Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTY5S5GNTZ4G7S5WG04GMWZ

Run Details

Duration:
59.2s
Cost:
$0.056444
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Three heavy thuds against the wood pulled Rory out of the uneasy doze she’d managed on Eva’s lumpy sofa. The sound didn’t match the rhythm of the city outside—the constant, dull roar of Brick Lane, the shouted orders from the curry house downstairs, or the frantic sirens bleeding through the single-pane windows. This was deliberate. Precise. She froze, heart hammering against her ribs like a trapped bird. The flat smelled of stale turmeric and old paper, a suffocating comfort she’d clung to for three weeks. Eva was out, chasing a lead on some obscure grimoire in Kensington, leaving Rory alone with her paranoia. Another knock. Two sharp raps this time. Rory slid off the couch, her bare feet sticking slightly to the linoleum. She grabbed the heavy cast-iron skillet from the drying rack. It felt ridiculous in her hand, a cartoon weapon, but the weight grounded her. She crept down the narrow hallway, stepping over stacks of dusty hardbacks and unrolled scrolls that Eva treated like carpet. She reached the door. Three deadbolts. A chain. A fortress built on a budget. Rory pressed her eye to the peephole. The fish-eye lens distorted the hallway, bending the peeling wallpaper into a sick curve, but there was no mistaking the figure standing under the flickering bulb. The charcoal suit was dry, despite the deluge hammering against the roof. The platinum hair was slicked back, severe and immaculate. She didn't breathe. She didn't move. He raised his head, staring straight at the lens as if he could see the blue iris trembling on the other side. "Open the door, Aurora. You’re letting the draft out." The voice was low, wrapping around her spine, familiar enough to make her stomach drop. She lowered the skillet. If he wanted to get in, a locked door wouldn’t stop a half-demon, and a frying pan certainly wouldn’t put him down. She undid the bolts. Top. Middle. Bottom. The metallic *clack-clack-clack* echoed in the silence. She left the chain on, cracking the door two inches. "You have five seconds to give me a reason not to slam this in your face." Lucien Moreau leaned on his ivory-handled cane, the dim light catching the mismatched hues of his eyes—one burning amber, the other a void of endless black. He looked tired. The kind of tired that didn't come from a lack of sleep, but from carrying too many secrets. "It is rude to keep a guest in the hallway. Especially one who climbed three flights of stairs that smell of cumin and regret." "You’re not a guest. You’re a mistake." "I have coffee. And pain au chocolat. Fresh from a bakery in South Kensington that doesn't exist on Google Maps." He held up a white paper bag. The scent hit her instantly—butter, dark chocolate, and rich, roasted coffee—cutting through the lingering spice of the apartment. It was a cheap tactic. It was working. Rory looked at his face, searching for the danger she always associated with him. She found only a tight jaw and a flicker of something raw in that amber eye. She slid the chain off. Lucien pushed the door open with the tip of his cane and stepped inside. He seemed to consume the space, his broad shoulders and tailored elegance making Eva’s cramped flat look like a shoebox. He surveyed the chaos—the mountain of research notes on the dining table, the drying laundry hanging from the curtain rod, the cat sleeping on a stack of pizza boxes. "Quaint." "It’s temporary." Rory retreated into the main room, putting the width of the sofa between them. She self-consciously tugged at the hem of her oversized vintage t-shirt. "How did you find me?" Lucien set the bag on a rare patch of clear counter space. He peeled off his gloves, leather creaking softly, revealing pale, slender fingers that had done terrible things for the right price. "You act as if you are hiding from the government, chérie. You are merely staying with a witch who orders books from my associates. It took one phone call." "I didn't want to be found." "Evidently." He turned, his gaze sweeping over her. It felt physical, a brush of heat against her skin that made the small crescent scar on her wrist itch. "You look... different. Tired." "I’m working double shifts. Not everyone summons gold bars from the ether." "Avaros is not an ATM, and you know it." He moved closer, the tip of his cane sinking into a pile of discarded newspapers. "Why did you run, Rory?" "I moved." "You vanished. You left a coffee burning on the stove and your phone in the sink." "It was an accident." He laughed, a dry, humorless sound. "You possess a brilliant mind, Aurora. You do not drop electronics in water by accident unless you wish to sever a connection. Was it me? Or did the reality of my world finally curdle that brave blood of yours?" Rory crossed her arms, fingernails digging into her biceps. The memory of that night—the blood on his cuffs, the way his shadow had seemed to detach itself from the floor, the terrifying realization that she wanted to step *into* the darkness rather than run from it—flashed in her mind. That was why she ran. Not because she was scared of him. Because she wasn't. "I needed space. My life was simple before you showed up. I delivered noodles. I studied law. I didn't deal with warlocks or... whatever you are." "Whatever I am." He tasted the words, finding them bitter. "Three months ago, you called me a savior. Now I am a 'whatever'." "Three months ago, you were bleeding out on my carpet. It lowers the intimidation factor." Lucien took another step. The air in the room thickened, charged with static. Ptolemy, Eva’s massive tabby, woke up from his pizza-box throne. instead of fleeing, the traitorous animal stretched and trotted over to Lucien, winding through his legs and purring like a diesel engine. Lucien looked down, his expression softening imperceptibly. He reached down, scratching the cat behind the ears with long, deliberate strokes. "Animals have better instincts than humans. They know when a threat is real." "He licks plastic bags, Lucien. He’s not a judge of character." "Perhaps." He straightened up, leaving the cat disappointed. "I did not come here to argue about feline intelligence." "Then why? Did you need a fix? Someone to translate a Celtic tablet? Go ask Eva. She’s the expert." "I don't need a translator." "Then what?" He closed the distance. He moved with a predator's grace, soundless despite the heavy timber of the floorboards. Rory found herself backing up until her calves hit the edge of the sofa. There was nowhere to go. Lucien stopped a foot away. Close enough for her to see the pores of his skin, the faint, silver scar running through his eyebrow. He smelled of rain and sandalwood and something sharp, like ozone or magic. "I came because you have something of mine." Rory frowned, her mind racing. She hadn't taken anything. She’d left everything at the flat above the bar. "I didn't steal from you." "My peace of mind." The admission hung between them, heavy and absurd. Rory let out a sharp breath, a laugh dying in her throat. "That’s a terrible line. Did you read that in a dime-store romance?" "I do not read romance. I live a tragedy." His voice dropped an octave, losing the polished veneer of the fixer. "You disappeared. No note. No warning. In my line of work, silence means death. I spent three days turning London upside down because I thought a rival faction had taken you to get to me." "I can take care of myself." "I know." His hand twitched, as if he wanted to reach out, but he gripped the head of his cane tighter. "That is what terrifies me. You are reckless, Aurora. You think because you survived Evan, you can survive anything. But there are things in the dark that do not care how brave you are." "And you're one of them?" "I am the worst of them." Rory looked up at him. The amber eye burned with frustration, but the black one... the black one was bottomless. It was easy to get lost in the monstrosity of it, to forget the man standing in the suit. But she knew him. She knew he took his coffee black with three sugars. She knew he spoke to his mother in French on the phone and lied about being a consultant. She reached out, her fingers hovering over the lapel of his jacket. The charcoal wool was soft. He went perfectly still. "I didn't leave because I was scared of the monsters, Lucien." "Then why?" "Because I was starting to like the dark too much." Her voice cracked. "And I have a history of loving things that hurt me." Lucien’s composure fractured. The mask of the indifferent broker slipped, revealing a hunger that made her knees weak. He dropped the cane. It clattered against the floorboards, loud and jarring, but neither of them flinched. He caught her hand before she could pull it away. His skin was cool, his grip firm but careful, treating her like something volatile. He traced the crescent scar on her wrist with his thumb. "I am not him," he whispered. The intensity in his voice vibrated through her bones. "I destroy my enemies, Aurora. I do not destroy the things I cherish." The word hung there. *Cherish.* Rory’s breath hitched. She looked at his mouth, then back to his mismatched eyes. The tension that had been coiling in her gut for three weeks, the sleepless nights staring at the ceiling, the looking over her shoulder—it all snapped. "You're arrogant." "I am confident." "You're in my personal space." "You invited me in." "I opened the door. There's a difference." "Is there?" He leaned down. It wasn't a question anymore. It was gravity. Rory rose to meet him on her toes, her hands bunching into the fabric of his shirt. His lips brushed hers—a test, a question. He waited, giving her the agency to shove him back, to scream, to grab the skillet. Instead, she opened her mouth and sighed his name. Lucien groaned, a low rumble in his chest, and crashed his mouth against hers. It wasn't gentle. It tasted of desperation and rain and pent-up anger. His hands found her waist, pulling her flush against him, crushing her breasts against the hard wall of his chest. Rory tangled her fingers in his damp, platinum hair, ruining the perfect style. She pulled him closer, needing to feel the reality of him, to prove that he wasn't just a nightmare or a fantasy she’d conjured in the loneliness of Eva’s flat. He walked her backward, blindly navigating the maze of books. Her legs hit the edge of the dining table, sending a stack of scrolls cascading to the floor. Neither cared. He lifted her, his strength effortless, setting her on the edge of the table amidst the chaos of research. He broke the kiss, gasping, his forehead resting against hers. His pupils were dilated, swallowing the amber, swallowing the light. "Don't run again," he rasped, his voice wrecked. "If you want to leave, tell me to go hell. Throw things at me. But do not vanish." Rory ran her thumb over his lower lip, feeling the rapid pulse beneath the skin. "I can't promise that. I'm not good at staying." "Then I will have to be good at chasing." He kissed the corner of her mouth, then her jaw, then the sensitive spot beneath her ear that made her shiver. "The pastry," she murmured, eyes fluttering shut as his hands moved to her hips. "You brought pastry." "It can wait." "It'll get cold." Lucien pulled back, looking at her with a mix of exasperation and intense affection. "You are infuriating." Rory smirked, breathless and flushed, feeling more alive than she had in months. "That's why you like me." " unfortunately." He leaned back in, his hand cupping the back of her neck, his thumb resting against her pulse point. The rain hammered against the window, the world outside wet and miserable, but in the cluttered, curry-scented flat, the air was burning. "Where is the witch?" Lucien asked against her lips. "Kensington. She won't be back for hours." Lucien’s eyes darkened. "Good."
created_at"2026-02-19T12:32:09.909Z" 2/19/2026, 12:32:09 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences67
tagDensity0.179
leniency0.358
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
92.81% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2085
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"softly"
2"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
42.45% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2085
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"stomach"
count1
3
word"echoed"
count1
4
word"silence"
count2
5
word"flicker"
count1
6
word"charged"
count1
7
word"predator"
count1
8
word"eyebrow"
count1
9
word"racing"
count1
10
word"fractured"
count1
11
word"traced"
count1
12
word"intensity"
count1
13
word"vibrated"
count1
14
word"tension"
count1
15
word"perfect"
count1
16
word"navigating"
count1
17
word"cascading"
count1
18
word"effortless"
count1
19
word"amidst"
count1
20
word"pulse"
count2
21
word"affection"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"familiar"
2"stomach"
3"echoed"
4"silence"
5"flicker"
6"charged"
7"predator"
8"eyebrow"
9"racing"
10"fractured"
11"traced"
12"intensity"
13"vibrated"
14"tension"
15"perfect"
16"navigating"
17"cascading"
18"effortless"
19"amidst"
20"pulse"
21"affection"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences135
matches
0"was scared"
1"d with frustration"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences135
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences190
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen42
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords3
totalWords2067
ratio0.001
matches
0"clack-clack-clack"
1"into"
2"Cherish."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
95.43% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions39
wordCount1466
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.09
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory16
Eva6
Brick1
Lane1
Kensington1
Moreau1
Lucien12
French1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
2"Moreau"
3"Lucien"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Kensington"
3"French"
globalScore0.954
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences89
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2067
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences190
matches
0"prove that he"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs93
mean22.23
std17.36
cv0.781
sampleLengths
056
147
27
357
414
57
647
76
822
99
1041
1124
1216
1347
1424
157
1620
1733
1835
1963
201
2132
2233
2329
246
2532
2612
2729
282
2916
304
3145
3264
3326
3423
3515
3645
3720
3813
3911
4018
4119
425
432
4437
4537
468
4723
484
4920
97.47% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences135
matches
0"was slicked"
1"get lost"
2"were dilated"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs254
matches
0"was working"
1"was burning"
37.59% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences190
ratio0.037
matches
0"The sound didn’t match the rhythm of the city outside—the constant, dull roar of Brick Lane, the shouted orders from the curry house downstairs, or the frantic sirens bleeding through the single-pane windows."
1"Lucien Moreau leaned on his ivory-handled cane, the dim light catching the mismatched hues of his eyes—one burning amber, the other a void of endless black."
2"The scent hit her instantly—butter, dark chocolate, and rich, roasted coffee—cutting through the lingering spice of the apartment."
3"He surveyed the chaos—the mountain of research notes on the dining table, the drying laundry hanging from the curtain rod, the cat sleeping on a stack of pizza boxes."
4"The memory of that night—the blood on his cuffs, the way his shadow had seemed to detach itself from the floor, the terrifying realization that she wanted to step *into* the darkness rather than run from it—flashed in her mind."
5"The tension that had been coiling in her gut for three weeks, the sleepless nights staring at the ceiling, the looking over her shoulder—it all snapped."
6"His lips brushed hers—a test, a question."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1484
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.022911051212938006
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.006064690026954178
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences190
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences190
mean10.88
std8
cv0.735
sampleLengths
019
133
23
31
411
518
618
72
85
913
1010
1114
1220
134
142
152
166
177
1826
1912
209
213
223
2322
249
2515
264
2722
284
291
301
311
327
3310
3416
3526
363
3718
3824
397
4020
417
4218
435
443
4514
4616
475
4814
4920
39.47% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats20
diversityRatio0.2578947368421053
totalSentences190
uniqueOpeners49
53.33% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences125
matches
0"instead of fleeing, the traitorous"
1"Instead, she opened her mouth"
ratio0.016
12.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount65
totalSentences125
matches
0"She froze, heart hammering against"
1"She grabbed the heavy cast-iron"
2"It felt ridiculous in her"
3"She crept down the narrow"
4"She reached the door."
5"She didn't breathe."
6"She didn't move."
7"He raised his head, staring"
8"She lowered the skillet."
9"She undid the bolts."
10"She left the chain on,"
11"He looked tired."
12"He held up a white"
13"It was a cheap tactic."
14"It was working."
15"She found only a tight"
16"She slid the chain off."
17"He seemed to consume the"
18"He surveyed the chaos—the mountain"
19"She self-consciously tugged at the"
ratio0.52
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount115
totalSentences125
matches
0"The sound didn’t match the"
1"This was deliberate."
2"She froze, heart hammering against"
3"The flat smelled of stale"
4"Eva was out, chasing a"
5"Rory slid off the couch,"
6"She grabbed the heavy cast-iron"
7"It felt ridiculous in her"
8"She crept down the narrow"
9"She reached the door."
10"A fortress built on a"
11"Rory pressed her eye to"
12"The fish-eye lens distorted the"
13"The charcoal suit was dry,"
14"The platinum hair was slicked"
15"She didn't breathe."
16"She didn't move."
17"He raised his head, staring"
18"The voice was low, wrapping"
19"She lowered the skillet."
ratio0.92
80.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences125
matches
0"If he wanted to get"
1"Because she wasn't."
ratio0.016
67.10% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences66
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"He raised his head, staring straight at the lens as if he could see the blue iris trembling on the other side."
1"He peeled off his gloves, leather creaking softly, revealing pale, slender fingers that had done terrible things for the right price."
2"It felt physical, a brush of heat against her skin that made the small crescent scar on her wrist itch."
3"The mask of the indifferent broker slipped, revealing a hunger that made her knees weak."
4"The tension that had been coiling in her gut for three weeks, the sleepless nights staring at the ceiling, the looking over her shoulder—it all snapped."
5"His hands found her waist, pulling her flush against him, crushing her breasts against the hard wall of his chest."
6"He kissed the corner of her mouth, then her jaw, then the sensitive spot beneath her ear that made her shiver."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"He turned, his gaze sweeping over her"
1"His hand twitched, as if he wanted to reach out, but he gripped the head of his cane tighter"
2"he rasped, his voice wrecked"
3"she murmured, eyes fluttering shut as his hands moved to her hips"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"he whispered (whisper)"
1"she murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences67
tagDensity0.045
leniency0.09
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.06
80.5883%