Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTY50T3J0V96KSGTMGNFWZR

Run Details

Duration:
33.6s
Cost:
$0.005559
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Three deadbolts slid back in rapid succession, the metallic clacks echoing off the narrow hallway of the Brick Lane building. The chain rattled. The door swung inward, revealing Aurora Carter standing on the other side of the threshold. She wore an apron stained with soy sauce and sesame oil over a faded t-shirt, her straight black hair pulled back in a messy knot that left stray strands framing her face. Her bright blue eyes widened, then narrowed instantly. Lucien Moreau stood on the landing, the smell of spicy curry from the restaurant below clinging to his tailored charcoal suit. He leaned heavily on his ivory-handled cane, the tip resting on the worn doormat. Rain dripped from the brim of a hat he no longer wore, darkening the shoulders of his jacket. His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one void-black—locked onto hers without blinking. "You changed the locks," Lucien said. His voice carried that smooth, trans-Atlantic cadence that used to make her forget her own name. "And added a chain. Practical." Aurora gripped the edge of the door, her knuckles turning white. The small crescent scar on her left wrist throbbed, a phantom ache triggered by the sudden spike in her heart rate. "I didn't expect visitors. Especially not you." "Yet here I am." "Here you are." She didn't step back. She didn't invite him in. The cramped hallway behind her overflowed with stacks of books, unrolled scrolls, and research notes pinned to every available inch of wall. A tabby cat named Ptolemy wound itself around her ankles, weaving through her legs and letting out a low, suspicious meow at the stranger. "Go away, Lucien." "Not until we speak." "We spoke. Three years ago. In Marseille. I said everything I needed to say." "You said nothing of consequence." Lucien shifted his weight, wincing as his bad leg took the pressure. The movement drew her eye to the cane, to the way his fingers tightened around the ivory handle. "You ran, Rory. You fled without looking back." "I left because you lied." Aurora's voice cracked, just once, before she steadied it. "You told me you were just a consultant. A fixer. You never mentioned Avaros. You never mentioned what your father was." "Would it have mattered?" "It mattered to me." She finally stepped back, but only far enough to let the door swing shut between them, leaving it open a crack. The warm, stuffy air of the flat mixed with the damp chill from the landing. "It changes the entire equation when the man you're falling for hides half his soul." "I hid it to keep you safe." Lucien pushed the door open with the tip of his cane. The force was gentle, but undeniable. Aurora didn't resist. She let him step inside, her body tense as a bowstring. He filled the small space immediately, his presence overwhelming the scent of old paper and cat fur. "My world is not kind to humans, Aurora. Ignorance was a shield." "A shield made of lies." She turned her back on him, walking toward the tiny kitchenette that doubled as her workspace. Pots dried on a rack above a sink full of soapy water. "You think I'm fragile? That I couldn't handle the truth?" "I thought you deserved a normal life." Lucien stopped in the center of the room, navigating around a pile of legal textbooks with practiced grace. "Cardiff. The law degree. The quiet existence. That was the plan before I ruined it." "You didn't ruin it. Evan did." The name slipped out before she could catch it. She froze, her hand hovering over a chipped mug. Lucien went still. The ambient noise of the city outside—the sirens, the distant traffic, the muffled voices from the curry house—seemed to drop away. "The ex-boyfriend. The one Eva mentioned in her letters." "He's in the past." "Is he?" Lucien moved closer. The floorboards creaked under his weight. "You have three deadbolts, Aurora. You live above a bar owned by a man who asks no questions. You work delivery routes that change every night. That isn't the life of a woman who moved on. That is the life of someone who is still running." Aurora spun around, her blue eyes flashing. "Don't analyze me. Don't treat me like one of your cases." "I treat you like the only person who ever saw me as more than my lineage." He stopped an arm's length away. Up close, she saw the fatigue etched into the lines around his eyes, the slight tremor in his hand where it rested on the cane. "I came to London because I heard rumors. Whispers of a half-demon operating out of Soho, targeting women with specific bloodlines. Yours." The air left the room. Aurora stared at him, searching for the lie, the manipulation, the angle. She found only a raw, terrifying honesty in his mismatched gaze. "You came to warn me?" "I came to stand between you and whatever hunts you." "And you thought showing up unannounced, looking like... like that, was the best approach?" She gestured at his soaked suit, the dangerous glint of the world he represented. "I thought honesty was overdue." Lucien reached out, his fingers brushing the stack of scrolls on the table beside her. His touch was light, careful, as if she were made of glass. "I made a mistake, Rory. A colossal one. I chose protection over trust, and it cost me you. I do not intend to make that error twice." Ptolemy jumped onto the table, knocking a pen to the floor. The sound broke the tension for a heartbeat. Aurora looked down at the cat, then back up at Lucien. The anger still simmered in her chest, hot and bright, but beneath it lay the old ache, the memory of rainy nights in Marseille and conversations that lasted until dawn. "You can't just walk back in," she said, her voice quieter now. "Three years, Lucien. Three years of silence. Then you show up talking about hunters and bloodlines." "The silence was my penance." He met her gaze, unflinching. "But the hunter is real. I have the files. The names. They know where you are." Aurora's breath hitched. She looked at the three deadbolts on the door, suddenly feeling insufficient. "How long have they been watching?" "Long enough." Lucien unbuttoned his jacket, revealing the holster beneath, empty but ready. "Which is why I am not leaving. Not tonight. Not until this is over." "I didn't ask for your help." "No." He took another step, closing the distance until she could feel the heat radiating from him, smell the rain and the faint, sulfuric tang of his demon heritage that she had once found intoxicating. "But you need it. And I need to fix what I broke." Aurora looked at his mouth, then up to his eyes. The history between them hung heavy in the cramped flat, a tangible weight pressing against her ribs. Every instinct screamed at her to push him away, to slam the door and retreat into the safety of her carefully constructed isolation. But the fear of the unknown, the threat he spoke of, anchored her feet to the floor. "If you stay," she said, her voice steady despite the tremor in her hands, "you sleep on the floor. And you answer every question I have. No more secrets." Lucien's lips curved into a faint, weary smile. "Agreed." "And if you try to use that cane as a weapon in my flat, I will throw you out myself." "Understood." He bowed his head slightly, a gesture of old-world courtesy that felt out of place amidst the clutter of her modern chaos. "May I take off my coat? The damp is seeping into the bones." Aurora nodded once. She watched him shrug off the heavy wool coat, revealing the sharp lines of his waistcoat and the tension in his shoulders. He moved to hang it on the back of a chair, careful not to disturb the precarious stacks of paper. As he turned back to her, the amber and black of his eyes caught the dim light of the single bulb overhead. "Start talking," she said, crossing her arms over her chest. "Who are they?" Lucien pulled a folded sheet of parchment from his inner pocket. The paper looked ancient, the ink shimmering with a faint, unnatural glow. He placed it on the table, smoothing it out next to Ptolemy, who sniffed it suspiciously before retreating. "They call themselves the Silenced," Lucien said, his voice dropping to a murmur. "And they believe your mother's lineage holds the key to a gate we thought sealed forever." Aurora stared at the paper, then at him. "My mother? She was a teacher. She taught Welsh literature." "She was many things, Rory." Lucien's expression softened, tinged with a sorrow she hadn't seen before. "Just as I am more than my father's son. We are all hiding in plain sight." He reached across the table, his hand covering hers. His skin was warm, almost feverish. She didn't pull away. The contact sent a jolt through her, reigniting the spark they had tried so hard to extinguish. "I won't let them take you," he said, the promise absolute. "Not again." Aurora turned her hand over, interlacing her fingers with his. The scar on her wrist pressed against his palm. "Then we work together. But on my terms." "Always," Lucien whispered. Outside, the rain intensified, drumming against the windowpane, but inside the cramped flat, the air crackled with a different kind of storm. Old wounds lay exposed, fresh threats loomed, and for the first time in three years, neither of them stood alone.
created_at"2026-02-19T12:31:44.968Z" 2/19/2026, 12:31:44 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags24
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Aurora's voice cracked just [just]"
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0.042
effectiveRatio0.033
90.72% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1617
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"carefully"
2"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
41.25% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1617
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"echoing"
count1
1
word"throbbed"
count1
2
word"weight"
count3
3
word"chill"
count1
4
word"navigating"
count1
5
word"etched"
count1
6
word"glint"
count1
7
word"tension"
count2
8
word"silence"
count2
9
word"could feel"
count1
10
word"tangible"
count1
11
word"constructed"
count1
12
word"amidst"
count1
13
word"tinged"
count1
14
word"loomed"
count1
highlights
0"echoing"
1"throbbed"
2"weight"
3"chill"
4"navigating"
5"etched"
6"glint"
7"tension"
8"silence"
9"could feel"
10"tangible"
11"constructed"
12"amidst"
13"tinged"
14"loomed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
1"sent a jolt through"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences83
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences83
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences119
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen46
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1609
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
79.18% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions36
wordCount1059
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.42
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Brick1
Lane1
Aurora12
Carter1
Moreau1
Ptolemy3
Pots1
Lucien15
Marseille1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Carter"
2"Moreau"
3"Ptolemy"
4"Pots"
5"Lucien"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Marseille"
globalScore0.792
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences69
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1609
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences119
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs48
mean33.52
std20.37
cv0.608
sampleLengths
078
163
227
339
44
561
64
714
843
935
104
1155
1267
1343
1440
1524
1633
174
1857
1918
2069
2133
2210
2328
2459
2560
2628
2726
2821
2927
306
3147
3267
3329
349
3520
3636
3767
3813
3941
4029
4118
4232
4336
4413
4527
463
4742
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences83
matches
0"were made"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs171
matches(empty)
94.84% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences119
ratio0.017
matches
0"His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one void-black—locked onto hers without blinking."
1"The ambient noise of the city outside—the sirens, the distant traffic, the muffled voices from the curry house—seemed to drop away."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1066
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount37
adverbRatio0.03470919324577861
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.009380863039399626
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences119
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences119
mean13.52
std7.91
cv0.585
sampleLengths
020
13
215
332
48
521
614
718
810
96
1016
115
1211
1321
147
154
167
175
1822
1924
203
214
2214
2317
2418
258
2614
2721
284
2925
3015
3115
3218
336
343
3511
3617
3712
3821
3912
4010
4125
4215
4315
449
453
4621
479
484
495
62.75% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.3865546218487395
totalSentences119
uniqueOpeners46
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences81
matches(empty)
ratio0
71.85% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences81
matches
0"She wore an apron stained"
1"Her bright blue eyes widened,"
2"He leaned heavily on his"
3"His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one"
4"His voice carried that smooth,"
5"She didn't step back"
6"She didn't invite him in."
7"She finally stepped back, but"
8"She let him step inside,"
9"He filled the small space"
10"She turned her back on"
11"She froze, her hand hovering"
12"He stopped an arm's length"
13"She found only a raw,"
14"She gestured at his soaked"
15"His touch was light, careful,"
16"she said, her voice quieter"
17"He met her gaze, unflinching"
18"She looked at the three"
19"He took another step, closing"
ratio0.37
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount75
totalSentences81
matches
0"The chain rattled."
1"The door swung inward, revealing"
2"She wore an apron stained"
3"Her bright blue eyes widened,"
4"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
5"He leaned heavily on his"
6"Rain dripped from the brim"
7"His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one"
8"His voice carried that smooth,"
9"Aurora gripped the edge of"
10"The small crescent scar on"
11"She didn't step back"
12"She didn't invite him in."
13"The cramped hallway behind her"
14"A tabby cat named Ptolemy"
15"Lucien shifted his weight, wincing"
16"The movement drew her eye"
17"Aurora's voice cracked, just once,"
18"She finally stepped back, but"
19"The warm, stuffy air of"
ratio0.926
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences81
matches(empty)
ratio0
71.43% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"His voice carried that smooth, trans-Atlantic cadence that used to make her forget her own name."
1"A tabby cat named Ptolemy wound itself around her ankles, weaving through her legs and letting out a low, suspicious meow at the stranger."
2"The anger still simmered in her chest, hot and bright, but beneath it lay the old ache, the memory of rainy nights in Marseille and conversations that lasted un…"
3"He placed it on the table, smoothing it out next to Ptolemy, who sniffed it suspiciously before retreating."
62.50% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags24
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"she said, her voice quieter now"
1"she said, her voice steady despite the tremor in her hands,"
2"Lucien said, his voice dropping to a murmur"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Lucien whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.117
leniency0.233
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.033
82.4838%