| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 87.10% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1163 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "softly" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 31.21% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1163 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "perfect" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "weight" | | 4 | "silk" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "pulse" | | 7 | "predator" | | 8 | "throbbed" | | 9 | "familiar" | | 10 | "absolutely" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 128 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 128 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 128 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 3 | | markdownWords | 15 | | totalWords | 1156 | | ratio | 0.013 | | matches | | 0 | "Why did you come alone?" | | 1 | "You weren't supposed to come alone." | | 2 | "Next time bring Eva." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 98.10% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 23 | | wordCount | 1156 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.04 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Park | 2 | | February | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Eva | 2 | | Rory | 12 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Richmond | 2 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Park" | | 1 | "Fae" | | 2 | "Grove" | | 3 | "Cardiff" | | 4 | "Richmond" |
| | globalScore | 0.981 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 73 | | glossingSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "tasted like copper" | | 1 | "quite process" | | 2 | "as if listening" | | 3 | "flowers that seemed to pulse in rhythm with the pendant" | | 4 | "appeared below the first" | | 5 | "quite match up with what she'd seen moments before" | | 6 | "seemed designed to cut her off from the stones" | | 7 | "appeared suddenly ahead of her, though she wasn't certain she'd been moving in the right direction" | | 8 | "looked like trees and nothing else" | | 9 | "quite exist in physical space" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.865 | | wordCount | 1156 | | matches | | 0 | "Not running yet but running adjacent to running, moving with purpose through flo" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 128 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 39 | | mean | 29.64 | | std | 23.36 | | cv | 0.788 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 11 | | 1 | 45 | | 2 | 52 | | 3 | 25 | | 4 | 49 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 54 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 53 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 40 | | 11 | 55 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 46 | | 14 | 23 | | 15 | 73 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 63 | | 18 | 57 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 36 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 34 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 92 | | 26 | 27 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 67 | | 30 | 17 | | 31 | 42 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 33 | | 34 | 40 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 16 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 4 |
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| 97.04% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 128 | | matches | | 0 | "was accompanied" | | 1 | "being observed" | | 2 | "was marked" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 204 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 128 | | ratio | 0.008 | | matches | | 0 | "Just pushed harder towards the boundary, towards the real world, towards—" |
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| 89.86% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1163 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 60 | | adverbRatio | 0.051590713671539126 | | lyAdverbCount | 17 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.014617368873602751 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 128 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 128 | | mean | 9.03 | | std | 6.87 | | cv | 0.76 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 11 | | 1 | 9 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 9 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 9 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 22 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 20 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 18 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 1 | | 31 | 23 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 21 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 18 | | 41 | 19 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 1 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 17 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 20 |
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| 56.25% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.375 | | totalSentences | 128 | | uniqueOpeners | 48 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 8 | | totalSentences | 107 | | matches | | 0 | "Of course there wasn't." | | 1 | "Instead she'd found only questions" | | 2 | "More like the memory of" | | 3 | "Simply shrivelled, like watching a" | | 4 | "Just stared at the words" | | 5 | "All moving in parallel trajectories" | | 6 | "More like the impression of" | | 7 | "Just pushed harder towards the" |
| | ratio | 0.075 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 27 | | totalSentences | 107 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd walked this path a" | | 1 | "She checked her phone." | | 2 | "Her breath misted." | | 3 | "She'd come here looking for" | | 4 | "They seemed to glow with" | | 5 | "She turned towards it." | | 6 | "It reminded her of fingernails" | | 7 | "She pulled the pendant free" | | 8 | "She pushed forward deeper into" | | 9 | "Their centres were deep crimson," | | 10 | "She reached out to touch" | | 11 | "Her fingers were six inches" | | 12 | "She jerked her hand back." | | 13 | "Their trunks twisted in spirals" | | 14 | "She couldn't decide which option" | | 15 | "Her phone buzzed in her" | | 16 | "She pulled it out anyway." | | 17 | "Her fingers went numb." | | 18 | "She didn't type a response." | | 19 | "*You weren't supposed to come" |
| | ratio | 0.252 | |
| 76.82% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 82 | | totalSentences | 107 | | matches | | 0 | "The ancient oak standing stones" | | 1 | "Rory killed the torch and" | | 2 | "Richmond Park sprawled around her" | | 3 | "She'd walked this path a" | | 4 | "The Fae Grove lay somewhere" | | 5 | "Isolde's grove, Eva had called" | | 6 | "Rory had the pendant pressed" | | 7 | "She checked her phone." | | 8 | "The screen cast her face" | | 9 | "The boundary stones loomed ahead," | | 10 | "Rory stepped between them and" | | 11 | "Her breath misted." | | 12 | "The pendant pulsed against her" | | 13 | "She'd come here looking for" | | 14 | "The grove stretched beyond the" | | 15 | "Wildflowers bloomed in impossible shades," | | 16 | "They seemed to glow with" | | 17 | "The air hung thick and" | | 18 | "Rory took three steps forward." | | 19 | "The pendant warmed further." |
| | ratio | 0.766 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 107 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 53.57% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 48 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde's grove, Eva had called it in that careful way she adopted when discussing things that shouldn't exist." | | 1 | "The clearing was empty save for the flowers and the twisted shapes of ancient trees that leaned too far forward, as if listening." | | 2 | "Just stared at the words as if they might rearrange themselves into something less impossible." | | 3 | "Not running yet but running adjacent to running, moving with purpose through flowers that were now definitely trying to touch her, reaching with petals that sho…" | | 4 | "The pendant swung wildly on its chain, casting light in stuttering arcs that showed her glimpses of the clearing that didn't quite match up with what she'd seen…" | | 5 | "More like the impression of touch, the ghost of something that didn't quite exist in physical space." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |