Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTY4AJVA37MN0HM5E371M17

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Duration:
1m 23s
Cost:
$0.002792
Provider:
SiliconFlow

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Horror genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
A twig snapped somewhere deep in the darkness behind her, the sound as sharp as a gunshot in the unnatural silence. Aurora Carter froze, her hand clutching the Heartstone pendant through her jumper. The deep crimson gem pulsed once, a warm heartbeat against her palm. She’d ducked under the old wire fence into Richmond Park an hour ago, maybe two. Time had begun to soften at the edges as soon as the city lights had faded, swallowed by the oppressive weight of the ancient trees. The map on her phone was useless now, a grid of grey lines over a blank screen. She was navigating by the pull of the stone, a low thrumming warmth that grew stronger the deeper she ventured into the woods. Another rustle, this time to her left. Deliberate. Something heavy brushing through damp bracken. “Just a fox,” she whispered into the collar of her jacket, the words tasting like a lie. Foxes didn’t move like that. They were quick, skittish things. This sounded like a slow, patient shifting of weight. The Heartstone burned against her skin. She pulled it out, letting it dangle from its silver chain. Its faint inner glow illuminated the path ahead in shifting shades of bloody light. According to the brittle, handwritten note slipped under her door, this was the way. *Find the standing stones at the heart of Richmond,* it had read, the ink smelling faintly of damp earth and something else, something sweetly rotten. *Your answers await.* Answers. That’s what she’d come for. Answers about the whispers that had started following her after her last delivery run for Yu-Fei, whispers that spoke her mother’s maiden name—Ellis—in voices that crackled like static. Answers about the man who’d been watching her flat above Silas’s bar, a silhouette that never seemed to blink. The pendant had been the only lead, a key without a lock. The air changed. The chill of the autumn night lifted, replaced by a sudden, humid warmth that clung to her skin. The scent of wildflowers bloomed around her, thick and cloying, though she knew nothing should be blooming in October. The trees thinned abruptly, and she stepped into a clearing she was certain hadn’t been on any map. The Fae Grove. A ring of ancient oaks, their bark twisted into faces frozen in silent screams, formed a perfect circle. In the centre stood a ring of jagged standing stones, blacker than the surrounding night. Moonlight, far brighter than it should have been, washed over the scene, casting stark, elongated shadows that seemed to twitch independently of the stones that birthed them. The Heartstone flared, its warmth becoming a steady, urgent heat. This was the place. She took a step forward, and the ground sighed under her foot. Not a crunch of leaves, but a soft, organic sigh, as if she were stepping on living flesh. She forced herself to keep walking, her senses screaming. Every instinct told her to run, to get back to the familiar grime of London, back to the smell of stale beer and frying oil from the bar below her flat. But Evan had taught her that running only made predators chase harder. She was done running. The centre of the stone circle was colder. The flowery scent vanished, replaced by the metallic tang of old blood and ozone. She stood still, listening. The silence was no longer empty. It was a held breath. A low chuckle echoed from the far side of the stones. It wasn’t a human sound. It was the rustle of dry leaves, the creak of old wood, given voice. “Laila.” Her childhood name. The name her mother used when she was scared. A name no one in London knew. Aurora’s blood ran cold. “Who’s there?” Movement flickered in the corner of her eye. She spun, but there was nothing there, only the shifting shadows between the monoliths. The chuckle came again, this time from directly behind her. She didn’t turn. Her fingers tightened around the pendant. “You carry a burden that is not yours, little Laila Ellis.” The voice was closer now, just over her shoulder. She could feel a presence, a pocket of intense cold at her back. She could smell it now—loam and decay. “What do you want?” “The stone. It calls to its master. You are merely the postman.” The words slithered into her ear. “But you have lingered too long with the mail.” She swallowed hard, her mouth dry. Out of the box. Think out of the box. She wasn’t a fighter. She was a runner, a thinker. The stone pulsed rhythmically, a frantic heartbeat. It wasn’t just warning her. It was… measuring. It pulled her gaze downwards. Her own shadow, cast by the weird moonlight, stretched long before her. But there was a second shadow, thicker and more solid, looming over hers. It had horns. “Give it to me,” the voice hissed, the cold intensifying, freezing the hairs on the nape of her neck. “And your death will be swift.” Aurora didn’t move. She stared at the twin shadows. The stone wasn’t just hot; it was vibrating, humming a frequency she felt in her bones. The note had said *answers*. It hadn’t said anything about handing over the only thing that seemed to be keeping the darkness at bay. “No,” she said, her voice steadier than she felt. The cold vanished. The presence was gone. For a single, breathless second, she thought she’d won. Then the world tilted. The standing stones began to rotate, grinding against the earth with the sound of continents colliding. The shadows they cast writhed, peeling themselves away from the ground, taking on form and substance. They weren't shadows anymore. They were gaps in the world, man-shaped voids of absolute nothingness that started to shamble towards her. The chuckling echoed from all around now, a chorus of dry, malevolent amusement. The Heartstone blazed in her hand, its crimson light flaring outwards, pushing against the encroaching darkness. The nearest void-shape recoiled with a sound like tearing silk. They were afraid of the light. Aurora backed away, holding the pendant before her like a torch. The circle of safety it created was small, barely three feet across. The things circled her, their emptiness sucking the warmth and sound from the air. She could feel the wrongness of this place pressing in, the way time itself was stretching and compressing. How long had she been here? An hour? A minute? A day? One of the shadows darted forward, a limb of pure cold lashing out. She swung the pendant. The light connected, and the creature shrieked, a high-pitched frequency that felt like needles in her teeth. It dissipated into smoke. But two more surged forward to take its place. She was tiring. The stone’s glow was flickering. They were testing her. Wearing her down. She needed to break the circle. The original stones were still turning, a slow, inexorable carousel of nightmare. There had to be a gap. A way out. She risked a glance over her shoulder, searching for the path she’d entered from. It was gone. The trees surrounding the grove were now a solid, impenetrable wall of thorny branches, weaving themselves tighter even as she watched. Trapped. The chuckle echoed directly in front of her this time. The largest of the void-shapes stepped through the ring of stones. It was taller than the others, and in the centre of its featureless face, a single point of cold, blue light ignited like a malevolent star. “The postman always rings twice,” it rasped, its voice the grinding of stone. “But for you, little postman, this is the final delivery.” It lunged.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences12
tagDensity0.417
leniency0.833
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.12% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1288
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"sweetly"
count1
highlights
0"sweetly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
6.83% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1288
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"silence"
count2
1
word"pulsed"
count2
2
word"oppressive"
count1
3
word"weight"
count2
4
word"navigating"
count1
5
word"warmth"
count4
6
word"chill"
count1
7
word"perfect"
count1
8
word"stark"
count1
9
word"familiar"
count1
10
word"echoed"
count3
11
word"flickered"
count1
12
word"could feel"
count2
13
word"looming"
count1
14
word"silk"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"pulsed"
2"oppressive"
3"weight"
4"navigating"
5"warmth"
6"chill"
7"perfect"
8"stark"
9"familiar"
10"echoed"
11"flickered"
12"could feel"
13"looming"
14"silk"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"blood ran cold"
count1
highlights
0"blood ran cold"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences124
matches
0"was scared"
85.25% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences124
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
2"started to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences131
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords13
totalWords1280
ratio0.01
matches
0"Find the standing stones at the heart of Richmond,"
1"Your answers await."
2"answers"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions25
wordCount1212
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity0.33
worstName"Heartstone"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Answers"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Heartstone4
Richmond2
Park1
Foxes1
Answers3
Yu-Fei1
Ellis1
Silas1
October1
Fae1
Grove1
London2
Evan1
Aurora4
persons
0"Carter"
1"Heartstone"
2"Foxes"
3"Answers"
4"Ellis"
5"Silas"
6"Evan"
7"Aurora"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"October"
3"Fae"
4"Grove"
5"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
26.54% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences81
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"sounded like a slow, patient shifting of w"
1"shadows that seemed to twitch independently of the stones that birthed them"
2"thing that seemed to be keeping the darkness at bay"
3"felt like needles in her teeth"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.781
wordCount1280
matches
0"Not a crunch of leaves, but a soft, organic sigh, as if she were stepping on living fles"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences131
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs39
mean32.82
std23.22
cv0.707
sampleLengths
045
180
214
336
473
565
658
73
860
914
1086
1137
1230
131
1423
152
1641
1711
1829
194
2027
2145
2228
2325
2449
259
2620
2766
2826
296
3067
3138
3224
3327
3438
351
3647
3723
382
96.77% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences124
matches
0"been, washed"
1"was gone"
2"was gone"
4.88% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount6
totalVerbs205
matches
0"was navigating"
1"were stepping"
2"was vibrating"
3"was stretching"
4"was flickering"
5"were testing"
77.43% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences131
ratio0.023
matches
0"Answers about the whispers that had started following her after her last delivery run for Yu-Fei, whispers that spoke her mother’s maiden name—Ellis—in voices that crackled like static."
1"She could smell it now—loam and decay."
2"The stone wasn’t just hot; it was vibrating, humming a frequency she felt in her bones."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1220
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount38
adverbRatio0.03114754098360656
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.009836065573770493
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences131
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences131
mean9.77
std6.65
cv0.681
sampleLengths
021
112
212
315
425
517
623
77
81
96
1017
115
125
139
146
1511
1614
1714
1825
193
201
215
2228
2319
2412
253
2618
2719
2818
293
3018
3115
3227
3310
344
3512
3618
379
3831
3912
404
418
4214
434
446
455
4611
475
4814
491
40.71% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats20
diversityRatio0.33587786259541985
totalSentences131
uniqueOpeners44
28.99% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences115
matches
0"Then the world tilted."
ratio0.009
70.43% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount43
totalSentences115
matches
0"She’d ducked under the old"
1"She was navigating by the"
2"she whispered into the collar"
3"They were quick, skittish things."
4"She pulled it out, letting"
5"Its faint inner glow illuminated"
6"*Your answers await.*"
7"She took a step forward,"
8"She forced herself to keep"
9"She was done running."
10"She stood still, listening."
11"It was a held breath."
12"It wasn’t a human sound."
13"It was the rustle of"
14"Her childhood name."
15"She spun, but there was"
16"She didn’t turn."
17"Her fingers tightened around the"
18"She could feel a presence,"
19"She could smell it now—loam"
ratio0.374
20.87% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount101
totalSentences115
matches
0"A twig snapped somewhere deep"
1"Aurora Carter froze, her hand"
2"The deep crimson gem pulsed"
3"She’d ducked under the old"
4"Time had begun to soften"
5"The map on her phone"
6"She was navigating by the"
7"Another rustle, this time to"
8"Something heavy brushing through damp"
9"she whispered into the collar"
10"Foxes didn’t move like that."
11"They were quick, skittish things."
12"This sounded like a slow,"
13"The Heartstone burned against her"
14"She pulled it out, letting"
15"Its faint inner glow illuminated"
16"*Your answers await.*"
17"That’s what she’d come for."
18"Answers about the whispers that"
19"Answers about the man who’d"
ratio0.878
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences115
matches(empty)
ratio0
75.47% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences53
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"She was navigating by the pull of the stone, a low thrumming warmth that grew stronger the deeper she ventured into the woods."
1"Answers about the whispers that had started following her after her last delivery run for Yu-Fei, whispers that spoke her mother’s maiden name—Ellis—in voices t…"
2"Moonlight, far brighter than it should have been, washed over the scene, casting stark, elongated shadows that seemed to twitch independently of the stones that…"
3"They were gaps in the world, man-shaped voids of absolute nothingness that started to shamble towards her."
4"The light connected, and the creature shrieked, a high-pitched frequency that felt like needles in her teeth."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she said, her voice steadier than she felt"
1"it rasped, its voice the grinding of stone"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
1"the voice hissed (hiss)"
dialogueSentences12
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.333
71.0100%