Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTY46BSZVPRSJN4PKJEMXA8

Run Details

Duration:
35.5s
Cost:
$0.022845

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain hammered the pavement with the persistence of bullets, each droplet exploding against the slick tarmac as Detective Harlow Quinn pressed herself against the brick wall of a Camden alleyway. Her worn leather watch caught the amber glow of a streetlamp - 11:47 PM. Three hours she'd been tracking Tomás Herrera through London's maze of streets, ever since he'd slipped out the back of The Raven's Nest while she was questioning the barman about Morris. Morris. Three years dead, and still the case gnawed at her like broken glass in her chest. Herrera's silhouette darted between the shadows ahead, his Saint Christopher medallion catching occasional flashes of neon light. The former paramedic moved with surprising agility for someone carrying what appeared to be a medical bag, weaving through the narrow passages between Camden's converted warehouses and late-night eateries. Quinn's shoes splashed through puddles as she gave chase, her sharp jaw set with determination. The Metropolitan Police had trained her well - eighteen years of decorated service didn't happen by accident - but this pursuit felt different. Wrong, somehow. Herrera wasn't running like a typical criminal. His movements held purpose, direction, as if he knew exactly where he was going. The detective rounded a corner and spotted her quarry descending stone steps that seemed to lead nowhere. Quinn had walked these streets countless times during her career, but she'd never noticed this particular stairway. It appeared almost hidden between two Victorian buildings, the kind of architectural oddity that London swallowed whole and forgot about. Herrera paused at the bottom of the steps, glancing over his shoulder. Even through the rain and distance, Quinn caught the flash of his warm brown eyes. For a moment, their gazes locked. Then he reached into his jacket and withdrew something small - a pale object that gleamed bone-white under the streetlights. "Bloody hell," Quinn muttered, quickening her pace. But by the time she reached the stairs, Herrera had vanished. The stone steps descended into what looked like an abandoned Underground entrance, complete with the distinctive red and blue tiles of old Transport for London signage. The metal gate that should have barred access hung open, its lock mechanism somehow disengaged. Quinn pulled out her mobile and checked for signal. Two bars. Barely adequate, but enough to call for backup if needed. She hesitated, finger hovering over the emergency contact. Protocol demanded she report in, request additional units before pursuing a suspect into unfamiliar territory. But protocol hadn't helped Morris. The rain intensified, driving needles of cold water through her jacket. Quinn descended the first few steps, her hand instinctively moving to the radio clipped to her belt. The familiar weight of her warrant card pressed against her chest pocket, a reminder of authority that suddenly felt inadequate. At the bottom of the stairs, the abandoned station platform stretched into darkness. Victorian ironwork supported a vaulted ceiling that disappeared into shadows, while the distinctive curved walls bore faded advertisements for products that hadn't existed for decades. The air carried scents that didn't belong - exotic spices, something metallic that made her nose wrinkle, and underneath it all, an earthy dampness that suggested vast spaces beyond what she could see. Voices drifted from somewhere deeper in the tunnel system. Not the echoes of late-night revelers or rough sleepers, but something else entirely. Conversations conducted in hushed tones, punctuated by the sounds of commerce - coins changing hands, packages being unwrapped, negotiations conducted in languages she couldn't identify. Quinn's breath misted in the cold air as she weighed her options. Morris had been investigating something like this when he died. Something underground, something the official reports had dismissed as a gas leak in an abandoned building. But Quinn had seen the body. Gas leaks didn't leave marks like that. She checked her watch again - midnight exactly. The voices from the tunnel seemed to grow louder, more animated, as if midnight held some significance. Through the darkness ahead, she caught glimpses of movement, shadows that moved with too much coordination to be tricks of light. Herrera's trail led directly into that darkness. If she turned back now, called for backup, waited for proper support, he'd disappear completely. The connection to Morris would slip through her fingers like the rain streaming down her face. But if she went forward alone, into territory she didn't understand, with people who clearly operated by different rules than the ones printed in her police manual... The sound of footsteps echoed from behind her. Quinn spun, hand moving instinctively toward her radio, but saw only empty stairs leading back to the rain-soaked street above. When she turned back toward the tunnel, the voices had stopped. The silence stretched taut as a wire. From somewhere in the darkness ahead came the distinct sound of Herrera's voice, speaking in rapid Spanish to someone she couldn't see. The medical bag he'd been carrying clinked softly - glass vials or metal instruments shifting inside. Quinn took another step forward. The platform ended abruptly, giving way to what had once been train tracks but now seemed to serve as a walkway into the deeper tunnel system. The rails caught what little light filtered down from the street, creating twin lines of silver that curved away into absolute darkness. Her radio crackled with static, then fell silent. No backup. No support. Just Detective Harlow Quinn, eighteen years of service, and the memory of a partner who'd died investigating something very much like this. The worn leather of her watch strap felt slick against her wrist as she raised her hand to check the time one final time. 12:03 AM. Whatever lay ahead in those tunnels, whatever Herrera was involved in, whatever had killed Morris three years ago - it was waiting. Quinn stepped onto the rails and walked into the darkness.
total_cost0.022845

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences1
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
79.32% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount967
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"completely"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
3
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"completely"
2"softly"
3"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
58.63% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount967
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"reminder"
count1
3
word"echoes"
count1
4
word"streaming"
count1
5
word"footsteps"
count1
6
word"echoed"
count1
7
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"weight"
2"reminder"
3"echoes"
4"streaming"
5"footsteps"
6"echoed"
7"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences67
matches
0"t with determination"
0.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences67
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"appeared to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences67
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords972
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
82.99% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions48
wordCount970
uniqueNames18
maxNameDensity1.34
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Detective2
Harlow2
Quinn13
Camden2
Tomás1
Herrera8
London3
Raven1
Nest1
Morris6
Saint1
Christopher1
Metropolitan1
Police1
Victorian2
Underground1
Transport1
Spanish1
persons
0"Detective"
1"Harlow"
2"Quinn"
3"Camden"
4"Tomás"
5"Herrera"
6"Raven"
7"Morris"
8"Saint"
9"Christopher"
10"Police"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.83
windowScore1
20.69% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences58
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"appeared almost hidden between two Victorian buildings, the kind of architectural oddity that London swallowed whole and forgot about"
1"looked like an abandoned Underground entr"
2"something like this when he died"
97.12% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.029
wordCount972
matches
0"Not the echoes of late-night revelers or rough sleepers, but something else entirely"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
65.78% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs22
mean44.18
std16.8
cv0.38
sampleLengths
076
117
246
361
454
553
67
752
849
948
1071
1147
1251
1346
1438
1527
1646
1738
1853
1934
2048
2110
94.79% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences67
matches
0"being unwrapped"
1"was involved"
75.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs160
matches
0"was questioning"
1"was going"
2"was waiting"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences67
ratio0.119
matches
0"Her worn leather watch caught the amber glow of a streetlamp - 11:47 PM."
1"The Metropolitan Police had trained her well - eighteen years of decorated service didn't happen by accident - but this pursuit felt different."
2"Then he reached into his jacket and withdrew something small - a pale object that gleamed bone-white under the streetlights."
3"The air carried scents that didn't belong - exotic spices, something metallic that made her nose wrinkle, and underneath it all, an earthy dampness that suggested vast spaces beyond what she could see."
4"Conversations conducted in hushed tones, punctuated by the sounds of commerce - coins changing hands, packages being unwrapped, negotiations conducted in languages she couldn't identify."
5"She checked her watch again - midnight exactly."
6"The medical bag he'd been carrying clinked softly - glass vials or metal instruments shifting inside."
7"Whatever lay ahead in those tunnels, whatever Herrera was involved in, whatever had killed Morris three years ago - it was waiting."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount965
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.03626943005181347
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.013471502590673576
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences67
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences67
mean14.51
std7.96
cv0.549
sampleLengths
031
114
231
31
416
517
629
715
823
92
107
1114
1217
1317
1420
1512
1615
176
1820
197
2011
2126
2215
239
242
2510
268
2715
285
2911
3017
3120
3213
3325
3433
359
3613
3725
3812
3910
4016
416
427
438
4417
4521
467
4715
4816
4927
77.61% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.4925373134328358
totalSentences67
uniqueOpeners33
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences61
matches
0"Then he reached into his"
1"Barely adequate, but enough to"
2"Just Detective Harlow Quinn, eighteen"
ratio0.049
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount6
totalSentences61
matches
0"Her worn leather watch caught"
1"His movements held purpose, direction,"
2"It appeared almost hidden between"
3"She hesitated, finger hovering over"
4"She checked her watch again"
5"Her radio crackled with static,"
ratio0.098
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount43
totalSentences61
matches
0"The rain hammered the pavement"
1"Her worn leather watch caught"
2"Herrera's silhouette darted between the"
3"The former paramedic moved with"
4"Quinn's shoes splashed through puddles"
5"The Metropolitan Police had trained"
6"Herrera wasn't running like a"
7"His movements held purpose, direction,"
8"The detective rounded a corner"
9"Quinn had walked these streets"
10"It appeared almost hidden between"
11"Herrera paused at the bottom"
12"Quinn muttered, quickening her pace"
13"The stone steps descended into"
14"The metal gate that should"
15"Quinn pulled out her mobile"
16"She hesitated, finger hovering over"
17"Protocol demanded she report in,"
18"The rain intensified, driving needles"
19"Quinn descended the first few"
ratio0.705
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences61
matches
0"Even through the rain and"
1"If she turned back now,"
ratio0.033
49.69% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"His movements held purpose, direction, as if he knew exactly where he was going."
1"Then he reached into his jacket and withdrew something small - a pale object that gleamed bone-white under the streetlights."
2"Victorian ironwork supported a vaulted ceiling that disappeared into shadows, while the distinctive curved walls bore faded advertisements for products that had…"
3"The air carried scents that didn't belong - exotic spices, something metallic that made her nose wrinkle, and underneath it all, an earthy dampness that suggest…"
4"Through the darkness ahead, she caught glimpses of movement, shadows that moved with too much coordination to be tricks of light."
5"Just Detective Harlow Quinn, eighteen years of service, and the memory of a partner who'd died investigating something very much like this."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Quinn muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences1
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio1
80.0542%