Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTY4HKZT7HEQXCAXZGPXC0J

Run Details

Duration:
50.2s
Cost:
$0.001835
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Horror genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Heartstone pendant pulsed against Aurora’s sternum, a dull, rhythmic throb like a second, frantic heart. It wasn’t a gentle warmth anymore; it was a hot, insistent pressure, guiding her deeper into the grove. The air, thick with the cloying sweetness of year-round wildflowers, felt heavy, resistant, like pushing through a membrane. She’d followed the pull, the strange compulsion that had started the moment she’d slipped the silver chain over her head. It had led her past the ancient oak standing stones that marked the boundary of Richmond Park, into a place that shouldn’t exist. The silence here was a physical thing, a dense blanket that muffled the distant hum of London. Her own breathing sounded obscenely loud. Then came the first sound that wasn’t her. A dry rustle, like old parchment being crumpled, skittered through the undergrowth to her left. Rory froze, her hand instinctively closing around the warm stone at her throat. She held her breath, straining to hear past the hammering of her own pulse in her ears. Nothing. Just the oppressive, watchful silence. She took another step. The wildflowers brushed against her jeans, leaving faint streaks of pollen. Their scent was overwhelming now, sickly sweet, like overripe fruit on the verge of rot. Another sound. This one was different. A soft, wet click, like a tongue detaching from a palate. It came from directly behind her. She spun around, her trainers sinking silently into the soft, mossy earth. The clearing was empty. The standing stones stood sentinel in the moonlight, their gnarled surfaces seeming to shift and writhe if she stared too long. Paranoia, she told herself. Just the place. It’s designed to mess with your head. But the pendant burned hotter. A flicker of movement at the very edge of her vision. She snapped her head to the right. Nothing. Just the shadow of a twisted oak branch swaying in a non-existent breeze. Her mind was conjuring things, filling the silence with its own fears. She forced herself to take a steadying breath. Cool-headed. Out-of-the-box. That was her. Not some jumpy idiot spooking at shadows. She focused on her reason for being here. The note, slipped under her door, written in an elegant, unfamiliar hand. *The answers you seek are in the grove. Wear this. Come alone.* And the pendant, left beside it. It was a stupid, reckless risk. After Evan, she’d sworn off trusting anyone. But the questions—about the whispers in her flat, the figures she saw reflected in shop windows that vanished when she turned, the feeling of being watched from the empty flat across the street—had become too loud to ignore. Another wet click, closer this time. Followed by a low, guttural inhale, the sound of someone—or something—savouring a scent. Her scent. This was no branch. This was no paranoia. Her body went rigid, every muscle coiled tight. She didn’t turn. She didn’t run. Instead, her eyes scanned the ground, finding a broken branch a few feet away. She inched towards it, her movements slow, deliberate, her gaze fixed straight ahead. The thing was behind her. She could feel its attention like a physical weight between her shoulder blades. Her fingers closed around the rough wood of the branch. It was solid. Real. A soft, melodic hum began, a dissonant little tune that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere at once. It was a child’s nursery rhyme played on a broken music box, the notes slightly off-key, dripping with a mockery of innocence. The sound wrapped around her, clashing violently with the primal fear coiling in her gut. The humming stopped. The silence that followed was worse. Then, a voice. It was a dry, rasping whisper, so close she felt the displacement of air against her ear. “Lost little Laila.” Her childhood name. No one called her that. No one knew that name here. She whipped around, the branch held out like a sword, a raw cry caught in her throat. There was nothing there. But the air where the voice had been… it shimmered. Like heat haze on a summer road, but cold. A pocket of wrongness that made the hairs on her arms stand up. The pendant was searing hot now, a brand against her skin. The deep crimson gemstone throbbed with a faint, sickly inner light, casting jumping shadows across the forest floor. From the corner of her eye, she saw it again. A shape. Tall, impossibly thin, limbs that seemed too long, jointed in all the wrong places. It didn’t walk. It unfolded itself from behind one of the standing stones, moving with a stuttering, insectile grace that was utterly alien. It was a silhouette of stretched skin and sharp angles, and for a horrifying second, she saw right through it to the twisted oak behind. It tilted its head. A series of those wet, clicking sounds echoed from where its face should have been. Run. The command screamed through every fibre of her being. But her feet were rooted to the spot, held fast by a terror so complete it was paralyzing. The thing took a step towards her. Its movement was silent, its form seeming to drink the moonlight rather than reflect it. The wrongness of it pressed in on her, a suffocating pressure that made her head spin. It raised one of those long, spindly arms, a finger—too many joints, too sharp—pointing not at her, but at the Heartstone pendant glowing fiercely at her chest. The rasping voice filled the space between them again, no longer a whisper but a dry, scraping demand. “Mine.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
84.04% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount940
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"utterly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"slightly"
2"utterly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount940
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"pulsed"
count1
1
word"rhythmic"
count1
2
word"throb"
count1
3
word"warmth"
count1
4
word"silence"
count4
5
word"pulse"
count1
6
word"oppressive"
count1
7
word"sentinel"
count1
8
word"flicker"
count1
9
word"scanned"
count1
10
word"could feel"
count1
11
word"weight"
count1
12
word"whisper"
count2
13
word"shimmered"
count1
14
word"searing"
count1
15
word"throbbed"
count1
16
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"rhythmic"
2"throb"
3"warmth"
4"silence"
5"pulse"
6"oppressive"
7"sentinel"
8"flicker"
9"scanned"
10"could feel"
11"weight"
12"whisper"
13"shimmered"
14"searing"
15"throbbed"
16"echoed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences94
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences94
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences96
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords12
totalWords930
ratio0.013
matches
0"The answers you seek are in the grove. Wear this. Come alone."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Paranoia, she told herself."
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions7
wordCount926
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity0.22
worstName"Heartstone"
maxWindowNameDensity0.5
worstWindowName"Heartstone"
discoveredNames
Heartstone2
Aurora1
Richmond1
Park1
London1
Evan1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Evan"
places
0"Heartstone"
1"Richmond"
2"Park"
3"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences62
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"tune that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere at once"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords2.151
wordCount930
matches
0"not at her, but at the Heartstone pendant glowing fiercely at her chest"
1"no longer a whisper but"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences96
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs31
mean30
std23.52
cv0.784
sampleLengths
052
166
28
351
430
523
651
75
864
989
1021
118
1259
1314
1456
153
166
1720
183
1914
2017
214
2232
2329
2474
2519
2628
2738
2827
2918
301
97.80% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences94
matches
0"being crumpled"
1"were rooted"
67.55% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs151
matches
0"was conjuring"
1"was searing"
2"was paralyzing"
23.81% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences96
ratio0.042
matches
0"It wasn’t a gentle warmth anymore; it was a hot, insistent pressure, guiding her deeper into the grove."
1"But the questions—about the whispers in her flat, the figures she saw reflected in shop windows that vanished when she turned, the feeling of being watched from the empty flat across the street—had become too loud to ignore."
2"Followed by a low, guttural inhale, the sound of someone—or something—savouring a scent."
3"It raised one of those long, spindly arms, a finger—too many joints, too sharp—pointing not at her, but at the Heartstone pendant glowing fiercely at her chest."
88.93% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount939
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"faint, sickly inner light,"
adverbCount43
adverbRatio0.04579339723109691
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.012779552715654952
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences96
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences96
mean9.69
std7.04
cv0.726
sampleLengths
016
118
218
320
423
517
66
78
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913
1017
111
125
134
1411
1515
162
174
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196
2012
214
2221
234
243
257
265
2711
287
291
3013
3112
328
331
341
353
367
378
3812
398
402
418
426
437
4438
456
4613
472
484
494
45.83% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.34375
totalSentences96
uniqueOpeners33
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount6
totalSentences83
matches
0"Then came the first sound"
1"Just the oppressive, watchful silence."
2"Just the place."
3"Just the shadow of a"
4"Instead, her eyes scanned the"
5"Then, a voice."
ratio0.072
65.78% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount32
totalSentences83
matches
0"It wasn’t a gentle warmth"
1"She’d followed the pull, the"
2"It had led her past"
3"Her own breathing sounded obscenely"
4"She held her breath, straining"
5"She took another step."
6"Their scent was overwhelming now,"
7"It came from directly behind"
8"She spun around, her trainers"
9"It’s designed to mess with"
10"She snapped her head to"
11"Her mind was conjuring things,"
12"She forced herself to take"
13"She focused on her reason"
14"It was a stupid, reckless"
15"Her body went rigid, every"
16"She didn’t turn."
17"She didn’t run."
18"She inched towards it, her"
19"She could feel its attention"
ratio0.386
80.48% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount63
totalSentences83
matches
0"The Heartstone pendant pulsed against"
1"It wasn’t a gentle warmth"
2"The air, thick with the"
3"She’d followed the pull, the"
4"It had led her past"
5"The silence here was a"
6"Her own breathing sounded obscenely"
7"A dry rustle, like old"
8"Rory froze, her hand instinctively"
9"She held her breath, straining"
10"She took another step."
11"The wildflowers brushed against her"
12"Their scent was overwhelming now,"
13"This one was different."
14"A soft, wet click, like"
15"It came from directly behind"
16"She spun around, her trainers"
17"The clearing was empty."
18"The standing stones stood sentinel"
19"Paranoia, she told herself."
ratio0.759
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
ratio0
40.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"She’d followed the pull, the strange compulsion that had started the moment she’d slipped the silver chain over her head."
1"But the questions—about the whispers in her flat, the figures she saw reflected in shop windows that vanished when she turned, the feeling of being watched from…"
2"A soft, melodic hum began, a dissonant little tune that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere at once."
3"Tall, impossibly thin, limbs that seemed too long, jointed in all the wrong places."
4"It unfolded itself from behind one of the standing stones, moving with a stuttering, insectile grace that was utterly alien."
5"The wrongness of it pressed in on her, a suffocating pressure that made her head spin."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
79.8348%