Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTY5VXDDEDDNYQQKK5BHBK1

Run Details

Duration:
10.8s
Cost:
$0.000840
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air in The Raven’s Nest hung thick with the scent of stale beer and hushed secrets. Rory wiped down the sticky surface of the bar, the rag cool against her skin. The usual Friday night crowd hadn't quite coalesced yet; only a few solitary figures nursed drinks in the dim light, shadows clinging to the booths. Silas was in the back, no doubt poring over whatever maps or cryptic documents occupied his peculiar retirement. A shaft of light from the street, filtering through the grimy window, caught a dust mote dancing in Rory's peripheral vision. She swatted at it instinctively, her wrist aching with a familiar phantom throb. The crescent scar, usually hidden by her sleeve, felt suddenly exposed. The bell above the door jingled, its cheerful tone jarring against the bar's hushed atmosphere. Rory glanced up, her practiced smile faltering. A woman stood silhouetted against the brighter London night, a gust of cool air trailing in behind her. Rory’s breath hitched. It couldn’t be. Not here, not now. The woman stepped further into the light, and Rory’s world narrowed to the familiar, yet utterly transformed, face. “Eva?” The name was a whisper, barely audible. Eva’s eyes, once the lively green of a summer meadow, now held a weariness that seemed to hollow them out. Her once vibrant auburn hair, a shade Rory distinctly remembered teasing her relentlessly about, was now a muted brown, pulled back in a severe knot at the nape of her neck. The spark that had once ignited Eva’s every expression sat dormant, replaced by a careful composure that felt brittle. Eva’s lips, a shade darker than Rory remembered, curved into a faint, almost apologetic smile. "Aurora. It is you." Her voice, once a lilting melody, had acquired a huskier, more measured cadence. Rory set down the rag, her hands suddenly clammy. "I… I didn't expect to see you. Not here." She gestured vaguely around the dimly lit establishment, her gaze flicking towards the hidden entrance to Silas's back room. "Small world," Eva murmured, her eyes sweeping over Rory’s uniform, the worn fabric of her jeans. A fleeting look, too quick to decipher, crossed her face. "You're still… delivering things?" The question, deceptively simple, felt laced with something Rory couldn’t quite name. Pity? Disappointment? She straightened, her own practiced composure asserting itself, a shield forged in the years since their last meeting. "Keeps me busy. Pays the rent." She paused, then added, a touch of defiance in her tone, "And allows me to, you know, *live*." Eva moved further into the bar, her heels clicking softly on the worn floorboards. She approached the bar, her posture impossibly straight, as if fighting an invisible weight. "I've been away. For a long time." "London wasn't big enough for you, then?" Rory’s quip landed with a flatness that surprised even her. It was the kind of barb Eva would have once tossed back with a laugh, but now, her expression remained unchanged. A polite, distant mask. "Something like that." Eva’s gaze drifted to the collection of antique maps adorning the wall, her fingers tracing the outline of a faded continent. "This place… it hasn't changed much, has it?" "Silas likes his routines," Rory said, leaning against the counter, waiting. Waiting for the other shoe to drop, for the real reason Eva had materialized in this improbable corner of her life. "And you?" Eva finally met Rory’s eyes, and in their depths, Rory saw a flicker of the old spark, quickly extinguished. "Are you happy, Rory?" The question hung in the air, heavy and unwelcome. Rory’s smile tightened. "Happy is a… complicated word, Eva. I’m here. I’m alive." She avoided the direct answer, the years of self-preservation kicking in. "What about you? You look… different." Eva’s hand went to her throat, a nervous gesture Rory remembered well. "Life has a way of… reshaping us, wouldn't you agree?" She finally settled on a stool, perching on the edge as if ready to flee. "I found myself needing a quiet place. Somewhere to… recalibrate." "Calibrate?" Rory echoed, the word sounding alien on Eva’s tongue. “You always were good with words. What precisely are you recalibrating *from*?” A faint tremor ran through Eva’s shoulders. "From all the noise, Rory. From making decisions that… echo." She looked down at her hands, smooth and unblemished, a stark contrast to Rory’s own calloused fingers. "You always had a knack for staying grounded. For seeing things clearly." Rory scoffed, a harsh sound. "I see things clearly enough. I see that you walked out of my life without a word, and now you reappear like a ghost in some dusty old pub. What cleared vision do you expect me to have here, Eva?" Eva flinched, a subtle tightening around her eyes. "It wasn’t that simple. You know it wasn't." "No," Rory conceded, her voice softening almost imperceptibly. "It never was. But you could have at least made a phone call." The words spilled out, raw and unbidden, a dam of unspoken grief finally cracking. “You were supposed to be my escape, remember? My confidante. My… everything.” Eva’s gaze dropped again, her fingers now interlacing tightly. "Evan… he made things difficult. For both of us." "Difficult?" Rory's laugh was sharp and brittle. "He was a monster, Eva. And you just… vanished." The crescent scar on her wrist pulsed as if it remembered the sting of the broken glass all too well. "I was left picking up the pieces, alone." "And look at you now," Eva said, her voice laced with an unfamiliar note of… admiration? "You survived. You built something for yourself." She gestured to the bar, to Rory’s worn uniform. "This is your life now." "This *is* my life," Rory corrected, her voice firm. "Not a placeholder until something better comes along.” She met Eva's gaze directly, her bright blue eyes holding steady. "I learned to stand on my own two feet when… when the people I thought would hold me up, let me fall." A long silence stretched between them, filled only by the distant rumble of traffic outside and the clinking of glasses from a nearby table. Eva finally looked away, her eyes scanning the details of the bar, avoiding Rory’s accusing stare. “I heard you were working for Silas.” “He pays well,” Rory stated. “And he doesn’t ask too many questions. Which is more than I can say for most people.” “He’s… a strange man,” Eva commented, her tone neutral. “Whispers follow him, even miles away from here.” Rory shrugged, picking up her rag again, though there was nothing left to clean. “He’s a good man. He gave me a chance when no one else would.” She looked at Eva, the ghost of their shared youth flickering between them like a dying ember. “You know, I used to think about you all the time. Wondered where you were. If you were okay.” Eva finally pushed herself up from the stool, her movements fluid but with a hint of underlying tension. “And now?” “Now,” Rory began, her voice steady, carrying the weight of years of forced resilience, “I’m just trying to make sense of the present.” She met Eva’s gaze, a silent battle of wills waged in the dim light of The Raven’s Nest. “It’s good to see you, Eva. Truly. But I think maybe… maybe some chapters are best left closed.” Eva’s lips curved into a sad, knowing smile. "Perhaps." She turned, her gaze lingering on the green neon sign outside, a beacon in the encroaching darkness. "Take care, Rory." And then she was gone, the bell above the door its only farewell. Rory stood at the bar, the rag clutched in her hand, the phantom ache in her wrist a dull reminder of a past she couldn’t outrun, and a future she was still very much building. The silence in the bar felt deeper now, heavier, punctuated only by the slow drip of a leaky faucet in the back.
created_at"2026-02-19T12:32:12.724Z" 2/19/2026, 12:32:12 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags24
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"She gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
1"She paused then [then]"
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.083
effectiveRatio0.083
66.09% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1327
totalAiIsmAdverbs9
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count2
1
adverb"utterly"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
3
adverb"quickly"
count1
4
adverb"precisely"
count1
5
adverb"tightly"
count1
6
adverb"truly"
count1
7
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"utterly"
2"softly"
3"quickly"
4"precisely"
5"tightly"
6"truly"
7"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1327
totalAiIsms27
found
0
word"solitary"
count1
1
word"dust mote"
count1
2
word"dancing"
count1
3
word"familiar"
count2
4
word"throb"
count1
5
word"whisper"
count1
6
word"measured"
count1
7
word"fleeting"
count1
8
word"weight"
count2
9
word"tracing"
count1
10
word"depths"
count1
11
word"flicker"
count1
12
word"echoed"
count1
13
word"echo"
count1
14
word"stark"
count1
15
word"calloused fingers"
count1
16
word"unspoken"
count1
17
word"pulsed"
count1
18
word"silence"
count2
19
word"scanning"
count1
20
word"tension"
count1
21
word"sense of"
count1
22
word"beacon"
count1
23
word"reminder"
count1
highlights
0"solitary"
1"dust mote"
2"dancing"
3"familiar"
4"throb"
5"whisper"
6"measured"
7"fleeting"
8"weight"
9"tracing"
10"depths"
11"flicker"
12"echoed"
13"echo"
14"stark"
15"calloused fingers"
16"unspoken"
17"pulsed"
18"silence"
19"scanning"
20"tension"
21"sense of"
22"beacon"
23"reminder"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences71
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences71
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences93
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords3
totalWords1326
ratio0.002
matches
0"live"
1"from"
2"is"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions59
wordCount929
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity3.01
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity5.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Friday1
Rory28
London1
Eva22
Silas2
Waiting1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
3"Eva"
4"Silas"
places
0"London"
globalScore0
windowScore0
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences59
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"quite coalesced yet; only a few solitary figures nursed drinks in the dim light, shadows clinging to the booths"
1"weariness that seemed to hollow them out"
2"quite name"
3"as if fighting an invisible weight"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1326
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences93
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs32
mean41.44
std21.49
cv0.519
sampleLengths
0120
168
28
370
432
537
630
756
835
942
1032
1132
1225
1339
1447
1522
1646
1745
1816
1947
2018
2144
2237
2350
2447
2522
2617
2764
2820
2959
3029
3170
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences71
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs145
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences93
ratio0.011
matches
0"The usual Friday night crowd hadn't quite coalesced yet; only a few solitary figures nursed drinks in the dim light, shadows clinging to the booths."
77.61% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount930
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount53
adverbRatio0.05698924731182796
lyAdverbCount27
lyAdverbRatio0.02903225806451613
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences93
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences93
mean14.26
std8.66
cv0.608
sampleLengths
017
115
225
318
421
513
611
715
87
918
103
113
124
1318
148
1520
1631
1719
1815
1917
209
2128
2216
2310
244
2512
261
271
2818
2924
3014
3114
327
3317
3421
354
3624
378
3811
3921
4021
414
429
433
4421
456
4612
4725
4810
4910
61.29% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.3870967741935484
totalSentences93
uniqueOpeners36
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount16
totalSentences67
matches
0"She swatted at it instinctively,"
1"It couldn’t be."
2"Her once vibrant auburn hair,"
3"Her voice, once a lilting"
4"She gestured vaguely around the"
5"She straightened, her own practiced"
6"She paused, then added, a"
7"She approached the bar, her"
8"It was the kind of"
9"She avoided the direct answer,"
10"She finally settled on a"
11"She looked down at her"
12"She gestured to the bar,"
13"She met Eva's gaze directly,"
14"She looked at Eva, the"
15"She turned, her gaze lingering"
ratio0.239
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount64
totalSentences67
matches
0"The air in The Raven’s"
1"Rory wiped down the sticky"
2"The usual Friday night crowd"
3"Silas was in the back,"
4"A shaft of light from"
5"She swatted at it instinctively,"
6"The crescent scar, usually hidden"
7"The bell above the door"
8"Rory glanced up, her practiced"
9"A woman stood silhouetted against"
10"Rory’s breath hitched."
11"It couldn’t be."
12"The woman stepped further into"
13"The name was a whisper,"
14"Eva’s eyes, once the lively"
15"Her once vibrant auburn hair,"
16"The spark that had once"
17"Eva’s lips, a shade darker"
18"Her voice, once a lilting"
19"Rory set down the rag,"
ratio0.955
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
ratio0
68.97% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences29
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The spark that had once ignited Eva’s every expression sat dormant, replaced by a careful composure that felt brittle."
1"She approached the bar, her posture impossibly straight, as if fighting an invisible weight."
2"Eva finally looked away, her eyes scanning the details of the bar, avoiding Rory’s accusing stare."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags24
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"Eva’s gaze drifted, her fingers tracing the outline of a faded continent"
1"She avoided, the years of self-preservation kicking in"
2"Rory echoed, the word sounding alien on Eva’s tongue"
3"Rory conceded, her voice softening almost imperceptibly"
4"Rory corrected, her voice firm"
5"Eva commented, her tone neutral"
45.83% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"Eva murmured (murmur)"
1"Rory conceded (concede)"
2"Rory corrected (correct)"
3"Rory stated (state)"
4"Eva commented (comment)"
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.146
leniency0.292
rawRatio0.714
effectiveRatio0.208
70.6595%