Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTY38Z13K3ZYG55ZGPVT5FX

Run Details

Duration:
28.8s
Cost:
$0.005266
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt clicked open with a heavy, metallic thud that echoed through the narrow hallway. Aurora gripped the edge of the doorframe, her knuckles white against the peeling paint. She had expected a delivery from Yu-Fei, maybe a wrong-number knock from the curry house downstairs, or perhaps Ptolemy scratching to get back in after squeezing through the window. She did not expect the man standing on the grimy landing, illuminated by the flickering bulb overhead. Lucien Moreau filled the doorway. Rain dripped from the hem of his charcoal suit, pooling on the linoleum floor. His platinum hair, usually slicked back to perfection, clung to his forehead in damp strands. The ivory handle of his cane gleamed under the weak light, a stark contrast to the grime of Brick Lane. "You look terrible," Aurora said, her voice flat. She stepped back, leaving the door wide open. "Come in before you rot the floorboards." Lucien crossed the threshold without invitation. He moved with that fluid, unnatural grace that always made her skin prickle, a reminder of the blood that ran through his veins. He shook his umbrella once, a sharp snap, before leaning it against the wall beside a stack of ancient scrolls. "And you look exactly as I remembered," he replied, his accent thickening the vowels. "Though the circles under your eyes are new." Aurora slammed the door shut and engaged all three locks in rapid succession. The sound echoed like gunshots in the cramped space. She turned to face him, crossing her arms over her chest. The smell of rain and expensive cologne washed over her, pushing aside the lingering scent of turmeric and old paper that permeated the flat. "What are you doing here, Lucien?" He ignored the question, his mismatched eyes—one amber, one void-black—scanning the room. They landed on Ptolemy, the tabby cat, who sat atop a pile of research notes on the sofa, tail twitching. Lucien extended a hand. The cat sniffed his fingers, then rubbed its cheek against his knuckles. "Your security is lacking," Lucien noted, stroking the cat. "Three deadbolts on the front, yet your window latch is broken. I could have entered through there without disturbing you." "I didn't invite you to inspect my home security." Aurora walked past him to the small kitchenette, grabbing a chipped mug from the drying rack. Her hands trembled slightly, so she gripped the ceramic tighter. "I asked why you are here. We said everything we needed to say six months ago. Actually, we said far too much." Lucien released the cat and turned to face her. He rested his weight on his cane, the ivory head pressing into the worn carpet. "Circumstances have changed, Rory." "Don't call me that." She filled the mug with water from the tap, the pipes groaning in protest. "Only Eva calls me that. And you lost the right when you walked out of the Golden Empress without looking back." "I looked back." Lucien's voice dropped, losing its polished edge. "I looked back three times before I reached the corner. You were scrubbing a table, refusing to meet my gaze." Aurora spun around, water sloshing over the rim of the mug and onto her hand. She didn't wipe it away. "Because you left a note, Lucien. A note. 'Gone to Marseille. Indefinitely.' That was it. No explanation. No goodbye. Just a piece of napkin tucked under a salt shaker." "My father summoned me." Lucien took a step toward her, the floorboard creaking under his polished shoe. "Avaros is not a place one declines an invitation from, especially when the invitation comes with a threat against one's human associates." "So you threatened me by leaving?" Aurora laughed, a sharp, brittle sound. "That's rich. You think disappearing protected me? Do you have any idea what I went through thinking you were dead? Or worse, that you just decided I wasn't worth the trouble?" "I thought distance was the only shield I could offer." Lucien stopped inches from her. He smelled of ozone and old books, a scent that triggered a memory of a night in a cemetery, rain pouring down, his hand warm against her cheek. She shook the memory away. "Clearly, I miscalculated." "You miscalculated everything." Aurora set the mug down on the counter with a clatter. She pointed a finger at his chest, right over the pocket of his tailored jacket. "You don't get to show up here, in my safe space, after half a year of silence, and act like nothing happened. You don't get to analyze my window latches and pet my cat like you belong here." Ptolemy jumped from the sofa and wound himself around Lucien's ankles, purring loudly. Lucien looked down at the cat, then back up at Aurora. His expression remained impassive, but the black pupil of his left eye dilated, swallowing the amber iris. "I do not act like I belong," he said softly. "I am here because the barriers between realms are thinning. Something is hunting in London, Rory. Something that knows about your connection to me." Aurora felt a chill run down her spine, unrelated to the draft from the poorly sealed window. "Is that why you're here? To warn me?" "To protect you." Lucien reached out, his fingers hovering near the small crescent scar on her left wrist. He didn't touch her, but the heat radiating from his palm was palpable. "And to apologize. Though I know words carry little weight with you." "Words are all we have, Lucien. Actions are what broke us." She pulled her hand away, tucking it behind her back. "You chose your world over ours. Over me." "I chose survival." Lucien's jaw tightened, a muscle feathering along the line. "If I had stayed, they would have burned this building to the ground with you inside. Is that what you wanted? A heroic last stand in a flat above a curry house?" "I wanted honesty!" Aurora's voice cracked. She took a breath, forcing herself to lower her volume. The neighbors below were likely listening. "I wanted you to trust me enough to tell me the truth before you vanished. Instead, you treated me like a child who couldn't handle reality." Lucien sighed, a sound of genuine weariness. He loosened his tie, pulling the knot slack. "You are right. I was a fool. Pride and fear made me reckless." He took another step, closing the remaining distance between them. Now she could see the fine lines around his eyes, the exhaustion he tried to hide beneath his immaculate exterior. "But I am here now. And I am not leaving until I know you are safe." Aurora looked up at him, really looked at him, for the first time since he opened the door. The anger still simmered in her gut, hot and acidic, but beneath it lay the old ache, the hollow space he had left behind. She saw the tension in his shoulders, the way his grip on the cane whitened his knuckles. He wasn't just posing; he was on edge. "If you stay," she said, her voice barely above a whisper, "you sleep on the sofa. And you do not touch my research." Lucien's lips quirked upward, a ghost of a smile that didn't reach his eyes. "Agreed." "And no demon business inside the flat. If anything tries to come through that window, you deal with it outside." "Reasonable." Aurora turned away from him, busying herself with drying the counter she had already dried. She needed something to do with her hands, something to stop her from reaching out and checking if he was real. "Make yourself useful. There's tea in the cupboard. Brew it properly, or don't bother." She heard the rustle of fabric as Lucien moved to the cupboard. The familiar sound of him navigating her small kitchen sent a jolt of nostalgia through her that nearly doubled her over. "Milk or lemon?" he asked. "Neither." Aurora leaned against the counter, watching him from the corner of her eye. "Black. Two sugars. Just how you hate it." Lucien paused, the sugar bowl in his hand. He looked at her, his heterochromatic gaze intense. "I never hated it. I simply preferred to share yours." The air in the room grew heavy, charged with the unsaid things hanging between them. The rain battered against the windowpane, a relentless rhythm that matched the pounding of Aurora's heart. She looked at the scar on her wrist, then at the man who had caused it to throb with memory. "Just make the tea, Lucien," she said, turning her back to him again. "Before I change my mind and throw you out into the rain." "As you wish." The kettle whistled, a shrill scream that shattered the tension. Lucien poured the water, the steam rising between them like a veil. He placed the mug on the counter beside her hand, his fingers brushing hers for a fleeting second. The contact burned, electric and terrifying. Aurora wrapped her hands around the warm ceramic, grounding herself. She didn't drink. She just held on, staring at the condensation forming on the window, waiting for the next move in a game neither of them knew how to play anymore.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.417
leniency0.833
rawRatio0.05
effectiveRatio0.042
87.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1538
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count1
3
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"softly"
2"really"
3"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
25.23% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1538
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"echoed"
count2
1
word"stark"
count1
2
word"reminder"
count1
3
word"scanning"
count1
4
word"trembled"
count1
5
word"weight"
count2
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"chill"
count1
8
word"down her spine"
count1
9
word"palpable"
count1
10
word"tension"
count2
11
word"whisper"
count1
12
word"familiar"
count1
13
word"navigating"
count1
14
word"charged"
count1
15
word"pounding"
count1
16
word"throb"
count1
17
word"shattered"
count1
18
word"fleeting"
count1
19
word"electric"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"stark"
2"reminder"
3"scanning"
4"trembled"
5"weight"
6"silence"
7"chill"
8"down her spine"
9"palpable"
10"tension"
11"whisper"
12"familiar"
13"navigating"
14"charged"
15"pounding"
16"throb"
17"shattered"
18"fleeting"
19"electric"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences79
matches
0"felt a chill"
1"a jolt of nostalgia"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences79
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences107
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1533
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions39
wordCount990
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.72
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Yu-Fei1
Ptolemy3
Moreau1
Brick1
Lane1
Aurora15
Lucien17
persons
0"Ptolemy"
1"Moreau"
2"Aurora"
3"Lucien"
places
0"Yu-Fei"
1"Brick"
2"Lane"
globalScore0.641
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences68
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1533
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences107
matches(empty)
97.59% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs41
mean37.39
std18.38
cv0.492
sampleLengths
076
154
223
349
422
557
66
748
829
957
1028
1139
1230
1349
1439
1543
1651
1767
1841
1934
2025
2143
2229
2344
2448
2574
2667
2723
2815
2920
301
3150
3233
335
3422
3526
3651
3725
383
3946
4041
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences79
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs172
matches(empty)
89.45% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences107
ratio0.019
matches
0"He ignored the question, his mismatched eyes—one amber, one void-black—scanning the room."
1"He wasn't just posing; he was on edge."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount995
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.032160804020100506
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.009045226130653266
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences107
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences107
mean14.33
std7.37
cv0.514
sampleLengths
016
114
229
317
45
514
615
720
88
98
107
116
1223
1320
1414
158
1613
179
1811
1924
206
2112
2220
234
2412
259
2620
2725
2810
2922
309
3115
324
3318
3421
3510
3620
3715
385
3929
4017
4122
4212
4331
4415
4528
465
473
4814
4915
59.81% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.3925233644859813
totalSentences107
uniqueOpeners42
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences78
matches(empty)
ratio0
40.51% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences78
matches
0"She had expected a delivery"
1"She did not expect the"
2"His platinum hair, usually slicked"
3"She stepped back, leaving the"
4"He moved with that fluid,"
5"He shook his umbrella once,"
6"he replied, his accent thickening"
7"She turned to face him,"
8"He ignored the question, his"
9"They landed on Ptolemy, the"
10"Her hands trembled slightly, so"
11"He rested his weight on"
12"She filled the mug with"
13"She didn't wipe it away."
14"He smelled of ozone and"
15"She shook the memory away."
16"She pointed a finger at"
17"His expression remained impassive, but"
18"he said softly"
19"He didn't touch her, but"
ratio0.449
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount77
totalSentences78
matches
0"The third deadbolt clicked open"
1"Aurora gripped the edge of"
2"She had expected a delivery"
3"She did not expect the"
4"Lucien Moreau filled the doorway."
5"Rain dripped from the hem"
6"His platinum hair, usually slicked"
7"The ivory handle of his"
8"Aurora said, her voice flat"
9"She stepped back, leaving the"
10"Lucien crossed the threshold without"
11"He moved with that fluid,"
12"He shook his umbrella once,"
13"he replied, his accent thickening"
14"Aurora slammed the door shut"
15"The sound echoed like gunshots"
16"She turned to face him,"
17"The smell of rain and"
18"He ignored the question, his"
19"They landed on Ptolemy, the"
ratio0.987
64.10% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences78
matches
0"Now she could see the"
ratio0.013
59.80% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences43
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The smell of rain and expensive cologne washed over her, pushing aside the lingering scent of turmeric and old paper that permeated the flat."
1"He smelled of ozone and old books, a scent that triggered a memory of a night in a cemetery, rain pouring down, his hand warm against her cheek."
2"Lucien's lips quirked upward, a ghost of a smile that didn't reach his eyes."
3"The rain battered against the windowpane, a relentless rhythm that matched the pounding of Aurora's heart."
4"He placed the mug on the counter beside her hand, his fingers brushing hers for a fleeting second."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"Aurora said, her voice flat"
1"he replied, his accent thickening the vowels"
2"She filled, the pipes groaning in protest"
3"Lucien took, the floorboard creaking under his polished shoe"
4"Lucien's jaw tightened, a muscle feathering along the line"
5"she said, her voice barely above a whisper,"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Lucien noted (note)"
1"Aurora laughed (laugh)"
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.167
leniency0.333
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.083
79.1164%