Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTY62B8K5X9KVZJP711G1JD

Run Details

Duration:
11.3s
Cost:
$0.002744

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The abandoned Tube station echoed with a hollow emptiness that made Detective Harlow Quinn's skin crawl. Her worn leather watch caught the dim emergency light as she crouched beside the body. Blood pooled around the victim's head, creating a grotesque halo on the cracked tile floor. "Not your typical murder scene," she muttered. Forensic technician Marcus Davies shifted uncomfortably. "Standard mugging gone wrong, Quinn. Nothing supernatural about this." Her sharp jaw tightened. She'd heard that line before—three years ago, when her partner DS Morris disappeared. Quinn's fingers traced the weird pattern of blood spatter, noting its unnatural symmetry. "The blood," she said, "it's not random." The pattern suggested something deliberate. Ritualistic. Each droplet seemed positioned with surgical precision, forming what looked like half-completed geometric shapes around the corpse. Quinn pulled out her compact forensic kit, her movements precise and controlled. Military training never left you, even after eighteen years on the force. "Look closer," she instructed Davies. "These aren't random splatters." He rolled his eyes. "You and your conspiracy theories." Quinn ignored him. Her brown eyes scanned every inch of the crime scene, taking in details others would miss. The victim wore expensive shoes—Italian leather, recently polished. Not a typical mugging target. His suit suggested wealth, connections. A small brass object glinted near the body. Quinn carefully extracted an evidence bag, sliding a small compass inside. Its face was etched with strange sigils, a patina of verdigris covering its surface. "Interesting," she murmured. Davies peered over her shoulder. "Just a compass." But Quinn knew better. This wasn't just any compass. The markings suggested something more—something connected to the supernatural world she'd glimpsed three years ago. The needle trembled, pointing not north, but toward something unseen. Toward a hidden presence Quinn could almost sense but couldn't quite define. "We're missing something," she said.
total_cost0.002744

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences9
tagDensity0.556
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
83.66% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount306
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Marcus"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
1.96% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount306
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"standard"
count1
2
word"traced"
count1
3
word"scanned"
count1
4
word"etched"
count1
5
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"standard"
2"traced"
3"scanned"
4"etched"
5"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences32
matches(empty)
98.21% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences32
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences36
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen18
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords302
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
17.92% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions17
wordCount265
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity2.64
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Tube1
Detective1
Harlow1
Quinn7
Forensic1
Marcus1
Davies3
Morris1
Italian1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Marcus"
3"Davies"
4"Morris"
places(empty)
globalScore0.179
windowScore0.667
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences17
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"seemed positioned with surgical precision, forming what looked like half-completed geometric shapes around the corpse"
1"looked like half-completed geometric shap"
2"quite define"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords3.311
wordCount302
matches
0"not north, but toward something unseen"
74.07% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences36
matches
0"heard that line"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs16
mean18.88
std12.55
cv0.665
sampleLengths
046
17
215
330
47
523
624
79
89
937
1033
113
128
1324
1422
155
94.30% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences32
matches
0"was etched"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs47
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences36
ratio0.083
matches
0"She'd heard that line before—three years ago, when her partner DS Morris disappeared."
1"The victim wore expensive shoes—Italian leather, recently polished."
2"The markings suggested something more—something connected to the supernatural world she'd glimpsed three years ago."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount269
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount8
adverbRatio0.02973977695167286
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.011152416356877323
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences36
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences36
mean8.39
std4.61
cv0.549
sampleLengths
016
115
215
37
46
59
64
713
813
97
105
111
1217
1312
1412
155
164
174
185
193
2016
218
225
235
248
2511
2614
273
285
293
304
315
3215
3310
3412
355
94.44% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.6944444444444444
totalSentences36
uniqueOpeners25
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences27
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount8
totalSentences27
matches
0"Her worn leather watch caught"
1"Her sharp jaw tightened."
2"She'd heard that line before—three"
3"she instructed Davies"
4"He rolled his eyes."
5"Her brown eyes scanned every"
6"His suit suggested wealth, connections."
7"Its face was etched with"
ratio0.296
34.07% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount23
totalSentences27
matches
0"The abandoned Tube station echoed"
1"Her worn leather watch caught"
2"Blood pooled around the victim's"
3"Her sharp jaw tightened."
4"She'd heard that line before—three"
5"Quinn's fingers traced the weird"
6"The pattern suggested something deliberate."
7"Each droplet seemed positioned with"
8"Quinn pulled out her compact"
9"Military training never left you,"
10"she instructed Davies"
11"He rolled his eyes."
12"Quinn ignored him."
13"Her brown eyes scanned every"
14"The victim wore expensive shoes—Italian"
15"His suit suggested wealth, connections."
16"A small brass object glinted"
17"Quinn carefully extracted an evidence"
18"Its face was etched with"
19"Davies peered over her shoulder."
ratio0.852
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences27
matches(empty)
ratio0
91.84% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences14
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The abandoned Tube station echoed with a hollow emptiness that made Detective Harlow Quinn's skin crawl."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"she murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences9
tagDensity0.444
leniency0.889
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.444
69.0162%