Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTY5T0D2294QZ4K1W1SXQR5

Run Details

Duration:
7.2s
Cost:
$0.003410
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign of The Raven’s Nest pulsed a faint glow onto the rain-slicked pavement. A gust of wind pushed a sheet of rain against the window as Rory pushed through the door. The bar, a familiar refuge from the city's relentless drone, offered its usual comfort. The scent of old wood, stale beer, and something vaguely metallic – perhaps, the faint tang of secrets – hung in the air. Silas, behind the bar, wiped down the polished surface with a slow, rhythmic motion. His grey-streaked auburn beard caught the ambient light. He looked up, his hazel eyes crinkling at the corners. “Thought you were working tonight, Rory.” He spoke, his voice a low rumble. “Shift got cut short. Slow night for the Golden Empress.” Rory shrugged, her shoulder-length black hair swaying. She moved towards her usual stool at the far end of the bar, a silent ritual. Her small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a childhood souvenir, peeked out from under her sleeve as she pushed it up. He placed a glass in front of her. “Whiskey, neat?” She nodded, a faint smile touching her lips. “You know me too well, Si.” The doorbell chimed, a surprising jingle for a Tuesday night. Rory glanced over her shoulder. A tall figure stood silhouetted against the streetlights, water dripping from the brim of a wide-brimmed hat. The bar fell silent, a collective pause as the newcomer stepped further into the light. Their clothes, a smart trench coat with a high collar, were expensive, almost tailored. A gasp caught in Rory’s throat. Her bright blue eyes widened, focusing on the strong jawline, the familiar curve of the nose. It couldn't be. Not here, not now. The man pulled off his hat, revealing a shock of dark, wavy hair. His eyes swept over the room, settling on her. A slow, knowing smile spread across his face. "Rory?" His voice, deeper than she remembered, yet undeniably his, sent a shiver down her spine. "Is that really you?" Her heart hammered against her ribs. She slid off the stool, her hands clenching at her sides. "Evan?" The name, a bitter taste on her tongue, hung in the air. Silas, ever observant, paused his wiping. His gaze flickered between them, a silent assessment of the unexpected intrusion. Evan walked towards her, his limp barely noticeable now, a far cry from the subtle drag he used to have after their shared accident years ago. He extended a hand, the gesture open, almost innocent. "It's been too long, Laila." Laila. The name he used to call her, a pet name she had long since shed, felt like a brand. She ignored his outstretched hand. "What are you doing here?" Her voice was flat, betraying none of the turmoil churning inside her. He lowered his hand, his smile faltering slightly. "Passing through London on business. Saw the sign, figured I'd pop in for a drink." His eyes, a shade of dark brown she used to lose herself in, held a familiar glint. “You look… different.” “Years change a person,” she replied, stepping back, creating a sliver of space between them. She felt the weight of his gaze, measuring, dissecting. He had changed too, not just in appearance, but in the subtle shift in his aura, a polished confidence that hadn't been there before. "They certainly do." He chuckled, a low, rumbling sound. "Still got that wild streak in you?" "Depends on what you mean by 'wild streak'." She crossed her arms, a defensive posture. He leaned against the bar, his attention never wavering from her. “Back then, you were always chasing something, weren’t you? That thrill, that next big adventure.” "I was young," she countered, the memory of her younger self, impulsive and naive, a phantom presence in the room. "People grow up." "Some more than others, I suppose." He ran a hand through his hair, a gesture that used to soothe her. Now, it just felt like a performance. “Still jumping from one thing to the next? Or have you found your niche in… whatever this is?” He gestured vaguely around the dimly lit bar. “I’m happy,” she stated, a defiance she hoped he wouldn’t see through. “I’m content.” “Contentment. An interesting choice of words.” His eyes narrowed slightly, a hint of the old Evan, the one who saw through her carefully constructed facades. “Last I heard, you were leaving Cardiff. Something about an ex.” A flush crept up her neck. Her jaw tightened. “That’s ancient history.” “Is it?” He pushed off the bar, moving closer. Silas, behind the bar, paused his task again, his gaze sharp, assessing. “Because it always seemed to me that you ran, Rory. You always ran when things got tough.” “I left for a reason, Evan. A good reason.” The words were a low growl, barely audible above the quiet hum of the bar. “Was it?” His voice was a whisper, a venomous hiss. “Or were you just afraid of facing what you truly wanted?” She stared at him, her breath catching in her throat. The old wounds, long since scarred over, began to ache. His gaze, a challenge, held hers. The air between them crackled with unspoken accusations, with the ghosts of a past they both tried to bury. He wasn’t the Evan she remembered, not entirely. But the dangerous undercurrent, the manipulative streak that had drawn her in and then suffocated her, was unmistakably present.
created_at"2026-02-19T12:32:10.773Z" 2/19/2026, 12:32:10 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
66.67% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"He gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
1"His eyes narrowed slightly [slightly]"
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.467
leniency0.933
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.133
72.50% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount909
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count2
2
adverb"carefully"
count1
3
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"slightly"
2"carefully"
3"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
17.49% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount909
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"pulsed"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count3
2
word"rhythmic"
count1
3
word"down her spine"
count1
4
word"clenching"
count1
5
word"flickered"
count1
6
word"churning"
count1
7
word"glint"
count1
8
word"weight"
count1
9
word"wavering"
count1
10
word"constructed"
count1
11
word"whisper"
count1
12
word"unspoken"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"familiar"
2"rhythmic"
3"down her spine"
4"clenching"
5"flickered"
6"churning"
7"glint"
8"weight"
9"wavering"
10"constructed"
11"whisper"
12"unspoken"
0.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches5
maxInWindow5
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count2
1
label"hung in the air"
count2
2
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
1"eyes narrowed"
2"hung in the air"
3"sent a shiver down"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences63
matches(empty)
97.51% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences63
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences77
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords906
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions13
wordCount716
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity0.56
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Rory4
Tuesday1
Evan3
Silas3
persons
0"Raven"
1"Rory"
2"Evan"
3"Silas"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
62.28% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences57
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like a brand"
1"felt like a performance"
89.62% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.104
wordCount906
matches
0"not just in appearance, but in the subtle shift in his aura, a polished confidence"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs29
mean31.24
std17.4
cv0.557
sampleLengths
071
132
213
355
410
514
661
729
830
920
1018
1130
1240
1325
1417
1543
1648
1716
1815
1926
2023
2153
2214
2336
2412
2538
2624
2721
2872
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs102
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences77
ratio0.013
matches
0"The scent of old wood, stale beer, and something vaguely metallic – perhaps, the faint tang of secrets – hung in the air."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount719
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.037552155771905425
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.015299026425591099
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences77
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences77
mean11.77
std6.78
cv0.577
sampleLengths
016
118
214
323
414
58
610
713
817
916
1022
118
122
138
146
1510
165
1717
1815
1914
206
2116
223
234
2413
259
268
2716
284
296
3011
311
3212
336
3412
3526
369
375
381
3919
405
4117
428
4332
443
4515
469
4724
489
497
75.32% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.4675324675324675
totalSentences77
uniqueOpeners36
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount37
totalSentences62
matches
0"His grey-streaked auburn beard caught"
1"He looked up, his hazel"
2"He spoke, his voice a"
3"She moved towards her usual"
4"Her small crescent-shaped scar on"
5"He placed a glass in"
6"She nodded, a faint smile"
7"Their clothes, a smart trench"
8"Her bright blue eyes widened,"
9"It couldn't be."
10"His eyes swept over the"
11"His voice, deeper than she"
12"Her heart hammered against her"
13"She slid off the stool,"
14"His gaze flickered between them,"
15"He extended a hand, the"
16"She ignored his outstretched hand."
17"Her voice was flat, betraying"
18"He lowered his hand, his"
19"His eyes, a shade of"
ratio0.597
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount59
totalSentences62
matches
0"The green neon sign of"
1"A gust of wind pushed"
2"The bar, a familiar refuge"
3"The scent of old wood,"
4"Silas, behind the bar, wiped"
5"His grey-streaked auburn beard caught"
6"He looked up, his hazel"
7"He spoke, his voice a"
8"Rory shrugged, her shoulder-length black"
9"She moved towards her usual"
10"Her small crescent-shaped scar on"
11"He placed a glass in"
12"She nodded, a faint smile"
13"The doorbell chimed, a surprising"
14"Rory glanced over her shoulder."
15"A tall figure stood silhouetted"
16"The bar fell silent, a"
17"Their clothes, a smart trench"
18"A gasp caught in Rory’s"
19"Her bright blue eyes widened,"
ratio0.952
80.65% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences62
matches
0"Now, it just felt like"
ratio0.016
87.91% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences26
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"He had changed too, not just in appearance, but in the subtle shift in his aura, a polished confidence that hadn't been there before."
1"But the dangerous undercurrent, the manipulative streak that had drawn her in and then suffocated her, was unmistakably present."
53.57% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"He spoke, his voice a low rumble"
1"Rory shrugged, her shoulder-length black hair swaying"
50.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"He spoke (speak)"
1"He chuckled (chuckle)"
2"she stated (state)"
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.133
leniency0.267
rawRatio0.75
effectiveRatio0.2
74.9173%