Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTY3R2VH0YNGJ4GZQ6KYGT2

Run Details

Duration:
3m 24s
Cost:
$0.017017
Provider:
SiliconFlow

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory ducked beneath the low hanging branch. The bark scraped her cheek, cold and wet with evening rain. She straightened, brushing dirt from the knees of her jeans. The Heartstone pulsed against her sternum, a rhythmic throb that matched no heartbeat she'd ever felt. It had dragged her here, burning against her skin for the past three hours, leading her away from the warmth of Silas's bar and into Richmond Park after midnight. She stood within the reach of ancient oaks. These trees didn't belong here. She knew this section of the park intimately. She'd cut through it a hundred times delivering Yu-Fei's orders, weaving between bracken and holly bushes with insulated bags bungeed to her back rack. Tonight, the familiar path had twisted. Brambles had parted like curtains, revealing a gap she couldn't have missed before, wouldn't have missed before. Three standing stones rose from the earth, gray and weathered, petrified oak trunks harder than iron. They formed a triangle that made her teeth ache when she looked at it directly. Wildflowers carpeted the ground within the stone boundary. Bluebells nodded their heavy heads. Foxgloves thrust purple spears toward a moon that hung too low, too large. October had stripped the rest of London bare weeks ago. These blooms shouldn't exist. Rory touched the pendant. The crimson gem flared, hot enough to sting. She stepped over the threshold. The temperature plummeted. Her breath crystallized, hanging in clouds that dissipated too slowly, clinging to her hair like spider silk. She checked her phone. The screen displayed 11:03 PM. She blinked. The digits flickered, bleeding into 3:47 AM, then 2:15, then 4:33. She shook the device. The display stabilized at 11:04, but the battery now read seven percent despite the full charge she'd had upon entering the park. Sound guttered. The distant hum of the A316, constant and droning since her arrival, severed. No rustling leaves. No scurry of urban foxes through undergrowth. The silence pooled in her ears, thick and viscous, pressing against her eardrums with physical weight. She moved deeper into the clearing. Wildflowers crunched under her boots, brittle as spun glass despite their vivid color. Her hand drifted to her left wrist, fingers tracing the crescent scar she'd earned at age six, falling from her father's garden wall. Old habit. Grounding technique. A twig snapped. The crack echoed between the standing stones, doubling and tripling until it sounded like a fusillade of gunshots. Rory spun. The stone circle stood empty. Moonlight carved stark shadows between the ancient oaks beyond the perimeter. Nothing moved. She turned back. The path she'd taken into the grove had sealed itself. Brambles knit together with vegetal efficiency, thorns interlocking like teeth in a closing jaw. The pendant flared again. Heat radiated through her cotton shirt, branding the skin beneath. She walked the perimeter of the stones. Her shadow stretched long and thin across the wildflowers, then shortened, then stretched again without the moon changing position. Time moved differently here. She remembered the vague warning Eva had whispered years ago, back in Cardiff, about thin places and borrowed time. Rory had laughed then. She wasn't laughing now. A giggle echoed. High. Feminine. Wrong. Rory froze. The sound came from everywhere and nowhere, bouncing off stones that shouldn't have created acoustics, resonating in her marrow. She scanned the darkness between the oaks. Something tall stood there. She caught the impression of height, of limbs too long for any human frame, silhouetted against the phosphorescent moss growing on the northern stone. It disappeared when she looked directly. She glanced sideways. Movement danced at the edge of her vision. Antlers? Branches? The shape resolved into nothing when she turned her head, but the afterimage burned in her retinas—something angular, something that wore a crown of thorns and bone. The silence shattered. Whispers crowded her skull, not entering through her ears but vibrating in her teeth, her sinus cavities, the hollow space behind her eyes. Words in languages that predated Welsh, predated the Gaelic her grandmother had spoken. They spoke of bargains struck in blood. Of boundaries thinner than skin. Of tithes paid not in gold but in minutes, in hours, in the years of a life. Rory backed toward the center stone. Her heel struck something soft that yielded, then gripped. She looked down. Foxgloves had grown around her boots. They wound up her ankles with serpentine speed, stems tightening with vegetal strength. She kicked. Petals shredded, raining blue and purple confetti, but the fibrous stalks held fast, rooting themselves in the soles of her trainers. The footsteps resumed. Crisp. Definite. Moving through dry leaves that shouldn't exist in a grove of oaks. She yanked the pendant from her collar. The crimson stone blazed, casting arterial light across the clearing. The standing stones absorbed it, drinking the radiance until they glowed from within, revealing glyphs carved into surfaces she'd thought were smooth. Shadows stretched, elongating toward her like fingers eager to grasp. Between two stones, the air rippled. Heat haze in winter. Through the distortion, she glimpsed the park as it should exist—street lamps distant and yellow, the A316 beyond, the twenty-four hour petrol station on the roundabout. Safety. Normalcy. The footsteps stopped directly behind her. Close enough that she felt the displacement of air, the drop in temperature that accompanied the presence. Rory didn't turn around. She knew, with the cellular certainty of prey sensing the wolf, that turning would break whatever fragile rule kept her positioned as observer rather than victim. The presence loomed, taller than her by several feet, breathing air that smelled of loam and rotting petals and the chemical sweetness of gas leaks. The Heartstone screamed in her fist. It pulsed, burning her palm, the silver chain digging into her fingers. She squeezed tighter until her knuckles ached. The wildflowers at her feet released her. They retreated, hissing against the soil, leaving pollen stains on her jeans. She had come here following the warmth, chasing the promise of answers about the pendant's origin, about the unknown benefactor who'd slipped it into her coat. Now she understood. The grove wasn't a destination. It was a threshold. A place where the earth's skin had worn thin. And something had been waiting for the door to open. The whispering coalesced into a single voice. It spoke her name—not Rory, not Aurora, but the third name, the hidden one, the syllables that only her mother had known and whispered once, twenty-five years ago, in a Cardiff hospital room. Her blood stuttered in her veins. The crescent scar on her wrist flared with phantom pain. The standing stones groaned. They shifted, millimeters at first, then inches, grinding against bedrock that didn't exist in any London geology. The triangle contracted, the stones moving toward her, herding her toward the center. Rory lunged for the ripple in the air, the glimpse of the real park. Her fingers brushed the boundary. Static electricity arced between her skin and the threshold. The thing behind her exhaled. The breath smelled of winter apples left to ferment in dark cellars. Her vision doubled. She saw the grove in two states simultaneously: the quiet clearing where wildflowers bloomed eternal, and the truth beneath—the twisted forest where time pooled like stagnant water, where figures with too many joints and too many eyes watched from between black trees that dripped sap like blood. The pendant's chain snapped in her fist. She stumbled forward. The heat of the stone branded her palm. Behind her, the footsteps started again, not following, but circling. Always circling. The rhythm matched the pulse of the Heartstone, which now beat in counter-time to her own heart. The moon vanished behind clouds that hadn't existed moments before. Darkness swallowed the grove. Only the Heartstone provided light, its crimson glow revealing shapes that stood perfectly still among the oaks, waiting for the light to die, waiting for the warmth to fade, waiting for her to blink. Rory ran.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
92.49% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1332
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1332
totalAiIsms27
found
0
word"pulsed"
count2
1
word"rhythmic"
count1
2
word"throb"
count1
3
word"warmth"
count3
4
word"familiar"
count1
5
word"crystallized"
count1
6
word"silk"
count1
7
word"flickered"
count1
8
word"silence"
count2
9
word"weight"
count1
10
word"tracing"
count1
11
word"echoed"
count2
12
word"stark"
count1
13
word"scanned"
count1
14
word"resolved"
count1
15
word"shattered"
count1
16
word"footsteps"
count3
17
word"normalcy"
count1
18
word"loomed"
count1
19
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"rhythmic"
2"throb"
3"warmth"
4"familiar"
5"crystallized"
6"silk"
7"flickered"
8"silence"
9"weight"
10"tracing"
11"echoed"
12"stark"
13"scanned"
14"resolved"
15"shattered"
16"footsteps"
17"normalcy"
18"loomed"
19"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences137
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences137
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences137
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen48
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1324
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions26
wordCount1324
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.76
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Heartstone4
Silas1
Richmond1
Park1
Yu-Fei1
London2
Eva1
Cardiff2
Welsh1
Gaelic1
Rory10
Aurora1
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Silas"
2"Yu-Fei"
3"Eva"
4"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
3"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences83
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"sounded like a fusillade of gunshots"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches5
per1kWords3.776
wordCount1324
matches
0"not entering through her ears but vibrating in her teeth, her sinus cavities, the hollow space"
1"not in gold but in minutes, in hours, in the years of a life"
2"not Rory, not Aurora, but the third name, the hidden one, the syllables"
3"not Aurora, but the third name, the hidden one, the syllables"
4"not following, but circling"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences137
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs41
mean32.29
std21.8
cv0.675
sampleLengths
073
18
291
340
417
568
641
746
83
938
1027
1114
1257
133
143
1556
166
1740
183
1965
2018
2142
2217
2349
2438
2523
2655
2725
2819
2947
3010
3140
3216
3334
3428
3517
3650
377
3840
3948
402
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences137
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs235
matches
0"wasn't laughing"
59.44% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences137
ratio0.029
matches
0"The shape resolved into nothing when she turned her head, but the afterimage burned in her retinas—something angular, something that wore a crown of thorns and bone."
1"Through the distortion, she glimpsed the park as it should exist—street lamps distant and yellow, the A316 beyond, the twenty-four hour petrol station on the roundabout."
2"It spoke her name—not Rory, not Aurora, but the third name, the hidden one, the syllables that only her mother had known and whispered once, twenty-five years ago, in a Cardiff hospital room."
3"She saw the grove in two states simultaneously: the quiet clearing where wildflowers bloomed eternal, and the truth beneath—the twisted forest where time pooled like stagnant water, where figures with too many joints and too many eyes watched from between black trees that dripped sap like blood."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1332
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"viscous, pressing against her"
adverbCount42
adverbRatio0.03153153153153153
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.008258258258258258
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences137
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences137
mean9.66
std8.12
cv0.84
sampleLengths
07
111
210
316
429
58
65
78
824
96
1017
1116
1215
138
145
1513
1610
174
184
198
205
213
2217
234
245
252
2611
274
2822
292
3013
313
327
3316
346
3513
3623
372
382
393
4018
412
425
4311
442
453
4610
4714
484
4910
54.26% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.36496350364963503
totalSentences137
uniqueOpeners50
28.25% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences118
matches
0"Only the Heartstone provided light,"
ratio0.008
87.80% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount39
totalSentences118
matches
0"She straightened, brushing dirt from"
1"It had dragged her here,"
2"She stood within the reach"
3"She knew this section of"
4"She'd cut through it a"
5"They formed a triangle that"
6"She stepped over the threshold."
7"Her breath crystallized, hanging in"
8"She checked her phone."
9"She shook the device."
10"She moved deeper into the"
11"Her hand drifted to her"
12"She turned back."
13"She walked the perimeter of"
14"Her shadow stretched long and"
15"She remembered the vague warning"
16"She wasn't laughing now."
17"She scanned the darkness between"
18"She caught the impression of"
19"It disappeared when she looked"
ratio0.331
15.08% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount105
totalSentences118
matches
0"Rory ducked beneath the low"
1"The bark scraped her cheek,"
2"She straightened, brushing dirt from"
3"The Heartstone pulsed against her"
4"It had dragged her here,"
5"She stood within the reach"
6"These trees didn't belong here."
7"She knew this section of"
8"She'd cut through it a"
9"Tonight, the familiar path had"
10"Brambles had parted like curtains,"
11"They formed a triangle that"
12"Wildflowers carpeted the ground within"
13"Bluebells nodded their heavy heads."
14"Foxgloves thrust purple spears toward"
15"October had stripped the rest"
16"These blooms shouldn't exist."
17"Rory touched the pendant."
18"The crimson gem flared, hot"
19"She stepped over the threshold."
ratio0.89
42.37% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences118
matches
0"Now she understood."
ratio0.008
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences55
technicalSentenceCount11
matches
0"The Heartstone pulsed against her sternum, a rhythmic throb that matched no heartbeat she'd ever felt."
1"It had dragged her here, burning against her skin for the past three hours, leading her away from the warmth of Silas's bar and into Richmond Park after midnigh…"
2"Foxgloves thrust purple spears toward a moon that hung too low, too large."
3"Her breath crystallized, hanging in clouds that dissipated too slowly, clinging to her hair like spider silk."
4"The sound came from everywhere and nowhere, bouncing off stones that shouldn't have created acoustics, resonating in her marrow."
5"The shape resolved into nothing when she turned her head, but the afterimage burned in her retinas—something angular, something that wore a crown of thorns and …"
6"Close enough that she felt the displacement of air, the drop in temperature that accompanied the presence."
7"The presence loomed, taller than her by several feet, breathing air that smelled of loam and rotting petals and the chemical sweetness of gas leaks."
8"She had come here following the warmth, chasing the promise of answers about the pendant's origin, about the unknown benefactor who'd slipped it into her coat."
9"She saw the grove in two states simultaneously: the quiet clearing where wildflowers bloomed eternal, and the truth beneath—the twisted forest where time pooled…"
10"Only the Heartstone provided light, its crimson glow revealing shapes that stood perfectly still among the oaks, waiting for the light to die, waiting for the w…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
79.1230%