Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTY2HJ85923556NDR3TY5RP

Run Details

Duration:
1m 29s
Cost:
$0.003871
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The night pressed in, thick with damp air that tasted like rain and rust. Streetlights blinked in and out as if someone flicked a switch, and the city’s distant thrum fell away the moment Aurora Carter stepped through the boundary of Richmond Park. The Fae Grove lay a little off the main path, a pocket of stillness where the world seemed to tilt a fraction, as if someone had pressed pause on a page and forgot to return the bookmark. Her breath fogged in a pale ribbon, curling around the chain of the Heartstone Pendant at her throat. The crimson gem glowed faintly, not with light so much as a trace of warmth, a pulse she could feel in her throat, as if the stone and her pulse kept odd time with each other. She had worn it since receiving it from an unknown benefactor, a strange weight of trust around her neck, and tonight it pulled with a curious insistence she hadn’t learned to ignore yet. The grove opened before her, a clearing ringed by old oaks whose branches intertwined like the ribs of a hidden chest. In the center stood the ancient oak standing stones, marks of a boundary between worlds. The park’s ordinary sounds—the distant murmur of a late jogger, a dog barking somewhere far off, the soft smear of traffic—fell away. Time moved differently here. An hour inside could be minutes or days outside, the placard in her head whispered, even as she tried to forget the note she’d found slipped under her door earlier that evening: “Meet where the boundary breathes.” Her shoes swallowed the turf as she stepped closer to the stones. The wildflowers around the edge bloomed as if it were spring in perpetual twilight, though night held the grove in a firm grip. She’d come here with a purpose that felt heavier every time she inhaled the damp scent of moss and earth: to meet something she couldn’t name, to seek an answer she wasn’t supposed to have. The pendant rustled against her skin, a soft whisper against her pulse, and the warmth spread a little deeper, like a remembered flame warming the inside of a cold room. This is where it began, she thought, where the wrongness seeds itself and grows in the quiet. A twig snapped somewhere off to her right. Not a branch’s telltale snap, but a deliberate, careful sound, like someone testing the balance of the ground beneath their foot. She stood very still, listening beyond her own breaths. The grove remained still, as if listening too. This place wasn’t empty, not really. The hedgehog of silence had a shape to it, a form that hovered just beyond sight. “This isn’t a dream,” she said aloud, though to whom, she wasn’t sure. The words felt like a practice rune, something she’d learned by rote in a life she hadn’t fully lived yet. The Heartstone Pendant gave a gentle throb against her chest, and a pale glow crept across the crimson gem, threading into the chain, a tiny halo of light that didn’t quite touch the air. The glow hummed low, a sound she could feel more than hear, a vibration that scraped along her sternum and settled in her ribs. “Show me why you sent me here,” she whispered, not to any person, but to the thing that lived around her neck. The first sound came as a sigh—an exhale from the grove itself, a breath that wasn’t hers. Leaves rustled with a thoughtful precision, like a crowd leaning in to hear a secret spoken just once. The standing stones glowed faintly, not with firelight but a pale, almost electric sheen that threaded between the carved grooves and the space above them, where the air itself seemed to bend. The wrongness didn’t rush in. It gathered, like a slow tide creeping up a shore line you didn’t realize was there until the water lapped at your boots. A whisper arrived from behind the oak stones, a voice without a mouth, words without syllables that nonetheless strained her ears. “Rory,” the voice said, softly, as if the trees themselves carried a memory of her, a name she’d long since buried under other names she wore for the day. She pressed a hand against the pulse of the pendant, as if that could anchor her to the solid ground she stood on. The name echoed again, in her mind not through sound but through a familiar tremor in her own voice, one she hadn’t heard in years. “Not Rory,” she replied aloud, though the tremor remained. “Aurora Carter. I came because you asked, but I didn’t expect you’d ask me to listen.” The grove didn’t answer with words this time, or perhaps it did, and she simply didn’t understand the language the trees spoke when they leaned their branches just so and let the wind become a breath among the leaves. The air grew colder, but not the kind that shivers the skin; it was something more intimate, like being drawn into a room where a heater hums but never warms the room enough. She moved a step closer to the standing stones, careful to keep her hands free, to not touch unless necessary. The pendant’s warmth intensified, a risk of heat that crossed the skin but didn’t burn, leaving a faint tingle in its wake. She looked down at the white gleam of her own shadow, then up into the canopy where the stars would be if London hadn’t swallowed most of them with its own glow. “Why here?” she asked, the question aloud now, to the trees, to the air, to whatever watched from beyond the bark and the moss. A rustle answered, not with threat but with notification, like the grove was informing a distant watcher that a stranger had arrived with a package that wasn’t hers to deliver. The rustle grew into a chorus of small movements—something behind the Primary Tree, something moving along the edge of her perception, where vision blurred the moment she tried to fix on it. The Heartstone’s pulse beat a touch faster, a signal she could almost follow. She slid a fingertip along the chain, lightly, as if she were tracing a seam on a garment she wore every day and nevertheless tried not to crease. The crimson gem responded with a deeper glow, a sign that it wasn’t just a pretty stone or an odd keepsake but something tethered to a crossing she hadn’t yet understood. “Help me understand,” she said, and her own voice surprised her with its steadiness. It wasn’t arrogance; it was the sort of quiet insistence that got you through the door when you didn’t want to admit you needed something from the other side. From beyond the stones, a soft click sounded, as if a latch in a door somewhere far off had been opened and shut again in a room she wasn’t allowed to enter. The sound was not loud, but it carried enough resonance to feel like it moved the ground beneath her boots, like the earth itself had breathed and settled. The grove exhaled again, a slow, patient sound that held time in its throat. A thin thread of light threaded through the boundary, like a seam stitched in a fabric she couldn’t quite see. It pulsed, and with each pulse, one of the smaller flowers near the edge of the clearing uncurled a fraction further, releasing a scent that reminded her of rain on warm stone. “Who waited for me here?” she asked, though she knew the whisper had nothing to do with any person she’d ever met and everything to do with the place and its old, careful magic. The answer came as a shift in the air: not a voice, but a memory, pressed into the space between the trees. A memory of footsteps that didn’t quite align with any human stride, of leaves that rustled in patterns she would have recognized as a signal if she’d known what to listen for. It reminded her of patrol routes, of the sandbox she had played in as a child, of something that learned to walk again after a long stretch of not being walked at all. Her eyes fixed on a point behind the nearest tree—the one that looked thick as a wall and trembled when the wind picked up. A shadow moved there, not quickly or with purpose, but with the slow, patient deliberateness of something probing for a break in the world’s armor. The shadow did not form into a person, not at first. It remained a presence of brightness and shade, a silhouette more felt than seen. A moment later, a figure emerged, but only in glimpses: a silhouette that wasn’t human in the way a person would be, more like a memory of something familiar made out of night. It paused, listening to the grove as one would listen to a friend who spoke in a language you almost knew. “What are you here for?” the figure seemed to ask, its voice a chorus of leaves brushing against one another, the tone not accusing but curious. Aurora kept her eyes on the figure, keeping her voice calm, careful. “To learn what the pendant asks of me. To learn why a door is here, and why it hums when I stand near it.” The shadow stepped closer, and for a heartbeat it clarified into a shape she could almost read: two shoulders, a head with no face, a body that traced the outline of someone who had once lived but no longer belonged to the living world in any comfortable sense. It wasn’t frightening in a conventional way; it was the wrongness of a memory worn too thin, a thing you could see if you watched long enough and refused to blink. “It wants you to listen,” the voice—if it could be called that—whispered, not to her but to the space around her, as if the grove itself spoke through it. “You came with the heart you did not bargain for. You came with a purpose that was not your own.” The words landed, not like a blow but like a weight that settled on her chest. The pendant vibrated against her skin, and the crimson gem brightened, not brilliantly but with enough light to sketch the edges of the stones in a pale aureole on the surrounding moss. “Tell me what I must do,” she said, though she had a sense that a choice wasn’t the point here, not yet. The words came out steady, not bold, and she kept the tone even so as not to reveal how deeply unsettled she felt. The shadow moved again, a slow rotation of space, and the grove’s silence deepened. The wind carried a scent she couldn’t place—a blend of old rain and forest rot and something like copper. The wildflowers around the clearing trembled, their petals opening and closing, not to the wind but to something else, something that hovered just beyond her sight. “The Hel portal,” a second, softer memory whispered through the air, not loud enough to be a shout but enough to feel like a doorway opening somewhere you didn’t know existed. “Near the heart of the grove, near the stone circle. You carry the key, and the key is not a thing you wear but a knowledge you unlock when you listen to what the stones have to tell you.” “My knowledge?” she asked, though she did not expect a direct answer, and yet the grove offered one in a way that did not feel like a lie. The first tree that bore her aunt’s old handwriting on its bark—only she’d never written that on a tree—softly peeled a part of its bark away, revealing a pale line beneath. It wasn’t a handwriting at all, but a map of the space between worlds, drawn with something like luminescent sap. The map wasn’t complete, but enough to hint at a corridor that could be walked if one stepped in just the right rhythm, a rhythm the pendant might teach her if she could hear it. “I won’t always be this quiet,” she muttered, as if scolding herself for every time she’d doubted what she could feel in her bones. The pendant gave a slow, warm pulse, and the glow along its edge drifted into a broader halo that encased the stone in a copper-bronze light. A sound came then, a soft, deliberate tapping from the other side of the boundary stones, like a priest counting out a vigil in a language she almost remembered. The taps were not loud enough to be heard over the grove’s own breath, but they carried through the air with a weight that wasn’t physical. They spoke of a rhythm, a cadence that someone or something kept up, almost as if counting the heartbeats she refused to release from her chest. Her gaze wandered, and for a moment she caught a flash of movement behind the firs—not a figure, exactly, but something that could have been a river of shadow slipping along the ground, a ripple across the moss, a line drawn across the world by someone who knew it well. “Your time here is a breath,” the shadow whispered again, or perhaps the grove spoke through it, or perhaps the pendant’s own hum loosened the tongue of the place. “Step closer to the stones and listen with your eyes.” She did not move toward the stones blindly. She kept a careful distance, enough to see the world but not so close to trigger something she wasn’t ready to meet. She placed the heels of her hands against the surface of the nearest standing stone, and a shiver perched on her spine, not from fear but from the instant perception that the stone warmed under her touch, as though something beneath the earth recognized the touch of a living hand. “Is this what you wanted me to feel?” she asked the grove, though she knew a question wasn’t likely to produce a straight answer. The tree bark against her other hand creaked, and a gust rose from the far edge of the clearing, curling around her, carrying with it the scent of rain that had fallen long ago, the kind of rain that remembered names no longer spoken. The Heartstone Pendant pulsed with a steadier rhythm now, a heartbeat aligned with hers in a silent music she hadn’t anticipated and hadn’t known she’d need. A branch above clicked as if a thumbbone touched another, a sound so human in its tone that it pulled a shiver from her, not fear but a sharp, unsteady curiosity. The grove did not admonish her; it offered a riddle, a doorway in a language she could understand if she slowed her breath and listened to the space between her thoughts. “Rory is gone,” she said aloud, finally giving a voice to the name that had haunted this place in some part of her she kept well closed. “Aurora Carter remains, and she will listen.” The shadow’s edge sharpened, and a low, almost inaudible murmur threaded through the leaves, a string of syllables that made the hair at the nape of her neck lift and settle. It wasn’t a threat. It was a teaching, a patient tutor pressing a finger to the door she had avoided for so long. “Listen with your eyes,” the grove repeated, and the sentence settled in her chest as if she’d swallowed a small stone. The boundary stones, those ancient markers, now glowed a pale, almost teal light, tracing runes in the air that hadn’t existed moments before, shapes that didn’t look like script but felt like memory. The pendant’s warmth intensified again, a small explosion of heat that didn’t burn but clarified. In the space above the stones, a line of pale light stretched up to the night sky and then curved downward, like a breath drawn through an unseen throat, and then released. She watched, not blinking, and the grove watched back, or so it seemed. The sunless night thickened around her, drawing the edges of the world tighter, until even the air itself seemed to lean toward a listening posture. “Tell me what I should accept,” she finally spoke, though the question felt more like a test she would not fail than a plea for mercy. Her voice carried through the hush with a quiet certainty she hadn’t known she possessed. The answer came in a sensation rather than a sentence: a pull, a tug at the heart of the pendant, a sense that the Heartstone was trying to guide her toward something she had overlooked. She took a slow step toward the circle of stones, and the ground beneath her seemed to breathe, as if the earth permitted her passage for a heartbeat, then retracted, then offered again. You’re not alone, the grove seemed to say, not in a voice that arrived from a mouth but from the air she breathed. You never were. The note was not judgment; it was a course correction, a map drawn in moonlight and memory that asked to be read by someone who would not flinch. She looked down at the stone circle, at the rings of pale light that now lay over the moss like the residue of some dream she hadn’t had yet. The Hel portal—the term echoed in the back of her mind as if it had been whispered by someone who knew the word’s full weight— hummed in her chest, not as a sound but as a held breath she finally dared to release. The Heartstone Pendant pulsed with warmth, and for the first time she felt the thing inside her respond in kind, a quiet surge of courage that hadn’t existed before this night. I came for a reason, she told herself, though the reason had not been hers in the first place. The benefactor’s gift lay against her sternum, a small, patient flame steadily warming her from within. The grove’s wrongness hadn’t eased, but it had settled into a rhythm—a patient, slow pulse that seemed to sync with her own. “Show me what lies beyond the boundary,” she whispered, and the words didn’t demand an answer so much as invite it to arrive. For a moment, nothing happened. Then the air near the stones stirred with a soft, intangible pressure, like gravity easing away from a room and letting it drift open. The ring of stones began to glow brighter, not with light but with a kind of resonance she could feel in the bones of her wrists and the tips of her fingers. The grove’s scent deepened, the floral sweetness shifting to something more metallic, a copper-y tang that reminded her of rain on iron. A single leaf peeled free from a branch, not by wind but by someone’s careful hand—though no one was near enough to touch it. The leaf drifted toward the circle, and as it crossed the boundary, it left a faint silver trace on the air, like dust catching a shaft of moonlight. The trace hung for a second, then faded, but its memory remained, a breadcrumb she could taste on the tip of her tongue. “A door sits behind the boundary,” a voice not loud but intimate whispered somewhere far beyond the stones. The words weren’t spoken to her so much as carried by the air itself, a rumor you could choose to believe if you leaned toward it long enough. “A door you can pass only when you are ready to hear without fear.” She did not recoil. Fear had its use, but it wouldn’t be allowed to govern this moment. Her heart steadied, her breath evened, and the pendant’s warmth shifted into a steadier glow, a signal that she could move with intention rather than impulse. She stepped forward, not across the stones but toward the edge of the circle where the glow was brightest. The boundary hummed, as if recognizing a familiar pulse in a distant organ. Her own pulse answered, beating in time with the ring’s glow, and for an instant, the grove’s edge blurred at the periphery of vision. It wasn’t disorienting; it was clarifying, as if she suddenly saw the space between worlds with the same precision she used when reading a street map drawn in someone else’s ink. The edge of the world shifted for a breath, and a figure appeared—not in full form, but as a suggestion, a silhouette formed from light and shadow and the memory of someone’s face she had once known in a different life. It wasn’t a threat; it was a presence with a story to tell, a reminder that history didn’t end with the final page but lingered in a room beyond what you could touch. “Listen to the space between steps,” the voice that wasn’t hers insisted, and when she did, she found herself counting her own footfalls, each one deliberate, each one a thread leading toward something larger. The Hel portal, the heart of the grove, began to breathe again, exhaling a cold draft that smelled of iron and rain-soaked earth. The dilemmas she had carried—how she’d left Cardiff to escape a life that refused to forget, how the ex named Evan still gnawed at a corner of her memory—they pressed close but did not push her away. The pendant warmed again, and the warm glow pooled around the stone in a halo that reminded her of an eye opening in the dark. “Show me,” she breathed, a sentence that felt more like a vow than a request. The ground beneath her foot yielded a subtle give, the moss soft as a memory she was reluctanly willing to revisit. The ring of stones flashed with a pale blue fire, not violent but alive, like a pulse that could be felt on the skin if you stood near and listened. The grove did not deliver a monster or a scream. It offered a choice, a turn in the road she hadn’t noticed before, a corridor between the ancient boundary markers that would take her someplace she had never physically stood, though she might have walked toward it with every breath she’d taken since she left Cardiff. The Heartstone Pendant throbbed with a patient insistence, the unmistakable sign that a path lay through this place, that the key she carried was turning in a lock she hadn’t known existed. “Rory would have run,” she said, almost to herself, testing the edge of that old name against the current truth. “Aurora Carter runs toward danger now, if danger has a door.” The cadence felt off, but not wrong, because the grove’s spell didn't demand the old self but offered a chance to become something else, something more fit for what lay beyond. The shadow at the edge of vision shifted again, not moving in the human sense but leaning toward awareness, becoming more substantial as though someone had turned on a lamp behind it. The pale glow around the stones brightened, and the map of the space between worlds grew a new line, a pathway drawn with light that curved toward a point beyond the reach of ordinary sight. She paused, not because she doubted, but because she remembered what Eva had once told her in a voice that sounded almost like a memory: the grove doesn’t bargain with fear, it bargains with consent. And consent isn’t given by rushing through a door; consent is earned through listening, through bearing what you hear without turning away. The pendant’s glow targeted a particular rune in the air—a sigil that hadn’t existed before, or that had existed and she hadn’t noticed until this moment. The rune pulsed, and with each pulse, the space behind it seemed to thin, like a curtain rustling in a room that wasn’t there. The boundary stones themselves seemed to lean closer, guiding her focus toward that seam in the air, toward a thread she could pull if she gathered enough courage not to drop it. She took another shallow breath and stepped forward again, not into the space beyond the stones, but into the space that existed in the moment before stepping. The grove did not resist; it did not push either. It watched, patient, as if it had all the time in the world and none of it belonged to her. The air around her grew colder, and the pendant warmed again, a reminder that this was not a dream she could wake from by blinking. The memory of the boundary’s first whisper came back: you carry the key, and the key is not a thing you wear but a knowledge you unlock when you listen to what the stones have to tell you. She listened, and the stones answered not with a voice, but with a quiet invitation to walk. So she walked, stepping along the edge of the boundary, keeping the stones to her left and the bright, patient glow of the Heartstone Pendant to her chest. On each step, the grove offered a different scent, a different taste of air—trees and earth and a faint copper tang—until she felt herself stepping through something that wasn’t air and wasn’t weight, something like the moment when a memory you’ve locked away suddenly finds its key. Then the night’s velvet pressed more tightly around the grove, the world narrowing to a corridor of light and shadow. The Hel portal—still unseen but now almost tangible in the way a door might feel before it’s opened—stood in a place she could not name, a place where the boundary’s edge wore a line of pale blue fire that should have been heat but wasn’t. The pendant’s pale glow coalesced into a small blossom of warmth at the point where the corridor would become a doorway, a doorway she could step through if she chose to listen a little longer and not rush to conclusions. “I am listening,” she said softly, the words surviving the moment like seeds planted in dark soil. The grove’s reply was not a shout but a breath through the leaves, a patient knowing that the night would keep its secrets until she was ready to deserve them. And so, the scene held, suspended between the familiar and the uncanny, until a final soft sound—almost a sigh, almost a footstep—breathed along the boundary stones, and the faintest glint of something moving behind a tree not far from where the shadow had become almost human. The Heartstone Pendant throbbed once more, brightened, and the grove grew quiet enough to hear the slow, steady rhythm of a door that might open or might stay closed, depending on whether she chose to take the next step into the unknown. The decision wasn’t forced by fear or force. It was offered by a place that remembered every traveler who ever crossed the edge and chose to listen instead of shouting for answers. The night pressed closer still, but Aurora Carter stood taller, the crimson Heartstone pendant a steady compass against her chest, and she moved a fraction closer to the boundary, not rushing, not fleeing, simply listening for the truth that waited beyond the stones. The grove kept its silent vigil as her world narrowed to the space between a heartbeat and a doorway. The wrongness didn’t vanish. It receded enough to become a possibility, a path that promised danger and clarity in equal measure. And as the pendant warmed, as the light grew bolder yet more patient, she understood that the door wasn’t meant to be opened by force. It would yield only to a listening, patient seeker who refused to look away. The air thickened, and the boundary stones began to glow with a soft, more deliberate blue, as if the grove itself leaned in to hear what came next. A single unhappy rustle, not of wind but something else, came from near the tree line, then stopped, as if pausing to decide whether to reveal more or to withdraw. The night held its breath. The Heartstone pulsed once, twice, and then settled into a cadence that matched the quiet tremor of the grove itself. Aurora took a careful, almost ceremonial breath, and raised her gaze to the edge of the boundary, where the world beyond waited, patient and uninvited. The next step would decide not just what she faced, but what she would become in the process. The scene paused, a breath held in the night, the Fae Grove listening, and Aurora Carter listening back. The door stood there, not opened, not yet, but warm and ready to answer if she chose to listen a little longer. The grove’s wrongness remained, but it no longer pressed as a threat. It pressed as a possibility, and a possibility curious enough to hold a person still long enough to decide what they deserved to learn. The pendant warmed again, a small, approving heat, and she realized that whatever came next would be her own choosing, a moment of becoming rather than escape. The boundary’s glow brightened to a steady, patient glow, and the night kept its quiet vigil as she stepped toward the line where world and dream met, where every door in a life she hadn’t yet lived might finally swing open. And in that hushed space, with the Heartstone’s pulse steady at her chest and the grove’s watching calm around her, she crossed a boundary not measured in miles but in trust. The wrongness lingered, yes, but it shifted, taking on a new shape—the shape of a question she could finally answer if she kept walking toward the glow, toward the door that lay just beyond the edge of sight. The night folded in, and Aurora Carter did not turn back.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags25
adverbTagCount6
adverbTags
0"she said aloud [aloud]"
1"she replied aloud [aloud]"
2"the shadow whispered again [again]"
3"she said aloud [aloud]"
4"she finally spoke [finally]"
5"she said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences33
tagDensity0.758
leniency1
rawRatio0.24
effectiveRatio0.24
90.01% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount5006
totalAiIsmAdverbs10
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count3
3
adverb"lightly"
count1
4
adverb"quickly"
count1
5
adverb"suddenly"
count2
6
adverb"tightly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"really"
2"softly"
3"lightly"
4"quickly"
5"suddenly"
6"tightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
30.08% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount5006
totalAiIsms70
found
0
word"flicked"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count7
2
word"pulse"
count13
3
word"could feel"
count4
4
word"weight"
count5
5
word"whisper"
count4
6
word"silence"
count2
7
word"throb"
count1
8
word"electric"
count1
9
word"echoed"
count2
10
word"familiar"
count4
11
word"tracing"
count2
12
word"resonance"
count2
13
word"pulsed"
count5
14
word"footsteps"
count1
15
word"trembled"
count2
16
word"traced"
count1
17
word"comfortable"
count1
18
word"vibrated"
count1
19
word"unsettled"
count1
20
word"aligned"
count1
21
word"reminder"
count2
22
word"throbbed"
count2
23
word"velvet"
count1
24
word"tangible"
count1
25
word"uncanny"
count1
26
word"glint"
count1
27
word"measured"
count1
highlights
0"flicked"
1"warmth"
2"pulse"
3"could feel"
4"weight"
5"whisper"
6"silence"
7"throb"
8"electric"
9"echoed"
10"familiar"
11"tracing"
12"resonance"
13"pulsed"
14"footsteps"
15"trembled"
16"traced"
17"comfortable"
18"vibrated"
19"unsettled"
20"aligned"
21"reminder"
22"throbbed"
23"velvet"
24"tangible"
25"uncanny"
26"glint"
27"measured"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences196
matches
0"d with warmth"
1"n with fear"
26.24% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount14
narrationSentences196
filterMatches
0"hear"
1"listen"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
2"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences203
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen51
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords4978
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions49
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"I came for a reason, she told herself, though the reason had not been hers in the first place."
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions45
wordCount4726
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity0.25
worstName"Heartstone"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora6
Carter4
Richmond1
Park1
Fae2
Grove2
Heartstone12
Pendant7
London1
Primary1
Tree1
Hel3
Cardiff2
Evan1
Eva1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Carter"
2"Grove"
3"Heartstone"
4"Pendant"
5"Evan"
6"Eva"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Fae"
3"London"
4"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences188
glossingSentenceCount15
matches
0"tasted like rain and rust"
1"as if listening too"
2"felt like a practice rune, something sh"
3"quite touch the air"
4"quite see"
5"quite align with any human stride, of leaves that rustled in patterns she would have recognized as a signal if she’d known what to listen for"
6"something like copper"
7"something like luminescent sap"
8"as if scolding herself for every time she’d doubted what she could feel in her bones"
9"as if counting the heartbeats she refused to release from her chest"
10"felt like memory"
11"pulse that seemed to sync with her own"
12"as if recognizing a familiar pulse in a distant organ"
13"something like the moment when a memory you’"
14"as if pausing to decide whether to reveal more or to withdraw"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches39
per1kWords7.834
wordCount4978
matches
0"Not a branch’s telltale snap, but a deliberate, careful sound, like someone testing the balanc"
1"not to any person, but to the thing"
2"not with firelight but a pale, almost electric sheen"
3"not through sound but through a familiar tremor in her own voice, one she hadn’t h"
4"not with threat but with notification, like the grove was informing a distant wa"
5"not loud, but it carried enough resonance to feel like it moved the ground"
6"not a voice, but a memory, pressed into the space between the trees"
7"not quickly or with purpose, but with the slow, patient deliberateness of something probing f"
8"not accusing but curious"
9"not to her but to the space around her, as if the grove itself spoke throug"
10"not like a blow but like a weight"
11"not brilliantly but with enough light to sketch the edges of the stones in a pal"
12"not to the wind but to something else, something"
13"not loud enough to be a shout but enough to feel like a doorway opening somewhere you didn’t k"
14"not a thing you wear but a knowledge you unlock"
15"not loud enough to be heard over the grove’s own breath, but they carried through the air with a weight"
16"not a figure, exactly, but something"
17"not from fear but from the instant perception"
18"not fear but a sharp, unsteady curiosity"
19"not alone, the grove seemed to say, not in a voice that arrived from a mouth but from the air she breathed"
20"not in a voice that arrived from a mouth but from the air she breathed"
21"not as a sound but as a held breath she finally dared to release"
22"not with light but with a kind of resonance she could feel in the bones of her"
23"not by wind but by someone’s careful hand"
24"not loud but intimate whispered somewhere far beyond the stones"
25"not across the stones but toward the edge of the circle"
26"not in full form, but as a suggestion, a silhouette formed from light"
27"not violent but alive, like a pulse"
28"not wrong, because the grove’s spell didn't demand the old self but offered a chance to become something else, something more fi"
29"not moving in the human sense but leaning toward awareness, becoming more substantial as thoug"
30"not into the space beyond the stones, but into the space"
31"not a thing you wear but a knowledge you unlock"
32"not with a voice, but with a quiet invitation to walk"
33"not a shout but a breath through the leaves, a patient knowing"
34"not of wind but something else, came from near the tree line, then stopped"
35"not just what she faced, but what she would become in the process"
36"not opened, not yet, but warm"
37"not yet, but warm"
38"not measured in miles but in trust"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences203
matches
0"understood that the"
1"realized that whatever"
58.54% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs83
mean59.98
std21.28
cv0.355
sampleLengths
080
187
299
3100
417
546
622
733
858
922
1067
1149
1229
1348
1425
1572
1674
1724
1862
1972
2043
2160
2266
2334
2487
2574
2654
2726
2836
2979
3049
3148
3245
3359
3470
3528
3686
3750
3881
3950
4039
4180
4224
4370
4462
4534
4654
4754
4847
4938
94.52% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount6
totalSentences196
matches
0"being drawn"
1"been opened"
2"being walked"
3"been whispered"
4"is earned"
5"was offered"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount6
totalVerbs744
matches
0"was informing"
1"were tracing"
2"was trying"
3"was clarifying"
4"was turning"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount26
semicolonCount9
flaggedSentences27
totalSentences203
ratio0.133
matches
0"The park’s ordinary sounds—the distant murmur of a late jogger, a dog barking somewhere far off, the soft smear of traffic—fell away."
1"The first sound came as a sigh—an exhale from the grove itself, a breath that wasn’t hers."
2"The air grew colder, but not the kind that shivers the skin; it was something more intimate, like being drawn into a room where a heater hums but never warms the room enough."
3"The rustle grew into a chorus of small movements—something behind the Primary Tree, something moving along the edge of her perception, where vision blurred the moment she tried to fix on it."
4"It wasn’t arrogance; it was the sort of quiet insistence that got you through the door when you didn’t want to admit you needed something from the other side."
5"Her eyes fixed on a point behind the nearest tree—the one that looked thick as a wall and trembled when the wind picked up."
6"It wasn’t frightening in a conventional way; it was the wrongness of a memory worn too thin, a thing you could see if you watched long enough and refused to blink."
7"“It wants you to listen,” the voice—if it could be called that—whispered, not to her but to the space around her, as if the grove itself spoke through it."
8"The wind carried a scent she couldn’t place—a blend of old rain and forest rot and something like copper."
9"The first tree that bore her aunt’s old handwriting on its bark—only she’d never written that on a tree—softly peeled a part of its bark away, revealing a pale line beneath."
10"Her gaze wandered, and for a moment she caught a flash of movement behind the firs—not a figure, exactly, but something that could have been a river of shadow slipping along the ground, a ripple across the moss, a line drawn across the world by someone who knew it well."
11"The grove did not admonish her; it offered a riddle, a doorway in a language she could understand if she slowed her breath and listened to the space between her thoughts."
12"The note was not judgment; it was a course correction, a map drawn in moonlight and memory that asked to be read by someone who would not flinch."
13"The Hel portal—the term echoed in the back of her mind as if it had been whispered by someone who knew the word’s full weight— hummed in her chest, not as a sound but as a held breath she finally dared to release."
14"The grove’s wrongness hadn’t eased, but it had settled into a rhythm—a patient, slow pulse that seemed to sync with her own."
15"A single leaf peeled free from a branch, not by wind but by someone’s careful hand—though no one was near enough to touch it."
16"It wasn’t disorienting; it was clarifying, as if she suddenly saw the space between worlds with the same precision she used when reading a street map drawn in someone else’s ink."
17"The edge of the world shifted for a breath, and a figure appeared—not in full form, but as a suggestion, a silhouette formed from light and shadow and the memory of someone’s face she had once known in a different life."
18"It wasn’t a threat; it was a presence with a story to tell, a reminder that history didn’t end with the final page but lingered in a room beyond what you could touch."
19"The dilemmas she had carried—how she’d left Cardiff to escape a life that refused to forget, how the ex named Evan still gnawed at a corner of her memory—they pressed close but did not push her away."
20"And consent isn’t given by rushing through a door; consent is earned through listening, through bearing what you hear without turning away."
21"The pendant’s glow targeted a particular rune in the air—a sigil that hadn’t existed before, or that had existed and she hadn’t noticed until this moment."
22"The grove did not resist; it did not push either."
23"On each step, the grove offered a different scent, a different taste of air—trees and earth and a faint copper tang—until she felt herself stepping through something that wasn’t air and wasn’t weight, something like the moment when a memory you’ve locked away suddenly finds its key."
24"The Hel portal—still unseen but now almost tangible in the way a door might feel before it’s opened—stood in a place she could not name, a place where the boundary’s edge wore a line of pale blue fire that should have been heat but wasn’t."
25"And so, the scene held, suspended between the familiar and the uncanny, until a final soft sound—almost a sigh, almost a footstep—breathed along the boundary stones, and the faintest glint of something moving behind a tree not far from where the shadow had become almost human."
26"The wrongness lingered, yes, but it shifted, taking on a new shape—the shape of a question she could finally answer if she kept walking toward the glow, toward the door that lay just beyond the edge of sight."
99.85% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount4754
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount191
adverbRatio0.040176693310896086
lyAdverbCount32
lyAdverbRatio0.006731173748422381
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences203
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences203
mean24.52
std10.03
cv0.409
sampleLengths
014
129
237
318
436
533
621
715
822
94
1037
1112
1223
1335
1430
1517
168
1721
189
198
206
2116
2213
2320
2434
2524
2622
2717
2818
2932
305
3123
3221
3329
3423
3525
369
3716
3839
3933
4020
4122
4232
4324
4430
4532
4613
4728
4831
4914
30.30% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats40
diversityRatio0.18226600985221675
totalSentences203
uniqueOpeners37
34.01% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences196
matches
0"Then the air near the"
1"Then the night’s velvet pressed"
ratio0.01
91.43% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount63
totalSentences196
matches
0"Her breath fogged in a"
1"She had worn it since"
2"Her shoes swallowed the turf"
3"She’d come here with a"
4"She stood very still, listening"
5"she said aloud, though to"
6"she whispered, not to any"
7"It gathered, like a slow"
8"She pressed a hand against"
9"she replied aloud, though the"
10"She moved a step closer"
11"She looked down at the"
12"she asked, the question aloud"
13"She slid a fingertip along"
14"she said, and her own"
15"It wasn’t arrogance; it was"
16"It pulsed, and with each"
17"she asked, though she knew"
18"It reminded her of patrol"
19"Her eyes fixed on a"
ratio0.321
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount183
totalSentences196
matches
0"The night pressed in, thick"
1"Streetlights blinked in and out"
2"The Fae Grove lay a"
3"Her breath fogged in a"
4"The crimson gem glowed faintly,"
5"She had worn it since"
6"The grove opened before her,"
7"The park’s ordinary sounds—the distant"
8"Time moved differently here."
9"An hour inside could be"
10"Her shoes swallowed the turf"
11"The wildflowers around the edge"
12"She’d come here with a"
13"The pendant rustled against her"
14"This is where it began,"
15"A twig snapped somewhere off"
16"She stood very still, listening"
17"The grove remained still, as"
18"This place wasn’t empty, not"
19"The hedgehog of silence had"
ratio0.934
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences196
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences156
technicalSentenceCount38
matches
0"The wildflowers around the edge bloomed as if it were spring in perpetual twilight, though night held the grove in a firm grip."
1"The Heartstone Pendant gave a gentle throb against her chest, and a pale glow crept across the crimson gem, threading into the chain, a tiny halo of light that …"
2"The standing stones glowed faintly, not with firelight but a pale, almost electric sheen that threaded between the carved grooves and the space above them, wher…"
3"The air grew colder, but not the kind that shivers the skin; it was something more intimate, like being drawn into a room where a heater hums but never warms th…"
4"The pendant’s warmth intensified, a risk of heat that crossed the skin but didn’t burn, leaving a faint tingle in its wake."
5"A rustle answered, not with threat but with notification, like the grove was informing a distant watcher that a stranger had arrived with a package that wasn’t …"
6"It wasn’t arrogance; it was the sort of quiet insistence that got you through the door when you didn’t want to admit you needed something from the other side."
7"From beyond the stones, a soft click sounded, as if a latch in a door somewhere far off had been opened and shut again in a room she wasn’t allowed to enter."
8"It pulsed, and with each pulse, one of the smaller flowers near the edge of the clearing uncurled a fraction further, releasing a scent that reminded her of rai…"
9"A memory of footsteps that didn’t quite align with any human stride, of leaves that rustled in patterns she would have recognized as a signal if she’d known wha…"
10"A moment later, a figure emerged, but only in glimpses: a silhouette that wasn’t human in the way a person would be, more like a memory of something familiar ma…"
11"The shadow stepped closer, and for a heartbeat it clarified into a shape she could almost read: two shoulders, a head with no face, a body that traced the outli…"
12"The wildflowers around the clearing trembled, their petals opening and closing, not to the wind but to something else, something that hovered just beyond her si…"
13"The first tree that bore her aunt’s old handwriting on its bark—only she’d never written that on a tree—softly peeled a part of its bark away, revealing a pale …"
14"The pendant gave a slow, warm pulse, and the glow along its edge drifted into a broader halo that encased the stone in a copper-bronze light."
15"The taps were not loud enough to be heard over the grove’s own breath, but they carried through the air with a weight that wasn’t physical."
16"Her gaze wandered, and for a moment she caught a flash of movement behind the firs—not a figure, exactly, but something that could have been a river of shadow s…"
17"She placed the heels of her hands against the surface of the nearest standing stone, and a shiver perched on her spine, not from fear but from the instant perce…"
18"The tree bark against her other hand creaked, and a gust rose from the far edge of the clearing, curling around her, carrying with it the scent of rain that had…"
19"A branch above clicked as if a thumbbone touched another, a sound so human in its tone that it pulled a shiver from her, not fear but a sharp, unsteady curiosit…"
20"The shadow’s edge sharpened, and a low, almost inaudible murmur threaded through the leaves, a string of syllables that made the hair at the nape of her neck li…"
21"The pendant’s warmth intensified again, a small explosion of heat that didn’t burn but clarified."
22"She took a slow step toward the circle of stones, and the ground beneath her seemed to breathe, as if the earth permitted her passage for a heartbeat, then retr…"
23"The Heartstone Pendant pulsed with warmth, and for the first time she felt the thing inside her respond in kind, a quiet surge of courage that hadn’t existed be…"
24"The grove’s wrongness hadn’t eased, but it had settled into a rhythm—a patient, slow pulse that seemed to sync with her own."
25"The grove’s scent deepened, the floral sweetness shifting to something more metallic, a copper-y tang that reminded her of rain on iron."
26"The boundary hummed, as if recognizing a familiar pulse in a distant organ."
27"It wasn’t disorienting; it was clarifying, as if she suddenly saw the space between worlds with the same precision she used when reading a street map drawn in s…"
28"The Hel portal, the heart of the grove, began to breathe again, exhaling a cold draft that smelled of iron and rain-soaked earth."
29"The ring of stones flashed with a pale blue fire, not violent but alive, like a pulse that could be felt on the skin if you stood near and listened."
30"The shadow at the edge of vision shifted again, not moving in the human sense but leaning toward awareness, becoming more substantial as though someone had turn…"
31"The pale glow around the stones brightened, and the map of the space between worlds grew a new line, a pathway drawn with light that curved toward a point beyon…"
32"On each step, the grove offered a different scent, a different taste of air—trees and earth and a faint copper tang—until she felt herself stepping through some…"
33"The Hel portal—still unseen but now almost tangible in the way a door might feel before it’s opened—stood in a place she could not name, a place where the bound…"
34"The Heartstone Pendant throbbed once more, brightened, and the grove grew quiet enough to hear the slow, steady rhythm of a door that might open or might stay c…"
35"The night pressed closer still, but Aurora Carter stood taller, the crimson Heartstone pendant a steady compass against her chest, and she moved a fraction clos…"
36"The air thickened, and the boundary stones began to glow with a soft, more deliberate blue, as if the grove itself leaned in to hear what came next."
37"A single unhappy rustle, not of wind but something else, came from near the tree line, then stopped, as if pausing to decide whether to reveal more or to withdr…"
45.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags25
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"she replied aloud, though the tremor remained"
1"she muttered, as if scolding herself for every time she’d doubted what she could feel in her bones"
2"the grove repeated, and the sentence settled in her chest as if she’d swallowed a small stone"
3"she finally spoke, though the question felt more like a test she would not fail than a plea for mercy"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags24
fancyCount12
fancyTags
0"her head whispered (whisper)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
2"the figure seemed (seem)"
3"it could (could)"
4"softer memory whispered (whisper)"
5"she muttered (mutter)"
6"the shadow whispered again (whisper)"
7"the grove repeated (repeat)"
8"she finally spoke (speak)"
9"she whispered (whisper)"
10"hers insisted (insist)"
11"she breathed (breathe)"
dialogueSentences33
tagDensity0.727
leniency1
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.5
59.9992%