| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 20 | | tagDensity | 0.65 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 87.18% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 780 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 780 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "whisper" | | 2 | "etched" | | 3 | "vibrated" | | 4 | "tracing" | | 5 | "shimmered" | | 6 | "sense of" | | 7 | "echoes" | | 8 | "crystal" | | 9 | "echoing" | | 10 | "flicker" | | 11 | "imposing" | | 12 | "echoed" | | 13 | "stomach" | | 14 | "stark" | | 15 | "warmth" | | 16 | "beacon" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 87.12% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 44 | | matches | | 0 | "a flicker of unease" | | 1 | "k with awe" |
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| 12.99% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 44 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 51 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 48 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 777 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 77.42% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 27 | | wordCount | 620 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.45 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 9 | | Nyx | 6 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 1 | | Isolde | 5 | | Grove | 1 | | Gluttony | 1 | | Dymas | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Grove" | | 3 | "Gluttony" |
| | globalScore | 0.774 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 39 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "hum that seemed to vibrate in the bones, She paused, her pale lavender eyes fixed on a cluster of glowing blue mushrooms that pulsed like tiny hearts" | | 1 | "wind that seemed to sigh through the leaves" | | 2 | "flowers that seemed to sway in a non-existent breeze" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 777 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 51 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 12 | | mean | 64.75 | | std | 6.57 | | cv | 0.101 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 78 | | 1 | 64 | | 2 | 69 | | 3 | 66 | | 4 | 70 | | 5 | 62 | | 6 | 65 | | 7 | 61 | | 8 | 61 | | 9 | 64 | | 10 | 68 | | 11 | 49 |
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| 97.29% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 44 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 101 | | matches | | |
| 86.83% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 51 | | ratio | 0.02 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone wasn’t just a relic; it was a beacon, a call to the Gluttony of Dymas." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 623 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small, crystal-clear pool" | | 1 | "strange, amber-hued sky" |
| | adverbCount | 22 | | adverbRatio | 0.03531300160513644 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.019261637239165328 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 51 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 51 | | mean | 15.24 | | std | 8.44 | | cv | 0.554 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 27 | | 4 | 48 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 24 | | 9 | 23 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 32 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 21 | | 14 | 16 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 19 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 24 | | 23 | 20 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 32 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 19 | | 32 | 19 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 1 | | 35 | 1 | | 36 | 16 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 18 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 16 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 22 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 19 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 17 |
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| 65.36% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.45098039215686275 | | totalSentences | 51 | | uniqueOpeners | 23 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 41 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 83.41% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 14 | | totalSentences | 41 | | matches | | 0 | "It felt cool and alive" | | 1 | "she whispered, her voice barely" | | 2 | "They gestured towards a path" | | 3 | "she stated, her voice devoid" | | 4 | "She turned, but saw only" | | 5 | "She reached out, her fingers" | | 6 | "It dissolved into shimmering dust," | | 7 | "they whispered, their voice barely" | | 8 | "They pointed towards a clearing" | | 9 | "Its deep crimson gem pulsed" | | 10 | "She took a hesitant step" | | 11 | "She didn’t look at the" | | 12 | "she echoed, her voice like" | | 13 | "She turned to face them," |
| | ratio | 0.341 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 38 | | totalSentences | 41 | | matches | | 0 | "The airthickened, heavy with the" | | 1 | "Aurora’s boots sank slightly into" | | 2 | "Nyx, a shifting silhouette of" | | 3 | "Isolde, her silver hair catching" | | 4 | "Isolde murmured, her voice a" | | 5 | "Aurora knelt, brushing aside a" | | 6 | "It felt cool and alive" | | 7 | "she whispered, her voice barely" | | 8 | "Nyx shifted, solidifying briefly into" | | 9 | "Nyx replied, their voice a" | | 10 | "They gestured towards a path" | | 11 | "The path led them past" | | 12 | "The air hummed with a" | | 13 | "Isolde touched one of the" | | 14 | "she stated, her voice devoid" | | 15 | "Aurora felt a sudden, inexplicable" | | 16 | "She turned, but saw only" | | 17 | "Isolde stated, her gaze fixed" | | 18 | "She reached out, her fingers" | | 19 | "It dissolved into shimmering dust," |
| | ratio | 0.927 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 41 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 85.71% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 25 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "The air hummed with a low, resonant frequency, a deep thrum that vibrated in Aurora’s chest." | | 1 | "Nyx flowed silently beside her, their form shifting, becoming almost intangible." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx replied, their voice a soft, insistent whisper carried on the breeze" | | 1 | "she stated, her voice devoid of emotion" | | 2 | "She reached out, her fingers brushing a petal" | | 3 | "they whispered, their voice barely a breath against Aurora’s ear" | | 4 | "Aurora breathed, her voice thick with awe and a flicker of unease" | | 5 | "Nyx stated, their voice low and gravelly" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 7 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "she stated (state)" | | 3 | "Isolde stated (state)" | | 4 | "they whispered (whisper)" | | 5 | "Aurora breathed (breathe)" | | 6 | "Nyx stated (state)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 20 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 0.875 | | effectiveRatio | 0.7 | |