Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTY3B895ZVT2E7XJ9Y2VW0Q

Run Details

Duration:
57.4s
Cost:
$0.001642
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The chain slid with a heavy metallic rasp, dragging tight against the wood. Rory released the three deadbolts one by one, the locks snapping into place with finality. She pushed the door inward, her grip tight on the brass handle, prepared to demand a delivery or a wrong number. The hallway smelled of damp concrete and damp wool. Lucien Moreau blocked the frame. He smelled of expensive tobacco, petrichor, and ozone—a scent that curled around the edges of her memory like a heavy blanket. He wore his charcoal suit, the fabric pressed to perfection despite the London drizzle, and he tapped his ivory-handled cane against the floorboards. The tip shone with a dark, sinister gleam. "Rory." Her name sounded like a gunshot in the silence of the entryway. She froze, the door halfway open. He shouldn't be here. Evan could be anywhere in the city, tracking her, and Lucien carried a scent that supernatural eyes could track for miles. He was a walking bullseye. "Why?" she asked, her voice harder than she intended. It cracked at the end. She cleared her throat, stepping back into the dark hallway to hide the way her heart hammered against her ribs. "What are you doing here?" Lucien lifted his head. The heterochromatic gaze swung to her, the amber eye dilating while the black one stayed avoidant, fixed on the floor. He looked older. The sharp angles of his cheekbones were shadowed, and the platinum blond of his hair was damp at the temples. He looked tired, a exhaustion that sat deep in the hollows of his eyes. "I assumed you were sleeping," he said. His accent was a smooth, rolling French lilt that twisted around the English vowels. "It is late." "It is." Rory gestured vaguely at the hallway, keeping the door slightly ajar. "You shouldn't be on my doorstep. You know the rules." "I do." He didn't move. The cane remained planted, anchoring him to the world outside while he refused to step across the threshold. "The high road, the low road, and the wet road. I have been walking the wet road all day." He looked too small in the overlarge space. The curry house downstairs—Yu-Fei’s—was loud tonight, the bass thumping a dull, rhythmic vibration through the floorboards. It was a chaotic mess of dining chairs stacked on tables, cardboard delivery boxes tucked into alcoves, and the ever-present haze of cardamom and fried onion. Eva would have a fit if she saw the clutter. But with Lucien standing there, the clutter didn't matter. The flat felt suddenly too small, too exposed. Eva’s cat, a lethargic tabby named Ptolemy, vaulted off the couch and hissed at him. Lucien didn't even blink. He merely tucked a stray strand of hair behind his ear, his hand lingering there for a moment, a small gesture of self-composure. "Is Eva here?" "No. Out." Silence stretched between them, thin and fragile. Rory wrapped her arms around herself, the casual delivery uniform suddenly feeling insufficient against the chill radiating from him. "You left a book," Lucien said. Rory stared. "What?" "On your desk. A first edition. I returned it." She knew which book. The leather-bound grimoire she’d borrowed two weeks ago from Eva’s private collection. It was a prop, really, for a delivery job that required her to feign supernatural expertise. She hadn't even opened it. The realization made her stomach tighten. It was an excuse. He knew it was an excuse. "You could have just sent a text," she said, though the defensiveness in her tone was weak. "I had to deliver it personally." "Why?" Rory stepped closer, driven by a sudden, irrational need to close the distance. "Did you think I was going to call you?" Lucien looked up then, his amber eye locking onto hers. The black one shifted, a storm of pupil and iris. "Did you?" The question hung in the air, heavy and charged with something unspoken. Rory bit her lip, the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist pulling tight. She remembered the first time they met in a seedy pub off the Strand. He had been surrounded by shadows; she had been arguing with a barrister about procedural law. He had stepped in—not with violence, but with terrifying calmness—and dissolved the argument with a single phrase in a language she didn't recognize. He had been the only thing standing between her and a vampire trying to bite her ankle. And then he had left. Just as quickly as he had arrived. "We aren't friends, Lucien," she said, her voice trembling with the attempt to keep it steady. "We aren't anything." He nodded slowly, a stiff movement of the neck. "True. We are... complicated." "That's a nice word for it." He huffed a short, dry laugh. It didn't reach his eyes. He shifted his weight, and the cane slid an inch across the floorboards, screeching. "I came because I heard." "Of course you did." Rory rolled her eyes, turning away to put distance between them and the deadbolt. "You know everything before it happens." "I heard that you were leaving London." The air left the room. Rory froze, her hand resting on the doorframe. She looked back at him, searching his face for mockery. There was none. Just a terrifying kind of honesty. "You heard wrong. I live here." "I heard that you were leaving the city. Permanently." Lucien took a step forward, encroaching on her personal space. He smelled like rain and danger, a lethal cocktail that made her head spin. "You packed the boxes." "No," she lied. "You packed the books." That was the lie that killed her. Rory kept her face a mask of indifference, but her knuckles turned white as she gripped the wood. She had spent three days selecting which books from Eva’s chaotic library to keep in the small spare room. She had spent hours listening to Vlad’s folk tales and whispering incantations for obscure spells. "I have to go. There is nowhere left for me here. Not with the bar going under and..." She let the lie trail off. Lucien knew. He knew about the debt that required her to work double shifts. He knew about the bruises she kept hidden under oversized hoodies. He knew the city was eating her alive, and the only person who could save her was the demon standing in her hallway. "You think running will fix it," Lucien said softly. "It's not running. It's surviving." He reached out. The hand hovering near her face was long-fingered, elegant, and tipped with ink-stained fingers. He didn't touch her, but the proximity was electric. The dark coat brushed against her shoulder, sending a shiver down her spine. "I can fix it, Rory." "Please don't." She closed her eyes, the weight of the temptation dragging her down. "You can't. You’re a fixer, Lucien. You fix things that are broken. You don't fix people." "I think I might have broken you." His voice dropped, raw and stripped bare. "When I walked away. The silence... it has been loud these past few months." The dam broke. Rory turned, her shoulders shaking as she turned her back to him, facing the cluttered hallway. She couldn't look at him. If she looked at him, she would remember the feel of his hands in hers, the heat of his body, the way he made the dangerous things in this world feel safe. "You didn't break me," she whispered. "I was already a mess before I met you." "That is what I mean." Lucien stepped past her, the cane tapping a slow, insistent rhythm. The silence in the hallway shifted. The smell of him crowded hers out. He moved with a predatory grace, despite his cane. He reached the door to the flat and stopped, turning slightly. Ptolemy, the tabby, abandoned his post on the top of a bookshelf and padded silently down, stretching his body long. He walked right up to Lucien’s boot and rubbed his cheek against the leather. Lucien looked down at the cat, a flicker of genuine amusement softening his features. He stooped, offering a hand. Ptolemy sniffed his fingers, then allowed himself to be scritched behind the ears. "You have good taste, little one," he murmured in French. Rory watched, her heart pounding a frantic rhythm in her chest. He was in her space. He was touching her things. He was touching her cat. "Leave, Lucien." "I'm not going anywhere." He straightened, turning back to her. "I tried to let you go. I stayed away as ordered. But when I see a lock I can pick, I can't just walk away." He looked at her wrist, eyes narrowing. "You’re hiding that again." She crossed her arms over her chest, hiding the fresh bruise on her forearm—Evan’s doing. "It’s nothing." "It is a handprint, Rory." He stepped closer, invading her safety bubble again, refusing to give an inch. "I know that shape. I know the color." "I said leave!" Lucien didn't retreat. Instead, he set his cane against the wall with a heavy thud. Then, he closed the distance. One hand rested on the wall beside her head, caging her in. The amber eye burned into hers, dark and piercing. "Don't go," he breathed. The plea wasn't for the city. It wasn't for the money. It was for her. The realization hit her like a physical blow. He wasn't the calm, collected fixer right now. He was the demon from Avaros who was terrified of losing his only tether to humanity. "I don't know if I can," she whispered back. "Yes, you can." His other hand moved, lifting to cup her face. His palm was warm, his thumb brushing over the sharp bone of her cheek. He didn't hesitate. He didn't ask for permission. "You have to be strong, Rory. I taught you that. The fox doesn't cry." "The fox runs," she countered, her voice cracking. "The fox fights." His thumb traced her lower lip, stopping the tremble. "And sometimes, the fox lets the wolf in." The noise from the curry house downstairs seemed to fade into a distant hum. The only thing left in the universe was the heat of his hand, the scent of the rain, and the amber light reflecting in his eyes. Rory knew she should shove him away. She should lock the deadbolts and pretend she was never there. But her feet were rooted to the floorboards, her body betraying her mind. She had been sleeping with one eye open for months. But for the first time in a long time, she felt like she could close them. "Lucien." His name was a whisper on her lips. He leaned down, his forehead resting against hers, his breathing ragged. "Don't leave," he said again. "Please. Just... don't leave."
created_at"2026-02-19T12:30:50.126Z" 2/19/2026, 12:30:50 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
70.97% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags25
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"Rory gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
1"Lucien said softly [softly]"
2"she whispered back [back]"
3"he said again [again]"
dialogueSentences62
tagDensity0.403
leniency0.806
rawRatio0.16
effectiveRatio0.129
77.91% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1811
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"suddenly"
count2
2
adverb"really"
count1
3
adverb"quickly"
count1
4
adverb"slowly"
count1
5
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"suddenly"
2"really"
3"quickly"
4"slowly"
5"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
39.26% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1811
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"sinister"
count1
1
word"silence"
count4
2
word"lilt"
count1
3
word"rhythmic"
count1
4
word"chaotic"
count2
5
word"chill"
count1
6
word"stomach"
count1
7
word"charged"
count1
8
word"unspoken"
count1
9
word"weight"
count2
10
word"mask of indifference"
count1
11
word"electric"
count1
12
word"down her spine"
count1
13
word"flicker"
count1
14
word"pounding"
count1
15
word"traced"
count1
16
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"sinister"
1"silence"
2"lilt"
3"rhythmic"
4"chaotic"
5"chill"
6"stomach"
7"charged"
8"unspoken"
9"weight"
10"mask of indifference"
11"electric"
12"down her spine"
13"flicker"
14"pounding"
15"traced"
16"whisper"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"knuckles turned white"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"knuckles turned white"
1"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences141
matches
0"was terrified"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences141
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences178
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1797
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions19
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions45
wordCount1446
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity0.97
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
London1
Lucien14
French2
English1
Yu1
Fei1
Ptolemy3
Rory12
Eva4
Strand1
Vlad1
Evan2
Avaros1
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Lucien"
2"Fei"
3"Ptolemy"
4"Rory"
5"Eva"
6"Vlad"
7"Evan"
places
0"London"
1"French"
2"Avaros"
globalScore1
windowScore1
75.74% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences101
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"sounded like a gunshot in the silence of t"
1"smelled like rain and danger, a lethal coc"
2"felt like she could close them"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.556
wordCount1797
matches
0"not with violence, but with terrifying calmness"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences178
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs68
mean26.43
std21.21
cv0.802
sampleLengths
058
15
252
31
448
539
661
724
823
942
1077
1142
123
132
1426
156
163
179
1853
1917
206
2123
2222
2396
2412
2519
2613
276
2830
2924
307
3132
326
3337
343
354
3659
3718
3854
399
405
4139
425
4330
4428
4556
4615
4749
4834
4942
95.31% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences141
matches
0"were shadowed"
1"been surrounded"
2"was terrified"
3"were rooted"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs269
matches
0"was eating"
1"was touching"
2"was touching"
62.60% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences178
ratio0.028
matches
0"He smelled of expensive tobacco, petrichor, and ozone—a scent that curled around the edges of her memory like a heavy blanket."
1"The curry house downstairs—Yu-Fei’s—was loud tonight, the bass thumping a dull, rhythmic vibration through the floorboards."
2"He had been surrounded by shadows; she had been arguing with a barrister about procedural law."
3"He had stepped in—not with violence, but with terrifying calmness—and dissolved the argument with a single phrase in a language she didn't recognize."
4"She crossed her arms over her chest, hiding the fresh bruise on her forearm—Evan’s doing."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1460
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount43
adverbRatio0.02945205479452055
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.010273972602739725
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences178
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences178
mean10.1
std6.1
cv0.605
sampleLengths
013
115
221
39
45
521
623
78
81
912
106
114
1221
135
149
155
1620
175
184
1920
203
2120
2214
237
2414
253
2613
2710
285
2918
3019
318
3216
3326
3410
359
368
3715
384
3923
403
412
427
4319
446
452
461
479
484
4912
38.20% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats21
diversityRatio0.20786516853932585
totalSentences178
uniqueOpeners37
74.63% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences134
matches
0"Just a terrifying kind of"
1"Instead, he set his cane"
2"Then, he closed the distance."
ratio0.022
2.09% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount73
totalSentences134
matches
0"She pushed the door inward,"
1"He smelled of expensive tobacco,"
2"He wore his charcoal suit,"
3"Her name sounded like a"
4"She froze, the door halfway"
5"He shouldn't be here."
6"He was a walking bullseye."
7"she asked, her voice harder"
8"It cracked at the end."
9"She cleared her throat, stepping"
10"He looked older."
11"He looked tired, a exhaustion"
12"His accent was a smooth,"
13"He didn't move"
14"He looked too small in"
15"It was a chaotic mess"
16"He merely tucked a stray"
17"She knew which book."
18"It was a prop, really,"
19"She hadn't even opened it."
ratio0.545
1.04% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount123
totalSentences134
matches
0"The chain slid with a"
1"Rory released the three deadbolts"
2"She pushed the door inward,"
3"The hallway smelled of damp"
4"Lucien Moreau blocked the frame."
5"He smelled of expensive tobacco,"
6"He wore his charcoal suit,"
7"The tip shone with a"
8"Her name sounded like a"
9"She froze, the door halfway"
10"He shouldn't be here."
11"Evan could be anywhere in"
12"He was a walking bullseye."
13"she asked, her voice harder"
14"It cracked at the end."
15"She cleared her throat, stepping"
16"Lucien lifted his head."
17"The heterochromatic gaze swung to"
18"He looked older."
19"The sharp angles of his"
ratio0.918
74.63% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences134
matches
0"Just as quickly as he"
1"If she looked at him,"
ratio0.015
95.24% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences60
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"He smelled of expensive tobacco, petrichor, and ozone—a scent that curled around the edges of her memory like a heavy blanket."
1"He smelled like rain and danger, a lethal cocktail that made her head spin."
2"Rory turned, her shoulders shaking as she turned her back to him, facing the cluttered hallway."
3"She crossed her arms over her chest, hiding the fresh bruise on her forearm—Evan’s doing."
25.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags25
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"she asked, her voice harder than she intended"
1"she said, her voice trembling with the attempt to keep it steady"
2"She closed, the weight of the temptation dragging her down"
3"Lucien stepped, the cane tapping a slow, insistent rhythm"
4"she countered, her voice cracking"
69.35% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"she lied (lie)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
2"he murmured (murmur)"
3"he breathed (breathe)"
4"she whispered back (whisper)"
dialogueSentences62
tagDensity0.194
leniency0.387
rawRatio0.417
effectiveRatio0.161
78.7548%