Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTY362118ABRJFC929T8XR6

Run Details

Duration:
1m 10s
Cost:
$0.167730

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The brass bell above the door chimed as Aurora pushed into The Raven's Nest, shaking rain from her delivery jacket. The familiar smell of old wood and whiskey wrapped around her like a blanket. She nodded to Silas behind the bar, who raised an eyebrow at her early return. "Yu-Fei let me off. Said the weather would keep customers away." She slid onto a barstool, water dripping from her black hair onto the scarred wood. Silas poured her usual—gin and tonic, heavy on the gin. "Your loss is my gain. Been dead in here all evening." The door chimed again. A woman entered, designer heels clicking against the floor. Everything about her screamed money—the tailored coat, the leather handbag, the way she held herself like the world owed her passage. Aurora's hand froze halfway to her glass. "Eva?" The woman turned, and Aurora's chest tightened. Same heart-shaped face, same green eyes, but everything else had transformed. The wild copper curls she remembered were now sleek and straightened, the secondhand clothes replaced by what looked like Armani. "Rory?" Eva's voice climbed an octave. "Oh my God." They stared at each other across the dim bar. Five years dissolved and reformed in the space between them, heavy with everything left unsaid. Eva recovered first, crossing the room with practiced grace. "What are you doing here? In London?" "I live upstairs." Aurora forced her hand to complete its journey, wrapping fingers around the cold glass. "What about you? Thought you were in New York." "I was. Am. I mean—" Eva's polished facade cracked. "I'm back for a conference. Banking stuff." Banking. Aurora almost laughed. Eva, who used to rail against capitalism while spray-painting anti-establishment slogans on Cardiff University walls. "Sit." Silas appeared at Eva's elbow, all quiet authority. "What'll you have?" Eva glanced at her phone. "I shouldn't. I have drinks with clients at—" "Sit." This time it wasn't a suggestion. Eva sat, designer bag hitting the floor with an expensive thud. "Martini. Very dry." They waited in silence while Silas worked. Aurora studied the crescent scar on her wrist, remembering the day Eva had bandaged it after she fell from her bike. They'd been eight, racing through Bute Park, pretending to be explorers. "You look good." Eva's voice was carefully neutral. "Liar." "No, really. You look..." Eva's eyes tracked over Aurora's rain-soaked delivery uniform, the shadows under her eyes. "Healthy." "And you look rich." The words hung between them like an accusation. Eva's martini arrived, and she took a larger sip than necessary. "It's not what you think." "What do I think?" "That I sold out." Eva's fingers tightened on the stem. "That I became everything we swore we'd never be." Aurora shrugged. "Did you?" "Christ, Rory." Eva's mask slipped further. "Still straight for the jugular." "Some things don't change." "Everything changes." Eva's voice turned bitter. "You taught me that." The bar's old radiator clanged, punctuating the silence. Aurora remembered their last conversation—Eva begging her not to go back to Evan, Aurora insisting she could fix things, make it work. Two weeks later, she'd shown up at Eva's flat with a black eye and broken ribs. "I never thanked you," Aurora said quietly. "For getting me out." "You don't thank someone for basic human decency." "You gave up your job. Your flat." "Temporary setback." Eva gestured at her outfit. "Clearly recovered." But Aurora heard what lay beneath the bravado. Eva had been working at a nonprofit, trying to change the world one legal aid case at a time. She'd thrown it all away to get Aurora somewhere safe, somewhere Evan couldn't find her. "Tell me about New York," Aurora said, offering an olive branch. Eva grabbed it like a lifeline. "It's... intense. The firm keeps me busy. Sixty, seventy-hour weeks. But the money's insane. I have a apartment overlooking Central Park. Can you believe it? Me, living like some Wall Street princess." "Is that what you are now? A princess?" "Some days." Eva's laugh was hollow. "Some days I look in the mirror and don't recognize myself. Remember when we were going to start that legal clinic? Help refugees and asylum seekers?" "You were going to save the world." "And you were going to write the laws that would let me." Eva's eyes found Aurora's crescent scar. "Instead, you're delivering Chinese food and I'm helping corporations avoid taxes." The weight of their abandoned dreams pressed down like London fog. Aurora thought of her law textbooks gathering dust in Cardiff, her father's disappointment, her mother's worried calls she no longer answered. "We were children," Aurora said. "We were twenty. Old enough to know better." "Young enough to think love could save us." Eva flinched. They'd sworn never to talk about it—the complicated tangle of feelings that had underlain their friendship, the kiss they'd shared the night before Aurora went back to Evan, the words left unspoken when Eva bought her that one-way ticket to London. "I looked for you," Eva said suddenly. "After I got to New York. Tried calling, emailing. Your parents wouldn't tell me anything." "I needed to disappear for a while." "Five years, Rory. Five bloody years without a word." "I know." "Do you?" Eva's voice cracked. "Do you know I spent the first year terrified he'd found you? That I'd wake up to news that—" She pressed her lips together, composing herself. "I hired a private investigator. Just to make sure you were alive." Aurora's throat closed. "Eva—" "He told me you were safe. Working at some restaurant. Living above a bar." Eva's gesture encompassed the Raven's Nest. "This bar, apparently. I made him check every month for a year." The revelation sat between them, raw and pulsing. Aurora thought of all the nights she'd started to call, to write, to reach out somehow. But shame had held her back—shame at needing rescue, at choosing wrong, at running away from everyone who'd tried to help. "I'm sorry," she whispered. "For what? Surviving?" "For letting you think I was dead. For not being brave enough to—" Aurora stopped. Even now, the words wouldn't come. Eva's phone buzzed. She glanced at it, grimacing. "That's my reminder. The client drinks." Neither of them moved. "How long are you in London?" Aurora asked. "Three days. Fly back Sunday night." Three days. Nothing and everything. Eva stood, gathering her expensive bag. "Maybe we could—" She stopped, uncertainty flickering across features that had grown too used to certainty. "No. You've built a life here. I shouldn't complicate it." "Maybe I like complicated." Eva's smile was sad. "No. You like safe. You always have, even when you were pretending otherwise." It should have stung, but Aurora recognized the truth in it. She'd chosen Evan because he seemed safe, stable, normal. She'd been wrong about him but right about what she wanted—a quiet life, predictable days, no grand gestures or world-changing ambitions. "And you?" Aurora asked. "Are you happy being a Wall Street princess?" Eva paused at the door, rain streaming down the window beside her. "I'm successful. Sometimes that's enough." "Is it?" Eva's hand tightened on the door handle. For a moment, Aurora saw her as she'd been—fierce and idealistic, ready to fight the whole world for what was right. Then the moment passed, leaving only a beautiful stranger in expensive clothes. "Take care of yourself, Rory." The bell chimed as she left. Aurora stared at her half-empty glass while Silas polished the same spot on the bar for the third time. "Old friend?" he asked finally. "Something like that." He poured her another gin, stronger than the first. "Regret's a hell of a drinking companion." Aurora thought of Eva hiring someone to check on her, of five years of silence, of dreams abandoned and paths untaken. The crescent scar on her wrist caught the bar's dim light. "Yeah," she said, raising the glass. "It is."
total_cost0.16773

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
97.44% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags24
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"Eva's mask slipped further [further]"
1"Aurora said quietly [quietly]"
2"Eva said suddenly [suddenly]"
3"he asked finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences78
tagDensity0.308
leniency0.615
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.103
84.91% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1325
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count1
3
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"carefully"
2"really"
3"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
54.72% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1325
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"eyebrow"
count1
2
word"facade"
count1
3
word"silence"
count3
4
word"racing"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"unspoken"
count1
7
word"reminder"
count1
8
word"predictable"
count1
9
word"streaming"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"eyebrow"
2"facade"
3"silence"
4"racing"
5"weight"
6"unspoken"
7"reminder"
8"predictable"
9"streaming"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences88
matches
0"was sad"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences88
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"started to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences138
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen43
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1310
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Aurora remembered their last conversation—Eva begging her not to go back to Evan, Aurora insisting she could fix things,…"
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions82
wordCount833
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity3.84
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity7.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Aurora27
Raven2
Nest2
Silas5
Armani1
Eva32
Banking1
Cardiff2
University1
Bute1
Park1
Evan4
London2
Three1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Raven"
2"Nest"
3"Silas"
4"Eva"
5"Evan"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"Bute"
2"Park"
3"London"
globalScore0
windowScore0
63.79% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences58
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like Armani"
1"seemed safe stable, normal"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1310
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences138
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs77
mean17.01
std13.6
cv0.799
sampleLengths
049
126
221
341
41
538
69
724
816
926
1016
1119
1212
1313
147
1514
1639
178
181
1918
204
2119
225
234
2419
254
2611
274
2810
2946
3011
318
327
339
3442
3511
3638
378
3832
397
4029
4132
425
438
448
4543
4622
477
489
492
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences88
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs168
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences138
ratio0.051
matches
0"Silas poured her usual—gin and tonic, heavy on the gin."
1"Everything about her screamed money—the tailored coat, the leather handbag, the way she held herself like the world owed her passage."
2"Aurora remembered their last conversation—Eva begging her not to go back to Evan, Aurora insisting she could fix things, make it work."
3"They'd sworn never to talk about it—the complicated tangle of feelings that had underlain their friendship, the kiss they'd shared the night before Aurora went back to Evan, the words left unspoken when Eva bought her that one-way ticket to London."
4"But shame had held her back—shame at needing rescue, at choosing wrong, at running away from everyone who'd tried to help."
5"She'd been wrong about him but right about what she wanted—a quiet life, predictable days, no grand gestures or world-changing ambitions."
6"For a moment, Aurora saw her as she'd been—fierce and idealistic, ready to fight the whole world for what was right."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount846
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"Same heart-shaped face,"
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.022458628841607566
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.0070921985815602835
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences138
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences138
mean9.49
std6.83
cv0.72
sampleLengths
020
114
215
326
410
511
64
79
821
97
101
117
1211
1320
146
153
169
1715
189
197
2017
219
229
237
241
253
2615
279
283
295
308
317
3211
333
347
3521
3611
378
381
3917
401
414
428
4311
445
454
4610
479
482
492
61.59% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.41304347826086957
totalSentences138
uniqueOpeners57
42.19% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences79
matches
0"Then the moment passed, leaving"
ratio0.013
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount16
totalSentences79
matches
0"She nodded to Silas behind"
1"She slid onto a barstool,"
2"They stared at each other"
3"They waited in silence while"
4"They'd been eight, racing through"
5"She'd thrown it all away"
6"They'd sworn never to talk"
7"She pressed her lips together,"
8"She glanced at it, grimacing."
9"She stopped, uncertainty flickering across"
10"It should have stung, but"
11"She'd chosen Evan because he"
12"She'd been wrong about him"
13"he asked finally"
14"He poured her another gin,"
15"she said, raising the glass"
ratio0.203
10.63% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount71
totalSentences79
matches
0"The brass bell above the"
1"The familiar smell of old"
2"She nodded to Silas behind"
3"She slid onto a barstool,"
4"Silas poured her usual—gin and"
5"The door chimed again."
6"A woman entered, designer heels"
7"Everything about her screamed money—the"
8"Aurora's hand froze halfway to"
9"The woman turned, and Aurora's"
10"The wild copper curls she"
11"Eva's voice climbed an octave"
12"They stared at each other"
13"Eva recovered first, crossing the"
14"Aurora forced her hand to"
15"Eva's polished facade cracked"
16"Aurora almost laughed."
17"Eva, who used to rail"
18"Silas appeared at Eva's elbow,"
19"Eva glanced at her phone."
ratio0.899
63.29% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences79
matches
0"Even now, the words wouldn't"
ratio0.013
95.24% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Eva, who used to rail against capitalism while spray-painting anti-establishment slogans on Cardiff University walls."
1"They'd sworn never to talk about it—the complicated tangle of feelings that had underlain their friendship, the kiss they'd shared the night before Aurora went …"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags24
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"She slid, water dripping from her black hair onto the scarred wood"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"She pressed (press)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences78
tagDensity0.128
leniency0.256
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.051
82.2601%