Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTY5PSTW6G1QJDQN9B0J5YY

Run Details

Duration:
26.3s
Cost:
$0.005753
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Silas pushed aside the curtain of hanging ivy, and the humid London air vanished. Cold, still silence rushed in to fill Rory's lungs. She stumbled forward, her boots crunching on ground that felt too soft, like moss grown over velvet. Behind her, Nyx materialized from the shadow of an ancient oak, their form shifting from a flat silhouette into a towering figure of living darkness. The violet glow of their eyes cut through the twilight gloom of the grove. "Time holds its breath here," Nyx whispered. The voice scraped against Rory's eardrums, sounding like dry leaves skittering across stone. "Do not linger too long. An hour inside might steal a week from your world." Rory gripped the Heartstone pendant hanging against her chest. The crimson gem pulsed with a faint warmth, a steady rhythm against her skin. It had led them straight to this hidden pocket within Richmond Park, away from the prying eyes of the Wardens and the tearing rifts in the Veil. She scanned the perimeter. Ancient oak standing stones formed a rough circle around them, their bark etched with symbols that seemed to writhe if she looked at them too directly. Beyond the stones, the forest opened into a clearing where wildflowers bloomed in impossible colors—petals of shifting indigo, stems that glowed with internal fire, and blossoms that chimed softly when the non-existent breeze touched them. "Isolde?" Rory called out. Her voice sounded flat, absorbed instantly by the dense, vibrant air. No answer came, only the distant trickle of water and the hum of insects that buzzed with the pitch of tuning forks. They moved deeper. Rory stepped over a root that twisted like a sleeping serpent, its scales rough and warm under her boot sole. The sky above lacked stars or moon, yet a pearlescent light emanated from the canopy itself, casting long, dancing shadows that refused to align with their sources. Nyx drifted beside her, their shadowy hand brushing a cluster of ferns. Where they touched, the ferns turned silver and froze, icicle crystals forming along the fronds in seconds. "Fae magic," Nyx murmured. "Old and wild. It does not tolerate intrusion lightly." Rory pulled her jacket tighter. The air grew colder the further they walked, a chill that seeped through her layers and settled in her bones. She spotted movement ahead—a flash of silver hair amidst the glowing flora. Isolde Varga stood by a pool of water so clear it looked like a hole in the world. The Half-Fae seer did not turn as they approached. Her silver hair cascaded down her back to her waist, shimmering with the same light as the canopy. "You bring the shadow and the stone," Isolde said. She faced the pool, her reflection absent from the surface. "The Veil trembles at your footsteps, Aurora Carter." "We didn't mean to intrude," Rory said, stopping a few paces away. She kept her hands visible, palms open. "The pendant led us here. We need answers." Isolde turned. Her pale lavender eyes locked onto Rory, piercing and unblinking. "Answers are coins spent in a market you cannot afford. But the truth... the truth is a debt that must be paid." She gestured to the ground beneath them. "Look." Rory looked down. Where Isolde stood, the grass remained undisturbed. No footprints marked her path, no blades bent under her weight. Yet where Rory and Silas had walked, deep impressions remained in the soft earth, already filling with glowing sap. "The earth knows its own," Isolde said. "And it knows the trespasser." Nyx shifted, their form rippling. "We seek knowledge of the rifts. The winter solstice approaches. The Barrier weakens." "Water finds the crack," Isolde replied, her voice melodic yet sharp. "Shadow fills the void. But fire... fire consumes both." She reached into the folds of her etherial gown and produced a slender object. The moonlight from the canopy seemed to bend toward it. She held out a dagger. The blade was leaf-shaped, forged from moonsilver that radiated a cold so intense Rory could feel it from three feet away. A faint luminescence danced along its edge. "Take it," Isolde commanded. Rory hesitated. The cold radiating from the weapon made the air around it shimmer. "What is it?" "A piece of the Court you fled," Isolde said. "It cuts through wards woven by hell-spawn. It drinks the magic of demons. Hold it, and you hold a promise of violence." Rory reached out. Her fingers brushed the hilt. A shock of icy pain shot up her arm, numbing her shoulder instantly. She gritted her teeth but did not pull away. She wrapped her hand around the grip. The cold settled, becoming a part of her, a dormant winter waiting to wake. "Why give this to me?" Rory asked, her breath pluming in the sudden drop in temperature. "Because the Gluttony realm stirs," Isolde said, her gaze drifting to the pendant at Rory's throat. "Dymas hungers. Prince Belphegor sends his chefs to harvest souls like truffles. You carry the scent of his larder on your skin." Rory's hand tightened on the Fae-forged blade. "I've never been to Hel." "Not in body," Isolde corrected. "But the stone you wear sings a song written in Dymas. It calls to them. Soon, they will come to collect the singer." A low rumble vibrated through the ground, disturbing the chime-flowers. The warm amber light of a distant sun seemed to bleed into the pearlescent glow of the grove, staining the colors sickly orange. The scent of roasting meat and spiced wine wafted through the clearing, cloying and thick, masking the fresh scent of the Fae flora. Nyx stepped in front of Rory, their shadow expanding to cover her completely. "The boundary thins. They smell the invitation." Isolde's expression remained serene, though her lavender eyes narrowed. "The Veil is a membrane, Aurora. Poke it, and the infection spreads. You opened a door when you accepted that stone." "I didn't know," Rory snapped, the cold of the blade grounding her panic. "Who gave it to me?" "A benefactor with a full belly and empty conscience," Isolde said. She turned back to the pool. "The water shows what is, not what will be. Look." Rory stepped forward, Nyx's shadow retreating just enough to let her pass. She peered into the pool. Instead of her own reflection, she saw a sprawling vineyard under a warm amber sky. Figures in tattered chef's whites moved among rows of grapevines that bore fruit resembling human hearts. In the center of the vision, a feast table stretched for miles, laden with dishes that squirmed and screamed silently. At the head of the table sat a figure bloated and magnificent, laughing as they tore into a roast that looked disturbingly like a man. "Dymas," Nyx hissed. "The realm of excess." "He comes for you, Rory," Isolde said softly. "The solstice brings the tide high. When the moon is lowest, the chefs will arrive to harvest their ingredient." Rory pulled her gaze from the pool. The image lingered in her vision, superimposed over the beautiful, terrifying grove. "How do I stop them?" "You do not stop the hunger," Isolde said, walking toward the edge of the clearing where the ancient oaks stood guard. "You starve it. Or you feed it something it cannot digest." She stopped beneath a branch heavy with glowing fruit. "The blade will buy you time. The stone will lead them to your door. You must choose which to trust before the first course is served." The amber light grew stronger, pushing back the pearlescent glow of the Fae realm. The chime-flowers fell silent. The air tasted of grease and ash. "They are here," Nyx said, their voice dropping an octave, resonating in Rory's chest. The shadows around them lengthened, detaching from the trees and coiling like snakes ready to strike. Rory raised the Fae blade. The moonsilver flared with a bright, cold light, pushing back the encroaching amber haze. The crescent scar on her left wrist throbbed in time with the pulsing Heartstone. "Stay behind me," Rory ordered Silas and Nyx, her voice steady despite the tremor in her legs. Isolde faded into the background, becoming one with the silver bark of the oaks. "The game begins," she whispered, her voice coming from everywhere and nowhere. "Do not let them taste your fear. It is the finest seasoning." The ivy curtain at the edge of the standing stones tore open. Not by wind, but by something forcing its way through from the other side. Heavy boots crashed onto the moss, crushing the glowing flowers. Figures clad in stained aprons and carrying cleavers the size of axes stepped into the grove. Their skin was pale and doughy, their eyes black pits of endless appetite. They sniffed the air, turning their faces toward Rory and the crimson glow of the pendant. One of them grinned, revealing rows of yellow, jagged teeth. "Found the main course," the creature gargled, saliva dripping onto the sacred ground. Rory shifted her stance, the cold blade feeling like an extension of her own arm. "Come and get it," she said. The lead chef charged, cleaver raised high, the amber light of Dymas flaring behind him as more poured through the tear in the Veil.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags25
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Isolde said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.543
leniency1
rawRatio0.04
effectiveRatio0.04
87.10% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1550
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"softly"
count2
1
adverb"lightly"
count1
2
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"lightly"
2"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
48.39% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1550
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"silence"
count1
1
word"velvet"
count1
2
word"gloom"
count1
3
word"pulsed"
count1
4
word"warmth"
count1
5
word"scanned"
count1
6
word"etched"
count1
7
word"dancing"
count1
8
word"chill"
count1
9
word"amidst"
count1
10
word"footsteps"
count1
11
word"weight"
count1
12
word"could feel"
count1
13
word"vibrated"
count1
14
word"throbbed"
count1
15
word"charged"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"velvet"
2"gloom"
3"pulsed"
4"warmth"
5"scanned"
6"etched"
7"dancing"
8"chill"
9"amidst"
10"footsteps"
11"weight"
12"could feel"
13"vibrated"
14"throbbed"
15"charged"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences103
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences103
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences124
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1541
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions70
wordCount1164
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity2.15
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
London1
Rory25
Nyx10
Heartstone2
Richmond1
Park1
Wardens1
Veil2
Varga1
Half-Fae1
Isolde15
Silas3
Fae-forged1
Fae5
Dymas1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Nyx"
2"Varga"
3"Isolde"
4"Silas"
5"Fae"
6"Dymas"
places
0"London"
1"Richmond"
2"Park"
3"Veil"
globalScore0.426
windowScore0.333
85.90% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences78
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"symbols that seemed to writhe if she looked at them too directly"
1"looked like a hole in the world"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.649
wordCount1541
matches
0"Not by wind, but by something forcing its way through from the other side"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences124
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs43
mean35.84
std24.85
cv0.693
sampleLengths
079
135
2115
315
422
579
613
782
827
927
1042
1140
1212
1318
1444
1533
164
1717
1831
1951
2016
2138
2212
2328
2456
2520
2630
2718
2827
2993
307
3127
3224
3367
3425
3530
3633
3717
3838
3981
4023
4121
4224
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences103
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs201
matches(empty)
96.77% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences124
ratio0.016
matches
0"Beyond the stones, the forest opened into a clearing where wildflowers bloomed in impossible colors—petals of shifting indigo, stems that glowed with internal fire, and blossoms that chimed softly when the non-existent breeze touched them."
1"She spotted movement ahead—a flash of silver hair amidst the glowing flora."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1172
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.026450511945392493
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.008532423208191127
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences124
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences124
mean12.43
std6.92
cv0.557
sampleLengths
014
19
217
325
414
57
613
715
89
914
1027
114
1226
1335
144
1511
1622
173
1820
1927
2012
2117
224
239
245
2520
2612
2718
289
2918
309
3110
328
3312
347
358
362
3710
3829
391
403
417
4211
4319
447
455
465
4713
4811
4923
60.22% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.3951612903225806
totalSentences124
uniqueOpeners49
36.63% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences91
matches
0"Instead of her own reflection,"
ratio0.011
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences91
matches
0"She stumbled forward, her boots"
1"It had led them straight"
2"She scanned the perimeter."
3"Her voice sounded flat, absorbed"
4"They moved deeper."
5"She spotted movement ahead—a flash"
6"Her silver hair cascaded down"
7"She faced the pool, her"
8"She kept her hands visible,"
9"Her pale lavender eyes locked"
10"She gestured to the ground"
11"She reached into the folds"
12"She held out a dagger."
13"Her fingers brushed the hilt."
14"She gritted her teeth but"
15"She wrapped her hand around"
16"She turned back to the"
17"She peered into the pool."
18"She stopped beneath a branch"
19"she whispered, her voice coming"
ratio0.242
42.42% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount76
totalSentences91
matches
0"Silas pushed aside the curtain"
1"She stumbled forward, her boots"
2"The violet glow of their"
3"The voice scraped against Rory's"
4"Rory gripped the Heartstone pendant"
5"The crimson gem pulsed with"
6"It had led them straight"
7"She scanned the perimeter."
8"Rory called out"
9"Her voice sounded flat, absorbed"
10"They moved deeper."
11"Rory stepped over a root"
12"The sky above lacked stars"
13"Nyx drifted beside her, their"
14"Rory pulled her jacket tighter."
15"The air grew colder the"
16"She spotted movement ahead—a flash"
17"Isolde Varga stood by a"
18"The Half-Fae seer did not"
19"Her silver hair cascaded down"
ratio0.835
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences91
matches(empty)
ratio0
48.52% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences53
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"She stumbled forward, her boots crunching on ground that felt too soft, like moss grown over velvet."
1"The voice scraped against Rory's eardrums, sounding like dry leaves skittering across stone."
2"Beyond the stones, the forest opened into a clearing where wildflowers bloomed in impossible colors—petals of shifting indigo, stems that glowed with internal f…"
3"No answer came, only the distant trickle of water and the hum of insects that buzzed with the pitch of tuning forks."
4"The sky above lacked stars or moon, yet a pearlescent light emanated from the canopy itself, casting long, dancing shadows that refused to align with their sour…"
5"The blade was leaf-shaped, forged from moonsilver that radiated a cold so intense Rory could feel it from three feet away."
6"Figures in tattered chef's whites moved among rows of grapevines that bore fruit resembling human hearts."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags25
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"Isolde replied, her voice melodic yet sharp"
1"Rory asked, her breath pluming in the sudden drop in temperature"
2"Isolde said, her gaze drifting to the pendant at Rory's throat"
3"Nyx said, their voice dropping an octave, resonating in Rory's chest"
4"Rory ordered, her voice steady despite the tremor in her legs"
5"she whispered, her voice coming from everywhere and nowhere"
6"the creature gargled, saliva dripping onto the sacred ground"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags19
fancyCount7
fancyTags
0"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
1"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
2"Isolde corrected (correct)"
3"Rory snapped (snap)"
4"Nyx hissed (hiss)"
5"Rory ordered (order)"
6"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.413
leniency0.826
rawRatio0.368
effectiveRatio0.304
77.9756%