Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTY64K9QE6J8FTMQYFA6RY1

Run Details

Duration:
1m 9s
Cost:
$0.020549
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Literary Fiction genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora polished the same tumbler for the third time. The cloth caught on a chip in the glass. She stopped. The green neon sign above the door buzzed, casting a sickly pallor over the sticky mahogany counter. The bell chimed. Aurora did not look up immediately. She placed the glass on the rack. Cold air rushed in from the Soho street, carrying the scent of rain and diesel. Heavy boots clicked on the floorboards. Not the shuffling gait of the usual evening drinkers seeking silence and stout. These steps possessed purpose. Aurora lifted her head. Bright blue eyes met hazel. No. Not Silas. The woman standing before the bar wore a tailored charcoal coat that cost more than Aurora's monthly rent. Her hair, once a chaotic mop of curls, lay straight and severe against her skull. A thin white line cut through her left eyebrow. Eva. Aurora's hand drifted toward the rag on the counter. She stopped herself. You look well. Eva's voice lacked the warm lilt of Cardiff. It sounded flattened. Londoned. You found me. Not difficult. You still order the same takeout. Yu-Fei knows my number. Eva placed a gloved hand on the bar. Leather creaked. She did not remove the glove. Aurora noticed the tremor in the fingers. Not fear. Withdrawal. Or adrenaline. Why are you here? Concerned. You vanished. Three years, Rory. People worry. People talk. Eva smiled. It did not reach her eyes. The skin around them remained tight. She scanned the room. Old maps covered the walls. Black-and-white photographs of men in suits who looked like they buried secrets in concrete. Nice place. Quiet. It pays the bills. Does it? Eva reached into her coat. Aurora tensed. Her muscles coiled. The crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist throbbed. A childhood accident. A reminder that skin breaks. Eva pulled out a pack of cigarettes. Silver case. She tapped one out. Did not light it. Just held it between manicured nails. Evan asks about you. The air left the room. The neon buzz grew louder. Aurora gripped the edge of the counter. Wood dug into her palms. He is in prison. He got out. Six months ago. Aurora stepped back. Her heel hit the rail behind the bar. She had nowhere else to go. He does not know where I am. He knows I am here. Eva lit the cigarette. The flare of the lighter illuminated the hollows under her cheeks. She looked tired. Older than twenty-five. Harder. You told him? I told him I was looking for a friend. I did not give an address. Yet. Why now? Money. He needs money. You have a job. You have a life. I have nothing. You have him. Eva exhaled smoke. It drifted toward the ceiling, mixing with the dust motes dancing in the green light. Aurora watched the smoke curl. She calculated distances. The door was ten feet behind Eva. The kitchen was to the left. Silas was in the back room. The secret room behind the bookshelf. You should leave. Or what? You call the landlord? Aurora said nothing. She stared at Eva's hand. The glove slipped slightly. A bruise showed on the wrist. Purple and yellow. Fresh. Who hit you? Eva tucked the hand back into her coat pocket. She shrugged. The movement was stiff. Does not matter. Things are different now. You left us. You left me to deal with the fallout. I left to survive. Survival is expensive. Eva pushed off the bar. She walked around the end. Closer. Aurora smelled perfume. Expensive. Masking the scent of stale tobacco and something metallic. Blood. He wants to talk. Just talk. He hurt me. He was drunk. He is sober now. Sober men plan better. Eva stopped three feet away. She looked at Aurora. Really looked. She saw the fear Aurora tried to hide. She saw the way Aurora's weight shifted to the balls of her feet. Ready to run. Ready to fight. You changed. I learned. From him? From surviving. Eva reached out. Aurora flinched. Eva froze. Her hand hung in the air. She slowly lowered it. I need help. You need a lawyer. I need cash. Five thousand. By tomorrow. I do not have that. Sell something. The flat. The car. I do not have a car. Eva laughed. A dry, hacking sound. She took a drag of the cigarette. Ash fell on the polished floor. She did not brush it off. Silas has cash. Aurora's blood ran cold. Eva knew Silas. Of course she did. Eva knew everything. That was how she survived Cardiff. That was how she found Aurora in London. Leave him out of this. He owns the building. He knows who you are. He knows what you ran from. He gave me a job. He gave you a hiding spot. There is a difference. The door to the back room opened. Silas stepped out. His grey-streaked auburn hair was combed back. He wore a crisp white shirt and a dark vest. The silver signet ring glinted on his right hand. He walked with a slight limp. Left leg. Old injury. He did not look at Aurora. He looked at Eva. You are smoking in my bar. Eva turned. She did not extinguish the cigarette. Buying time. Time is a commodity I do not sell cheaply. Silas moved behind the bar. He stood next to Aurora. Not touching. Just present. A wall of quiet authority. He picked up a cloth. Wiped the spot where Eva's glove had rested. Who sent you? No one sends me. I came myself. Liar. Silas dropped the cloth. It landed with a wet slap. Evan is not smart enough to find this place. He is not patient enough to wait three years. Someone told him. Someone close. Eva flicked ash onto the floor again. Maybe I just missed my friend. You missed her money. I need five thousand. Silas laughed. A low, rumbling sound. He reached under the counter. Aurora held her breath. He pulled out a bottle of whiskey. Poured three glasses. He slid one toward Eva. She did not touch it. Drink. I do not drink on the job. Job? Collection. Silas picked up his glass. He swirled the amber liquid. He did not drink. Tell Evan I said hello. Tell him Aurora is under my protection. Tell him the terms of our agreement still stand. What agreement? The one where he stays away. He is outside. Silas stopped swirling the glass. The liquid settled. Still. Outside? Waiting. In the car. Black sedan. Engine running. Silas set the glass down. Hard. You led him here. I led myself. He followed. Aurora moved. She slipped behind the bar. Her hand found the heavy brass torch Silas kept near the till. Cold metal against her palm. You brought him to my door. I brought you a solution. Pay him. He leaves. He never leaves. Silas walked around the bar. He stood between Aurora and Eva. He adjusted his cuff. The signet ring caught the neon light. Go home, Eva. I cannot. Then stay. But do not expect help. The front window shattered. Glass sprayed across the floor. A brick wrapped in paper landed near Eva's feet. She jumped. The cigarette fell from her mouth. Silas did not flinch. He looked at the brick. Aurora gripped the torch. Her knuckles turned white. Eva looked at the window. Then at Aurora. Her eyes widened. Genuine fear this time. I did not tell him to do that. Stay down. Silas moved toward the door. He reached into his jacket. Not for a phone. Another brick hit the sign. The green neon flickered. Died. Darkness swallowed the front of the bar. Only the streetlights outside cast long shadows through the broken window. Footsteps approached. Heavy. Multiple. Aurora clicked the torch on. The beam cut through the dust. It landed on Eva's face. Pale. Sweating. You lied. I swear. Silas stood by the door. He held a heavy revolver. Low at his side. Lock the back door, Rory. Aurora moved. She scrambled toward the kitchen. The secret room. The bookshelf. A car engine revved outside. High pitched. Aggressive. Headlights swept across the ceiling. Silas spoke. His voice calm. Deadly. If they come in, do not hesitate. Aurora reached the bookshelf. She pushed the lever hidden behind a map of Prague. The shelf clicked. Swung open. She looked back. Silas stood alone against the dark. Eva crouched behind the bar. Shaking. Aurora stepped into the secret room. She did not close the door. She watched. A shadow moved in the broken window. A hand gripped the frame. Black glove. Silas raised the gun. The shadow stopped. A voice called out from the street. Distorted. Electronic. Open up, Blackwood. We know she is in there. Silas did not answer. He tightened his grip on the revolver. Aurora reached for the fire axe mounted on the wall of the secret room. Cold steel. Heavy wood. The shadow climbed through the window.
created_at"2026-02-19T12:32:24.879Z" 2/19/2026, 12:32:24 PM
model"qwen/qwen3.5-397b-a17b-20260216"
app_id182717
external_user(null)
streamedtrue
cancelledfalse
latency1300
moderation_latency(null)
generation_time63857
tokens_prompt4618
tokens_completion5139
native_tokens_prompt4477
native_tokens_completion4962
native_tokens_completion_images(null)
native_tokens_reasoning2807
native_tokens_cached0
num_media_prompt(null)
num_input_audio_prompt(null)
num_media_completion0
num_search_results(null)
origin"https://ncbench.com/"
is_byokfalse
finish_reason"stop"
native_finish_reason"stop"
usage0.0205494
router(null)
provider_responses
0
endpoint_id"ca5088a7-9042-417b-bdd4-4c1fdc8f16ee"
is_byokfalse
latency1324
model_permaslug"qwen/qwen3.5-397b-a17b-20260216"
provider_name"AtlasCloud"
status429
1
endpoint_id"180484a2-e24b-495a-ba41-b34b680d5a9f"
id"chatcmpl-ac38b2c9-9173-9ab3-aedc-ca204cc17bac"
is_byokfalse
latency807
model_permaslug"qwen/qwen3.5-397b-a17b-20260216"
provider_name"Alibaba"
status200
api_type"completions"
id"gen-1771504344-b9ZzD9sCabEIPCGsNtvX"
upstream_id"chatcmpl-ac38b2c9-9173-9ab3-aedc-ca204cc17bac"
total_cost0.0205494
cache_discount(null)
upstream_inference_cost0
provider_name"Alibaba"

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
90.03% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1505
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"really"
2"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
53.49% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1505
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"silence"
count1
1
word"chaotic"
count1
2
word"eyebrow"
count1
3
word"lilt"
count1
4
word"scanned"
count1
5
word"throbbed"
count1
6
word"reminder"
count1
7
word"dancing"
count1
8
word"calculated"
count1
9
word"weight"
count1
10
word"flicked"
count1
11
word"shattered"
count1
12
word"flickered"
count1
13
word"footsteps"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"chaotic"
2"eyebrow"
3"lilt"
4"scanned"
5"throbbed"
6"reminder"
7"dancing"
8"calculated"
9"weight"
10"flicked"
11"shattered"
12"flickered"
13"footsteps"
0.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches4
maxInWindow4
found
0
label"blood ran cold"
count1
1
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
2
label"knuckles turned white"
count1
3
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"blood ran cold"
1"eyes widened"
2"knuckles turned white"
3"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences340
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences340
filterMatches
0"look"
1"know"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences340
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen18
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1499
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions119
wordCount1499
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity2.07
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"You"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Silas20
Aurora31
Cardiff2
Rory2
Eva29
London1
Evan3
Prague1
Blackwood1
Cold3
Heavy3
You19
Tell3
persons
0"Silas"
1"Aurora"
2"Rory"
3"Eva"
4"Evan"
5"You"
places
0"Soho"
1"Cardiff"
2"London"
3"Prague"
globalScore0.466
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences91
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like they buried secrets in concre"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1499
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences340
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs139
mean10.78
std10.64
cv0.987
sampleLengths
037
13
251
312
442
51
612
73
812
93
1012
1128
124
138
142
1537
163
174
182
1926
2023
214
2222
234
246
2517
267
275
2822
293
3016
312
3212
333
343
3551
363
376
3822
393
4015
4118
424
433
4425
456
463
477
484
4938
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences340
matches
0"was combed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs311
matches
0"was looking"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences340
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1505
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.020598006644518274
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.005980066445182724
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences340
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences340
mean4.41
std2.81
cv0.637
sampleLengths
09
19
22
317
43
56
67
715
86
913
104
114
125
131
142
1518
1615
179
181
199
203
213
228
233
241
253
262
276
284
298
302
316
327
332
341
352
364
371
382
393
402
412
422
436
446
454
465
4714
482
491
44.80% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats31
diversityRatio0.3235294117647059
totalSentences340
uniqueOpeners110
80.97% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount6
totalSentences247
matches
0"Bright blue eyes met hazel."
1"Just held it between manicured"
2"Of course she did."
3"Maybe I just missed my"
4"Then at Aurora."
5"Only the streetlights outside cast"
ratio0.024
53.20% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount103
totalSentences247
matches
0"She placed the glass on"
1"Her hair, once a chaotic"
2"She stopped herself."
3"You look well."
4"It sounded flattened."
5"You found me."
6"You still order the same"
7"She did not remove the"
8"It did not reach her"
9"She scanned the room."
10"It pays the bills."
11"Her muscles coiled."
12"She tapped one out."
13"He is in prison."
14"He got out."
15"Her heel hit the rail"
16"She had nowhere else to"
17"He does not know where"
18"He knows I am here."
19"She looked tired."
ratio0.417
45.02% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount205
totalSentences247
matches
0"Aurora polished the same tumbler"
1"The cloth caught on a"
2"The green neon sign above"
3"The bell chimed."
4"Aurora did not look up"
5"She placed the glass on"
6"These steps possessed purpose."
7"Aurora lifted her head."
8"The woman standing before the"
9"Her hair, once a chaotic"
10"A thin white line cut"
11"Aurora's hand drifted toward the"
12"She stopped herself."
13"You look well."
14"Eva's voice lacked the warm"
15"It sounded flattened."
16"You found me."
17"You still order the same"
18"Yu-Fei knows my number."
19"Eva placed a gloved hand"
ratio0.83
20.24% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences247
matches
0"If they come in, do"
ratio0.004
91.84% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences14
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Black-and-white photographs of men in suits who looked like they buried secrets in concrete."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
83.7643%