Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTY68FYP542NKMZQ67NA1BM

Run Details

Duration:
23.3s
Cost:
$0.001469
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Raven’s Nest smelled of aged whiskey and wood polish, the green neon sign casting an eerie glow over the mahogany bar. Rory leaned against the counter, swirling her drink absently, the ice clinking against the glass. The hum of conversation around her was a dull buzz, easy to tune out. Then the door creaked open, and the air shifted. She didn’t recognize him at first—not until he stepped into the light. The sharp angles of his face were the same, but the easy grin she remembered had hardened into something guarded. His hair, once unruly and sun-bleached, was now cropped close to his scalp. "Evan?" The name slipped out before she could stop it. He froze mid-step, shoulders tensing. His eyes—still that unsettling shade of pale green—locked onto hers. For a heartbeat, neither of them moved. Then he exhaled, slow and deliberate, and crossed the room. "Rory." His voice was deeper than she remembered, rougher. "Didn’t expect to see you here." She forced a laugh, brittle. "Small world." He slid onto the stool beside her, motioning to the bartender. "Whiskey. Neat." No pleasantries, no hesitation. The Evan she knew would’ve ordered something sweet, something he could sip at while spinning stories. Silas appeared behind the bar, his gaze flickering between them. He set the whiskey down without a word but lingered just within earshot, polishing a glass with deliberate slowness. Evan knocked back the drink in one go. "You look good." She arched a brow. "Liar." A ghost of a smile touched his lips. "Okay. You look tired." "Better." She traced the rim of her glass. "You look like you joined the military." "Close." He rolled his shoulders, the fabric of his jacket pulling taut. "Private sector." "Ah." The silence stretched, thick with everything unsaid. She could still see the boy he’d been beneath the sharp edges—the one who’d laughed too loud and promised too much. He tapped the empty glass. "Heard you left Cardiff." "Years ago." "Because of me?" The question hung between them, blunt and unflinching. Rory met his gaze. "Partly." He nodded, like he’d expected that. "I’d say I’m sorry, but we both know that doesn’t mean shit." She smirked, despite herself. "Still charming as ever." "Some things never change." Silas cleared his throat, refilling Evan’s glass without being asked. The amber liquid caught the light, casting shadows across Evan’s knuckles—scars she didn’t recognize marring the skin. Rory tilted her head. "You gonna tell me what happened to you?" He flexed his hand. "You gonna tell me why you’re really here?" The corner of her mouth twitched. "Touché." Outside, rain began to patter against the windows. The bar’s warmth felt suddenly stifling. Evan leaned forward, elbows on the bar. "We were kids, Rory." "Yeah." She swallowed. "Doesn’t make it hurt less." He didn’t flinch. "No. It doesn’t." The door opened again, a gust of wet air cutting through the room. A group of loud tourists spilled inside, shaking off umbrellas and laughing. The moment shattered. Evan pushed to his feet, dropping a handful of bills on the counter. "Take care of yourself." She watched him go, his silhouette swallowed by the rain. Silas slid into the vacant seat. "Old friend?" Rory downed the rest of her drink. "Something like that."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
81.85% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount551
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
63.70% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount551
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"traced"
count1
1
word"silence"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count1
3
word"shattered"
count1
highlights
0"traced"
1"silence"
2"warmth"
3"shattered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences48
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences48
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences71
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen22
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords544
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
82.28% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions15
wordCount443
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity1.35
worstName"Evan"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Evan"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Evan6
Rory4
Silas3
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Evan"
3"Rory"
4"Silas"
places(empty)
globalScore0.823
windowScore0.833
80.56% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences36
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"appeared behind the bar, his gaze flickering between them"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount544
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean15.54
std11.49
cv0.739
sampleLengths
051
19
245
310
432
515
67
733
829
911
105
1112
1215
1314
1429
159
162
173
1813
1918
208
214
2227
2312
2412
257
2614
2711
288
296
3028
3117
3210
338
3410
97.95% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences48
matches
0"being asked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs82
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences71
ratio0.056
matches
0"She didn’t recognize him at first—not until he stepped into the light."
1"His eyes—still that unsettling shade of pale green—locked onto hers."
2"She could still see the boy he’d been beneath the sharp edges—the one who’d laughed too loud and promised too much."
3"The amber liquid caught the light, casting shadows across Evan’s knuckles—scars she didn’t recognize marring the skin."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount450
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount14
adverbRatio0.03111111111111111
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.006666666666666667
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences71
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences71
mean7.66
std4.94
cv0.645
sampleLengths
022
115
214
39
412
520
613
710
85
910
107
1110
129
136
145
152
1611
176
1816
1910
2019
218
223
234
241
258
264
278
287
2912
302
318
3221
335
344
352
363
378
384
391
406
4112
424
434
444
4510
4617
474
488
494
84.51% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.5070422535211268
totalSentences71
uniqueOpeners36
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences47
matches
0"Then the door creaked open,"
1"Then he exhaled, slow and"
ratio0.043
66.81% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences47
matches
0"She didn’t recognize him at"
1"His hair, once unruly and"
2"He froze mid-step, shoulders tensing."
3"His eyes—still that unsettling shade"
4"His voice was deeper than"
5"She forced a laugh, brittle."
6"He slid onto the stool"
7"He set the whiskey down"
8"She arched a brow."
9"She traced the rim of"
10"He rolled his shoulders, the"
11"She could still see the"
12"He tapped the empty glass."
13"He nodded, like he’d expected"
14"She smirked, despite herself."
15"He flexed his hand."
16"He didn’t flinch."
17"She watched him go, his"
ratio0.383
13.19% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount42
totalSentences47
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest smelled of"
1"Rory leaned against the counter,"
2"The hum of conversation around"
3"She didn’t recognize him at"
4"The sharp angles of his"
5"His hair, once unruly and"
6"The name slipped out before"
7"He froze mid-step, shoulders tensing."
8"His eyes—still that unsettling shade"
9"His voice was deeper than"
10"She forced a laugh, brittle."
11"He slid onto the stool"
12"The Evan she knew would’ve"
13"Silas appeared behind the bar,"
14"He set the whiskey down"
15"Evan knocked back the drink"
16"She arched a brow."
17"A ghost of a smile"
18"She traced the rim of"
19"He rolled his shoulders, the"
ratio0.894
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences47
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences19
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she remembered, rougher"
1"He rolled, the fabric of his jacket pulling taut"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
82.3616%