Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTY3YNCH2R1KX0D6X5YGPYF

Run Details

Duration:
50.2s
Cost:
$0.064760
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The knock came at half past eleven, three sharp raps that cut through the silence of Eva's flat like gunshots. Ptolemy lifted his head from his perch on a stack of medieval grimoires, ears swiveling toward the door. Rory set down her mug of cold tea and reached for the cricket bat Eva kept propped against the bookshelf. Three deadbolts. Eva had installed three deadbolts for a reason, and that reason wasn't the curry house downstairs. She pressed her eye to the peephole and felt her stomach drop through the floor. Lucien Moreau stood in the narrow hallway, platinum hair gleaming under the flickering bulb, one hand resting on that ridiculous ivory-handled cane. He looked exactly as she remembered — impeccable charcoal suit, sharp jaw, the kind of face that belonged on Renaissance paintings of fallen angels. His mismatched eyes, one amber and one black as a moonless night, stared directly at the peephole as if he could see her through it. Knowing him, he probably could. "I know you're there, Aurora." His voice carried the ghost of Marseille, vowels rounded and soft despite the clipped consonance. "I can hear your heartbeat." "Fuck off, Lucien." "Charming as ever." A pause. "I wouldn't be here if it wasn't important." Her fingers hovered over the first deadbolt. Six weeks. Six weeks since she'd walked out of that warehouse in Southwark, blood on her hands and his voice calling after her. Six weeks of dodging his calls, his messages, the envelope that had appeared under her door at the flat above Silas' bar with nothing inside but a pressed white rose. She'd burned the rose. Regretted it immediately. Told herself she didn't. "Give me one good reason." "Because someone's hunting you, and I'm the only one who knows why." The deadbolts clicked open one by one. Rory pulled the door back just far enough to see him properly, the cricket bat still clutched in her white-knuckled grip. He looked tired. That was the first thing she noticed — the shadows under his eyes, the slight looseness in the way he held himself. Lucien Moreau didn't do tired. Lucien Moreau did effortless, did immaculate, did that infuriating half-smile that made her want to slap him and kiss him in equal measure. "You look like shit," she said. "You look beautiful." He said it without inflection, a simple statement of fact. "May I come in?" She stepped aside. Hated herself for it. Lucien moved past her into the cramped chaos of Eva's flat, picking his way between towers of books with the grace of a cat. Ptolemy hissed at him from his grimoire throne. Lucien ignored the cat entirely, his attention fixed on the windows, the corners, the shadows pooling behind the overloaded bookshelves. "Your friend has interesting taste in reading material." He picked up a leather-bound volume from the nearest stack, examined the spine. "Sixteenth-century demonology. First edition, if I'm not mistaken." "Put that down." He set the book back with exaggerated care. "Still angry, then." "You left me." The words came out harder than she intended. Rory closed the door, threw the deadbolts, leaned against the wood with her arms crossed. "Southwark. You opened that portal and you walked through and you left me standing there with three dead bodies and no explanation." "I had no choice." "Bullshit." "Aurora—" "Don't." She held up a hand. "Don't you dare stand there in my friend's flat at midnight and tell me you had no choice. You always have a choice. That's what you told me, remember? Back when you were trying to convince me that the world wasn't as simple as I thought it was. Everyone always has a choice." Lucien was quiet for a long moment. When he spoke again, his voice had lost its careful polish. "My father called me home." The words hung in the air between them. Rory felt something shift in her chest, a tectonic plate of anger grinding against something softer underneath. "Avaros." She'd never said the name aloud before. It tasted strange on her tongue, like copper and ash. "Yes." He moved to the window, twitching aside the curtain to peer down at Brick Lane below. The amber eye caught the streetlight; the black one swallowed it. "When a demon of his rank summons you, you don't decline. You don't explain. You go, or you die. It's that simple." "Nothing about you is simple." The corner of his mouth twitched. Not quite a smile. "No. I suppose not." Ptolemy jumped down from his perch and wound between Rory's ankles, purring despite the tension crackling through the room. She reached down to scratch behind his ears, grateful for something to do with her hands. "What happened? In Avaros?" "Politics." Lucien let the curtain fall. "My father has enemies. They've learned about me — about my work here, my connections. About you." Her blood went cold. "Me?" "You killed a demon, Aurora. In that warehouse. Did you think that would go unnoticed?" "It was self-defense." "It was impressive." He turned to face her fully, and something in his expression made her breath catch. "Terrifying and reckless and utterly magnificent. You drove a consecrated blade through the heart of a creature that's lived for three centuries, and you did it to save my life." "I did it because he was trying to kill me." "You did it because I was about to die and you couldn't let that happen." Lucien crossed the room in three strides, closing the distance between them until she could smell his cologne — sandalwood and something darker, something that reminded her of smoke and old stone. "Tell me I'm wrong." She should step back. Push him away. Remember all the reasons she'd spent six weeks avoiding him. "You're not wrong." "Aurora." Her name on his lips was a prayer and a curse. "I never meant to leave you. I have spent every moment since trying to find a way back, trying to protect you from what's coming." "What's coming?" His hand came up, hovering near her cheek but not quite touching. Waiting. Always waiting for permission, even when everything else about him screamed danger. "His name is Vexris. He was the creature you killed's brother, and he's sworn a blood oath to destroy everyone I care about." Lucien's jaw tightened. "That list is very short. You're at the top of it." "I don't need your protection." "I know. That's not why I'm here." His fingers finally made contact, brushing a strand of black hair from her face. The touch burned like ice. "I'm here because you deserve to know. Because you deserve the choice I didn't have." "What choice?" "To run. To hide. To let me handle this alone." His thumb traced the line of her jaw. "Or to fight beside me, the way you did in that warehouse. The way you've fought since the moment you crashed into my world." Rory caught his wrist. Felt the pulse jumping under her fingers, too fast for someone so carefully controlled. "Six weeks," she said. "Six weeks, Lucien. No word. No explanation. Just that stupid rose." "You burned it." "How do you know that?" "Because I would have done the same thing." His smile was crooked, self-deprecating. "I've handled this badly. I handle everything badly when it comes to you. You make me forget how to think." "Good." "Good?" She pulled him closer by his wrist, close enough that she could see the flecks of gold in his amber eye, the impossible depth of the black one. Close enough that his breath ghosted across her lips. "I've spent six weeks trying to hate you. It's exhausting." "And did you succeed?" "What do you think?" He kissed her. It wasn't gentle. It wasn't careful. It was six weeks of silence and anger and terror pouring out between them, his hands in her hair and her fingers twisting in the lapels of his expensive suit. He tasted like whiskey and desperation. She kissed him back just as hard, teeth catching his bottom lip, a small sound escaping her throat that she'd never admit to making. Ptolemy yowled in protest and fled to the bedroom. Lucien pulled back just far enough to rest his forehead against hers. His breathing was ragged, his careful composure finally cracked. "I'm sorry," he said. "For leaving. For the rose. For not finding the words until now." "The rose was pretentious." "I know." "And dramatic." "Also true." "And the most romantic thing anyone's ever done for me, you complete bastard." His laugh was low and broken. "Is that a compliment?" Rory grabbed the front of his shirt and pulled him toward the couch, sending a stack of mythology textbooks crashing to the floor. "Shut up." He shut up. For the first time in six weeks, the flat on Brick Lane felt warm. Outside, the city hummed with its usual nocturnal chaos — sirens and laughter and the distant rumble of the Tube. Inside, two people with too much history and not enough time tried to make up for six weeks of silence in a single night. They didn't succeed. But they made a start. It was nearly two in the morning when Rory finally pulled back, breathless and disheveled on the couch with Lucien's arm around her shoulders and his cane propped against the coffee table. Her lips were swollen. Her thoughts were a mess. She felt more alive than she had in weeks. "So," she said. "This Vexris. When do we start?" Lucien pressed a kiss to her temple. "Tomorrow. Tonight, we rest." "I don't rest well." "I know. Neither do I." His arm tightened around her. "But we can try."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"His arm tightened around [around]"
dialogueSentences76
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0.053
effectiveRatio0.026
90.73% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1618
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"utterly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"utterly"
1"very"
2"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
72.19% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1618
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"silence"
count3
1
word"stomach"
count1
2
word"gleaming"
count1
3
word"effortless"
count1
4
word"tension"
count1
5
word"traced"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"stomach"
2"gleaming"
3"effortless"
4"tension"
5"traced"
6"pulse"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"blood ran cold"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"blood went cold"
1"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences95
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences95
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences150
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen53
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1616
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions42
wordCount1042
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.15
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Eva4
Moreau3
Renaissance1
Marseille1
Southwark1
Rory8
Lucien12
Brick2
Lane2
Tube1
Ptolemy4
Six3
persons
0"Eva"
1"Moreau"
2"Rory"
3"Lucien"
4"Ptolemy"
places
0"Marseille"
1"Southwark"
2"Brick"
3"Lane"
4"Six"
globalScore0.924
windowScore0.833
25.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences60
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"appeared under her door at the flat above"
1"not quite touching"
2"tasted like whiskey and desperation"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1616
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences150
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs83
mean19.47
std18.57
cv0.954
sampleLengths
038
138
215
371
45
525
63
713
860
911
105
1112
1228
1353
146
1517
167
1752
1829
193
2011
2148
224
231
241
2559
2618
275
2825
2918
3050
315
3214
3335
344
3523
365
3715
383
3948
4010
4151
4217
433
4437
452
4625
4737
485
4941
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences95
matches
0"was crooked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs171
matches(empty)
47.62% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences150
ratio0.033
matches
0"He looked exactly as she remembered — impeccable charcoal suit, sharp jaw, the kind of face that belonged on Renaissance paintings of fallen angels."
1"That was the first thing she noticed — the shadows under his eyes, the slight looseness in the way he held himself."
2"The amber eye caught the streetlight; the black one swallowed it."
3"\"You did it because I was about to die and you couldn't let that happen.\" Lucien crossed the room in three strides, closing the distance between them until she could smell his cologne — sandalwood and something darker, something that reminded her of smoke and old stone."
4"Outside, the city hummed with its usual nocturnal chaos — sirens and laughter and the distant rumble of the Tube."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount644
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"ridiculous ivory-handled cane."
adverbCount15
adverbRatio0.023291925465838508
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.010869565217391304
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences150
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences150
mean10.77
std9.15
cv0.849
sampleLengths
020
118
220
32
416
515
622
724
825
95
1020
115
123
135
148
157
162
1721
1830
194
203
214
225
2312
247
2521
263
2722
285
2923
306
3113
324
333
344
3524
368
3720
3821
398
403
418
423
4311
4415
4522
464
471
481
496
64.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.44
totalSentences150
uniqueOpeners66
38.31% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences87
matches
0"Always waiting for permission, even"
ratio0.011
36.09% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount40
totalSentences87
matches
0"She pressed her eye to"
1"He looked exactly as she"
2"His mismatched eyes, one amber"
3"His voice carried the ghost"
4"Her fingers hovered over the"
5"She'd burned the rose."
6"He looked tired."
7"He said it without inflection,"
8"She stepped aside."
9"He picked up a leather-bound"
10"He set the book back"
11"She held up a hand"
12"She'd never said the name"
13"It tasted strange on her"
14"He moved to the window,"
15"She reached down to scratch"
16"Her blood went cold."
17"He turned to face her"
18"She should step back."
19"Her name on his lips"
ratio0.46
57.70% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount70
totalSentences87
matches
0"The knock came at half"
1"Ptolemy lifted his head from"
2"Rory set down her mug"
3"Eva had installed three deadbolts"
4"She pressed her eye to"
5"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
6"He looked exactly as she"
7"His mismatched eyes, one amber"
8"His voice carried the ghost"
9"Her fingers hovered over the"
10"She'd burned the rose."
11"The deadbolts clicked open one"
12"Rory pulled the door back"
13"He looked tired."
14"That was the first thing"
15"Lucien Moreau didn't do tired."
16"Lucien Moreau did effortless, did"
17"He said it without inflection,"
18"She stepped aside."
19"Lucien moved past her into"
ratio0.805
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences87
matches(empty)
ratio0
37.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"He looked exactly as she remembered — impeccable charcoal suit, sharp jaw, the kind of face that belonged on Renaissance paintings of fallen angels."
1"His mismatched eyes, one amber and one black as a moonless night, stared directly at the peephole as if he could see her through it."
2"Lucien Moreau did effortless, did immaculate, did that infuriating half-smile that made her want to slap him and kiss him in equal measure."
3"Ptolemy jumped down from his perch and wound between Rory's ankles, purring despite the tension crackling through the room."
4"It was six weeks of silence and anger and terror pouring out between them, his hands in her hair and her fingers twisting in the lapels of his expensive suit."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences76
tagDensity0.066
leniency0.132
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
80.4486%