| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 15 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 22 | | tagDensity | 0.682 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 85.97% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 713 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 713 | | totalAiIsms | 15 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "sentinel" | | 1 | "etched" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "vibrated" | | 4 | "sense of" | | 5 | "perfect" | | 6 | "weight" | | 7 | "chill" | | 8 | "whisper" | | 9 | "potential" | | 10 | "pulse" | | 11 | "silence" | | 12 | "enigmatic" | | 13 | "footsteps" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 44 | | matches | | |
| 77.92% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 44 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 51 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 28 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 712 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 48.15% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 26 | | wordCount | 540 | | uniqueNames | 4 | | maxNameDensity | 2.04 | | worstName | "Nyx" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Nyx" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 1 | | Nyx | 11 | | Aurora | 8 | | Isolde | 6 |
| | persons | | | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.481 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 34 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "grace that seemed to bend the air around her, her bare feet silent on the leaf-littered path" | | 1 | "faces that seemed to watch, their eyes like polished obsidian" | | 2 | "quite right; the stars above were mirrored, but the trees around the pond were slightly askew, as if the reflection was from a different angle" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 4.213 | | wordCount | 712 | | matches | | 0 | "Not just scattered boulders, but monoliths, some towering twice her height, carved with faces" | | 1 | "not loud, but deep, like the earth itself was humming a forgotten tune" | | 2 | "not from the air, but from the sheer age of the place" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 51 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 4.43% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 8 | | mean | 89 | | std | 14.73 | | cv | 0.166 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 92 | | 1 | 100 | | 2 | 81 | | 3 | 85 | | 4 | 88 | | 5 | 65 | | 6 | 82 | | 7 | 119 |
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| 97.29% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 44 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 94 | | matches | | |
| 86.83% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 51 | | ratio | 0.02 | | matches | | 0 | "The reflection wasn’t quite right; the stars above were mirrored, but the trees around the pond were slightly askew, as if the reflection was from a different angle." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 541 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 16 | | adverbRatio | 0.029574861367837338 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0073937153419593345 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 51 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 51 | | mean | 13.96 | | std | 7.12 | | cv | 0.51 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 25 | | 5 | 2 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 23 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 21 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 27 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 23 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 22 | | 28 | 28 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 23 | | 36 | 18 | | 37 | 17 | | 38 | 15 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 28 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 12 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 22 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 16 | | 49 | 26 |
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| 52.94% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.35294117647058826 | | totalSentences | 51 | | uniqueOpeners | 18 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 39 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 96.92% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 12 | | totalSentences | 39 | | matches | | 0 | "They were everywhere." | | 1 | "They followed, the path winding" | | 2 | "she murmured, her voice a" | | 3 | "It crumbled like dry paper," | | 4 | "she said, her gaze distant" | | 5 | "They entered a small clearing." | | 6 | "she said, her voice soft" | | 7 | "She closed her eyes" | | 8 | "She looked at Nyx, whose" | | 9 | "She felt the pendant warm" | | 10 | "she admitted, the word feeling" | | 11 | "She rose, her footsteps leaving" |
| | ratio | 0.308 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 37 | | totalSentences | 39 | | matches | | 0 | "The air thickened, heavy with" | | 1 | "Aurora’s boots sank slightly into" | | 2 | "Nyx, a shifting silhouette of" | | 3 | "Isolde, silver hair like moonlight," | | 4 | "They were everywhere." | | 5 | "Aurora’s hand drifted towards the" | | 6 | "A low, resonant hum vibrated" | | 7 | "Nyx paused, a dark cloud" | | 8 | "Nyx whispered, the sound like" | | 9 | "They followed, the path winding" | | 10 | "The trees grew denser, their" | | 11 | "Aurora felt a prickle of" | | 12 | "Isolde stopped before a cluster" | | 13 | "she murmured, her voice a" | | 14 | "Aurora knelt, brushing a petal." | | 15 | "It crumbled like dry paper," | | 16 | "Nyx leaned in, its form" | | 17 | "Isolde touched the stone beside" | | 18 | "she said, her gaze distant" | | 19 | "They entered a small clearing." |
| | ratio | 0.949 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 39 | | matches | | 0 | "Before her, the ancient oaks" |
| | ratio | 0.026 | |
| 12.99% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 22 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde, silver hair like moonlight, walked with a grace that seemed to bend the air around her, her bare feet silent on the leaf-littered path." | | 1 | "Not just scattered boulders, but monoliths, some towering twice her height, carved with faces that seemed to watch, their eyes like polished obsidian." | | 2 | "Nyx leaned in, its form dissolving into pure shadow, then reforming beside her, its violet eyes wide." | | 3 | "The reflection wasn’t quite right; the stars above were mirrored, but the trees around the pond were slightly askew, as if the reflection was from a different a…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 15 | | uselessAdditionCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "she murmured, her voice a soft chime" | | 1 | "Isolde touched, her fingers leaving faint, shimmering imprints" | | 2 | "she said, her gaze distant" | | 3 | "she said, her voice soft but carrying" | | 4 | "she admitted, the word feeling small in the vast silence" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 9 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "Nyx breathed (breathe)" | | 3 | "Nyx stated (state)" | | 4 | "she admitted (admit)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 22 | | tagDensity | 0.409 | | leniency | 0.818 | | rawRatio | 0.556 | | effectiveRatio | 0.455 | |