Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTY6DCRRSDFMCRC6AGDMZJ1

Run Details

Duration:
8.4s
Cost:
$0.002033

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The moonlight cast skeletal fingers through Richmond Park's dense oak clusters. Aurora Carter adjusted her delivery backpack, the canvas heavy against her spine. Something felt different tonight — the usual night sounds seemed muted, suspended. She knew this grove. Knew it from Eva's stories, from whispers shared over late-night drinks at Silas' bar. The Fae Grove. A place where reality bent like wet paper, where time leaked sideways. The standing stones loomed ahead, ancient oak sentinels marking boundaries between worlds. Her fingers unconsciously traced the small crescent scar on her left wrist — a nervous habit from childhood. The Heartstone pendant around her neck pulsed with a faint, almost imperceptible warmth. Wildflowers carpeted the ground, impossibly lush for autumn. Their petals gleamed unnaturally in the moonlight, each bloom looking too perfect, too symmetrical. No wind stirred them. Aurora stepped forward. Her boots made no sound against the ground. A branch snapped behind her. Not close. Not distant. Impossible to place. She didn't turn. Didn't need to. Something was watching. The stones seemed to lean slightly, their angles subtly wrong. Shadows stretched between them like liquid darkness, pooling and reforming with each breath she took. Her pendant grew warmer.
total_cost0.0020328

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences0
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
74.62% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount197
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount197
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"sentinels"
count1
2
word"traced"
count1
3
word"pulsed"
count1
4
word"warmth"
count1
5
word"perfect"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"sentinels"
2"traced"
3"pulsed"
4"warmth"
5"perfect"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences25
matches(empty)
85.71% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences25
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences25
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen17
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords198
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions7
wordCount196
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.51
worstName"Richmond"
maxWindowNameDensity0
worstWindowName(null)
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Carter1
Eva1
Fae1
Grove1
Heartstone1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Eva"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Fae"
3"Grove"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences13
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"seemed muted suspended"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount198
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences25
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs9
mean22
std12.78
cv0.581
sampleLengths
035
133
243
326
411
512
69
725
84
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences25
matches(empty)
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs31
matches
0"was watching"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences25
ratio0.08
matches
0"Something felt different tonight — the usual night sounds seemed muted, suspended."
1"Her fingers unconsciously traced the small crescent scar on her left wrist — a nervous habit from childhood."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount51
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"shared over late-night"
adverbCount0
adverbRatio0
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences25
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences25
mean7.92
std4.91
cv0.62
sampleLengths
011
112
212
34
414
53
612
712
818
913
108
1114
124
133
148
155
162
172
183
193
203
213
2210
2315
244
89.33% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.56
totalSentences25
uniqueOpeners14
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences23
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount6
totalSentences23
matches
0"She knew this grove."
1"Her fingers unconsciously traced the"
2"Their petals gleamed unnaturally in"
3"Her boots made no sound"
4"She didn't turn."
5"Her pendant grew warmer."
ratio0.261
46.96% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount19
totalSentences23
matches
0"The moonlight cast skeletal fingers"
1"Aurora Carter adjusted her delivery"
2"Something felt different tonight —"
3"She knew this grove."
4"The Fae Grove."
5"A place where reality bent"
6"The standing stones loomed ahead,"
7"Her fingers unconsciously traced the"
8"The Heartstone pendant around her"
9"Wildflowers carpeted the ground, impossibly"
10"Their petals gleamed unnaturally in"
11"Aurora stepped forward."
12"Her boots made no sound"
13"A branch snapped behind her."
14"She didn't turn."
15"Something was watching."
16"The stones seemed to lean"
17"Shadows stretched between them like"
18"Her pendant grew warmer."
ratio0.826
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences23
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences10
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
76.3541%