| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 19 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "His arm tightened around [around]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 76 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 0.053 | | effectiveRatio | 0.026 | |
| 90.73% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1618 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "utterly" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "carefully" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 72.19% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1618 | | totalAiIsms | 9 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "stomach" | | 2 | "gleaming" | | 3 | "effortless" | | 4 | "tension" | | 5 | "traced" | | 6 | "pulse" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "blood ran cold" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "blood went cold" | | 1 | "hung in the air" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 95 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 95 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 150 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 53 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1616 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 14 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 42 | | wordCount | 1042 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 1.15 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Eva | 4 | | Moreau | 3 | | Renaissance | 1 | | Marseille | 1 | | Southwark | 1 | | Rory | 8 | | Lucien | 12 | | Brick | 2 | | Lane | 2 | | Tube | 1 | | Ptolemy | 4 | | Six | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Eva" | | 1 | "Moreau" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Lucien" | | 4 | "Ptolemy" |
| | places | | 0 | "Marseille" | | 1 | "Southwark" | | 2 | "Brick" | | 3 | "Lane" | | 4 | "Six" |
| | globalScore | 0.924 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 25.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 60 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "appeared under her door at the flat above" | | 1 | "not quite touching" | | 2 | "tasted like whiskey and desperation" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1616 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 150 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 83 | | mean | 19.47 | | std | 18.57 | | cv | 0.954 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 38 | | 1 | 38 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 71 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 25 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 60 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 28 | | 13 | 53 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 52 | | 18 | 29 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 48 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 1 | | 24 | 1 | | 25 | 59 | | 26 | 18 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 25 | | 29 | 18 | | 30 | 50 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 35 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 23 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 15 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 48 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 51 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 37 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 25 | | 47 | 37 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 41 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 171 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 47.62% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 150 | | ratio | 0.033 | | matches | | 0 | "He looked exactly as she remembered — impeccable charcoal suit, sharp jaw, the kind of face that belonged on Renaissance paintings of fallen angels." | | 1 | "That was the first thing she noticed — the shadows under his eyes, the slight looseness in the way he held himself." | | 2 | "The amber eye caught the streetlight; the black one swallowed it." | | 3 | "\"You did it because I was about to die and you couldn't let that happen.\" Lucien crossed the room in three strides, closing the distance between them until she could smell his cologne — sandalwood and something darker, something that reminded her of smoke and old stone." | | 4 | "Outside, the city hummed with its usual nocturnal chaos — sirens and laughter and the distant rumble of the Tube." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 644 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "ridiculous ivory-handled cane." |
| | adverbCount | 15 | | adverbRatio | 0.023291925465838508 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010869565217391304 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 150 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 150 | | mean | 10.77 | | std | 9.15 | | cv | 0.849 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 2 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 22 | | 7 | 24 | | 8 | 25 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 20 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 21 | | 18 | 30 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 21 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 22 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 23 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 24 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 20 | | 38 | 21 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 15 | | 45 | 22 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 1 | | 48 | 1 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 64.00% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 14 | | diversityRatio | 0.44 | | totalSentences | 150 | | uniqueOpeners | 66 | |
| 38.31% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "Always waiting for permission, even" |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 36.09% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 40 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "She pressed her eye to" | | 1 | "He looked exactly as she" | | 2 | "His mismatched eyes, one amber" | | 3 | "His voice carried the ghost" | | 4 | "Her fingers hovered over the" | | 5 | "She'd burned the rose." | | 6 | "He looked tired." | | 7 | "He said it without inflection," | | 8 | "She stepped aside." | | 9 | "He picked up a leather-bound" | | 10 | "He set the book back" | | 11 | "She held up a hand" | | 12 | "She'd never said the name" | | 13 | "It tasted strange on her" | | 14 | "He moved to the window," | | 15 | "She reached down to scratch" | | 16 | "Her blood went cold." | | 17 | "He turned to face her" | | 18 | "She should step back." | | 19 | "Her name on his lips" |
| | ratio | 0.46 | |
| 57.70% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 70 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "The knock came at half" | | 1 | "Ptolemy lifted his head from" | | 2 | "Rory set down her mug" | | 3 | "Eva had installed three deadbolts" | | 4 | "She pressed her eye to" | | 5 | "Lucien Moreau stood in the" | | 6 | "He looked exactly as she" | | 7 | "His mismatched eyes, one amber" | | 8 | "His voice carried the ghost" | | 9 | "Her fingers hovered over the" | | 10 | "She'd burned the rose." | | 11 | "The deadbolts clicked open one" | | 12 | "Rory pulled the door back" | | 13 | "He looked tired." | | 14 | "That was the first thing" | | 15 | "Lucien Moreau didn't do tired." | | 16 | "Lucien Moreau did effortless, did" | | 17 | "He said it without inflection," | | 18 | "She stepped aside." | | 19 | "Lucien moved past her into" |
| | ratio | 0.805 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 37.82% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 34 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "He looked exactly as she remembered — impeccable charcoal suit, sharp jaw, the kind of face that belonged on Renaissance paintings of fallen angels." | | 1 | "His mismatched eyes, one amber and one black as a moonless night, stared directly at the peephole as if he could see her through it." | | 2 | "Lucien Moreau did effortless, did immaculate, did that infuriating half-smile that made her want to slap him and kiss him in equal measure." | | 3 | "Ptolemy jumped down from his perch and wound between Rory's ankles, purring despite the tension crackling through the room." | | 4 | "It was six weeks of silence and anger and terror pouring out between them, his hands in her hair and her fingers twisting in the lapels of his expensive suit." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 19 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 76 | | tagDensity | 0.066 | | leniency | 0.132 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |