Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTY36Z4JW9MVZT4KD1221B8

Run Details

Duration:
2m 7s
Cost:
$0.002314
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The abandoned Tube station beneath Camden was a labyrinth of rusted tracks and shattered tiles, the air thick with the scent of mildew and something metallic Detective Harlow Quinn couldn’t quite place. Her boots echoed against the cracked concrete as she approached the yellow tape cordoning off the scene. The flickering light from a malfunctioning bulb overhead cast long shadows across the platform, distorting the faces of the forensic team already at work. A uniformed officer stepped forward, his voice strained. “Detective Quinn, over here.” She nodded, her sharp jawline set in a tight line, and followed him past the tape. The body lay sprawled on the edge of the platform, a man in his thirties wearing a trench coat that had seen better days. His face was pale, almost translucent, and his eyes were wide open, frozen in a look of sheer terror. Quinn crouched beside the body, her brown eyes scanning the scene with military precision. She noted the position of the hands, the posture, the lack of visible wounds. Her fingers brushed against his coat pocket, feeling something hard and flat inside. She pulled it out—a small brass compass, its casing etched with protective sigils and coated in a patina of verdigris. The needle trembled faintly, pointing toward the shadows beyond the platform. “What’s this?” she muttered, turning it over in her hands. A familiar voice cut through the hum of forensic chatter. “A Veil Compass. Rare piece.” Quinn glanced up to see Eva Kowalski stepping forward, her curly red hair tucked behind her left ear and her worn leather satchel slung over one shoulder. Round glasses perched on her freckled nose, she adjusted them as she crouched beside Quinn. “What are you doing here?” Quinn’s tone was clipped, her suspicion evident. “I was called in.” Eva’s green eyes flicked toward the body. “The forensics team wanted an expert opinion. Given the... unusual circumstances.” Quinn’s brow furrowed. She stood, her worn leather watch catching the dim light as she gestured toward the body. “Unusual how? His ID says he’s a Nathaniel Graves, freelance journalist. No signs of struggle, no wounds, no obvious cause of death.” Eva leaned closer, her fingers brushing against the man’s coat. “Look at his shoes.” Quinn’s gaze dropped. The soles were scuffed, almost melted, and there was a faint smell of sulfur. “And this.” Eva reached into her satchel and pulled out a notebook, flipping to a page filled with etched symbols. She held it up next to the markings on the compass. “These sigils—they’re protective charms. Designed to ward off entities from the Veil.” Quinn frowned. “The Veil?” Eva tucked her hair behind her ear again, a nervous habit Quinn had noticed. “A term used in occult circles to describe the barrier between our world and the supernatural. The Veil Market”—she gestured around them—“exists in the spaces where that barrier is thin.” Quinn glanced back at the compass, its needle still trembling. “So this points to supernatural rifts or portals?” Eva nodded. “Exactly. And if he had one on him, it means he was investigating something... otherworldly.” Quinn’s jaw tightened. “And you think that’s what killed him?” Eva’s expression was somber. “Possibly. The burns on his shoes suggest he encountered something he wasn’t prepared for. Something from the other side.” Quinn sighed, rubbing the bridge of her nose. “You know how this sounds, right? ‘Otherworldly entities’? ‘Supernatural rifts’? That’s not exactly standard procedure.” Eva straightened, her satchel shifting against her hip. “Detective, I know it’s outside your usual scope. But I’ve seen things like this before. The archives at the British Museum—they’re full of accounts people would dismiss as fiction. But they’re real.” Quinn’s gaze hardened. “Real or not, I need evidence. Something concrete.” Eva hesitated, then reached into her satchel again. She pulled out a small vial filled with a shimmering silver liquid. “This is lunar mercury. It reacts to supernatural energy.” She uncorked the vial and dipped a dropper into it, then carefully let a drop fall onto the compass. The liquid hissed as it touched the brass, spreading out in intricate patterns that matched the sigils etched into its face. The needle suddenly spun wildly before pointing sharply toward a dark alcove further down the platform. Quinn’s eyes narrowed. “What the hell was that?” Eva corked the vial, her hands steady despite the tension in her voice. “It’s proof. Something supernatural happened here. And whatever it was, it’s still close.” Quinn glanced toward the alcove, her hand instinctively moving to her sidearm. “If you’re right...” Eva interrupted. “I know you don’t trust me. But this isn’t just about solving a case. It’s about protecting people from things they don’t understand. Things that could kill them.” Quinn’s gaze flicked back to the body, then to the compass still trembling in her hand. “Fine. But if this turns out to be some elaborate hoax, you’re out of here.” Eva nodded, her glasses reflecting the flickering light. “Fair enough.” Quinn stepped toward the alcove, her boots crunching against the debris-strewn floor. The shadows seemed to deepen as she approached, the air growing colder. She raised her flashlight, the beam cutting through the darkness to reveal a jagged crack in the wall, its edges glowing faintly with an eerie green light. Eva was right beside her, her voice barely above a whisper. “A rift. This is where it happened.” Quinn’s grip tightened on her flashlight. “And what exactly is on the other side?” Eva hesitated, her freckled face pale in the glow. “Nothing good.” Quinn glanced back at the compass, the needle now pointing directly at the crack. She took a deep breath, her military training kicking in. “You’re staying out here.” Eva’s eyes widened. “Detective, you can’t—” “I’m not arguing.” Quinn’s tone left no room for debate. She holstered her flashlight and pulled out a pair of gloves, snapping them on with practiced efficiency. “If there’s something dangerous in there, I can handle it.” Eva’s hand twitched toward her satchel. “At least take this.” She handed Quinn a small pouch filled with white powder. “Salt infused with iron. It disrupts supernatural energy.” Quinn took it reluctantly, slipping it into her pocket. “Fine. But stay back.” She stepped forward, her boots silent against the floor. The crack in the wall seemed to pulse as she approached, the green light growing brighter. She paused, her instincts screaming at her to turn back, but she pushed forward, her hand resting on her sidearm. The moment she crossed the threshold, the world shifted. The air was thick, heavy, and smelled of rot and ash. The tunnel beyond was twisted, its walls covered in pulsating veins of light. Shadows moved in the corners of her vision, darting just out of reach. Quinn’s heart pounded, but she forced herself to focus. She pulled out the compass, its needle spinning wildly before settling on a direction deeper into the tunnel. “Alright,” she muttered under her breath. “Let’s see what we’re dealing with.” She moved carefully, her flashlight cutting through the oppressive darkness. The tunnel seemed to stretch on forever, the air growing colder with every step. And then she saw it. A figure stood at the end of the tunnel, its silhouette distorted and shifting. It turned slowly, its eyes glowing with a sickly green light. Quinn’s hand instinctively went to her sidearm, but she hesitated. The compass in her other hand was vibrating violently now, the needle spinning out of control. The figure tilted its head, its voice a low, grating whisper. “You should not be here.” Quinn’s grip tightened on her gun. “And you shouldn’t be messing with people in my city.” The figure chuckled, a sound that sent chills down her spine. “Your city? This is a place beyond your comprehension.” Quinn stepped forward, her voice steady despite the fear gnawing at her. “Maybe. But I’m not leaving until I get some answers.” The figure moved then, faster than Quinn could react. It was on her in an instant, its cold hands wrapping around her throat. She gasped, struggling to breathe as her vision blurred. And then she heard Eva’s voice, distant but clear. “Detective! Throw the salt!” Quinn’s fingers fumbled for the pouch in her pocket. She pulled it out and threw it toward the figure, the powder exploding in a burst of white light. The figure recoiled, its grip loosening as it hissed in pain. Quinn stumbled back, coughing as she raised her gun. But the figure was gone, vanished into the shadows. Eva appeared beside her, her face pale but determined. “Are you okay?” Quinn nodded, her breathing ragged. “What the hell was that?” Eva’s expression was grim. “A shade. They’re drawn to rifts like this. They feed on fear.” Quinn holstered her gun, her hands shaking slightly. “And you just let me walk into that?” Eva’s gaze was steady. “You wouldn’t have believed me if I told you. Sometimes you have to see it for yourself.” Quinn looked back at the tunnel, the green light fading as the rift began to close. She exhaled slowly, her mind racing. “Alright. Let’s pull together everything we’ve got. And Eva?” “Yes?” “Next time, lead with the part about the feeding on fear.” Eva’s lips twitched in a faint smile. “Noted.” Quinn turned back toward the rift, her sharp jawline set in determination. “Now let’s figure out how to stop this from happening again.”
created_at"2026-02-19T12:30:45.74Z" 2/19/2026, 12:30:45 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.132
leniency0.264
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
71.36% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1571
totalAiIsmAdverbs9
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count2
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"sharply"
count1
3
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
4
adverb"reluctantly"
count1
5
adverb"slowly"
count2
6
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"suddenly"
2"sharply"
3"barely above a whisper"
4"reluctantly"
5"slowly"
6"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
26.80% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1571
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"shattered"
count1
1
word"echoed"
count1
2
word"scanning"
count1
3
word"etched"
count3
4
word"trembled"
count1
5
word"familiar"
count1
6
word"flicked"
count2
7
word"furrowed"
count1
8
word"otherworldly"
count2
9
word"standard"
count1
10
word"intricate"
count1
11
word"tension"
count1
12
word"whisper"
count2
13
word"pulse"
count1
14
word"oppressive"
count1
15
word"down her spine"
count1
16
word"determined"
count1
17
word"racing"
count1
highlights
0"shattered"
1"echoed"
2"scanning"
3"etched"
4"trembled"
5"familiar"
6"flicked"
7"furrowed"
8"otherworldly"
9"standard"
10"intricate"
11"tension"
12"whisper"
13"pulse"
14"oppressive"
15"down her spine"
16"determined"
17"racing"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count2
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences98
matches
0"t in determination"
69.97% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences98
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences143
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1568
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions59
wordCount1110
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity2.97
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity5.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Tube1
Camden1
Detective1
Harlow1
Quinn33
Eva21
Kowalski1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Eva"
3"Kowalski"
places(empty)
globalScore0.014
windowScore0
89.76% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences83
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"quite place"
1"appeared beside her, her face pale but determined"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1568
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences143
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs70
mean22.4
std15.53
cv0.694
sampleLengths
073
112
259
372
410
515
642
712
822
941
1014
1117
1243
134
1444
1518
1617
1710
1823
1923
2040
2111
2248
2337
248
2526
2615
2730
2831
2910
3051
3118
3214
3311
3424
354
366
3737
3828
3913
4045
4146
4227
4312
4424
455
4625
4726
4816
4916
90.94% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences98
matches
0"was clipped"
1"were scuffed"
2"was twisted"
3"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs197
matches
0"was vibrating"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences143
ratio0.007
matches
0"She pulled it out—a small brass compass, its casing etched with protective sigils and coated in a patina of verdigris."
98.77% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1111
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount46
adverbRatio0.041404140414041404
lyAdverbCount19
lyAdverbRatio0.017101710171017102
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences143
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences143
mean10.97
std6.51
cv0.594
sampleLengths
032
117
224
38
44
516
624
719
814
914
1013
1120
1211
1310
1410
155
1627
1715
1812
1911
2011
213
2216
2322
2410
254
263
2714
2820
2911
3012
312
322
3314
3430
3510
368
372
3815
393
407
414
4219
438
4415
458
4632
473
488
498
46.50% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.2727272727272727
totalSentences143
uniqueOpeners39
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences95
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences95
matches
0"Her boots echoed against the"
1"She nodded, her sharp jawline"
2"His face was pale, almost"
3"She noted the position of"
4"Her fingers brushed against his"
5"She pulled it out—a small"
6"she muttered, turning it over"
7"She stood, her worn leather"
8"She held it up next"
9"She pulled out a small"
10"She uncorked the vial and"
11"She raised her flashlight, the"
12"She took a deep breath,"
13"She holstered her flashlight and"
14"She handed Quinn a small"
15"She stepped forward, her boots"
16"She paused, her instincts screaming"
17"She pulled out the compass,"
18"she muttered under her breath"
19"She moved carefully, her flashlight"
ratio0.263
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount91
totalSentences95
matches
0"The abandoned Tube station beneath"
1"Her boots echoed against the"
2"The flickering light from a"
3"A uniformed officer stepped forward,"
4"She nodded, her sharp jawline"
5"The body lay sprawled on"
6"His face was pale, almost"
7"Quinn crouched beside the body,"
8"She noted the position of"
9"Her fingers brushed against his"
10"She pulled it out—a small"
11"The needle trembled faintly, pointing"
12"she muttered, turning it over"
13"A familiar voice cut through"
14"Quinn glanced up to see"
15"Quinn’s tone was clipped, her"
16"Eva’s green eyes flicked toward"
17"Quinn’s brow furrowed."
18"She stood, her worn leather"
19"Eva leaned closer, her fingers"
ratio0.958
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences95
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences53
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"She raised her flashlight, the beam cutting through the darkness to reveal a jagged crack in the wall, its edges glowing faintly with an eerie green light."
1"She pulled out the compass, its needle spinning wildly before settling on a direction deeper into the tunnel."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"she muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.038
leniency0.075
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.075
78.6922%