| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.833 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 67.04% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1062 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "completely" | | 1 | "softly" | | 2 | "suddenly" | | 3 | "slowly" | | 4 | "quickly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 34.09% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1062 | | totalAiIsms | 14 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "stark" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "scanned" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "whisper" | | 6 | "oppressive" | | 7 | "dancing" | | 8 | "cacophony" | | 9 | "searing" | | 10 | "sentinels" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 105 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 88.44% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 105 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 106 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1056 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 77.54% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 40 | | wordCount | 1035 | | uniqueNames | 15 | | maxNameDensity | 1.45 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Eva | 2 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Heartstone | 4 | | Pendant | 4 | | London | 3 | | October | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Pre-Law | 1 | | One | 1 | | Rory | 15 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Eva" | | 2 | "Pendant" | | 3 | "Evan" | | 4 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Grove" | | 4 | "London" | | 5 | "October" | | 6 | "Hel" | | 7 | "One" |
| | globalScore | 0.775 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 76 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.947 | | wordCount | 1056 | | matches | | 0 | "Not dramatically, but enough to make her pause" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 65.41% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 35 | | mean | 30.17 | | std | 11.43 | | cv | 0.379 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 38 | | 1 | 32 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 32 | | 4 | 46 | | 5 | 27 | | 6 | 46 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 32 | | 9 | 47 | | 10 | 31 | | 11 | 53 | | 12 | 36 | | 13 | 20 | | 14 | 23 | | 15 | 46 | | 16 | 25 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 23 | | 20 | 31 | | 21 | 34 | | 22 | 37 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 27 | | 25 | 21 | | 26 | 29 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 31 | | 29 | 37 | | 30 | 39 | | 31 | 26 | | 32 | 47 | | 33 | 28 | | 34 | 39 |
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| 95.24% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | | 0 | "being followed" | | 1 | "was gone" | | 2 | "were gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 170 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 35.04% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 106 | | ratio | 0.038 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory froze, her hand instinctively flying to the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist—a childhood habit when she felt threatened." | | 1 | "There it was—a massive oak, hollowed out with age, its trunk split open like a wound." | | 2 | "She reached into her pocket for the lockpicks she always carried—a habit from her brief and regrettable Pre-Law days when she'd considered becoming a barrister like her father before fleeing to London." | | 3 | "The world shifted again, the sounds of London rushing back in—a distant siren, the hum of traffic, normal city noise that had never sounded so welcoming." |
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| 82.81% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1042 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 55 | | adverbRatio | 0.052783109404990404 | | lyAdverbCount | 18 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01727447216890595 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 106 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 106 | | mean | 9.96 | | std | 5.86 | | cv | 0.588 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 6 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 1 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 21 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 20 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 21 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 18 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 18 | | 41 | 15 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 16 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 13 |
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| 57.55% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.36792452830188677 | | totalSentences | 106 | | uniqueOpeners | 39 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 8 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "Too warm for the autumn" | | 1 | "Even the breeze seemed to" | | 2 | "Just shadows that seemed too" | | 3 | "Only thin silver beams reached" | | 4 | "Just standing stones and shadows." | | 5 | "Of course it was locked." | | 6 | "Just the oppressive silence that" | | 7 | "Just leaves and dirt." |
| | ratio | 0.084 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 22 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "She clutched the Heartstone Pendant" | | 1 | "she whispered to herself" | | 2 | "She followed the narrow path" | | 3 | "They crunched too loudly in" | | 4 | "She scanned the darkness between" | | 5 | "she told herself, though foxes" | | 6 | "She pulled it out, watching" | | 7 | "Their branches twisted overhead, creating" | | 8 | "She was being followed." | | 9 | "She broke into a jog," | | 10 | "She reached into the hollow," | | 11 | "She reached into her pocket" | | 12 | "she called out, her voice" | | 13 | "She looked down but saw" | | 14 | "She scrambled backwards, her eyes" | | 15 | "she whispered, backing away from" | | 16 | "Their whispers filled the air" | | 17 | "she commanded, though her voice" | | 18 | "She ran towards the standing" | | 19 | "She reached the stone and" |
| | ratio | 0.232 | |
| 81.05% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 72 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "The ancient oak standing stones" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter checked her phone" | | 2 | "The Fae Grove." | | 3 | "She clutched the Heartstone Pendant" | | 4 | "The deep crimson gemstone pulsed" | | 5 | "she whispered to herself" | | 6 | "The wildflowers bloomed unnaturally in" | | 7 | "The air hummed with electricity," | | 8 | "Rory stepped over the boundary" | | 9 | "The sounds of London faded" | | 10 | "She followed the narrow path" | | 11 | "They crunched too loudly in" | | 12 | "Something rustled in the undergrowth" | | 13 | "Rory froze, her hand instinctively" | | 14 | "She scanned the darkness between" | | 15 | "she told herself, though foxes" | | 16 | "The Heartstone Pendant grew hotter" | | 17 | "She pulled it out, watching" | | 18 | "That's what made it pulse." | | 19 | "Rory pressed forward, deeper into" |
| | ratio | 0.758 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "Just as Eva had warned" | | 1 | "If she could just reach" |
| | ratio | 0.021 | |
| 53.57% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 48 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "She followed the narrow path into the clearing, her trainers crunching softly on fallen leaves that shouldn't exist in October." | | 1 | "Only thin silver beams reached the forest floor, illuminating patches of the strange wildflowers that dotted the clearing." | | 2 | "The figures retreated from its glow, hissing in languages that hurt her ears." | | 3 | "The world shifted again, the sounds of London rushing back in—a distant siren, the hum of traffic, normal city noise that had never sounded so welcoming." | | 4 | "Rory lay on the grass, panting, her heart hammering against her ribs." | | 5 | "The wildflowers at her feet, which had been vibrant and alive moments ago, were now withered and brown." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "she called out, her voice steadier than she felt" | | 1 | "she commanded, though her voice shook" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "she called out (call out)" | | 2 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.75 | | effectiveRatio | 0.75 | |