Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTY4EGKXGF8Z3TCDTAE6KYQ

Run Details

Duration:
4m 33s
Cost:
$0.006043
Provider:
AtlasCloud

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora pushed through the barrier of ancient oak standing stones. The air shifted instantly, heavy and sweet like rotting lilies. Richmond Park lay behind her, swallowed by the London night, but here the darkness possessed a texture. She adjusted the collar of her jacket. The silver chain of the Heartstone Pendant rested against her skin, the deep crimson gemstone pulsing with a heat that had nothing to do with body temperature. She walked into the clearing. Wildflowers bloomed in the mud, petals unfurled despite the lack of sun. Bluebells and foxgloves stood tall, their colours saturated beyond natural limits. They glowed under the moonlight. Aurora stopped. Her breath plumed in front of her face, white and steady. She touched the scar on her left wrist. The crescent shape felt tight, the skin pulling. A branch snapped somewhere to her right. Aurora turned. The trees stood in a perfect circle around the clearing, their branches interlocked to form a ceiling. No wind moved the leaves. The silence pressed against her ears. She waited. The stillness held. She continued toward the center of the Grove. The ground felt spongy, absorbing the sound of her boots. The pendant burned hotter. She slipped her fingers around the gem. The silver chain bit into her neck. "Eva?" The name hung in the air. No echo returned. The sound died the moment it left her lips. She checked her watch. The second hand ticked backward. She tapped the glass. The hand jerked forward, then stopped again. Time moved differently here. An hour inside could be minutes outside. Or days. She needed to find the source of the signal and leave. Something rustled in the undergrowth. Not the scuttle of an animal. This sounded like fabric dragging over dry leaves. Aurora froze. Her bright blue eyes scanned the perimeter. The shadows between the trunks looked solid, darker than the night should allow. She took a step back. The flowers turned their heads. She blinked. The foxgloves faced her now. Moments ago they faced the center. She rubbed her eyes. Plants did not move. Not like that. The pendant seared her skin. She released it. The heat remained, radiating from the stone into her chest. A whisper drifted from the left. Indistinct. Like voices underwater. Aurora spun around. Nothing stood there. Only the ancient oaks. Their bark resembled twisted faces, deep grooves forming eyes and mouths. She walked toward the nearest tree. The wood felt warm. Vibrating. "Show yourself." Her voice sounded thin. The darkness absorbed the challenge. She moved deeper into the clearing. The path she had taken from the stones vanished. The grass stood uniform, unbroken by footprints. Her own tracks behind her had disappeared. She looked down. The mud smoothed over as if water washed it clean. The temperature dropped. Her breath came faster. She pulled her jacket tighter. The wildflowers released a stronger scent, cloying and thick. It coated the back of her throat. A shadow detached itself from the tree line. It stood human-shaped but lacked definition. No features. Just a void in the shape of a person. Aurora held her ground. Her heart hammered against her ribs. She reached for the pendant again. The crimson glow intensified, casting red light on her hands. The shadow did not move closer. It did not move away. She took a step toward it. The shadow stepped back. She stopped. The shadow stopped. A twig snapped behind her. Close. Within arm's reach. Aurora did not turn. She kept her eyes on the shadow in front. The air behind her neck grew cold. A presence stood at her back. She could feel the radiation of something living. Something waiting. The whispering grew louder. Words formed in the noise. Her name. "Rory." The voice came from everywhere. From the trees. From the ground. From inside her own head. She gripped the Heartstone. The silver chain tightened. Her knuckles turned white. The red light pulsed in rhythm with the whispering. The shadow in front of her raised an arm. It pointed at the ground at her feet. Aurora looked down. The wildflowers around her boots wilted instantly. Petals turned black and crumbled to dust. The decay spread outward in a circle. She stepped back. The decay followed. The presence behind her breathed. The air hit her ear. Warm. Wet. She swung around. Nothing stood there. Only the empty space where something had been. The shadow in front vanished. The clearing stood empty. The flowers remained wilted in a perfect circle around her. The pendant cooled. The warmth faded completely. Aurora stood still. Her muscles locked. She listened. The silence returned, heavier than before. The trees leaned inward. The branches lowered. A sound came from above. Dry wood creaking. She looked up. The branches woven together above shifted. They opened. The moonlight disappeared. The Grove plunged into total darkness. She fumbled for her phone. The screen lit up her face. No signal. The time read 00:00. She lowered the phone. The light died. In the darkness, something brushed her hair. She swung her arm out. Her hand hit nothing. Air. The scent of rotting lilies intensified. It choked her. She covered her mouth. Footsteps circled her. Slow. Deliberate. Boots on mud. Her boots. But she stood still. The circling stopped. The footsteps stood directly in front of her. She could not see them. She could only hear the breathing. Her left wrist itching. The scar burned. She struck a match. The flame flared bright yellow. The light revealed a pair of eyes at her eye level. They reflected the flame. No pupils. Just white spheres. The match burned her fingers. She dropped it. Darkness returned. The eyes remained. Glowing faintly in the black. She backed away. Her heel caught on a root. She stumbled. The eyes moved with her. She scrambled to her feet. The pendant remained cold. The heat was gone. The signal was gone. The breathing stopped. Aurora stood in the center of the Fae Grove. The wildflowers stood tall again. Unwilting. Vibrant. She waited for a sound. Any sound. The trees stood silent. The stones stood silent. A single leaf fell from the canopy. It landed on her shoulder. She brushed it off. The leaf turned to ash in her hand. She looked at the ash. It blew away in a wind she could not feel. The darkness pressed closer. The boundary of the clearing shrank. The oaks moved inward. She walked toward where the entrance should be. Her hand reached out to touch the bark. The wood felt like skin. Soft. Yielding. She pulled her hand back. A imprint of her fingers remained in the wood. Bleeding sap. The sap smelled like copper. Like blood. She wiped her hand on her jeans. The stain remained. The whispering started again. Closer. "Rory." She ran. The ground stretched. Her legs pumped. The trees did not get closer. The clearing expanded. She ran toward the stones. They receded. She stopped. Chest heaving. The stones stood where they started. She had not moved. The pendant vibrated. A low hum. She looked at the gem. The crimson color deepened. Black veins spread through the stone. The eyes appeared again. Ten pairs. Twenty. Lining the tree trunks. Watching. She stood still. Her breath hitched. The eyes blinked. In unison. The darkness lifted slightly. Grey light filtered through the branches. Dawn? Or something else. The flowers opened wider. Mouths formed in the petals. They whispered together. "Stay." Aurora clenched her fists. Her nails dug into her palms. The pendant grew hot again. Burning. She tore at the chain. The clasp stuck. The heat spread down her chest. She grabbed a stone from the ground. Rough edge. She sliced the chain. The pendant fell into the mud. The humming stopped. The eyes closed. The flowers wilted. Silence returned. Aurora stood over the pendant. The crimson gem stared up at her. A hand reached out from the mud. Pale. Long fingers. It grasped the pendant. Aurora stepped back. The hand pulled the pendant down. Into the earth. The mud sealed over. The flowers bloomed again. Instantly. The eyes opened. The whispering grew loud. A chorus. "Stay." Aurora turned. The path behind her remained blocked. The trees stood solid. She walked toward the center. The only place left to go. The ground softened. Her boots sank. The wildflowers brushed against her legs. They felt like fingers. She reached the center. A single oak tree stood alone. Larger than the rest. The bark formed a face. Her face. She touched the wood. The wood felt warm. The eyes on the trees opened wider. The whispering stopped. Only the sound of her own heart remained. Thump. Thump. Thump. The tree's mouth opened.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
93.13% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1455
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"completely"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"completely"
1"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
51.89% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1455
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"perfect"
count2
1
word"silence"
count3
2
word"echo"
count1
3
word"scanned"
count1
4
word"whisper"
count1
5
word"could feel"
count1
6
word"pulsed"
count1
7
word"warmth"
count1
8
word"footsteps"
count2
9
word"vibrated"
count1
highlights
0"perfect"
1"silence"
2"echo"
3"scanned"
4"whisper"
5"could feel"
6"pulsed"
7"warmth"
8"footsteps"
9"vibrated"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"knuckles turned white"
count1
1
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
2
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"knuckles turned white"
1"clenched her fists"
2"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences304
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences304
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences310
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1454
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions26
wordCount1447
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.97
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Park1
London1
Heartstone2
Pendant1
Grove3
Fae1
Aurora14
Thump3
persons
0"Pendant"
1"Aurora"
places
0"Park"
1"London"
2"Grove"
3"Fae"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences94
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"sounded like fabric dragging over dry leav"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1454
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences310
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs111
mean13.1
std11.85
cv0.905
sampleLengths
071
162
27
335
436
51
618
744
841
910
1024
1118
1210
1332
142
159
1642
1728
1825
1937
2010
215
229
2336
2411
251
2616
2721
2817
2924
306
3112
3214
3319
347
3521
3619
379
3817
397
407
4110
4213
4314
4422
457
469
4720
488
4910
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences304
matches
0"was gone"
1"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs294
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences310
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1448
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount37
adverbRatio0.025552486187845305
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.008977900552486187
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences310
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences310
mean4.69
std2.91
cv0.621
sampleLengths
010
110
217
37
427
55
612
711
85
92
1011
118
128
137
142
1517
165
176
182
193
208
2110
224
237
247
251
266
273
289
294
305
314
327
334
347
352
3611
375
386
398
402
417
4213
435
445
452
465
476
484
494
37.42% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats39
diversityRatio0.23225806451612904
totalSentences310
uniqueOpeners72
66.67% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences250
matches
0"Only the ancient oaks."
1"Just a void in the"
2"Only the empty space where"
3"Just white spheres."
4"Only the sound of her"
ratio0.02
95.20% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount78
totalSentences250
matches
0"She adjusted the collar of"
1"She walked into the clearing."
2"They glowed under the moonlight."
3"Her breath plumed in front"
4"She touched the scar on"
5"She continued toward the center"
6"She slipped her fingers around"
7"She checked her watch."
8"She tapped the glass."
9"She needed to find the"
10"Her bright blue eyes scanned"
11"She took a step back."
12"She rubbed her eyes."
13"She released it."
14"Their bark resembled twisted faces,"
15"She walked toward the nearest"
16"Her voice sounded thin."
17"She moved deeper into the"
18"Her own tracks behind her"
19"She looked down."
ratio0.312
10.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount225
totalSentences250
matches
0"Aurora pushed through the barrier"
1"The air shifted instantly, heavy"
2"Richmond Park lay behind her,"
3"She adjusted the collar of"
4"The silver chain of the"
5"She walked into the clearing."
6"Wildflowers bloomed in the mud,"
7"Bluebells and foxgloves stood tall,"
8"They glowed under the moonlight."
9"Her breath plumed in front"
10"She touched the scar on"
11"The crescent shape felt tight,"
12"A branch snapped somewhere to"
13"The trees stood in a"
14"The silence pressed against her"
15"The stillness held."
16"She continued toward the center"
17"The ground felt spongy, absorbing"
18"The pendant burned hotter."
19"She slipped her fingers around"
ratio0.9
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences250
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences18
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The silver chain of the Heartstone Pendant rested against her skin, the deep crimson gemstone pulsing with a heat that had nothing to do with body temperature."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
87.3657%