Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTY6PSV58Z2ZHPEN0NCR2YD

Run Details

Duration:
1m 42s
Cost:
$0.001670
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Raven’s Nest smelled of old wood, spilled ale, and the faint, sweet ghost of cigar smoke from decades past. Aurora Carter wiped a damp cloth over the polished mahogany, her movements economical, her mind a thousand miles away from the green neon glow bleeding through the front window. Silas was in the back, inventory ledgers spread across his desk, the low murmur of a radio news broadcast a constant hum beneath the silence. The door creaked open, slicing a wedge of damp London evening into the dim interior. A man stepped in, shaking rain from a dark overcoat. He was tall, broad-shouldered, with a weary set to his jaw that hadn’t been there the last time she’d seen him. He didn’t look at her, just headed for a stool at the far end of the bar, his eyes scanning the black-and-white photographs on the wall as if looking for a familiar face. Rory tossed the cloth under the counter. “What can I get you?” He turned, and the air left the room. Time did not slow down. It snapped taut, a wire pulled too tight. The years between them—five, maybe six—collapsed into a single, breathless moment. The boy she’d known was still there, in the faint freckles across his nose, the way his hair still fell across his forehead. But the man he’d become was a stranger, carved from something harder and infinitely more tired. “Evan,” she said. The name was ash in her mouth. His eyes, a warm brown she once knew better than her own, widened. A flicker of the old him—quick, bright, surprised—surfaced before it was submerged again by a guarded stillness. “Rory? My God. Aurora Carter.” He said her full name like he was testing the weight of it. She hadn’t been Aurora to him since they were teenagers. It had always been Rory. “I didn’t know you were in London.” His voice was deeper, rougher at the edges, like stones worn smooth by a relentless river. “I didn’t exactly send out announcements.” She kept her hands flat on the bar, her posture neutral. Cool. Collected. The persona was a shield, polished to a high sheen. “Whiskey? You always drank whiskey.” “Still do.” He slid onto the stool, draping his coat over the one beside him. A barrier. “Neat. Whatever’s good.” She turned, grateful for the excuse to break eye contact, and pulled a bottle of single malt from the shelf. Her fingers were steady as she poured two fingers into a heavy glass. The small crescent scar on her left wrist seemed to pulse under the dim light. She set the glass before him. He didn’t touch it. “You work here?” “Part-time. It pays the rent on the flat upstairs.” She leaned back, crossing her arms. “You look… different.” A dry, humorless sound escaped him. “You don’t.” He finally picked up the glass, swirling the amber liquid. “You look exactly the same. It’s… disconcerting.” “I doubt that.” “It’s true. It’s like walking into a museum and finding a painting you thought was lost.” He took a sip, his eyes never leaving her face. “Cardiff feels like a lifetime ago.” “It was,” she said. The words were clipped. “For me, anyway.” The silence that followed was thick, charged with everything they weren’t saying. The laughter in university libraries, the frantic plans sketched on napkins, the way his hand had felt in hers. And then, later, the suffocating silence of their flat, the careful way she’d started to move around him, the sharp, metallic taste of fear that had become as familiar as her own skin. “I heard you left Pre-Law,” he said, finally breaking the stare to look into his glass. “Your dad must have blown a gasket.” “He got over it.” “And you wound up here. Serving drinks.” “Among other things.” She picked up a clean glass and began polishing it with a fresh cloth, needing something to do with her hands. “What about you? Last I heard, you were headed for a bright future in finance. Suits. Meetings. A corner office with a view.” He barked a short, sharp laugh that held no joy. “That was the plan.” “What happened?” He finished the whiskey in one long swallow, pushing the empty glass toward her. “Life. It has a way of… rerouting you.” She didn’t pour him another. She just waited. “I left Cardiff about a year after you did,” he said, his voice low, almost confessional. “Couldn’t stand it. Every pub, every street corner… it was all just a monument to my own spectacular failure. I came here, got a job pushing paper for a logistics firm. It’s dull. It pays the bills.” He finally met her gaze again, and the raw honesty in it was a shock. “I think about it a lot, you know. How it ended. What I became.” Rory’s heart hammered against her ribs, a frantic bird in a cage. This was not the script she had rehearsed in her head for years. This was not the defiant, unrepentant man she had expected. This was a ghost, haunted by his own reflection. “You weren’t yourself,” she said carefully, the words chosen like stepping stones across a treacherous river. “I was,” he corrected, his voice firm. “That’s the worst part. That was me. The stress, the pressure from my family, the fear of not being good enough… it curdled something in me. I took it out on you. I was cruel. I was… I was a monster, Rory.” He looked down at his hands, at the broad, capable fingers that had once clenched into fists in anger. “I’m not making excuses. There aren’t any. I’m just stating a fact. I am deeply, profoundly sorry for the things I said. The things I did. For the person I made you afraid of.” The admission hung in the air between them, vast and heavy. The unspoken regret was a physical presence, a third person sitting at the bar. She could have said it was okay. She could have offered the cheap absolution people offer to ease their own discomfort. But it wouldn’t have been true, and he would have known it. “I don’t think about Cardiff,” she lied. “I built a new life.” He nodded slowly, accepting the deflection for what it was. A boundary. “Good. I’m glad.” He gestured to the bottle. “Another?” She poured, her movements slower this time. The glint of Silas’s silver signet ring flashed from the back room doorway as he shifted his weight, a silent sentinel ensuring the scene didn’t turn. He knew. Of course he knew. Eva would have told him everything. Evan took the fresh drink. “You were always the smart one. The strong one. You got out.” “I had help.” “From that friend of yours? Eva?” “Among others.” She didn’t elaborate. The network of people who had helped her vanish—Eva’s fierce loyalty, Silas’s quiet offer of a job and a safe place to live—was not his business. It was the architecture of her survival, and he had no blueprints. He drank again, and the silence returned, less tense now, but sadder. The weight of their shared history, of the divergent paths they’d taken, settled over them. He was a relic from a past life, a chapter she had thought firmly closed. But chapters have a way of bleeding into one another. “I should go,” he said suddenly, placing a twenty-pound note on the bar. It was too much for two drinks. “Let you get on with your evening.” He stood, pulling on his overcoat. He moved with a new deliberateness, as if every action required conscious thought. “Evan.” The name felt foreign on her tongue. He paused, his hand on the door. “The person you were… he’s not here anymore. Is he?” He turned, and for a fleeting second, she saw the boy he’d been—vulnerable, uncertain, desperately wanting to be good. “I work very hard every day to make sure he isn’t.” Then he was gone, the door sighing shut behind him, leaving only the echo of his words and the scent of rain on the air. Rory stood motionless behind the bar, the twenty-pound note staring up at her from the polished wood. She picked it up, her fingers tracing the crisp edge. It felt like both an apology and a farewell. She folded it once, twice, and tucked it into the tip jar, burying it out of sight. Some ghosts, she decided, were better left in the past.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
72.34% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"She leaned back [back]"
1"she said carefully [carefully]"
2"he said suddenly [suddenly]"
dialogueSentences47
tagDensity0.383
leniency0.766
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.128
86.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1429
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
3
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"slowly"
2"suddenly"
3"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
23.02% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1429
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"silence"
count4
1
word"scanning"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count2
3
word"flicker"
count1
4
word"weight"
count3
5
word"pulse"
count1
6
word"charged"
count1
7
word"treacherous"
count1
8
word"unspoken"
count1
9
word"glint"
count1
10
word"sentinel"
count1
11
word"ensuring"
count1
12
word"firmly"
count1
13
word"fleeting"
count1
14
word"echo"
count1
15
word"tracing"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"scanning"
2"familiar"
3"flicker"
4"weight"
5"pulse"
6"charged"
7"treacherous"
8"unspoken"
9"glint"
10"sentinel"
11"ensuring"
12"firmly"
13"fleeting"
14"echo"
15"tracing"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"clenched into fists"
1"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences92
matches
0"s in anger"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences92
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"started to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences120
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen52
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1417
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions16
wordCount1056
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.38
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Carter1
London1
Aurora2
Rory4
Cool1
Silas3
Eva2
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Carter"
3"Aurora"
4"Rory"
5"Silas"
6"Eva"
places
0"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
81.51% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences73
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as if looking for a familiar face"
1"felt like both an apology and a farewel"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1417
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences120
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean30.8
std22.85
cv0.742
sampleLengths
074
179
212
38
463
510
635
728
823
934
1020
1148
1213
1318
1425
153
1632
1711
1864
1923
204
217
2247
2314
242
2522
268
2782
2844
2916
3049
3153
3258
3312
3421
3545
3617
373
386
3943
4052
4127
4219
4325
4430
4588
93.82% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences92
matches
0"was submerged"
1"were clipped"
2"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs172
matches
0"was testing"
1"weren’t saying"
47.62% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences120
ratio0.033
matches
0"The years between them—five, maybe six—collapsed into a single, breathless moment."
1"A flicker of the old him—quick, bright, surprised—surfaced before it was submerged again by a guarded stillness."
2"The network of people who had helped her vanish—Eva’s fierce loyalty, Silas’s quiet offer of a job and a safe place to live—was not his business."
3"He turned, and for a fleeting second, she saw the boy he’d been—vulnerable, uncertain, desperately wanting to be good."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1068
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.033707865168539325
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.009363295880149813
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences120
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences120
mean11.81
std8.7
cv0.736
sampleLengths
020
129
225
315
410
521
633
77
85
98
105
118
1211
1323
1416
153
167
1713
1817
195
2013
2110
225
2323
2417
251
261
2710
285
2915
302
313
3220
3313
3415
356
364
373
3815
393
406
4112
427
433
4426
456
464
474
483
4912
44.17% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.325
totalSentences120
uniqueOpeners39
79.37% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences84
matches
0"Of course he knew."
1"Then he was gone, the"
ratio0.024
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount47
totalSentences84
matches
0"He was tall, broad-shouldered, with"
1"He didn’t look at her,"
2"He turned, and the air"
3"It snapped taut, a wire"
4"His eyes, a warm brown"
5"He said her full name"
6"She hadn’t been Aurora to"
7"It had always been Rory."
8"His voice was deeper, rougher"
9"She kept her hands flat"
10"He slid onto the stool,"
11"She turned, grateful for the"
12"Her fingers were steady as"
13"She set the glass before"
14"He didn’t touch it."
15"She leaned back, crossing her"
16"He finally picked up the"
17"He took a sip, his"
18"he said, finally breaking the"
19"She picked up a clean"
ratio0.56
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount78
totalSentences84
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest smelled of"
1"Aurora Carter wiped a damp"
2"Silas was in the back,"
3"The door creaked open, slicing"
4"A man stepped in, shaking"
5"He was tall, broad-shouldered, with"
6"He didn’t look at her,"
7"Rory tossed the cloth under"
8"He turned, and the air"
9"Time did not slow down."
10"It snapped taut, a wire"
11"The years between them—five, maybe"
12"The boy she’d known was"
13"The name was ash in"
14"His eyes, a warm brown"
15"A flicker of the old"
16"He said her full name"
17"She hadn’t been Aurora to"
18"It had always been Rory."
19"His voice was deeper, rougher"
ratio0.929
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
ratio0
65.22% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"He was tall, broad-shouldered, with a weary set to his jaw that hadn’t been there the last time she’d seen him."
1"He didn’t look at her, just headed for a stool at the far end of the bar, his eyes scanning the black-and-white photographs on the wall as if looking for a fami…"
2"And then, later, the suffocating silence of their flat, the careful way she’d started to move around him, the sharp, metallic taste of fear that had become as f…"
3"The network of people who had helped her vanish—Eva’s fierce loyalty, Silas’s quiet offer of a job and a safe place to live—was not his business."
4"He moved with a new deliberateness, as if every action required conscious thought."
13.89% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"She kept, her posture neutral"
1"he said, his voice low, almost confessional"
2"she said carefully, the words chosen like stepping stones across a treacherous river"
3"he corrected, his voice firm"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"he corrected (correct)"
1"she lied (lie)"
dialogueSentences47
tagDensity0.17
leniency0.34
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.085
75.7873%