| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 91.24% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1141 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 25.50% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1141 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "familiar" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "resolved" | | 5 | "echoed" | | 6 | "measured" | | 7 | "fractured" | | 8 | "stomach" | | 9 | "warmth" | | 10 | "throb" | | 11 | "silence" | | 12 | "structure" | | 13 | "resonated" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 116 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 116 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 116 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1121 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 1 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 20 | | wordCount | 1121 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 0.8 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | London | 2 | | October | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Hel | 1 | | Grove | 2 | | Aurora | 9 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Aurora" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "Hel" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 16.67% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 75 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed wider than she remembered, their bark rougher and more ancient" | | 1 | "seemed closer together, their glow creating pockets of deep shadow between the blooms" | | 2 | "seemed thunderously loud as she lifted the pendant higher, illuminating the wall of flowers surrounding her" | | 3 | "felt like coming home to a place she'd" |
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| 21.59% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.784 | | wordCount | 1121 | | matches | | 0 | "Not the crisp October cold she'd felt outside Richmond Park, but something deeper" | | 1 | "not through translation but through direct knowledge" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 116 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 36 | | mean | 31.14 | | std | 23.9 | | cv | 0.768 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 41 | | 1 | 10 | | 2 | 56 | | 3 | 54 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 58 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 55 | | 8 | 40 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 51 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 41 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 46 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 61 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 76 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 61 | | 22 | 41 | | 23 | 63 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 36 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 36 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 67 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 57 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 54 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 19 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 116 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 174 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 13 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 116 | | ratio | 0.103 | | matches | | 0 | "Not the crisp October cold she'd felt outside Richmond Park, but something deeper—a cold that reached past her jacket and settled against her ribs." | | 1 | "She'd come here because it pulsed near the Hel portal—a signal stronger than any compass." | | 2 | "The Grove had been quiet then—the kind of quiet that suggested held breath, but peaceful nonetheless." | | 3 | "The earth felt wrong beneath her feet—too springy, almost yielding, like stepping on skin rather than soil." | | 4 | "The movement had been subtle—the kind of thing peripheral vision caught but direct sight missed." | | 5 | "She noticed it in increments—the luminescence fading degree by degree, like someone slowly closing the aperture of a camera." | | 6 | "Not her own—she held that carefully in check, measured and quiet." | | 7 | "For a moment—just an instant—the light caught something." | | 8 | "It didn't pulse once and fade—it continued in a rapid sequence, each throb stronger than the last." | | 9 | "She hadn't noticed them close in—couldn't remember the exact moment they'd shifted from scattered around the clearing to pressed against her skin." | | 10 | "The petals showed internal structure when examined closely—something geometric beneath the organic curve, patterns that hurt to look at directly." | | 11 | "Not painful—worse." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1141 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 45 | | adverbRatio | 0.03943908851884312 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010517090271691499 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 116 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 116 | | mean | 9.66 | | std | 6.77 | | cv | 0.701 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 13 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 24 | | 6 | 22 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 20 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 1 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 17 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 17 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 1 | | 40 | 1 | | 41 | 1 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 15 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 50.29% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.35344827586206895 | | totalSentences | 116 | | uniqueOpeners | 41 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead it radiated a steady" | | 1 | "Instead, she narrowed her focus" | | 2 | "Then it was gone, folded" |
| | ratio | 0.032 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 24 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "She pushed through the standing" | | 1 | "It hung heavy against her" | | 2 | "She'd come here because it" | | 3 | "She wasn't supposed to be" | | 4 | "She'd heard nothing like that" | | 5 | "She moved deeper into the" | | 6 | "She pulled her jacket closer" | | 7 | "She'd watched them bloom and" | | 8 | "She stood motionless, testing whether" | | 9 | "She placed her hand over" | | 10 | "She waited, shoulders tense, watching" | | 11 | "She didn't turn this time." | | 12 | "It circled at the far" | | 13 | "She noticed it in increments—the" | | 14 | "She looked up and found" | | 15 | "It moved from right to" | | 16 | "She'd come here for this." | | 17 | "It didn't pulse once and" | | 18 | "They were pressed against her," | | 19 | "She hadn't noticed them close" |
| | ratio | 0.258 | |
| 56.77% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 75 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "The oak stones loomed against" | | 1 | "Aurora had memorised their shape" | | 2 | "Each trunk seemed wider than" | | 3 | "She pushed through the standing" | | 4 | "The moment her feet crossed" | | 5 | "The wildflowers glowed faintly in" | | 6 | "Aurora pulled the Heartstone pendant" | | 7 | "It hung heavy against her" | | 8 | "She'd come here because it" | | 9 | "Whatever was moving in the" | | 10 | "She wasn't supposed to be" | | 11 | "The thought arrived without context," | | 12 | "Nothing had told her this." | | 13 | "The wildflowers seemed closer together," | | 14 | "A sound drifted across the" | | 15 | "Aurora's jaw tightened." | | 16 | "She'd heard nothing like that" | | 17 | "The Grove had been quiet" | | 18 | "This was different." | | 19 | "The sound had texture to" |
| | ratio | 0.806 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "To find the portal." | | 1 | "To understand what moved through" | | 2 | "As though whatever made that" |
| | ratio | 0.032 | |
| 63.49% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Not the crisp October cold she'd felt outside Richmond Park, but something deeper—a cold that reached past her jacket and settled against her ribs." | | 1 | "The thought arrived without context, a certainty that planted itself in her chest." | | 2 | "Something that moved with too many joints, angles that bent in ways that suggested flexibility beyond what shoulders and hips could manage." | | 3 | "They were pressed against her, thousands of blooms surrounding her in a tight circle, their petals touching her jacket, her neck, her hair." | | 4 | "The petals showed internal structure when examined closely—something geometric beneath the organic curve, patterns that hurt to look at directly." | | 5 | "She understood them anyway, not through translation but through direct knowledge that bloomed in her mind." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |