Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTY68RJ7198XCCTAQJKP7BF

Run Details

Duration:
11m 44s
Cost:
$0.020220
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon bled through the window, turning the rain on St. Anne's Court into liquid emerald. Rory traced the rim of her whisky glass, watching condensation bead and slide down the crystal. Three years since she'd fled Cardiff, and still the city lived in her shoulders—a tension she couldn't stretch out, a phantom barrister's wig itching her scalp. She'd changed from her delivery uniform upstairs in the flat, trading the polyester shirt for a wool jumper that smelled of basmati rice. The crescent scar on her left wrist peeked from her sleeve whenever she reached for her drink. Silas worked behind the bar, wiping a tumbler with methodical strokes. His grey-streaked auburn hair caught the low light, and his silver signet ring tapped against the glass—a metronome marking the evening's slow passage. He limped when he moved to replace the bottle, favouring the leg that had betrayed him in Prague. The door groaned against the November wind. Cold air cut through the cigarette smoke and warmth, carrying diesel fumes and the smell of rain-soaked wool. Rory looked up. A man stood on the threshold, water dripping from a coat too thin for the season. He scanned the room with desperate precision, past the black-and-white photographs of old Soho, past the maps curling on the walls, searching faces. His gaze locked on hers. She stopped breathing. "Aurora?" The voice cracked like old leather. "Aurora Carter?" Her fingers tightened around the glass. No one called her that. Not since she'd scrubbed the name from her bank statements, her CV, her existence. She was Rory now. Delivery person. Tenant above a bar. Ghost. He stepped closer. The overhead light revealed cheeks hollowed by more than time, a widow's peak that hadn't been there before, grey threading the temples though he couldn't be older than twenty-seven. His collar was frayed. A coffee stain marked his silk tie like a brown birthmark. "Marcus." She set the glass down. The crescent scar on her wrist itched—a phantom sensation from falling off a garden wall at seven, unrelated to the other marks she'd collected later. He laughed. The sound died in his throat. "You remember." "You look..." She stopped. He looked like a photograph left in the sun—faded, bleached of vitality. "Different." He slid onto the stool beside her, close enough she smelled the sour tang of drink on his breath, masking stale tobacco. "So do you. You cut your hair. It used to be longer." "Shoulder-length saves time." She touched the straight black ends. Practical. Efficient. Nothing like the elaborate styles she'd worn to impress Evan's parents. "Silas, whatever he's having." Silas looked up. His hazel eyes assessed Marcus with the quiet calculation of a man who'd once vetted assets in Eastern European safe houses. He poured a double whisky and slid it across the mahogany. The signet ring tapped twice against the glass—a signal, or merely habit. Marcus drank half in one swallow. His hands trembled, the tremor travelling up to his shoulders. "I looked for you," he said. "At the flat on Mutable Way. The landlord said you'd vanished. Left three months' rent unpaid." "I paid it." Rory stared at the mirror behind the bar, at her own bright blue eyes staring back. "Eventually." "You left term, Rory. Second year. Your father was..." He shook his head. The movement seemed to pain him. "Brendan wouldn't speak of it. Just said you'd taken 'employment.' As if you'd become a barrister's clerk or a secretary." The weight of that word. Employment. As if she'd descended into retail or typing pools, not fled a man who'd convinced her she was worthless, who'd held her wrist too tight during arguments—not the scarred one, the other one. "What happened to the law?" she asked, though she could see the answer in his stained tie, his shaking hands. "I finished." He stared into the amber liquid. "Took silk last year. Tenant at Carmichael Chambers." She blinked. Marcus—brilliant, chaotic Marcus who'd smoked roll-ups in the law library and argued tort reform with his shoelaces always untied—was a barrister now. A QC. Wearing a stained tie and nursing a tremor. "Congratulations," she said. "Don't." His grip whitened on the glass. "Evan told everyone you were unstable. Clinically depressed. That you'd sabotaged your own pupillage because you couldn't handle the pressure. The competition." Rory's spine straightened, vertebrae clicking into alignment. The old maps on the wall seemed to tilt, continents drifting apart. She felt the cool air from the door on her neck. "Did you believe him?" "At first." He finally turned to look at her. His eyes were bloodshot, the vessels ruptured red lines, but the sharp intelligence remained—dulled by alcohol or grief, submerged but not extinguished. "You were pulling away. Missing seminars. I thought... I thought maybe the pressure had cracked you. Like everyone predicted it would." "Because I was the girl. Because my father was Brendan Carter." "Because you were brilliant and they were waiting for you to fail." He finished the whisky. Silas stood at the end of the bar, listening without appearing to, his bad leg propped against the brass rail. "Then, last year. The Carmichael Christmas party. Evan came. He'd married that hygienist from Newport. He'd had too much champagne, got nostalgic." Marcus's voice dropped. The room seemed to contract around them. "He showed us photographs, Rory. On his phone. Called them his 'wild years.' His 'crazy ex.' You. Unconscious on a sofa. Bruises on your arms. A split lip." Her stomach folded in on itself. The scar on her wrist flared with remembered pain, though the crescent had nothing to do with Evan. He'd left marks that faded before Monday classes, internal damage that lingered longer. "You didn't know," she said. Not a question. "I should have." He laughed, a wet sound. "You flinched every time he walked into the seminar room. You stopped wearing short sleeves. I told myself it was stress. Winter pallor." Rory turned her wrist over, hiding the crescent against her thigh. The green neon buzzed outside, a constant insect hum. Three years of silence, of rebuilding, of learning the streets of London so she never had to remember Cardiff's courts. And now this—an ambush of truth in a Soho basement, served neat like the whisky. "I tried to call you," Marcus said. "After I saw the photos. After I understood. Your number was dead. Your emails bounced." "I changed everything." "He has a child now. A daughter. They named her Aurora." Marcus's head dropped. "I stood as godfather. Can you imagine? Holding their baby, toasting their future, while I remembered your face in those pictures? While I remembered watching him break you and polishing my own bloody briefs?" "You don't have to—" "Don't I?" He spun on the stool. The movement was jerky, uncoordinated, the motion of a marionette with cut strings. "You were the best of us, Aurora. The sharpest mind in that damn program. The fastest wit. And I watched you shrink, week by week, until you disappeared entirely. And I did nothing. I wrote my essays and I drank my sherry and I did nothing." The words hung between them, heavier than the humid air, denser than the smoke. Silas moved away, limping slightly, giving them the illusion of privacy though his reflection remained in the mirror—guardian of the back room where secrets were bartered, witness to this particular transaction of regret. Rory looked at her own reflection. A stranger with bright blue eyes and hair like ink, wearing a jumper with a curry stain from her shift at Golden Empress. She'd thought she looked like someone surviving. To Marcus, she must look like someone who had surrendered to gravity. "I'm alive," she said. "That took effort you're not seeing." "I can see it." He reached out, stopped himself before his fingers grazed her sleeve. "You're harder. Edges where there used to be... generosity. Openness." "Survival requires rigidity. You can't be soft in the delivery business." "Is that what this is?" He stood abruptly, swaying. The stool scraped against the floorboards. "You're running parcels for Yu-Fei Cheung while I stand in wigs arguing contract disputes? I'm dying, Rory. Liver failure. Six months, perhaps less. Drinking my way through briefs because I can't stand the resonance of my own voice in those empty halls. And I think—if I'd said something then, if I'd seen what was happening to you instead of seeing my own advancement, would I be this? Would you be... here?" He gestured at the maps, at the photographs, at the bar with its hidden room and its limping proprietor. The unspoken geometry of his accusation: she had fled downward, into the underworld of service entrances and back stairs, while he had climbed into a hell of his own architecture. Rory stood too. Her knee knocked the stool. The sound echoed. "You don't get to mourn me, Marcus. You don't get to use my ghost to forgive yourself for drinking yourself to death in chambers." "I only wanted—" "You wanted to save me then. You want to save me now. But I'm not the one who needs saving." She pulled her coat from the hook. The crescent scar flashed in the bar light as she thrust her arm through the sleeve, a pale sickle against her skin. Marcus slumped back onto the stool, his forehead resting against the rim of his empty glass. "Will you tell me where you went? What you did? How you became this person?" Rory paused at the door. The green neon painted her face in spectral light, turning her skin the colour of old jade. "I learned to carry weight," she said. "That's all." She pushed out into the rain. The door swung shut, cutting off the warmth, the maps, the weight of a friendship dissolved by time and silence. Behind her, the glass lay empty, the regret pooling with the dregs, while the rain washed the neon from her shoulders.
created_at"2026-02-19T12:32:25.88Z" 2/19/2026, 12:32:25 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"The voice cracked like [like]"
1"He stood abruptly [abruptly]"
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.423
leniency0.846
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.077
97.02% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1680
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found
0"Marcus"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
34.52% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1680
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"traced"
count1
1
word"crystal"
count1
2
word"tension"
count1
3
word"methodical"
count1
4
word"warmth"
count2
5
word"scanned"
count1
6
word"silk"
count2
7
word"efficient"
count1
8
word"trembled"
count1
9
word"weight"
count3
10
word"chaotic"
count1
11
word"stomach"
count1
12
word"silence"
count2
13
word"resonance"
count1
14
word"unspoken"
count1
15
word"echoed"
count1
16
word"spectral"
count1
highlights
0"traced"
1"crystal"
2"tension"
3"methodical"
4"warmth"
5"scanned"
6"silk"
7"efficient"
8"trembled"
9"weight"
10"chaotic"
11"stomach"
12"silence"
13"resonance"
14"unspoken"
15"echoed"
16"spectral"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences107
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences107
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences136
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen73
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1660
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions39
wordCount1113
uniqueNames17
maxNameDensity0.81
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Marcus"
discoveredNames
St1
Court1
Cardiff2
Prague1
November1
Soho2
Rory9
Practical1
Evan2
Marcus9
Eastern1
European1
Silas4
Monday1
London1
Golden1
Empress1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Evan"
2"Marcus"
3"Silas"
places
0"St"
1"Cardiff"
2"Prague"
3"Soho"
4"Eastern"
5"London"
6"Golden"
globalScore1
windowScore1
76.47% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences68
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like a photograph left in the sun—"
1"looked like someone surviving"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1660
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences136
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs54
mean30.74
std18.38
cv0.598
sampleLengths
059
140
252
328
439
55
63
79
836
947
1031
1110
1216
1335
1426
1547
1638
1720
1839
1939
2020
2116
2234
233
2429
2534
2652
2711
2858
2910
3028
3137
328
3331
3455
3522
363
3748
384
3966
4047
4148
4210
4325
4411
4586
4649
4735
483
4920
98.70% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences107
matches
0"was frayed"
1"were bartered"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs185
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences136
ratio0.074
matches
0"Three years since she'd fled Cardiff, and still the city lived in her shoulders—a tension she couldn't stretch out, a phantom barrister's wig itching her scalp."
1"His grey-streaked auburn hair caught the low light, and his silver signet ring tapped against the glass—a metronome marking the evening's slow passage."
2"The crescent scar on her wrist itched—a phantom sensation from falling off a garden wall at seven, unrelated to the other marks she'd collected later."
3"He looked like a photograph left in the sun—faded, bleached of vitality."
4"The signet ring tapped twice against the glass—a signal, or merely habit."
5"As if she'd descended into retail or typing pools, not fled a man who'd convinced her she was worthless, who'd held her wrist too tight during arguments—not the scarred one, the other one."
6"Marcus—brilliant, chaotic Marcus who'd smoked roll-ups in the law library and argued tort reform with his shoelaces always untied—was a barrister now."
7"His eyes were bloodshot, the vessels ruptured red lines, but the sharp intelligence remained—dulled by alcohol or grief, submerged but not extinguished."
8"And now this—an ambush of truth in a Soho basement, served neat like the whisky."
9"Silas moved away, limping slightly, giving them the illusion of privacy though his reflection remained in the mirror—guardian of the back room where secrets were bartered, witness to this particular transaction of regret."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1130
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.023008849557522124
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.0035398230088495575
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences136
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences136
mean12.21
std9.94
cv0.814
sampleLengths
012
15
216
326
423
517
611
723
818
97
1018
113
1216
1323
145
153
167
172
186
195
2014
214
222
234
241
253
2629
274
2811
296
3025
312
326
332
344
3512
3623
3712
389
391
401
4111
424
433
4421
4511
4612
476
4810
496
55.88% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.35294117647058826
totalSentences136
uniqueOpeners48
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences92
matches(empty)
ratio0
63.48% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount36
totalSentences92
matches
0"She'd changed from her delivery"
1"His grey-streaked auburn hair caught"
2"He limped when he moved"
3"He scanned the room with"
4"His gaze locked on hers."
5"She stopped breathing."
6"Her fingers tightened around the"
7"She was Rory now."
8"He stepped closer."
9"His collar was frayed."
10"She set the glass down"
11"He looked like a photograph"
12"He slid onto the stool"
13"She touched the straight black"
14"His hazel eyes assessed Marcus"
15"He poured a double whisky"
16"His hands trembled, the tremor"
17"He shook his head"
18"she asked, though she could"
19"He stared into the amber"
ratio0.391
19.78% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount81
totalSentences92
matches
0"The green neon bled through"
1"Anne's Court into liquid emerald."
2"Rory traced the rim of"
3"She'd changed from her delivery"
4"The crescent scar on her"
5"Silas worked behind the bar,"
6"His grey-streaked auburn hair caught"
7"He limped when he moved"
8"The door groaned against the"
9"Rory looked up."
10"A man stood on the"
11"He scanned the room with"
12"His gaze locked on hers."
13"She stopped breathing."
14"The voice cracked like old"
15"Her fingers tightened around the"
16"She was Rory now."
17"Tenant above a bar."
18"He stepped closer."
19"The overhead light revealed cheeks"
ratio0.88
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences92
matches
0"As if she'd descended into"
1"To Marcus, she must look"
ratio0.022
61.69% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"She'd changed from her delivery uniform upstairs in the flat, trading the polyester shirt for a wool jumper that smelled of basmati rice."
1"The overhead light revealed cheeks hollowed by more than time, a widow's peak that hadn't been there before, grey threading the temples though he couldn't be ol…"
2"His hazel eyes assessed Marcus with the quiet calculation of a man who'd once vetted assets in Eastern European safe houses."
3"As if she'd descended into retail or typing pools, not fled a man who'd convinced her she was worthless, who'd held her wrist too tight during arguments—not the…"
4"Marcus—brilliant, chaotic Marcus who'd smoked roll-ups in the law library and argued tort reform with his shoelaces always untied—was a barrister now."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"He laughed (laugh)"
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.154
leniency0.308
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.038
82.9185%