Her hand fell from the pendant, clenching into a fist at her side. She turned slowly, trying to pinpoint the source. The sourceless light seemed to play tricks, making the shadows twitch and writhe at the periphery of her vision. She kept seeing movement, a flicker of something pale and long just beyond the circle of oaks, but when she looked directly, there was only stillness. The warmth of the Heartstone intensified, becoming almost hot. It wasn’t a comforting warmth anymore; it was a warning. A beacon. She was the beacon. The realization landed in her gut like a stone. She hadn’t been pulled here. She’d been led. A soft, wet click echoed from directly behind her. Rory spun around, a gasp tearing from her lips. The clearing was empty. The flowers swayed gently, though there was no wind. Her breath came in short, sharp clouds in the peculiar air. She was not alone. The certainty of it was a physical weight on her shoulders. Something was here with her, something that moved in the gaps between her blinks, that hid just outside the range of her focused sight. A low, melodic hum began, so faint she felt it more than heard it, a vibration in the soles of her feet. It was a tune without a melody, a discordant series of notes that felt ancient and deeply wrong. It seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere at once, weaving through the trees, threading between the flower stems. She took a step back, toward the entrance between the oaks. Her escape route. Another step. The humming stopped. The silence that rushed back in was worse, thicker, charged with a malevolent attention. She could feel it watching her now, whatever it was. The pretense of hiding was over. From the corner of her right eye, a figure detached itself from the deeper darkness of an oak’s trunk. It was tall and impossibly thin, a man-shaped cutout of shadow that didn’t move so much as it unfolded, rising to its full height in one smooth, silent motion. She didn’t dare look at it directly. Every instinct screamed that to acknowledge it fully would be a mistake. She kept walking backward, her eyes fixed on a point in the empty air just ahead of her, her peripheral vision locked on the thing standing motionless twenty feet to her right. It hadn't moved again. It just stood, a stain on the twilight. A whisper, papery and close, brushed against her ear. “Laila.” Her blood went cold. A name from a life she’d buried. A name Evan had used when his hands were around her throat and his words were sweet and poisonous. No one here could know that name. She broke. She ran. She sprinted for the gap between the stones, her boots finally finding sound, thudding dully on the moss. The air resisted her, thick as water. The gap, only ten yards away, seemed to stretch, the trees leaning inward to block her path. A rustle of dry leaves to her left, keeping pace. A flicker of that same tall, thin darkness matching her stride for stride without seeming to move at all. The pendant was burning hot against her skin now, a brand of panic. She wasn’t going to make it. The exit was receding. The grove was closing in. She skidded to a halt, chest heaving, and whirled around, finally forcing herself to look, to confront the thing hunting her. The clearing was empty. The standing stones stood sentinel. The flowers bloomed. The soft, false twilight glowed. There was no tall figure. No whispering presence. Just the overwhelming, silent wrongness. And then she saw it. Lying on the moss where she had just been standing was a single, perfect white flower. It hadn’t been there a moment ago. As she watched, the petals began to curl inward, blackening at the edges, withering and crumbling to dust in the space of a single heartbeat. The Heartstone pendant gave one last, searing pulse of heat against her chest and fell still, cold and inert once more. The exit between the oaks was just a normal gap again. Beyond it, she could see the familiar, moonlit outline of Richmond Park. The distant sound of traffic returned, a mundane and beautiful symphony. Rory didn’t move. She stood rooted to the spot, her hands trembling, staring at the pile of black dust that had been a flower. The thing was gone. But it had known her. It had called her by a dead name. And it had let her go. She turned and walked, then ran, out of the grove and back into the world, the feeling of its attention lingering on her skin like a cold touch long after the trees had disappeared behind her.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
85.16% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1348
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count2
2
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"slowly"
2"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1348
totalAiIsms32
found
0
word"familiar"
count2
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"warmth"
count4
3
word"flickered"
count1
4
word"profound"
count1
5
word"silence"
count3
6
word"chill"
count1
7
word"perfect"
count2
8
word"pulse"
count3
9
word"clenching"
count1
10
word"flicker"
count2
11
word"comforting"
count1
12
word"beacon"
count2
13
word"echoed"
count1
14
word"charged"
count1
15
word"could feel"
count1
16
word"whisper"
count1
17
word"sentinel"
count1
18
word"searing"
count1
19
word"symphony"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"weight"
2"warmth"
3"flickered"
4"profound"
5"silence"
6"chill"
7"perfect"
8"pulse"
9"clenching"
10"flicker"
11"comforting"
12"beacon"
13"echoed"
14"charged"
15"could feel"
16"whisper"
17"sentinel"
18"searing"
19"symphony"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"blood ran cold"
count1
highlights
0"blood went cold"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences125
matches(empty)
97.14% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences125
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences126
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1343
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions16
wordCount1342
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.22
worstName"Heartstone"
maxWindowNameDensity0.5
worstWindowName"Richmond"
discoveredNames
Richmond2
Park2
Heartstone3
Golden1
Empress1
London1
Fae1
Grove1
Evan1
Rory3
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Empress"
2"Evan"
3"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Golden"
3"London"
4"Fae"
5"Grove"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences80
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1343
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences126
matches
0"know that name"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs43
mean31.23
std23.55
cv0.754
sampleLengths
087
171
28
357
412
598
68
741
841
93
1048
1111
1234
1324
1466
1521
164
1717
189
199
2013
2150
2259
2316
243
2530
2667
2744
2810
2937
304
3142
3229
3313
3415
3521
364
3726
3853
3921
4034
4147
4236
88.42% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount6
totalSentences125
matches
0"was replaced"
1"were gone"
2"was lit"
3"been pulled"
4"been led"
5"was gone"
76.54% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs216
matches
0"was beginning"
1"was burning"
2"was receding"
3"was closing"
97.51% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences126
ratio0.016
matches
0"The sounds of the park—the distant hum of the A-road, the rustle of a fox in the undergrowth—vanished."
1"It wasn’t a comforting warmth anymore; it was a warning."
86.68% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1349
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"same tall, thin darkness"
1"single, perfect white flower."
adverbCount56
adverbRatio0.04151223128243143
lyAdverbCount17
lyAdverbRatio0.012601927353595256
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences126
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences126
mean10.66
std7.88
cv0.74
sampleLengths
018
117
220
332
438
516
617
75
83
95
1014
118
123
133
1418
156
1612
1718
1815
1913
203
2116
225
2328
243
255
2622
2719
2813
2910
304
3110
323
331
343
3510
3616
378
3814
392
409
4112
4212
4310
442
453
465
477
485
492
34.13% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats20
diversityRatio0.24603174603174602
totalSentences126
uniqueOpeners31
56.98% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences117
matches
0"Then, a sound."
1"Just the overwhelming, silent wrongness."
ratio0.017
69.57% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount44
totalSentences117
matches
0"She’d come here because of"
1"She’d followed it on her"
2"They weren’t on any map."
3"They were too perfectly placed"
4"She stepped between two of"
5"It was replaced by a"
6"She wrapped her fingers around"
7"She took another step, her"
8"It was too complete."
9"It came from her left,"
10"She froze, her head snapping"
11"Her heart hammered against her"
12"She forced a slow breath"
13"Her mind, usually so quick"
14"It wasn’t a natural sound."
15"It wasn’t an animal moving"
16"It was sharper, more deliberate."
17"Her hand fell from the"
18"She turned slowly, trying to"
19"She kept seeing movement, a"
ratio0.376
49.74% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount96
totalSentences117
matches
0"The air in Richmond Park"
1"Rory zipped her leather jacket"
2"The pendant itself, a deep"
3"She’d come here because of"
4"She’d followed it on her"
5"The map on her phone"
6"The standing stones."
7"They weren’t on any map."
8"They were too perfectly placed"
9"This was it."
10"The Fae Grove."
11"Silas had muttered about it"
12"A place where time went"
13"She stepped between two of"
14"The sounds of the park—the"
15"It was replaced by a"
16"The air lost its chill,"
17"the damp earth and decaying"
18"Wildflowers, she realized, looking down."
19"Dozens of varieties carpeted the"
ratio0.821
42.74% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences117
matches
0"Now, on foot, she pushed"
ratio0.009
81.28% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences58
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"She’d come here because of a feeling, a persistent, nagging pull that had started hours ago, a faint warmth from the stone that had grown into a persistent thru…"
1"Something was here with her, something that moved in the gaps between her blinks, that hid just outside the range of her focused sight."
2"The silence that rushed back in was worse, thicker, charged with a malevolent attention."
3"It was tall and impossibly thin, a man-shaped cutout of shadow that didn’t move so much as it unfolded, rising to its full height in one smooth, silent motion."
4"She stood rooted to the spot, her hands trembling, staring at the pile of black dust that had been a flower."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
85.5297%