Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTY5KSE8A9GR60F6RGRSQS9

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Duration:
1m 58s
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$0.003255
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AtlasCloud

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign flickered outside, casting pale light across the rain-slicked pavement. Aurora pushed through the door of The Raven's Nest, the familiar smell of old wood and whiskey wrapping around her like a worn blanket. Her delivery shift had ended an hour ago, but her feet had carried her here instead of up the narrow stairs to her flat. She hadn't planned on drinking. She'd planned on hiding. The bar was nearly empty on a Tuesday night. A few regulars hunched over their pints near the window, and the old man who always sat three stools from the end—Harold, she thought—nodded at her from behind his crossword. Aurora made her way to the far corner, choosing a table obscured by shadow, and collapsed into the chair. "Rough night?" She looked up. Silas was already there, a glass of water sliding across the table toward her. He moved with that quiet efficiency she'd come to recognize over the past six months—the slight limp barely noticeable now, the silver signet ring catching the dim light as he set down a napkin. "Not rough," she said. "Just needed to not be alone." He studied her for a moment, that retired spymaster's gaze that saw too much and said too little. Then he nodded and turned back toward the bar. Aurora wrapped her fingers around the glass but didn't drink. The street outside had gone quiet in that way London did sometimes, as if the city itself was holding its breath. The door opened. Closed. Footsteps on the worn floorboards. She didn't look up. Didn't want to see whoever had just walked in, didn't want to make conversation or exchange pleasantries or perform the social rituals that exhausted her lately. But the footsteps stopped. Close. Too close. "Rory?" The name hit her like cold water. No one called her Rory here. No one knew that name except— Aurora's head snapped up. Eva stood three feet away, rain still dripping from the tips of her dark hair, her coat splattered with the evening's drizzle. She'd lost weight. Her cheekbones were sharper, her eyes bigger, and her hand—her left hand—was missing the promise ring she'd worn for three years. Eva. Her Eva. The girl who'd shared her childhood, her secrets, her bed in that cramped Cardiff flat when they were seventeen and terrified and certain they'd escape together. What are you doing in London?" The words came out flat, harsher than Aurora intended. She watched Eva flinch, watched the smile that had been forming on her lips falter and fall. "I could ask you the same thing." Eva's voice was softer than Aurora remembered. Worn down at the edges. "I tried your parents' place. Your mum said you'd moved to London. She wasn't... she wasn't happy. About the leaving." "Mum had plenty to say about plenty of things." Aurora gestured to the empty chair across from her. What else was she supposed to do? Tell her to leave? Pretend she didn't exist? Eva sat. Her eyes moved over Aurora's face, cataloging changes—the new sharpness in her jaw, the way her black hair had been cut shorter, the exhaustion that Aurora knew sat beneath her eyes like bruises. "You look different," Eva said. "You look thinner." The words hung between them, sharp and too true. Eva looked away, toward the bar where Silas was polishing a glass with deliberate concentration. "Is this your place?" Eva asked. "I live upstairs. He lets me stay above the bar." Aurora took a sip of water, mainly to have something to do with her hands. "I work delivering food for a restaurant. Chinese place. Not glamorous, but it pays." "It's honest." There it was. That tone. The one that said Eva was measuring, comparing, finding Aurora wanting. "Was that ever the issue?" Aurora asked. "Honesty?" Eva's hand went to her left wrist, rubbing at the skin there. A nervous habit. Aurora remembered that from years ago, from the nights they'd stayed up talking until dawn, from the promises they'd made in the dark. "I was worried about you," Eva said. "When you left. You didn't—I didn't know where—" "I left because I had to." "Because of him?" Aurora didn't answer. She didn't have to. They both knew who *him* was. Evan. The name still tasted like bile in her throat, even now, even months later. "I looked for you," Eva said. Her voice had dropped, become something raw and scraped hollow. "After. I tried to find you. But you'd vanished. And then your mum was saying you'd gone to London, and I thought—I don't know what I thought. That maybe if I came here, if I saw—" "You thought you'd find the person you remembered." "I thought I'd find my friend." The word hit its mark. Aurora felt it land somewhere in her chest, a small precise pain. "Your friend," she repeated. "Right. The friend who called you every week for two years while you were busy building a life that didn't include her. The friend who watched you get engaged and move in together and start planning a future that had absolutely no room in it for someone like me." "That's not fair." "None of it's fair, Eva." The anger surprised Aurora. She'd thought she'd buried it, packed it away with everything else she'd left behind in Cardiff. But here it was, rising up fresh as the night she'd packed her bag while Evan slept off another bottle of whiskey, as the night she'd called Eva from the train station andEva had answered with sleep in her voice and said *Rory? It's two in the morning* and Aurora had said *I need you* and Eva had said *I can't, not tonight, I've got that thing in the morning*— But that wasn't true, was it? That wasn't how it happened. Aurora closed her eyes. Breathed. "I'm sorry," she said finally. "That was—that came out wrong." "You meant it." "I meant some of it." Eva laughed, a short bitter sound. "You always were honest. Even when it hurt." "Not honest enough." Aurora looked at her old friend, at the stranger with Eva's face. "I should have told you. About Evan. About what was happening. I should have—" "Would it have changed anything?" The question hung there, unanswerable. Aurora thought about those last months in Cardiff, the bruises she'd hidden under long sleeves, the way she'd stopped answering her phone because Evan's jealousy had become a living thing that followed her everywhere. She thought about how easy it would have been to reach out, to say *help me*, to let someone in. But that wasn't who she'd been then. That wasn't who anyone had taught her to be. "I don't know," she admitted. "Maybe. Maybe not. But you deserved the choice." Eva's hand found her wrist again, rubbing at that spot. The skin there was red, irritated. "I saw him," Eva said quietly. "A few months ago. In Cardiff. He was with some woman, looked all charmed up, buying her drinks. And I thought about you. About everything. And I realized I'd spent two years being angry at you for disappearing when I should have been angry at myself for not seeing." "Eva—" "I should have known. The signs were there. The way you'd flinch sometimes when someone raised their voice. The way you stopped talking about him after the first year. The way you—" Her voice cracked. "I should have seen." Aurora reached across the table. Hesitated. Then took Eva's hand. "You didn't know. That's the thing about people like him. They're so good at making you believe everything's fine. That you deserve it. That there's no way out." "How did you get out?" "Someone saw me. Really saw me." Aurora thought about Silas, about the first night she'd stumbled into his bar half-feral with fear, about the way he'd looked at her and asked no questions and simply handed her a key to the upstairs flat. "Someone gave me a chance when I couldn't give one to myself." Eva squeezed her hand. Her eyes were wet now, shining in the low light. "I'm glad," she said. "That someone found you." They sat like that for a long moment, two women carved from the same childhood clay but shaped by different hands, different years, different wounds. The bar hummed quietly around them, indifferent to the small miracle unfolding in its corner. "I don't know how to be your friend again," Aurora said finally. "I don't know how to be anyone anymore. I'm still figuring out how to be me." "I don't need you to be who you were." Eva wiped at her eyes with her free hand. "I just needed to know you were okay. That you were still here." "I'm here." It wasn't forgiveness. It wasn't a resolution. It was something smaller and more fragile—a beginning, maybe, or the possibility of one. Eva smiled, tentative and hopeful. "Can I buy you a drink?" Aurora looked at her, at this woman who had once known her better than anyone, who had shared her bed and her secrets and her dreams. The years between them stretched out like a wound, but maybe wounds could heal. Maybe scars were just evidence that the body had tried to repair itself. "Yeah," she said. "Okay." She didn't let go of Eva's hand as they walked to the bar together, and if Silas noticed the tears on either of their faces, he was kind enough not to mention it.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
92.86% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags28
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"she said finally [finally]"
1"Eva said quietly [quietly]"
2"Aurora said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences56
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.107
effectiveRatio0.107
96.87% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1596
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
81.20% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1596
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"footsteps"
count2
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"absolutely"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"familiar"
2"footsteps"
3"weight"
4"absolutely"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences108
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences108
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences129
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen91
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans5
markdownWords23
totalWords1584
ratio0.015
matches
0"him"
1"Rory? It's two in the morning"
2"I need you"
3"I can't, not tonight, I've got that thing in the morning"
4"help me"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions24
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions67
wordCount1299
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.85
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Tuesday1
Harold1
London3
Rory2
Aurora22
Eva24
Cardiff4
Silas3
You1
Evan4
persons
0"Raven"
1"Harold"
2"Rory"
3"Aurora"
4"Eva"
5"Silas"
6"You"
7"Evan"
places
0"London"
1"Cardiff"
globalScore0.576
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences57
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"tasted like bile in her throat, even now"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.631
wordCount1584
matches
0"Not glamorous, but it pays"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences129
matches
0"knew that name"
1"got that thing"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs71
mean22.31
std19.37
cv0.868
sampleLengths
061
19
258
32
451
510
627
731
89
937
101
1119
124
1346
1429
156
1626
1739
1833
1935
205
213
2224
236
2439
252
2616
278
2838
2915
306
313
3228
3352
348
356
3617
3753
383
395
4090
4111
425
4310
443
455
4614
4729
485
4959
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences108
matches
0"been then"
19.82% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount7
totalVerbs259
matches
0"was holding"
1"was missing"
2"was polishing"
3"was measuring"
4"was saying"
5"was, rising"
6"was happening"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences129
ratio0.07
matches
0"A few regulars hunched over their pints near the window, and the old man who always sat three stools from the end—Harold, she thought—nodded at her from behind his crossword."
1"He moved with that quiet efficiency she'd come to recognize over the past six months—the slight limp barely noticeable now, the silver signet ring catching the dim light as he set down a napkin."
2"No one knew that name except—"
3"Her cheekbones were sharper, her eyes bigger, and her hand—her left hand—was missing the promise ring she'd worn for three years."
4"Eva sat. Her eyes moved over Aurora's face, cataloging changes—the new sharpness in her jaw, the way her black hair had been cut shorter, the exhaustion that Aurora knew sat beneath her eyes like bruises."
5"You didn't—I didn't know where—\""
6"And then your mum was saying you'd gone to London, and I thought—I don't know what I thought."
7"The anger surprised Aurora. She'd thought she'd buried it, packed it away with everything else she'd left behind in Cardiff. But here it was, rising up fresh as the night she'd packed her bag while Evan slept off another bottle of whiskey, as the night she'd called Eva from the train station andEva had answered with sleep in her voice and said *Rory? It's two in the morning* and Aurora had said *I need you* and Eva had said *I can't, not tonight, I've got that thing in the morning*—"
8"It wasn't forgiveness. It wasn't a resolution. It was something smaller and more fragile—a beginning, maybe, or the possibility of one."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1078
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount38
adverbRatio0.03525046382189239
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.008348794063079777
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences129
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences129
mean12.28
std13.39
cv1.09
sampleLengths
013
124
224
35
44
59
630
719
82
93
1014
1134
124
136
1418
159
1610
1721
183
191
205
214
2226
234
241
252
261
277
286
296
304
3122
323
3321
341
352
3626
376
3826
3924
407
412
423
433
4433
4535
465
473
4824
496
45.99% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.34108527131782945
totalSentences129
uniqueOpeners44
77.52% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences86
matches
0"Then he nodded and turned"
1"Really saw gave me a"
ratio0.023
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences86
matches
0"Her delivery shift had ended"
1"She hadn't planned on drinking."
2"She'd planned on hiding."
3"She looked up."
4"He moved with that quiet"
5"He studied her for a"
6"She didn't look up."
7"She'd lost weight."
8"Her cheekbones were sharper, her"
9"Your mum said you'd moved"
10"she wasn't happy."
11"He lets me stay above"
12"You didn't—I didn't know"
13"I tried to find you."
14"she said finally"
15"He was with some woman,"
16"They're so good at making"
17"They sat like that for"
18"I'm still figuring out how"
19"It wasn't forgiveness. It wasn't"
ratio0.244
70.47% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount67
totalSentences86
matches
0"The green neon sign flickered"
1"Aurora pushed through the door"
2"Her delivery shift had ended"
3"She hadn't planned on drinking."
4"She'd planned on hiding."
5"The bar was nearly empty"
6"Aurora made her way to"
7"She looked up."
8"Silas was already there, a"
9"He moved with that quiet"
10"He studied her for a"
11"Aurora wrapped her fingers around"
12"The street outside had gone"
13"The door opened."
14"Footsteps on the worn floorboards."
15"She didn't look up."
16"The name hit her like"
17"Aurora's head snapped up."
18"Eva stood three feet away,"
19"She'd lost weight."
ratio0.779
58.14% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences86
matches
0"Even when it"
ratio0.012
65.64% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The street outside had gone quiet in that way London did sometimes, as if the city itself was holding its breath."
1"Didn't want to see whoever had just walked in, didn't want to make conversation or exchange pleasantries or perform the social rituals that exhausted her lately…"
2"The girl who'd shared her childhood, her secrets, her bed in that cramped Cardiff flat when they were seventeen and terrified and certain they'd escape together…"
3"The question hung there, unanswerable. Aurora thought about those last months in Cardiff, the bruises she'd hidden under long sleeves, the way she'd stopped ans…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags26
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
96.43% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags14
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she repeated (repeat)"
1"Eva laughed (laugh)"
2"she admitted (admit)"
dialogueSentences56
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0.214
effectiveRatio0.107
84.6088%