| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 25 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Isolde said softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 46 | | tagDensity | 0.543 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.04 | | effectiveRatio | 0.04 | |
| 87.10% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1550 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "softly" | | 1 | "lightly" | | 2 | "completely" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 48.39% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1550 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "velvet" | | 2 | "gloom" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "warmth" | | 5 | "scanned" | | 6 | "etched" | | 7 | "dancing" | | 8 | "chill" | | 9 | "amidst" | | 10 | "footsteps" | | 11 | "weight" | | 12 | "could feel" | | 13 | "vibrated" | | 14 | "throbbed" | | 15 | "charged" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 103 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 103 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 124 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 37 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1541 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 18 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 33.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 70 | | wordCount | 1164 | | uniqueNames | 15 | | maxNameDensity | 2.15 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | London | 1 | | Rory | 25 | | Nyx | 10 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Wardens | 1 | | Veil | 2 | | Varga | 1 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Isolde | 15 | | Silas | 3 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Fae | 5 | | Dymas | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Varga" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Silas" | | 5 | "Fae" | | 6 | "Dymas" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "Veil" |
| | globalScore | 0.426 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 85.90% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 78 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "symbols that seemed to writhe if she looked at them too directly" | | 1 | "looked like a hole in the world" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.649 | | wordCount | 1541 | | matches | | 0 | "Not by wind, but by something forcing its way through from the other side" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 124 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 43 | | mean | 35.84 | | std | 24.85 | | cv | 0.693 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 79 | | 1 | 35 | | 2 | 115 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 22 | | 5 | 79 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 82 | | 8 | 27 | | 9 | 27 | | 10 | 42 | | 11 | 40 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 44 | | 15 | 33 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 31 | | 19 | 51 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 38 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 28 | | 24 | 56 | | 25 | 20 | | 26 | 30 | | 27 | 18 | | 28 | 27 | | 29 | 93 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 27 | | 32 | 24 | | 33 | 67 | | 34 | 25 | | 35 | 30 | | 36 | 33 | | 37 | 17 | | 38 | 38 | | 39 | 81 | | 40 | 23 | | 41 | 21 | | 42 | 24 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 201 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 96.77% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 124 | | ratio | 0.016 | | matches | | 0 | "Beyond the stones, the forest opened into a clearing where wildflowers bloomed in impossible colors—petals of shifting indigo, stems that glowed with internal fire, and blossoms that chimed softly when the non-existent breeze touched them." | | 1 | "She spotted movement ahead—a flash of silver hair amidst the glowing flora." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1172 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 31 | | adverbRatio | 0.026450511945392493 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008532423208191127 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 124 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 124 | | mean | 12.43 | | std | 6.92 | | cv | 0.557 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 9 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 25 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 27 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 26 | | 13 | 35 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 22 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 20 | | 19 | 27 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 20 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 18 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 18 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 29 | | 39 | 1 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 19 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 23 |
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| 60.22% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.3951612903225806 | | totalSentences | 124 | | uniqueOpeners | 49 | |
| 36.63% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead of her own reflection," |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 22 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "She stumbled forward, her boots" | | 1 | "It had led them straight" | | 2 | "She scanned the perimeter." | | 3 | "Her voice sounded flat, absorbed" | | 4 | "They moved deeper." | | 5 | "She spotted movement ahead—a flash" | | 6 | "Her silver hair cascaded down" | | 7 | "She faced the pool, her" | | 8 | "She kept her hands visible," | | 9 | "Her pale lavender eyes locked" | | 10 | "She gestured to the ground" | | 11 | "She reached into the folds" | | 12 | "She held out a dagger." | | 13 | "Her fingers brushed the hilt." | | 14 | "She gritted her teeth but" | | 15 | "She wrapped her hand around" | | 16 | "She turned back to the" | | 17 | "She peered into the pool." | | 18 | "She stopped beneath a branch" | | 19 | "she whispered, her voice coming" |
| | ratio | 0.242 | |
| 42.42% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 76 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "Silas pushed aside the curtain" | | 1 | "She stumbled forward, her boots" | | 2 | "The violet glow of their" | | 3 | "The voice scraped against Rory's" | | 4 | "Rory gripped the Heartstone pendant" | | 5 | "The crimson gem pulsed with" | | 6 | "It had led them straight" | | 7 | "She scanned the perimeter." | | 8 | "Rory called out" | | 9 | "Her voice sounded flat, absorbed" | | 10 | "They moved deeper." | | 11 | "Rory stepped over a root" | | 12 | "The sky above lacked stars" | | 13 | "Nyx drifted beside her, their" | | 14 | "Rory pulled her jacket tighter." | | 15 | "The air grew colder the" | | 16 | "She spotted movement ahead—a flash" | | 17 | "Isolde Varga stood by a" | | 18 | "The Half-Fae seer did not" | | 19 | "Her silver hair cascaded down" |
| | ratio | 0.835 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 48.52% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 53 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "She stumbled forward, her boots crunching on ground that felt too soft, like moss grown over velvet." | | 1 | "The voice scraped against Rory's eardrums, sounding like dry leaves skittering across stone." | | 2 | "Beyond the stones, the forest opened into a clearing where wildflowers bloomed in impossible colors—petals of shifting indigo, stems that glowed with internal f…" | | 3 | "No answer came, only the distant trickle of water and the hum of insects that buzzed with the pitch of tuning forks." | | 4 | "The sky above lacked stars or moon, yet a pearlescent light emanated from the canopy itself, casting long, dancing shadows that refused to align with their sour…" | | 5 | "The blade was leaf-shaped, forged from moonsilver that radiated a cold so intense Rory could feel it from three feet away." | | 6 | "Figures in tattered chef's whites moved among rows of grapevines that bore fruit resembling human hearts." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 25 | | uselessAdditionCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde replied, her voice melodic yet sharp" | | 1 | "Rory asked, her breath pluming in the sudden drop in temperature" | | 2 | "Isolde said, her gaze drifting to the pendant at Rory's throat" | | 3 | "Nyx said, their voice dropping an octave, resonating in Rory's chest" | | 4 | "Rory ordered, her voice steady despite the tremor in her legs" | | 5 | "she whispered, her voice coming from everywhere and nowhere" | | 6 | "the creature gargled, saliva dripping onto the sacred ground" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 19 | | fancyCount | 7 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "Isolde corrected (correct)" | | 3 | "Rory snapped (snap)" | | 4 | "Nyx hissed (hiss)" | | 5 | "Rory ordered (order)" | | 6 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 46 | | tagDensity | 0.413 | | leniency | 0.826 | | rawRatio | 0.368 | | effectiveRatio | 0.304 | |