Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTY3AJWNH0VT4KK7J47NCH8

Run Details

Duration:
12.1s
Cost:
$0.000883
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
**The Fae Grove at Dusk** The standing stones loomed black against the bruised purple sky as Rory stepped into the clearing. Her boots sank slightly into the unnaturally soft earth, the scent of wildflowers thick enough to coat her tongue. The pendant around her neck pulsed once—a warning or a welcome, she couldn’t tell. She hadn’t planned on coming back here. Not after last time. But Eva’s text had been insistent: *Meet me at the grove. No phones. Midnight.* And now Eva was late. Rory exhaled through her nose, breath fogging in the chill. The grove was too quiet. No rustle of leaves, no distant hum of London traffic—just the oppressive stillness of a place holding its breath. A twig snapped behind her. She spun, heart hammering. Nothing but the standing stones, their shadows stretching long and crooked across the grass. "Eva?" Her voice sounded small, swallowed by the grove. No answer. The pendant warmed against her skin. Something moved between the trees—a flicker of pale fabric, there then gone. Too tall to be Eva. Rory’s fingers twitched toward the pocketknife she always carried. "Who’s there?" Silence. Then, from the far side of the clearing, a whisper. Not words. Just... sound. Like fabric dragging over stone. The wildflowers at her feet trembled, though there was no wind. Another step. Another snap of twigs—but this time from her left. And her right. Closing in. The pendant burned. Rory backed toward the standing stones, pulse roaring in her ears. The air thickened, pressing against her skin like invisible hands. Then she saw it. Between the trees. A shape. Watching. Not human. Not even close.
created_at"2026-02-19T12:30:49.441Z" 2/19/2026, 12:30:49 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences2
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
81.88% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount276
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount276
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count1
2
word"chill"
count1
3
word"oppressive"
count1
4
word"flicker"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"whisper"
count1
7
word"trembled"
count1
8
word"pulse"
count1
9
word"roaring"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"pulsed"
2"chill"
3"oppressive"
4"flicker"
5"silence"
6"whisper"
7"trembled"
8"pulse"
9"roaring"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences41
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences41
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences42
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen20
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords13
totalWords272
ratio0.048
matches
0"The Fae Grove at Dusk"
1"Meet me at the grove. No phones. Midnight."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
75.65% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions10
wordCount269
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity1.49
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Fae1
Grove1
Rory4
Eva3
London1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"London"
globalScore0.757
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences18
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount272
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences42
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs18
mean15.11
std12.69
cv0.84
sampleLengths
05
149
230
334
45
518
611
76
826
92
1020
1111
1216
133
1421
1510
162
173
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences41
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs40
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences42
ratio0.095
matches
0"The pendant around her neck pulsed once—a warning or a welcome, she couldn’t tell."
1"No rustle of leaves, no distant hum of London traffic—just the oppressive stillness of a place holding its breath."
2"Something moved between the trees—a flicker of pale fabric, there then gone."
3"Another snap of twigs—but this time from her left."
93.33% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount273
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount13
adverbRatio0.047619047619047616
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.007326007326007326
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences42
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences42
mean6.48
std4.94
cv0.763
sampleLengths
05
116
219
314
47
54
611
72
86
910
105
1119
125
134
1414
159
162
176
1812
195
209
212
221
2310
242
251
261
275
2811
292
309
313
322
333
3411
3510
364
373
382
391
402
413
88.10% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.5714285714285714
totalSentences42
uniqueOpeners24
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences30
matches
0"Too tall to be Eva."
1"Then, from the far side"
2"Then she saw it."
ratio0.1
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount4
totalSentences30
matches
0"Her boots sank slightly into"
1"She hadn’t planned on coming"
2"She spun, heart hammering."
3"Her voice sounded small, swallowed"
ratio0.133
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount20
totalSentences30
matches
0"**The Fae Grove at Dusk**"
1"The standing stones loomed black"
2"Her boots sank slightly into"
3"The pendant around her neck"
4"She hadn’t planned on coming"
5"Midnight.* And now Eva was"
6"Rory exhaled through her nose,"
7"The grove was too quiet."
8"A twig snapped behind her."
9"She spun, heart hammering."
10"Nothing but the standing stones,"
11"Her voice sounded small, swallowed"
12"The pendant warmed against her"
13"Something moved between the trees—a"
14"Rory’s fingers twitched toward the"
15"The wildflowers at her feet"
16"Another snap of twigs—but this"
17"The pendant burned."
18"Rory backed toward the standing"
19"The air thickened, pressing against"
ratio0.667
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences30
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences13
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
87.9654%