Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTY5RCC4P0RH7VTC6EVM4TR

Run Details

Duration:
7.3s
Cost:
$0.000733
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The familiar damp chill of Richmond Park evaporated, replaced by a dry, honeyed warmth. Aurora Carter, Rhys, and Silas stepped through the shimmering distortion, the air suddenly thick with the scent of overripe fruit and damp earth. They stood in a clearing ringed by ancient oak trees, their gnarled branches forming a canopy that filtered the sunlight into dappled pools on the ground. Wildflowers of impossible colours carpeted the earth, their petals unfurling with a soft, rustling whisper. Time seemed to stretch and yawn around them. "God, it's… quiet," Rhys murmured, his voice hushed, a stark contrast to the usual din of London's streets. He clutched the worn leather of his satchel a little tighter. Silas, ever the pragmatist, ran a hand over the rough bark of the nearest oak. "Quiet isn't always a good thing, kid." His eyes, usually sharp and calculating, widened as he took in their surroundings. The air hummed with an unseen energy, a low thrum that vibrated in their bones. It was like standing inside a giant, sleeping creature. Aurora adjusted her grip on the Moonsilver dagger, its perpetual cold a comforting anchor against the strangeness of the Fae Grove. "Isolde said time moves differently here," she reminded them, her gaze sweeping across the vibrant, impossibly lush flora. Flowers they'd never seen bloomed in riotous profusion, their colours so deep they seemed to absorb the light. Tiny, iridescent insects with gossamer wings flitted between them, leaving trails of sparkling dust. "Right, right, the whole 'pocket dimension' thing," Silas grunted, though a flicker of awe softened his gruff exterior. He nudged a fallen bloom with his boot. It didn't bruise. Instead, it pulsed with a soft, inner light before slowly reforming its shape. "Okay, that's just… unnerving." They moved deeper into the grove, the towering oaks giving way to trees with silvery bark that shimmered like moonlight. Strange, melodious calls echoed from the depths of the woods, unlike any bird or animal they knew. Every so often, a branch would brush against them, its touch as light as a sigh, leaving behind the lingering sweetness of honeysuckle and something else, something wild and untamable. Rhys stopped, tilting his head. "Do you hear that?" Aurora listened. Beneath the rustling of leaves and the melodic calls, there was a faint, almost imperceptible melody, like a distant harp played by the wind. It wove through the air, tugging at something deep within her, a forgotten memory, a yearning for something she couldn’t name. "Yeah," she breathed. "It's… beautiful." "Too beautiful," Silas muttered, his hand going to the smooth, cool surface of the Heartstone Pendant beneath his shirt. It offered no warmth, no tell-tale pulse, a silent reminder that they were far from any of the gateways to Hel. Their journey had begun with a flicker of insight from Isolde, a cryptic hint that the Heartstone was more than just a trinket, and that its connection to the gateways might extend beyond the obvious. They emerged into another clearing, this one dominated by a ring of colossal standing stones, pulsating with a faint, internal luminescence. The air here crackled with a static charge, raising the fine hairs on Aurora’s arms. The wildflowers pressed in close, their colours more vivid than ever, their scent a dizzying perfume that made her head spin. "These must be the boundary markers Isolde mentioned," Rhys said, his voice catching with wonder. He reached out a hand to touch one of the monoliths, but before his fingers could make contact, the stone pulsed, a wave of energy rippling outwards. He snatched his hand back, a look of startled fascination on his face. "Fae magic," Aurora whispered, her eyes tracing the swirling patterns etched into the stone's surface. They seemed to shift and writhe, like living script. Silas squinted at the stones, a suspicious glint in his eye. "Looks like they don't take kindly to visitors. Or at least, not visitors who poke them." A deep, resonating chime echoed through the grove, making the ground beneath their feet tremble. It was a sound that felt ancient, primal, a summons from the heart of this otherworldly place. The melodic calls from the woods grew louder, more insistent, and the air itself seemed to thicken, shimmering with an unseen presence. "What was that?" Rhys yelped, instinctively stepping closer to Aurora. "Sounds like we've definitely arrived somewhere," Silas said, his voice strained. He scanned the edges of the clearing, his gaze sharp and alert. The playful wonder of moments ago had been replaced by a healthy dose of apprehension. Aurora felt it too, a subtle shift in the air, a prickle of awareness that spoke of unseen eyes. This place was alive, deeply, profoundly alive, and it was aware of their intrusion. The sweet, intoxicating aroma suddenly felt cloying, the beauty of the grove a mask for something far more ancient and potent. The melodic calls intensified, a chorus of whispers and murmurs that brushed against their minds like silken threads. It was as if the very trees were speaking, their language a symphony of rustles and sighs. "We need to keep moving," Aurora stated, her breath catching. Her eyes, drawn to a faint shimmer between two of the larger standing stones, saw it then. Not a tear, not a rift, but something thinner, a distortion in the very fabric of reality, barely visible, like heat haze rising from a distant road. The Veil. It was weaker here, much weaker than she had ever imagined. "That way," she pointed, her voice firm. The shadow of the Fae Grove seemed to deepen, the trees closing in around them as if to guide them, or perhaps, to trap them. The otherworldly music swelled, a siren call that promised wonders and dangers in equal measure. The air grew heavy, charged with anticipation. Every rustle of leaves, every distant call, seemed to hold a hidden meaning, a whispered secret waiting to be deciphered. They pushed forward, deeper into the heart of the Fae Grove, into a world that defied comprehension, a place where magic breathed and the impossible was merely the commonplace. The Heartstone Pendant remained silent against Aurora’s skin, a cool weight that offered no solace, only a constant reminder of the paths that lay between realms, and the unseen forces that guarded them.
created_at"2026-02-19T12:32:09.106Z" 2/19/2026, 12:32:09 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences16
tagDensity0.75
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
76.24% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1052
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count2
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count2
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"slowly"
2"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1052
totalAiIsms33
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"chill"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count2
3
word"whisper"
count1
4
word"stark"
count1
5
word"calculating"
count1
6
word"vibrated"
count1
7
word"comforting"
count1
8
word"flicker"
count2
9
word"pulsed"
count2
10
word"shimmered"
count1
11
word"echoed"
count2
12
word"depths"
count1
13
word"yearning"
count1
14
word"pulse"
count1
15
word"reminder"
count2
16
word"tracing"
count1
17
word"etched"
count1
18
word"glint"
count1
19
word"otherworldly"
count2
20
word"scanned"
count1
21
word"apprehension"
count1
22
word"symphony"
count1
23
word"charged"
count1
24
word"anticipation"
count1
25
word"weight"
count1
26
word"solace"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"chill"
2"warmth"
3"whisper"
4"stark"
5"calculating"
6"vibrated"
7"comforting"
8"flicker"
9"pulsed"
10"shimmered"
11"echoed"
12"depths"
13"yearning"
14"pulse"
15"reminder"
16"tracing"
17"etched"
18"glint"
19"otherworldly"
20"scanned"
21"apprehension"
22"symphony"
23"charged"
24"anticipation"
25"weight"
26"solace"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
85.32% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells3
narrationSentences63
matches
0"a flicker of awe"
1"g with wonder"
2"d with anticipation"
6.80% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount6
narrationSentences63
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences67
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1051
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions40
wordCount973
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity0.92
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Carter1
Rhys5
Silas6
London1
Moonsilver1
Fae3
Grove3
Flowers1
Heartstone3
Pendant2
Hel1
Isolde1
Aurora9
Veil1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Rhys"
2"Silas"
3"Flowers"
4"Pendant"
5"Aurora"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
3"Fae"
4"Grove"
5"Hel"
6"Isolde"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences55
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"It was as if the very trees were speaking, their language a symphony of rustles and sighs"
9.71% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.903
wordCount1051
matches
0"Not a tear, not a rift, but something thinner, a distortion in the very fabric of realit"
1"not a rift, but something thinner, a distortion in the very fabric of realit"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs20
mean52.55
std30.84
cv0.587
sampleLengths
086
129
259
371
446
567
69
747
85
975
1057
1155
1224
1327
1454
1510
1638
1789
1867
19136
99.69% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences63
matches
0"been replaced"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs141
matches
0"were speaking"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences67
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount974
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount38
adverbRatio0.039014373716632446
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.013347022587268994
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences67
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences67
mean15.69
std7.5
cv0.478
sampleLengths
014
123
226
315
48
518
611
715
820
915
109
1121
1218
1318
1414
1518
168
173
1813
194
2020
2117
2230
235
244
252
2624
2721
283
292
3019
3121
3235
3321
3415
3521
3615
3727
3813
3915
409
4111
4216
4315
4417
4522
4610
4711
4812
4915
79.60% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.5223880597014925
totalSentences67
uniqueOpeners35
55.56% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences60
matches
0"Instead, it pulsed with a"
ratio0.017
73.33% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences60
matches
0"They stood in a clearing"
1"He clutched the worn leather"
2"His eyes, usually sharp and"
3"It was like standing inside"
4"she reminded them, her gaze"
5"He nudged a fallen bloom"
6"It didn't bruise."
7"They moved deeper into the"
8"It wove through the air,"
9"It offered no warmth, no"
10"Their journey had begun with"
11"They emerged into another clearing,"
12"He reached out a hand"
13"He snatched his hand back,"
14"They seemed to shift and"
15"It was a sound that"
16"He scanned the edges of"
17"It was as if the"
18"Her eyes, drawn to a"
19"It was weaker here, much"
ratio0.367
1.67% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount55
totalSentences60
matches
0"The familiar damp chill of"
1"Aurora Carter, Rhys, and Silas"
2"They stood in a clearing"
3"Wildflowers of impossible colours carpeted"
4"Time seemed to stretch and"
5"Rhys murmured, his voice hushed,"
6"He clutched the worn leather"
7"Silas, ever the pragmatist, ran"
8"His eyes, usually sharp and"
9"The air hummed with an"
10"It was like standing inside"
11"Aurora adjusted her grip on"
12"she reminded them, her gaze"
13"Flowers they'd never seen bloomed"
14"Silas grunted, though a flicker"
15"He nudged a fallen bloom"
16"It didn't bruise."
17"They moved deeper into the"
18"Every so often, a branch"
19"Rhys stopped, tilting his head."
ratio0.917
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
ratio0
74.83% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"They moved deeper into the grove, the towering oaks giving way to trees with silvery bark that shimmered like moonlight."
1"The wildflowers pressed in close, their colours more vivid than ever, their scent a dizzying perfume that made her head spin."
2"They pushed forward, deeper into the heart of the Fae Grove, into a world that defied comprehension, a place where magic breathed and the impossible was merely …"
3"The Heartstone Pendant remained silent against Aurora’s skin, a cool weight that offered no solace, only a constant reminder of the paths that lay between realm…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"she reminded, her gaze sweeping across the vibrant, impossibly lush flora"
1"Rhys said, his voice catching with wonder"
2"Silas said, his voice strained"
3"Aurora stated, her breath catching"
4"she pointed, her voice firm"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount7
fancyTags
0"Rhys murmured (murmur)"
1"Silas grunted (grunt)"
2"she breathed (breathe)"
3"Silas muttered (mutter)"
4"Aurora whispered (whisper)"
5"Rhys yelped (yelp)"
6"Aurora stated (state)"
dialogueSentences16
tagDensity0.563
leniency1
rawRatio0.778
effectiveRatio0.778
72.0914%